九年級(jí)寫(xiě)作公開(kāi)課

Howtomakeyourwritingbetter青西新區(qū)第四初級(jí)中學(xué)王春燕第一頁(yè)第二頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。FreeTalkLookatthepicturescarefullyandanswermyquestions.01HowmanyChinesefestivalsdidyousee?02Whatarethey?03Whenarethey?第二頁(yè)第三頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。Let’smatch!InSeptemberorOctoberInJanuaryorFebruaryonthe5thdayofthefifthlunarmonthonthe15thdayofthefirstlunarmonthTheSpringFestivalTheDragonBoatFestival

TheLanternFestivalTheMid-AutumnFestival

第三頁(yè)第四頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。Whenwetalkaboutafestival,

Whatelsecanwewrite?reason？feeling？story？ThingsTodo？Thingstoeat？Beforewriting第四頁(yè)第五頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。

noodlesdumplingstangyuan……zongzi

mooncakesThingstoeatTraditionalfood第五頁(yè)第六頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。Thingstodomakezongzicleanthehouses

guessriddlesgivebestwishesadmirethemoonsharemooncakeswithfamiliesmakelanternsgettheluckymoneywearnewclothesSayHappyNewyearhavedragonboatraces第六頁(yè)第七頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。Thestoryofchang’e

PoetQuYuanThestories第七頁(yè)第八頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。ThestoriesThemonsternianThegod’sbird第八頁(yè)第九頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。Ithinkit’srelaxingtoadmiringthemoon.HomeisthewarmestplaceWecanspendtheholidaywithfriends

IcangetluckymoneyandgiftsthenIthinkit’sinterestingtowatchtheracesthemostimportingthingistogettogetherwithfamilies.Reasons/feelingsWhydoyoulikeit?第九頁(yè)第十頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。緊扣主題要點(diǎn)齊全開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山DividethepartsBeginningBodyEnding第十頁(yè)第十一頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。AwritingBeginning:

name,date

Body:thingstoeat,activities,storyTheSpringFestival,inJanuaryorFebruary…dumplingszongzisharemooncakeswithrelativesadmirethemoongivebestwishesThisfestivalisinhonorofQuYuan,oneofthegreatestChinesepoets.Itcelebratesthebeginningofnewyear…Ending:feeling/reason

NotonlycanIspendmoretimewithmyfamilies,butIgetmuchluckymoney……第十一頁(yè)第十二頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。

MyfavoriteChinesefestivalis

theDragonBoatFestival.ItisoneofthemostimportantChinesefestivals.________.TheDragonBoatFestivalisinhonorofthepoetQuYuan.Itissaidthat_________.Onthatday,familymembersgettogetherandhaveabigmeal.Afterdinner,theyenjoythedeliciousfruitsandzongzi,watchingtheexcitingdragonboatraces.TheoldalwaysteachkidshowtomakezongziandtellthestoryofQuYuan._______________.IliketheDragonBoatFestival_____________.D.hekilledhimselfbyjumpingintoMiLuoriver.A.Weallagreethatitisthemosttouchingstory.B.becausenotonlycanIspendtimewithmyfamiliesbutalsoIcanknowaboutChineseculture---thesymbolofChina.C.Itiscelebratedonthe5thdayofthefifthlunarmonthCBAD第十二頁(yè)第十三頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。

MyfavoriteChinesefestivalis

theDragonBoatFestival.ItisoneofthemostimportantChinesefestivals.Itiscelebratedonthe5thdayofthefifthlunarmonth.Itissaidthat“Eastorwest,homeisthebest.”TheDragonBoatFestivalisinhonorofthepoetQuYuan.Onthatday,familymembersgettogetherandhaveabigmeal.Afterdinner,theyenjoythedeliciousfruitsandzongzi,watchingtheexcitingdragonboatraces.TheoldalwaysteachkidshowtomakezongziandtellthestoryofQuYuanWeallagreethatitisthemosttouchingstory.IliketheDragonBoatFestivalbecausenotonlycanIspendtimewithmyfamiliesbutalsoIcanknowaboutChineseculture---thesymbolofChina.BodyEnding第十三頁(yè)第十四頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。Makethesentencesbetter

Istudy.Istudyhard.Istudyhardeveryday.Itrymybesttostudyhardeveryday.ItrymybesttostudyhardeverydaysothatIcangetgoodgrades.第十四頁(yè)第十五頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。1.Ilikereadingbooks.------Ilikereadingbooks,suchasnovels,shortstories,magazinesandnewspapers.2.Weshouldpracticemore.------Asweallknow,“Useitorloseit”.Soweshouldpracticemore.3.Ioftenjoininmanyactivities.-----Ioftenjoininmanyactivitiesinordertocommunicatewithotherstudentsbetter.第十五頁(yè)第十六頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。Improvement123Howtomakeit

perfectNotonly…butalso…;So…that…;evenif;Inmyopinion;asforme;AsfarasIknow…1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Eastwest,homeisthebest.3.Homeiswheretheheartis.

1.Peolestartedthetraditionofadmiringthemoonandsharingmooncakeswiththeirfamilies.2.Behindallthesethingsliesthetruemeaningof….恰當(dāng)使用連接詞;合理運(yùn)用名言警句；使用經(jīng)典例句高級(jí)詞匯及句型；…第十六頁(yè)第十七頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。MyfavoriteChinesefestivalChinahasmanytraditionalfestivalseveryyear.Asforme,theSpringFestivalismyfavorite.Itfallsonthe1stdayofthe1stlunarmonth.Beforethefestival,myfamilyusuallycleananddecoratethehouse,buynewclothesandputupSpringFestivalcouplets.Wearesobusy.DuringtheFestival,wehavealotofdeliciousfoodeveryday.Amongthem,Ilikethedumplingsmadebymymotherbest.Atnight,

Mygrandmatellsmylittlesisterthestoryofmonsternian,fatherandIplaythefirework,“Asthenewyearbegins,letusalsostartanew”.Allofthepeoplemakepromisesforthecomingnewyear.What’smore,Icangetluckymoney.ItistheChinesecustomthattheoldwillgivechildrenluckymoneytowishagoodluck.That’swhyIlikeitmost!第十七頁(yè)第十八頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。MyfavoriteChinesefestival寫(xiě)作話題：Festivals,holidaysandcelebrations(節(jié)假日活動(dòng))第十八頁(yè)第十九頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。

MyfavoriteChinesefestival

Writing主要人稱：_________主要時(shí)態(tài)：_________

thepresenttense(一般現(xiàn)在時(shí))Thefirstperson(第一人稱)第十九頁(yè)第二十頁(yè)，共25頁(yè)。

Appreciating&Evaluating欣賞與評(píng)價(jià)一.請(qǐng)自我檢查二.交換習(xí)作互相欣賞①用紅筆劃出對(duì)方的亮點(diǎn),并對(duì)不足的地方進(jìn)行適當(dāng)修改。②你能給同學(xué)什么建議，使得對(duì)方的習(xí)作更好呢？③根據(jù)worksheet上的