學案1：Writing-Write a letter of advice 新人教版高中英語必修第一冊

新人教版高中英語必修第一冊PAGEPAGE3Writing—Writealetterofadvice寫作指導第一段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡單介紹自己，注意語氣。第二段：應該首先肯定對方的優(yōu)點，然后再寫需要改進的地方或針對具體情況提出具體的建議或忠告。注意千萬不要讓別人以為你是在投訴，而不是提建議。第三段：對提出的建議進行總結。要注意有禮貌，使讀者容易接受。話題詞匯feedbackn． 反饋suggestionn. 建議proposaln. 建議venturev. 冒昧做某事beneficialadj. 有益的advisev. 建議suggestv. 建議recommendv. 推薦，勸告wiseadj. 明智的話題句式1．段首常用語(1)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...(2)Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.2．表達“建議”常用語(1)Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...(2)Iwouldliketosuggestthat...(3)You’dbetter.../It’sbetterto...(4)AsfarasIamconcerned.../Inmyopinion...(5)Foronething...,foranother...(6)IfIwereyou,Iwould...(7)Itseemstomethatyoucould...3．段尾常用語(1)Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...(2)Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.(3)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.(4)Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.(5)Iwillbereadyforfurtherdiscussingthismatterintodetails.典例展示為了幫助中學生健康成長，某中學英文報開辟了“HEARTTOHEART”專欄。假設你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學習和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學寫一封回信。內容要點如下：1．表示理解并給予安慰；2．提出建議并說明理由。注意：1．詞數(shù)100個左右；2．信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關的信息；3．信的開頭與結尾已為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：tempern．脾氣，情緒StepOne審題謀篇體裁建議信話題對生活和學習的建議時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時人稱第二人稱StepTwo詞匯運用1．控制你的脾氣 _________________________2．體育鍛煉 _________________________3．有效的 _____________4．去除 _____________5．保持樂觀 _________________________6．積極的生活態(tài)度_________________________StepThree句式表達1．完成句子①最重要的是學會控制你的脾氣Themostimportantthingis.②你不可能做或者說出你會后悔的事。Youmaynotdoorsay.③事實情況是人人都會有這樣的一段時期，在這期間事事不順，因此你不必擔心過多。isthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiods，soyoudon’thavetoworrymuch.2．句式升級④用sothat/inorderthat合并句①和②。Themostimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtemper_________________youmaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.⑤把句③用it改寫成主語從句。everyonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong，soyoudon’thavetoworrymuch.StepFour連句成篇(注意使用first，second，and等關聯(lián)詞)HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Jamie

▁▃▅▇█參*考*答*案█▇▅▃▁StepTwo詞匯運用1．controlyourtemper2．physicalexercise3．effective4．getridof5．remainoptimisticabout6．apositiveattitudetowardslifeStepThree句式表達1．完成句子①tolearntocontrolyourtemper②anythingyou’llregret③Thetruth；whenthingsseemtobegoingwrong2．句式升級④sothat/inorderthat⑤ItistruethatStepFour連句成篇Onepossibleversion：HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthisthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong，soyoudon’thavetoworrymuch.Themostimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.Herearethreeusefultips：First，talktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Thisisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second，gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Andthird，remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyou’llsoonfeelcalmerandcarryonasnormal.Yours，JamieWriting—Writealetterofadvice寫作指導第一段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡單介紹自己，注意語氣。第二段：應該首先肯定對方的優(yōu)點，然后再寫需要改進的地方或針對具體情況提出具體的建議或忠告。注意千萬不要讓別人以為你是在投訴，而不是提建議。第三段：對提出的建議進行總結。要注意有禮貌，使讀者容易接受。話題詞匯feedbackn． 反饋suggestionn. 建議proposaln. 建議venturev. 冒昧做某事beneficialadj. 有益的advisev. 建議suggestv. 建議recommendv. 推薦，勸告wiseadj. 明智的話題句式1．段首常用語(1)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...(2)Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.2．表達“建議”常用語(1)Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...(2)Iwouldliketosuggestthat...(3)You’dbetter.../It’sbetterto...(4)AsfarasIamconcerned.../Inmyopinion...(5)Foronething...,foranother...(6)IfIwereyou,Iwould...(7)Itseemstomethatyoucould...3．段尾常用語(1)Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...(2)Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.(3)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.(4)Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.(5)Iwillbereadyforfurtherdiscussingthismatterintodetails.典例展示為了幫助中學生健康成長，某中學英文報開辟了“HEARTTOHEART”專欄。假設你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學習和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學寫一封回信。內容要點如下：1．表示理解并給予安慰；2．提出建議并說明理由。注意：1．詞數(shù)100個左右；2．信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關的信息；3．信的開頭與結尾已為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：tempern．脾氣，情緒StepOne審題謀篇體裁建議信話題對生活和學習的建議時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時人稱第二人稱StepTwo詞匯運用1．控制你的脾氣 _________________________2．體育鍛煉 _________________________3．有效的 _____________4．去除 _____________5．保持樂觀 _________________________6．積極的生活態(tài)度_________________________StepThree句式表達1．完成句子①最重要的是學會控制你的脾氣Themostimportantthingis.②你不可能做或者說出你會后悔的事。Youmaynotdoorsay.③事實情況是人人都會有這樣的一段時期，在這期間事事不順，因此你不必擔心過多。isthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiods，soyoudon’thavetoworrymuch.2．句式升級④用sothat/inorderthat合并句①和②。Themostimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtemper_________________youmaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.⑤把句③用it改寫成主語從句。everyonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong，soyoudon’thavetoworrymuch.StepFour連句成篇(注意使用first，second，and等關聯(lián)詞)HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Jamie

▁▃▅▇█參*考*答*案█▇▅▃▁StepTwo詞匯運用1．controlyourtemper2．physicalexercise3．effective4．getridof5．remainoptimisticabout6．apositiveattitudetowardslifeStepThree句式表達1．完成句子①tolearntocontrolyourtemper②anythingyou’llregret③Thetruth；whenthingsseemtobegoingwrong2．句式升級④sothat/inorderthat⑤ItistruethatStepFour連句成篇Onepossibleversion：HiWorried，I’msorryto