讀后續(xù)寫情感描寫吃驚驚訝學(xué)案高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫微技能情感描寫之驚訝驚嘆形容詞副詞amazed驚訝的;astonished感到吃驚的;surprised感到驚訝的amazing令人驚訝的;astonishing令人驚訝的;surprising令人驚訝的amazingly令人驚訝地surprisingly驚人地，出乎意料地;shocked震驚的,震撼的;openmouthed驚愕得張大嘴的；目瞪口呆的shocking令人震驚的；名詞amazement驚奇，驚訝;astonishment驚訝;surprise驚奇;shock震驚動詞amaze使吃驚，使大為驚奇;astonish使驚訝；surprise使驚奇;shock使震驚固定短語1.令某人驚訝的是toone’samazement/astonishment/surprise/shock2.驚訝地inamazement/astonishment/surprise/shock3.難以置信地indisbelief臉上掠過驚訝1.alookofsurprisespreadoverone’sface臉上露出驚訝的表情=alookofsurpriseflashedacrossone’sface臉上露出驚訝的表情2.havealookofsurpriseonone’sface某人臉上露出驚訝的表情目瞪口呆2.lookatsb.withone’seyeswideopeninshock目瞪口呆看著某人’sjawdropped/felltotheground某人驚訝得張口結(jié)舌’smouthdrop/hangwideopeninsurprise某人驚訝得張大嘴情感細(xì)節(jié)描寫之驚訝聲音1.atuneofsurprise=asurprisedtone/voice驚奇的口氣/聲音2.giveacryofsurprise吃驚地喊出聲來3.letoutayelpofsurprise驚訝得叫起來4.beshockedbeyondwords驚訝得說不出話來=toosurprised/astonishedtoutteraword=bespeechlesswithshock5.gaspinastonishment/giveagaspofsurprise驚訝得倒吸一口氣eg:Theygaspedinastonishmentatthenews.他們聽到這個消息驚訝得倒吸一口氣。情感細(xì)節(jié)描寫之驚訝動作1.呆住，驚呆freezewithshock/standstillwithshock/stopdeadwithshockbenumbwithshock呆住，驚呆了2.難以置信地?fù)u頭shakeindisbelieftakesb.aback/takeone’sbreathaway4.晴天霹雷easaboltfromtheblueII.背誦下列句子。用面部表情+情感詞匯，描寫驚訝___________crossed/flashedacrossherface.他臉上掠過吃驚的表情。2.Hehad______________________________lookonhisface.他臉上有種驚訝略帶迷惑的表情。3.Onedarkbrow_____________驚奇地挑起。用“目瞪口呆、張口結(jié)舌、呆若木雞”描寫驚訝、吃驚’s____________________________________________.芭芭拉驚訝得眼睛睜得圓圓的。5.ThemomentIopenedthebox,myeyes__________________________.我一打開盒子，就驚奇地睜大了眼睛.6.Weall______________________________him.我們驚奇地睜大眼睛看著他。7.Hestraightenedupandlookedatme,_____________.他直起身，目瞪口呆地看著我。8.We________________________,and______________________.我們驚呆了，張口結(jié)舌。9.WhenIlookedatthegradeonmymathpaper,________________________________________.(夸張)看到數(shù)學(xué)試卷成績的那一刻，我驚得下巴掉在了地上。(聲音)里透露出的驚訝(倒抽一口氣，驚訝的說不出話)10.“Sotwoarecheaperthanone?”Alicesaid_____________________________,takingoutherpurse.愛麗絲拿出錢包，非常驚奇地說，“這么說，兩個比一個更便宜？”11.Everyone______________________________________________asthecarscamearoundthelastbend.汽車轉(zhuǎn)過最后一道彎道時，大人驚得倒吸了一口氣。12.____________________________________________.我的聲音里滿是驚訝。13.Forafewmomentwestood_________________________.一時間我們站在那里驚訝得說不出話來。14.Hestaredattheburnoutcar_________________________________.他望著燒毀的汽車，吃驚得說不出話來。15.Hewas__________________________________________oreventothink.我驚訝得說不出話來，甚至腦子都不靈了。III.按要求用吃驚的表達(dá)或其他描寫補(bǔ)全下面句子，并背誦。Ipulledoutmylunchcontainerfrommybag.Iexpectedthemtoturnaway.______________________________________________(我的臉上掠過一絲驚訝)whenMarygrabbedasmallpieceoftofuandateit.___________________________(她驚訝地睜大眼睛).______________________________________________(隨著她驚叫一聲“這真好吃”),severalforksandspoonsreachedforthetofuinstantly.____________________________________________(我目瞪口呆地看著他們)astheyweregoingonabouthowluckyIwasthatmymomtookthetimetoprepareacookedmealforme.WhileIdidn’tgettoeatanyofmymom’sfriedtofu,____________________________________(但我滿懷驕傲和感激).“主題升華”。1.ItwasHenry’skindnessthatmademefeelthewarmthofourfamily.Iwilltreasureitwithallmyheart.正是亨利的善良讓我感受到了我們家庭的溫暖，我會用心珍惜它的。2.Asurgeofhappinessandwarmthrunningthroughher,Momkissedthetwinsgently.一股幸福與溫暖流遍她的全身，媽媽溫柔地親了親雙胞胎。3.WheneverI'mfeelingstressedoroverwhelmed,myparentsarealwaystheretoofferalisteningearandashouldertocryon.每當(dāng)我感到壓力或不知所措時，我的父母總是在那里傾聽我的心聲并給我依靠的肩膀。4.EverytimeIfacedchallenges,athoughtofgivingupflashedinmymind,butthesupportofmyfamilygavemethestrengthtokeepgoing.每次面對挑戰(zhàn)，我都想放棄，但是家人的支持給了我繼續(xù)前進(jìn)的力量。5.Myparentsalwaysmakesuretoattendmyschooleventsandcheermeon,showingtheirunwaveringsupportandlove.我的父母總是確保出席我的學(xué)?；顒?，并為我吶喊加油，展現(xiàn)他們不動搖的支持和愛。6.Thewarmgoldensunlight,floodinginthroughthewindow,togetherwithlovebetweenmyfamily,warmedus.透過窗戶的溫暖的金色陽光和我們家人之間的愛，溫暖了我們。7.Fromthenon,thethreechocolaterangthealarminhishearteverytimeheintendedtolie,remindinghimtobehonest.從那以后，每當(dāng)打算撒謊的時候，那三顆巧克力就會在他心里敲響警鐘，提醒他要城實(shí)。8.Myfather’sloveislikethesunshine,whichbringsmefirmnessandenthusiasmsothatmywillisstrengthened.爸爸的愛就像陽光，帶給我堅(jiān)定和熱情，使我的意志更加堅(jiān)定。

