讀后續(xù)寫周周練幫助無家可歸的人學(xué)案高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫周周練主題：人與人類型：助人類題目：幫助無家可歸的人第二節(jié)(滿分25分)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。TodayIwaswalkingalongthestreetwhenahomelesswomanaskedmeforsomechange(零錢).Igavehersomemoneyandstoppedtotalktoherforawhile.Iaskedherabouthowsheendeduponthestreetandiftherewasashelter（收容所）shecouldgoto.Shetoldmethatshelefthomeatseventeenandhadbeenhomelesssincethen.Shesaidthatherbagwithallherclothesandpossessions（所有物）wasstolenthenightbefore,whileshewassleepingoutsideachurch（教堂）.Shesaidthatshewenttothedaycentereverydayandtheymadecallstotrytofindherashelterbutnothingwasavailable（可用的）,asallsheltersforwomenwerefullup.Ithadbeenlikethisformonths.Ilistenedtoherandsaidafewkindwordstoher.Afterwespoke,Itoldherthatitwasreallynicetomeetherandwishedherallthebest.Ileftfeelingreallysadandfrustrated（失意的）thattherewasnothingIcoulddotoease（減輕）hersituation.IhavespokentoafewotherhomelesspeopleandIhaveheardabouthowdifficultitistogetaplaceinashelter,orsometimessomeshelterscanbesounsafethatitisbetterforthemtosleeponthestreets.Iwasonmywaytomyflowerstore.Whiletrimming(修剪)thesekindsofbeautifulflowers,IthoughtabouttheladyIhadjustmetandotherhomelesspeopleIhadspokento.IthoughtitmustbefrustratingnottobeabletoexperiencesomanyofthedaytodaythingsthatIandmanyotherstakeforgrantedsuchasaroofoverourheads,abedtosleepin,moneytobuyfoodandevenmoneytobuypresentsforadearone.注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:IdecidedthatIcoulddosomethingforher._______________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Sheraisedherheadsuddenly,withhereyesfullofsurprise._______________________________________________________________________________文本分析1．頭腦風(fēng)暴1.Whathappenedtothehomelesswoman?2.Whydidn’tthehomelesswomangotoashelter?3.Whydid“I”feelsadandfrustratedaftertalkingwiththehomelesswoman?4.Whydid“I”decidetodosomethingforthehomelesswoman?2.重點(diǎn)詞匯和表達(dá)單詞音標(biāo)詞義背誦change[t?e?nd?]n.找零、零錢；變化shelter[??elt?(r)]n.庇護(hù)（處）；收容所possession[p??ze?n]n.占有;所有物;財(cái)產(chǎn)church[t???t?]n.教堂available[??ve?l?bl]adj.可用的，可獲得的frustrated[fr??stre?t?d]adj.挫敗的，失意的，泄氣的ease[i?z]v.減輕;緩和;降低trim[tr?m]vt.修剪;整理wishsb.allthebest祝某人一切順利takeforgranted認(rèn)為……理所當(dāng)然IthoughtitmustbefrustratingnottobeabletoexperiencesomanyofthedaytodaythingsthatIandmanyotherstakeforgrantedsuchasaroofoverourheads,abedtosleepin,moneytobuyfoodandevenmoneytobuypresentsforadearone.（Ithinkit+adj.+that+從句）我想不能體驗(yàn)這么多我和許多人都認(rèn)為理所當(dāng)然的事情，比如我們頭上的屋頂，睡覺的床，買食物、甚至是給愛人買禮物的錢，那一定是令人沮喪的。3.文本要素分析elementscontentWhoWhatWhenWhere【參考答案】：Who：“I”,ahomelesswoman,otherhomelesspeople；What：talkedwithhomelesswoman；When：“today”；Where：street,flowerstore3.文本要素分析Theme(主題):Thepurposeofthepassageistotellustohelppeoplemostinneed.4.