八大話題寫作課(volunteer)

節(jié)能環(huán)保，健康飲食12志愿者活動(dòng)，社會(huì)奉獻(xiàn)3分析調(diào)查結(jié)果，闡述觀點(diǎn)4提出建議（根據(jù)來(lái)信的煩惱提合理建議和忠告）5感謝幫助（對(duì)老師，家長(zhǎng)和同學(xué)）7談?wù)撐磥?lái)，計(jì)劃安排8家庭生活，家務(wù)勞動(dòng)6難忘經(jīng)歷，人物描寫志愿者活動(dòng)，社會(huì)奉獻(xiàn)第一頁(yè)第二頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。2志愿者活動(dòng)，社會(huì)奉獻(xiàn)第二頁(yè)第三頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。2011年石景山區(qū)第二次模擬試題某國(guó)際學(xué)校在自己的英文網(wǎng)站上發(fā)布了一個(gè)帖子準(zhǔn)備招募一批志愿者，利用暑假到希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)。假設(shè)你是李華，根據(jù)帖子的內(nèi)容寫一封申請(qǐng)信，首先請(qǐng)回答帖子中提出的問(wèn)題，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)這個(gè)活動(dòng)的理解。Toall, Thissummer,wewantsomevolunteerstohelpthepupilsofHopePrimarySchoollearnEnglish.Whatareyouradvantagesindoingthisjob?What’syourplantodoit?ifyouareinterested,pleasewritebackbefore24th,June.Yours,xxx第三頁(yè)第四頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。2012延慶二模

學(xué)校志愿者協(xié)會(huì)招募新成員，打算在暑假期間組織志愿者活動(dòng)。假設(shè)你叫LiHua,請(qǐng)你寫一篇60詞左右的短文給志愿者協(xié)會(huì)，報(bào)名參加此次活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：你自己的簡(jiǎn)要介紹；你要去哪個(gè)地方做志愿者？你能做什么事情？你對(duì)志愿者工作有什么感受或體會(huì)？請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。 提示詞：LiHua,student,ClassFour,GradeThree,theOldPeople’sHome,sing,dance.

第四頁(yè)第五頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。審要點(diǎn)，審人稱，審時(shí)態(tài)1.審題段落層次。詳略得當(dāng)。段落間自然銜接2.框架頭腦風(fēng)暴(話題相關(guān)詞語(yǔ)或短語(yǔ))3.頭腦風(fēng)暴基本句型，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合

4.組句作文8步走加上連接詞，將要點(diǎn)之間銜接5.連接首段引入,尾段總結(jié)升華,首尾呼應(yīng)6.首尾增加一些亮點(diǎn)句、加分句。7.打磨8查8.檢查第五頁(yè)第六頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。修改文章作文8查1.查文章主題立意是否準(zhǔn)確？要點(diǎn)是否齊全？2.查是否分段？全文篇幅比例是否恰當(dāng)？3.查時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)是否正確？4.自己發(fā)揮擴(kuò)充的內(nèi)容是否都圍繞主題,有無(wú)“廢句”？5.查句子是否連貫流暢？有無(wú)恰當(dāng)連接詞？段落之間過(guò)渡是否合理自然？6.查主謂人稱是否一致？7.查單詞拼寫及大小寫字母是否正確？8.查標(biāo)點(diǎn)的使用是否正確？第六頁(yè)第七頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。2011年石景山區(qū)第二次模擬試題某國(guó)際學(xué)校在自己的英文網(wǎng)站上發(fā)布了一個(gè)帖子準(zhǔn)備招募一批志愿者，利用暑假到希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)。假設(shè)你是李華，根據(jù)帖子的內(nèi)容寫一封申請(qǐng)信，首先請(qǐng)回答帖子中提出的問(wèn)題，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)這個(gè)活動(dòng)的理解。Toall, Thissummer,wewantsomevolunteerstohelpthepupilsofHopePrimarySchoollearnEnglish.Whatareyouradvantagesindoingthisjob?What’syourplantodoit?ifyouareinterested,pleasewritebackbefore24th,June.Yours,xxx第七頁(yè)第八頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)?？蚣芎?jiǎn)單自我介紹(一句話)提出申請(qǐng),想?yún)⒓訛槭裁聪雲(yún)⒓?簡(jiǎn)述）我的經(jīng)驗(yàn)和優(yōu)勢(shì)我的計(jì)劃(想做些什么)志愿者工作的體會(huì)和感受Volunteer