V.(2021高考真題)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISE(母親節(jié)的驚喜)ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。____________________________________________________續(xù)寫第一段(側(cè)重描寫動作和人物做早餐的場景)1.他把這鍋粥放在文火上,讓杰夫看著煮15分鐘。①___________________________________________________________________________________________(雙連動作)②Heputthepotofporridgeonagentleheat,__________________________________________________________(非謂語動詞作狀語)2.看到他們失望的表情,他建議他們把廚房打掃干凈,而他幫他們給媽媽做早餐。①He_______________________________________,andadvisedthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastforMother.②_________________________________________,headvisedthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastforMother.(非謂語動詞作狀語)3.很快廚房里彌漫著一股香味。___________________________________________________________4.雙胞胎準(zhǔn)備好早餐托盤,加上一張他們做的漂亮的卡片,走出廚房。Thetwinspreparedthebreakfasttray,_________________________________,andsteppedoutofthekitchen.(三連動詞構(gòu)成動作鏈)續(xù)寫第二段(側(cè)重母親看到早餐時的表情及場面神態(tài)和情感細(xì)節(jié)描寫)5.當(dāng)他們的母親看到眼前完美的早餐時,她的臉上閃過一絲驚喜。Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousandperfectbreakfastinfrontofher,_________________________________________________.(無靈主語句)6.空氣中彌漫著誘人的早餐香味，她的目光落在早餐托盤上。____________________________________________,andhereyesfellonthebreakfasttray.7.她驚喜極了,于是興奮地?fù)u醒正在假裝睡覺的父親。①________________________________thatsheexcitedlyshookFather,whowaspretendingtobeasleep.(so...that...結(jié)果狀語從句)②___________________________________________________________________________________________(倒裝句)8.他看到早餐時裝出驚訝的樣子。__________________________________________________________9.(滿分結(jié)尾句)Jenna察覺到她父親的目光，他們會意地眨了眨眼。Jennacaughtherfather’seyeandtheyexchanged______________________.V.參考范文：范文1：Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Onelookandheknewwhattheywereupto.Seeingtheirdisappointedfaces,headvisedthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastformother.Thetwinsimmediatelycheeredupandgotdowntowork.Withinhalfanhour,thekitchenwascleaned.Atthesametime,FatherhadmadesomeFrenchtoastandgotthechickenporridgedone.Thenhetiptoedbacktobed.Thetwinspreparedthebreakfasttray,addingabeautifulcardtheyhadmade,andsteppedoutofthekitchen.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Theycried“HappyMother’sDay!DearMummy!”Motherhuggedthetwins,sleepyeyed.Aninvitingsmellofbreakfastfillingtheair,hereyeswidenedatthesightofthebreakfasttray.SosweetwasthesurprisethatsheexcitedlyshookFather,whowaspretendingtobeasleep.Hefakedastonishmentwhenhesawthebreakfast.Motherbitintothetoast,sayingitwasthebestshehadevertasted.Jeffinstantlybeggedtohaveabite.Jennacaughtherfather’seyesandtheyexchangedaknowingwink.當(dāng)雙胞胎失望地環(huán)顧四周時，他們的父親出現(xiàn)了。他一眼就知道他們在干什么。看到他們失望的表情，他建議他們打掃廚房，自己幫他們給媽媽做早餐。這對雙胞胎立刻振作起來，開始干活了。不到半小時，廚房就打掃干凈了。與此同時，父親做了一些法式吐司，并做好了雞肉粥。然后他躡手躡腳地回到床上。雙胞胎準(zhǔn)備好早餐托盤，加上一張他們做的漂亮的卡片，然后走出廚房。雙胞胎把早餐端上樓，叫醒了母親。他們喊道:“母親節(jié)快樂!”親愛的媽媽!”母親抱著雙胞胎，睡眼惺忪?？諝庵袕浡T人的早餐香味，她一看到早餐托盤就睜大了眼睛。這個驚喜太甜蜜了，她興奮地?fù)u了搖假裝睡著的父親。當(dāng)他看到早餐時，他假裝驚訝。母親咬了一口烤面包，說這是她吃過的最好吃的。杰夫立刻請求吃一口。詹娜和父親對視了一下，他們會意地眨了眨眼。范文2：Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Father’sappearingwaslikeasaviortothetwochildren.Knowingwhathadhappened,insteadofscoldinghischildren,thefatherencouragedthemtocookbreakfastagain.Undertheirfather’sguidance,thekidsstartedtotryagainandeverythi