故事結(jié)構(gòu)圖plotlineplotline故事情節(jié)線climaxclimax（高潮）________________________________________________________________________________________________Aftertalkingwithotherhomelesspeople,________________________________________________________________________________________________Aftertalkingwithotherhomelesspeople,IdecidedthatIcoulddosomethingforher.development，developmentdevelopment，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________beginningstorymountainbeginningstorymountainImetahomelesswomanwhodidnotgotoashelter.eImetahomelesswomanwhodidnotgotoashelter.endingpositivepositiveresolution解決action行動(dòng)conflict沖突resolution解決action行動(dòng)conflict沖突【參考答案】：development：Thehomelesswomantoldmethereasonwhyshedidnotgotoashelter,whichmademefeelsadandfrustrated.ending:Thehomelesswomanraisedherheadsuddenly,withhereyesfullofsurprise…5.文本概要本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者走在街頭，遇到一個(gè)無家可歸的女人向自己要零錢，在交談過后，作者了解到女人不去收容所的原因，對(duì)她的遭遇感到難過和沮喪。作者最終決定幫助這個(gè)女人并且去慈善機(jī)構(gòu)做志愿者，幫助更多的人。6.續(xù)寫結(jié)構(gòu)分析Paragraph1:Justatthatmoment.manymemoriescamebackintomymind.IreturnedhomeandpackedupfoodandclothesXXX首句IreturnedhomeandpackedupfoodandclothesXXX首句呼應(yīng)上文ThethingsIdidforhelpingherXXX___________________________________________________________________ThethingsIdidforhelpingherXXX中間刻畫細(xì)節(jié)___________________________________________________________________中間刻畫細(xì)節(jié)provideherajob尾句銜接過渡___________________________________________________________________provideherajob尾句銜接過渡Paragraph2:Sheraisedherheadsuddenly,withhereyesfullofsurprise.ShefeelsgratefulXXX首句ShefeelsgratefulXXX首句呼應(yīng)上文___________________________________________________________________helpmorepeopleinneedsay\do\feel中間刻畫細(xì)節(jié)___________________________________________________________________helpmorepeopleinneedsay\do\feel中間刻畫細(xì)節(jié)尾句萃尾句萃章顯志向cui’zhang’xian’zhi【詳解】1.續(xù)寫構(gòu)思①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我決定為她做點(diǎn)什么。”可知，第一段可描寫作者幫助那個(gè)女人的方式以及女人的感激之情。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“她突然抬起頭，眼里充滿了驚訝?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫接受作者提供的工作后，女人努力工作并且主動(dòng)幫助別人傳遞善意，作者也決定做志愿者，幫助更多的人。2.續(xù)寫線索打包物品，前往女人所在的地方——女人感到高興——遞給她物品——詢問是否愿意來店里工作——聲音顫抖，表示愿意——努力工作，傳遞善意3.詞匯激活回家：gobackhome_________打包：packup_________感謝：begrateful__________幫助某人：helpsb._________4.續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練我回家后打包了一些食物和不適合我家人穿的衣服。（packup；定語(yǔ)從句）除了自己的工作，她甚至幫助別人度過了艱難的時(shí)光。（inadditionto；gothrough）5.“幫助他人”高分句型1.Whenmeetingpeopleinneedontheroad,Iwouldtrymybesttohelpthemlikethefamily.Onlyinthisway,couldmoreandmorepeoplehelpeachotherinthefuture.當(dāng)我在路上遇到需要幫助的人時(shí)，我會(huì)盡力像家人一樣幫助他們。只有這樣，將來才能有越來越多的人互相幫助。2.Whetherrichorpoor,weshouldbehappytodosomethingforsociety.Thus,wecanlearnthatgivingisthesourceofhappiness.無論貧富，我們都應(yīng)該為社會(huì)做點(diǎn)什么。因此，我們可以學(xué)會(huì)給予是幸福的源泉?！緟⒖即鸢浮?3.詞匯激活returnhome；wrapsth.up；showmyappreciation；givesb.ahanddosb.afavor4.續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練1.Iwenthomeafterawhileandpackedupsomefoodandclothesthatwerenotfitanymoreformyfamily.2.Inadditiontoherownjob,sheevenhelpedotherstogothroughtheirhardtimes.7.范文展示IdecidedthatIcoulddosomethingforher.Iwenthomeafterawhileandpackedupsomefoodandclothesthatwerenotfitanymoreformyfamily.AndthenIheadedfortheplacewherewehadmet.Luckily,shewasthere.Seeingmeappearingagain,sheseemeddelighted,withabrightsmileonherface.WhenIhandedherallthestuffthatIhadpreparedforher,shecried,buryingherfaceinherhands.Icameuptofortherandaskherwhethershewouldliketoworkinmystore.Sheraisedherheadsuddenly,