2023學(xué)年完整公開課版寫作指南

Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransportation,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.However,theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.

Howcanwesolvetheproblemsthen?AsfarasIamconcerned,ridingbicycleisagoodsolution.Foronething,bicycles

don’tneedpetrolandtheyareenergy-saving.Foranother,bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecausetheywon’tgiveoffwastegases.What’smore,ridingbicyclesisagoodwaytoworkoutanditisbeneficialtoourhealth.Therefore,let’stakethepossibilitytobuildupalow-carboncitybyridingbicycles.Comeonandjoinus.Howtoimprove

writingDoyouwanttoscorehighinthewritingpart?15？20？25!Nothingisimpossible!詞匯,句型（高級(jí)）和語法多樣化（較復(fù)雜）

1.覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)

2.應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯

3.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊要點(diǎn)全連接詞如何算是一篇好文章？

技巧1.使用較高級(jí)的詞匯3.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞2.使用較豐富的句式abundantsentencepatternsproperconjunctionsadvancedwordsandphrases使文章“靚”起來的技巧→

ontheway/aroundthecorner.

Theweekendiscoming.

Nowadays,peoplethinkeducationisvery

important.→

beofgreatimportance/significanceattachgreatimportanceto一、使用較高級(jí)的詞匯短語優(yōu)先

Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.Thankstothegoodweather，…Thestudentsthereneedn’tpayfortheirbooks.Booksarefreeofchargeforthestudentsthere.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.You’llhavenotrouble\difficultyfindingmyhouse.

Agoodideaoccurredto

/struckme.Ihad

agoodidea.Icameupwithagoodidea.

我想到了一個(gè)好主意。棄舊取新二、使用較豐富的句式用高級(jí)和多樣化的句式來表達(dá)，能增加文章的文采。

倒裝是一種簡(jiǎn)單易行提亮句子的方法。Thechildrenwon’tcomehomeuntilitisdark.→

Notuntil

itisdark

willthechildrencomehome.YoucanimproveyourEnglishonlyinthisway.→

Onlyinthisway

canyouimproveyourEnglish.Althoughheisachild,hecanmanageit.→

Childasheis,hecanmanageit.

陳述不如倒裝妙從句在很多情況下可變成分詞結(jié)構(gòu)或省略句，這會(huì)是文章中更大的亮點(diǎn)。Whenheheardthegoodnews,heburstintotears.

HearingWhenitiscomparedwithothercartoons,

TheWolfandtheSheepismoreinteresting.C從句不如分詞傲學(xué)會(huì)使用with結(jié)構(gòu)With+賓語+adj.adv.prep.--phrasetododoingdone1)她睡著了，燈還亮著。Shefellasleep______________________.2)種了很多花，我們學(xué)校呈現(xiàn)出新的面貌。

________________________，ourschooltookonanewlook.3)不要滿嘴巴食物說話。Don’tspeak_________________________.4)由于無事可做，我就看了一部電影。_________________

,Isawamovie.

Withmanyflowersplanted

withyourmouthfull

Withnothingtodo

withthelightburning將簡(jiǎn)單句改為強(qiáng)調(diào)句、感嘆句2.Hewentthereyesterday.(強(qiáng)調(diào))→Hedidgothereyesterday.

簡(jiǎn)單句改為強(qiáng)調(diào)句或感嘆句后語氣更強(qiáng)烈、感情更充沛，是不可多得的高級(jí)表達(dá)方式。3.Topreventthepollutionisveryimportant.（感嘆句）

→Howimportantitistopreventthepollution!

1.Thechildrenwon’tcomehomeuntil5pm..(強(qiáng)調(diào))→Itis

notuntil5pm.

thatthechildrenwillcomehome.合并簡(jiǎn)單句Manyboyslearntosmoke.Itdoesharmtotheirhealth.→Manyboyslearntosmoke,

whichdoesharmtotheirhealth.Themealwasverynice.Weallenjoyeditverymuch.→Themealwassonicethatweallenjoyeditverymuch.Shewalkedoutoftheroom.Manystudentsfollowedher.→Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutoftheroom.名言警句別忘了我們應(yīng)該充分利用時(shí)間了。Itishightimeforustomakegooduseoftime.Asthesayinggoes,

Itishightimeforustomakegooduseoftime.“Timeandtidewaitfor

noman.”常用諺語(Proverb)Actionspeakslouderthanwords.事實(shí)勝于雄辯。

Striketheironwhileitishot.

趁熱打鐵。Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.

三思而后行。Practicemakesperfect.

熟能生巧。WheninRome,doastheRomansdo.

入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。

Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失敗是成功之母。

Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.覆水難收。

AllroadsleadtoRome.

條條大路通羅馬。請(qǐng)加上恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞.1）Wecangodowntownanddosomeshopping.__________,wecanpayavisittosomeplacesofinterest.2）Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends.___________,Isaved$80.3）Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth.___________,itmaymakeusfat.InadditionAsaresultWhat’sworse三、使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞使句子“靚”起來的小結(jié)：

簡(jiǎn)單句中伴有較高級(jí)的詞匯。用豐富和較高級(jí)的句式如：雙否定；倒裝句；被動(dòng)句；分詞；with結(jié)構(gòu)；強(qiáng)調(diào)句和感嘆句；各類型的從句;名言警句等。3.用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使句子之間更緊湊，連貫。

.DearRalph,I’mamiddleschoolstudent.Ialwaysdowellinmystudies.I’mnothappy.Ican’tgetalongwellwithmymother.Iloveherverymuch,butI’mabitafraidofher.

Iwritetoyou.Mymotherisaprofessorinauniversity.Sheworksveryhard.Shehaslittletimetotalkwithme.Sheisstrictwithme.Sheoftenworksalldaylongandoftenloseshertemper.She’sverybusy.Iseldomcommunicatewithher.Itisabigproblemforus.Ithinkwehavenothingtotalkabout.Iwanttoknowhermore.HowcanIcommunicatewithmymother?Couldyougivemesomeadvice?Ihopewe’llbecloser.WhatcanIdo?Sincerelyyours,LiHua

I’mamiddleschoolstudent.Ialwaysdowellinmystudies.ButI’mnothappy.Ican’tgetalongwellwithmymother.Iloveherverymuch,butI’mabitafraidofher.Iwritetoyou.

段落優(yōu)化1I’mamiddleschoolstudent,doingwellinmystudies.ButI‘mnothappybecauseIcan’tgetalongwellwithmymother.MuchasIloveher,

I’malittleafraidofher.SoIwritetoyouforsomeadvice.

Asaprofessorinauniversity,mymotherworkssohardthatshehaslittletimetotalkwithme.What’smore,sheisstrictwithmeandfrequentlyloseshertempereasily.

段落優(yōu)化2Mymotherisaprofessorinauniversity.sheworksveryhard.Shehaslittletimetotalkwithme.Sheisstrictwithme.Sheoftenworksalldaylongandoftenloseshertempereasily.She’sverybusy.

段落優(yōu)化3Iseldomcommunicatewithher.Itisabigproblemforus.Ithinkwehavenothingtotalkabout.Iwanttoknowhermore.HowcanIcommunicatewithmymother?Couldyougivemesomeadvice?Ihopewe’llbecloser.WhatcanIdo?Lackingcommunicationisindeedaseriousproblembetweenmymotherandme.IameagertoknowherMore.Whatconcernsmemostnowishowtocommunicatewithmydearmother.Idohopewe’llbecloser.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice.DearRalph,I’mamiddleschoolstudent,doingwellinmystudies.ButI’mnothappybecauseIcan’tgetalongwellwithmymother.Muchas

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