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Atourschool,wesometimeshaveaspecialdaytohelpothers.Lastyearwewenttoanoldpeople'shomeandsangsongsandperformedaplayforthem.Theoldpeoplewereveryhappy.Weshouldbeallowedtotaketimetodothingslikethatmoreoften.Forexample,weshouldvisitprimaryschoolsandhelpteachyoungstudents.IwanttobeateacherwhenI'molder,soitwouldbeagreatexperienceforme.Otherstudentswouldliketodootherjobs.Forexample,myfriendTianGewantstowriteforanewspaper.Sheshouldbeallowedtovolunteeratthenewspaperofficeonceaweek.OnFridayafternoons,manystudentsaresleepyafteralongweekofclasses.SomestudentsshouldbeallowedtohaveFridayafternoonsofftovolunteerandhelpothers.

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Number77HighSchoolishometothreeveryspecialyoungpeople,LiHuiping,LanPei,andZhuMing.Thesethreestudentsallvolunteertheirtimetohelpotherpeople.Thisvolunteerworktakeseachofthemseveralhoursaweek,soitisamajorcommitment. Huipinglovestoread,andsheputsthislovetogoodusebyworkingintheafter-schoolcarecenteratherlocalelementaryschool.Here,shehelpsyoungchildrentoread.Linpeilovesanimals,andplanstostudytobeaveterinarianwhenheleavesschool.HespendseverySaturdaymorningworkinginananimalhospital.Zhuminglovessingingandwantstobeaprofessionalsinger.Hesingsforgroupsofpeopleatthecityhospitaltocheerthemup. "Volunteeringisgreat!"saysHuiping."NotonlydoIfeelgoodabouthelpingotherpeople,butIgettospendtimedoingwhatIlovetodo."Peisayshehaslearnedmoreaboutanimals.Mingsayshehasmetsomewonderfulpeopleatthehospital.Thethreestudentsplantosetupastudentvolunteerprojectattheirschool."Don'tputitoff,"saysHuiping."Beavolunteertoday!"Unit5Book9第十一頁(yè)第十二頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。想要參加wouldliketo…beeagerto…Itmakessenseformetodo….3a中相關(guān)句子.…volunteerone’stimetohelpotherpeople.Huipinglovestoread,andsheputsthislovetogoodusebyworking…Para.1Apply第十二頁(yè)第十三頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。begoingtoplantodosth.helpsb.todo

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begoodatliketodo/doing/enjoydoing/Befondofbeinterestedindoingsth.haveapassionfor…計(jì)劃，措施Para.2Myexperience,advantage&plan曾經(jīng)參加過(guò)此類活動(dòng)，有經(jīng)驗(yàn)Iusedtodosth…IhavetheexperienceofIamexperiencedindoingsth第十三頁(yè)第十四頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。段落3a句子1.NotonlydoIfeelgoodabouthelpingotherpeople,butIgettospendtimedoingwhatIlovetodo.2.Don'tputitoff.Beavolunteertoday!3.Somestudentsshouldbeallowedtotaketimetodothingslikethatmoreoften.體會(huì)感受希望Ihopethat…Itisnotonlygoodtooursociety,butalsoachanceforustogrowandlearn.3.Makecontributionto…4.Byhelpingothers,Ifeel…Para.3opinionsandcomments第十四頁(yè)第十五頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)?？蚣芎?jiǎn)單自我介紹(一句話)提出申請(qǐng),想?yún)⒓訛槭裁聪雲(yún)⒓?簡(jiǎn)述）我的經(jīng)驗(yàn)和優(yōu)勢(shì)我的計(jì)劃(想做些什么)志愿者工作的體會(huì)和感受Volunteer

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Furthermore,除此以外再者第十六頁(yè)第十七頁(yè)，共19頁(yè)。優(yōu)美加分句Asamiddleschoolstudent,IwillkeepitinmyheartandthatIamavolunteerandfillmyselfwithastrongwillofdevotion.Inowunderstandwhatismeantbythesaying“givingisreceiving”.Everyoneintheworldneedshelp,everyonecanofferhelpandeveryonewillbehelpedbysomethingkind.Makingtimeoutofmydayisahardtasktoachieve,forIbecomebusierandbusiereac