高考英語讀后續(xù)寫勞動故事類小貓緩解了疫情期間家人的緊張關(guān)系課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)疫情故事——小貓緩解了疫情期間家人的緊張關(guān)系1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文4續(xù)寫原文We'dhadthisconversationbefore.Still,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelsorryforher.Iwassickofhavingtostayathometoo.EventhoughMicahandIwerehometogethermorethanwehadbeeninyears,wemightaswellhavebeenlivinginseparateworlds."WannawatchTVlater?"Iasked."No,thanks."Micahshookherhead."Inafewweeksyou'llbegoingtosportscamp,''Iadded"That'ssomethingyoucanlookforwardto."Iclosedthedoor.IwasusedtoMicah'srejection,butitstillhurt.Teenageindependenceisheathy,butIworriedifIdidn'tfindawaytobondwithmygirlsoon,Imightneverbeclosewithheragain.She'dbe18inthefallandhadalreadyconvincedherselfshedidn'tneedmeanymore.Maybeshewasright.NomatterwhatIdid,Icouldn'tseemtoreachher.5段首句Para1：Thatevening,Iwassurfingonlineandsawafriend'schildrenplayingwiththeirnewcat.Para2："ThisistheoneIwant,"shesaid,smiling.6Part2題目分析7點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)8續(xù)寫思路分析本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者和女兒因?yàn)橐咔椴坏貌欢祭г诩依?，但是長大后的女兒和自己并不親近。作者為了與女兒緩和關(guān)系，在看到朋友家的孩子跟貓玩兒的視頻后，主動上網(wǎng)搜索，并讓女兒挑選自己喜歡的貓來收養(yǎng)。女兒很喜歡這只小貓，并且與作者之間的關(guān)系緩和了很多。9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Thatevening,Iwassurfingonlineandsawafriend'schildrenplayingwiththeirnewcat.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“那天晚上，我在網(wǎng)上沖浪，看到一個朋友的孩子在和他們的新貓玩耍?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者上網(wǎng)搜尋可以收留貓的網(wǎng)站，準(zhǔn)備給女兒收養(yǎng)一個。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2："ThisistheoneIwant,"shesaid,smiling.由第二段首句內(nèi)容““這就是我想要的那個?！彼⑿χf。”可知，第二段可描寫女兒很喜歡收養(yǎng)的小貓，并且與作者之間關(guān)系緩和了很多。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索網(wǎng)搜索貓咪——展示貓咪圖片——女兒選了一只貓咪——和貓咪玩兒的很開心——母女關(guān)系12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類①展示：show/present/display②崩塌：teardown/collapse③吸引注意力：drawone’sattention/attractone’sattention情緒類①微笑：smile/laugh②溫暖：warmth/kindness13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Ishowedherthepicturesofthosecatsthatshecouldadopt.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句）[高分句型2]Withhermouthwideopening,shesimplycouldn’ttakehereyesoffthosecutecreatures.（運(yùn)用了with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Thatevening.Iwassurfingonlineandsawafriend’schildrenplayingwiththeirnewcat.Anideahitme.“Whynotgetherapet?”Ithoughttomyself.Actingonasuddeninspiration,IloggedinapetshelterwebsiteandwentstraighttoMicah’sroom."Sweetie,I'vegotasurpriseforyou."Ishowedherthepicturesofthosecatsthatshecouldadopt.Withhermouthwideopening,shesimplycouldn’ttakehereyesoffthosecutecreatures.Finallyshepointedtoababycatwithyellowspotsonthehead.16范文呈現(xiàn)“ThisistheoneIwant"shesaid,smiling.Wepaidonlineandthenextdaythelittleangelwasdeliveredtoourhouse.MicahgentlyscoopeditupintoherarmsandplantedherfaceintothesoftfurandthenMicahsmiledatmewithatenderlook,"thankyou,mum."Ahugewaveofwarmthfloodedallovermybodyanditseemedlikeawallbetweenustorndown.Mysilencedrewherattentionandshelookedatmeagain,throwingherselfinmyarms.“Iloveyou,mum.”17范文譯文那天晚上。我在網(wǎng)上沖浪，看到一個朋友的孩子在玩他們的新貓。我突然想到了一個主意?！盀槭裁床唤o她養(yǎng)只寵物呢？”我心想。突然受到啟發(fā)，我登錄了一家寵物收容所的網(wǎng)站，直接去了邁卡的房間?！坝H愛的，我給你一個驚喜?！蔽医o她看了那些她可以收養(yǎng)的貓的照片。她張大嘴巴，簡直目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地看著那些可愛的動物。最后，她指著一只頭上有黃色斑點(diǎn)的小貓。18范文譯文“這就是我想要的?！彼χf。我們在網(wǎng)上付款，第二天小天使被送到了我們家。邁卡輕輕地把它舀到懷里，把臉埋在柔軟的毛皮里，然后邁卡溫柔地看著我，“謝謝你，媽媽。”。“