書面表達(dá)中使用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)和ing,ed形式原創(chuàng)

書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練（一）

OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldsandmylittlesisterandArFufollowedthem.Whilemyparentswereworking,mysisterwalkedtotheriverandArFufollowedher. Shesawabeautifulfloweronthebankoftheriver.Shedecidedtopickit.Shefellintotheriver.WhenArFusawthat,itbarkedandjumpedintotheriverquickly.

Oneday,followedbymylittle

sisterandArFu,myparentswenttoworkinthefields.Whilemyparentswereworking,mysister,withnothingtodo,walkedtotheriversidenearbywithArFu. Atthesightofabeautifulflowerontheriverbank,shewantedtopickit.However,shefellintotheriver.Seeingthat,ArFubarkedandjumpedintothewaterassoonaspossible.書面表達(dá)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

高考考試說明中的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評分原則：

評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言質(zhì)量初步確定其檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。評分時應(yīng)考慮：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，上下文的連貫，詞匯和句式的多樣性及語言的準(zhǔn)確性。句式的多樣性

using-ing-ed-withtoimproveyourpassageThecatcreptslowlythroughthegrass.Thecatwaswatchingthemousethewholetime.Thegoldwashiddenundertheground.Itwassafeformanyyears.I.-ing,-edWatchingthemousethewholetime,thecatcreptslowlythroughthegrass.Hiddenunderthefloorboards,thegoldwassafeformanyyears.Thereisagirl.Sheissittingbetweenus.

2.Thisisabook.Thebookwasboughtyesterday.

Thereisagirl

whoissittingbetweenus.Thisisabookwhichwasbought

yesterday.Rewritefollowingsentences3.走在大街上，他遇見了一個老朋友.Whilehewaswalkinginthestreet,hemetanoldfriend.4._________________,thecitylooksbeautiful.Walkinginthestreet從天空中看，Whenitisseenfromthesky,thecitylooksbeautiful.Seenfromthesky由于不知道他的電話，他無法與Tom取得聯(lián)系。Notknowinghistelephonenumber,hecan’tgetintouchwithTom.readingsleepingshoesbarkingcatdumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆）要點(diǎn)：1老人穿著拖鞋讀報,

狗在邊上睡覺。2老人想出門，叫狗拿鞋。3狗閉著眼睛，一動不動，汪汪直叫，老人很納悶。4貓嘴里叼著鞋走進(jìn)來，老人目瞪口呆。參考詞語:

slippers(拖鞋)readingsleepingAnoldmanwassittinginanarmchairathome,readinghisnewspaper.Besidehimlayadog,sleepingsoundly.catdumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆）Seeingthecat,hewastotallydumbfounded.

Thefireisburning,soIfeelwarm.II.withIlostmybike,soIhadtowalkhome.Withthefireburning,Ifeelwarm.Withmybikelost,Ihadtowalkhome.Mymothersatinachairwithanewspaperinherhand.Sheleftwithoutsayinggoodbye.Hediedwithhisworkstillunfinished.Welcometomyhome.Awell-preparedroomiswaitingforyou.Inside,thereisaseparatebathroomandallnecessaryfurniture.Welcometomyhome.Awell-preparedroomwithaseparatebathroomandallnecessaryfurnitureiswaitingforyou.readingsleepingshoesbarkingcatdumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆）要點(diǎn)：1老人穿著拖鞋讀報,

狗在邊上睡覺。2老人想出門，叫狗拿鞋。3狗閉著眼睛，一動不動，汪汪直叫，老人很納悶。4貓嘴里叼著鞋走進(jìn)來，老人目瞪口呆。參考詞語:

slippers(拖鞋)dogshoesslippers(拖鞋)withhisslippersondogbarkeyesclosedwithtwoeyesclosedcatdumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆）shoeswiththepairofshoesinitsmouthwritingreadingsleepingshoesbarkingcatdumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆）要點(diǎn)：1老人穿著拖鞋讀報,

狗在邊上睡覺。2老人想出門，叫狗拿鞋。3狗閉著眼睛，一動不動，汪汪直叫，老人很納悶。4貓嘴里叼著鞋走進(jìn)來，老人目瞪口呆。參考詞語:

slippers(拖鞋)

Anoldmanwassittinginanarmchairathome,readinghisnewspaper.Besidehimlayadog,sleepingsoundly. Suddenlytheoldmandecidedtoleavehomeforawhile,buthecouldn’tgooutwith

hisslipperson.Sohewokeupthedogtogettheshoesforhim.Outofhisexpectation,thedogjustbarkedwithtwoeyesclosedagain.