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Tired/relaxed/enjoyable/unforgettablePleasant/interesting/fun/dull/boring/excitingAlthoughIfelttired,Itwasafantastictrip.Whatanexcitingandunforgettabletrip!ItissuchanenjoyabletripthatIwillneverforgetit.Ihadagoodtimethere,andit’sreallyanunforgettabletripShandonghasleftmeawonderfulimpressionandI’mlookingforwardtogoingbackthereagain.Howtointroduceyourtrip1.starting2.body3.endingWhenWhereHowWeatherWhat(activities)feelings1234Yourtrip（ShandongisthemostbeautifulplacethatIhaveeverbeento,andIwon’tforgetthosedaysthatIspentthere.）時態(tài)：人稱：（ItissuchanenjoyabletripthatIwillneverforgetit.）同學(xué)們,你一定欣賞過異鄉(xiāng)的風(fēng)景,品嘗過異鄉(xiāng)的美食,感受過異鄉(xiāng)的風(fēng)土人情…學(xué)校的語言天地要舉辦一次英語征文活動,內(nèi)容為介紹你的一次難忘的旅行經(jīng)歷,現(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)下面的提示,寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容提示:1.Whereandwhendidyougo2.Howdidyougothere3.Whatwastheweatherlike4.Whatdidyoudothere5.Howdidyoufeel要求:(1)中心突出,語意連貫,層次清晰,書寫規(guī)范,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮(2)詞數(shù)80詞左右Anunforgettabletripto___書面表達(dá)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（一）評分原則1.共20分，按5個檔次給分；2.采用整體評分的方式，評分時，首先考慮短文內(nèi)容是否符合題目要求，根據(jù)任務(wù)完成的情況初步確定所屬檔次；然后按該檔次的具體要求進行衡量，確定和調(diào)整檔次，最后給分；3.評分的主要參考指標(biāo)為：內(nèi)容要點全面、語言得體、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、上下文語意連貫、符合邏輯，字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右，其中內(nèi)容要點可用不同方式表達(dá)，鼓勵對緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。4.若書寫較差，影響理解從所得分中減去2分；5.評分時對于拼寫與標(biāo)點符號錯誤，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度酌情扣分。6.英語、美語拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。（三）各檔次評分參考標(biāo)準(zhǔn)一檔（17-20分）出色完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，有很好的能力用自己的話表述觀點，圍繞主題的合理發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容符合邏輯，覆蓋了所有要點，組織結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，表達(dá)意義得體，選詞貼切，語言準(zhǔn)確無誤或有少量拼寫錯誤，標(biāo)點、大小寫正確。二檔（13-16分）較好完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。有能力用自己的話表述觀點，有圍繞主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容比較符合邏輯，覆蓋了所有要點，組織結(jié)