讀后續(xù)寫個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類+the+girl+with+freckles+on+her+face+雀斑女孩（學(xué)會(huì)接納自我）講義 高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫試題呈現(xiàn)：

WhenIwasakidabouttwelveyearsold,Ihadalotoffreckles(雀斑).IhadreachedtheagewhenIhadbeguntoreallylookatmyselfinthemirror,andIwasoverwhelmed.Apparentlymymotherwastoo,becausesometimesshe’dlookatmeandshakeherhead.IhadacousinwhosenamewasJanetteElizabeth.Shelookedexactlylikehernamesoundsbecauseshehadaflawlesspeaches-and-creamcomplexion(膚色).Icouldn’thelp

comparingmyselfwithherandthinkingthatmylifewouldbealotdifferentifIhadbeautifulskintoo.Andthen,inthebackpagesofJanetteElizabeth’smagazine,Ifoundtheanswer:anadvertisementforfreckle-removercream.IknewthatIcouldafforditifIsavedmymoney,andIdid.Theadassuredmethattheproductwouldworkwell.ForthreeweeksIwenttothemailboxeverydaypreciselyatthetimethemailwasdelivered.Iknewthatifsomeoneelseinmyfamilygotthemail,Iwouldneverheartheendofit.Therewasnowaythattheywouldletmeopentheboxinprivate.

Threeweekslater,mypackagefinallycame.Iwenttomyroomwithit,satontheedgeofmybed,andopenedit.IwassurethatIwaslookingatamiracle.WhenIgotupthenextmorning,Iappliedthecreamallovermybody.ThenItookmyhoe(鋤頭)andwentwithmybrotherandcousinstohoethefield,whereIgotridofsometigerlilies(虎百合),seeminglyuglywithblackandsmallspots.Thesunwassostrongthatevenmyfacestartedtoburn.Bytheendoftheday,whenIcamebacktothehouse,myfamily,knowingnothingaboutthefreckle-removercream,begantosaythingslike“I’veneverseenyouwiththatmanyfrecklesbefore.”WhenIsawmyselfinthemirror,Ifoundmyfrecklesevendarkerandclearer.Idissolvedintotearsandhidinthebathroom.Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.______________

Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom’sdoor.______1）通讀全文PlotlineSufferfrommanyfreckles--buyremovercream--applyitto……--worse對(duì)比--Myspottedface和mycousin’sflawlessface類比--Myfreckle和tigerliliesEmotion

lineFeelbad--hopeful--expectant--desperate--?Iwasdyingtoremovemyfrecklesjustlikeremovingtigerliliesinthegarden.GivensentencesMymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.______________

Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmy

bedroom’sdoor._____Askquestions我對(duì)外貌不自信，除了雀斑，還有其他原因么?續(xù)寫的地點(diǎn)為什么會(huì)從浴室轉(zhuǎn)到房間?媽媽的安慰起作用了么?第二段續(xù)寫敲門的人是誰(shuí)?Elisabeth有什么作用?為什么提及虎尾百合?contructmicroplot情緒+情節(jié)+專場(chǎng)para1：

Momcametocheckonmeandcomfortedme

but

hadnoeffect.+

I

wasseizedby

depression,

turnedadeafeartowhatmomsaidand

stormedintomyownbedroom.para2:

Mom

andElizabathecameto

comfort

mewithabunchof

tigerlilies,which

weredottedwithfragrantfreckles,justlikeme.Theyhelpedme

realize

Iwas

auniquesoul

andhadmyownshiningpoint.WordbankGazingattheuglier“me’withdarkeranddarkerfrecklesinthemirror,Ishedgreattearsofsorrow.Stormingoutofthebathroom,Idashedintomybedroom,slammingthedoorshutbehindme.Curlingonthebed,Iburiedmyselfunderthepillow,sobbing,thegloomycloudsenvelopingmeutterly.Hesitatingforamoment,withpuffyeyesandstillwetcheeks,Ishuffledacrosstheroomtoopenthedoor.Lockingmeintoherembrace/gatheringmeintoherarms,shestrokemyhairgentlyandsaid,thefrecklesonmyfaceseemedtohavemagicallyfaded.范文：Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.WhenshecametothebathroomdooranddemandedthatIcomeoutandhaveameal,Iburstoutofthedoor,tearsstreamingdownmycheeks.Beforeshestoppedme,Istormedintomyroomandslammedthedoorshutbehindme.Lookingintothemirror,Isawagirlwithmoreanddarkerfrecklesonthefaceinsteadofpeaches-and-creamcomplexion.OnlythendidIrealizethatthecreamhadareverseeffectwhenwearingitinthesun.Ithrewmyselfdownonthebedandsobbed.

Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom’sdoor.Hesitatingforamoment,withpuffyeyesandstillwetcheeks,Ishuffledacrosstheroomtoopenthedoor.AtthedoorstoodmymotherandJanettewithabigbunchoftigerlilies,whichwerecoveredwithblackspotsbutamazinglybeautiful.Istaredattheminstunnedsurprise,notknowingwhattosay.Mymotherheldmeinherwarmembrace.“Thereareallkindsofflowers,andtheyareallbeautifulandsweet,”saidshe.Hearingthis,andsmellingthefragranceofthetigerlilies,thefrecklesonmyfaceseemedtohavemagicallyfaded.

下水作文Not

receiving

any

response

fromme,she

quickened

herpace

anxiously

tothebathroom,

checkingon

me.Seeingme

inawholeskin,she

breathedinrelief

andaskedme

whatwasgoingon.Herwordsseemedlike

ahammerblow,

tossing

me

intodeepersorrow.Tears

streamingdown,I

uttered

in

injuredtones

thatI

applied

thefreckle-removercreamonmyfaceandfreckles

appeared

onmyface

more

and

more.Knowingmysituation,she

comforted

me,“Itis

normal

thatteengirlshave

morefreckles

ontheirfaces

thanusual,So

do

Iatyourtime,honey!”

Down

in

spirit,I

turnedadeafear

towhatmymomsaid,

dashingtowards

mybedroomand

throwingmyself

intothebed.Hesitatingforamoment,withtearful

eyesandstill

wetcheeks,I

shuffledacrosstheroomto

openthedoor.

Atthedoor

stoodbeautifulElisabethandmomwith

abunchof

tigerliliesinherhand.My