ALetterofApology課件高中英語人教課標(biāo)版選修七

ListeningQ1:Whichwordinthesongimpressesyou

most?Q2:What’sthepurposeofthissong?ApologizeWhen?How?

ContentsDiscussionAletterofApologyLanguageDiversityWritingstructureCriteriaforwritingAccuracy(準(zhǔn)確性)&Courtesy(禮貌用語)第五檔(很好)；(13-15分)1.完全完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。

2.覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。

3.應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。

4.語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。

5.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。

6.完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。

Criteria01020304structurelanguagecontenthandwritingSalutation

假如你是李華。你已和英國朋友Eric約定于本周三下午去高鐵站接他。你臨時(shí)有重要會議不能如約前往。請你用英語給Eric寫一封致歉信，主要內(nèi)容包括：表示歉意解釋原因接站安排注意：詞數(shù)80詞左右；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。StructureBeginningEndingBodyTip1:Organizetherequiredpointswiththeproperstructure.SignatureDearEricYourssincerely,LiHuaconveyanapologyunabletopickhimupatthehighspeedrailwaystationexplainthereasonattendanimportantmeetingsolutionwho,when,where,howshowsincerityDearEric,Iamsadtotellyouthisnews.Ihaveanimportantmeeting,soIcan'tarrivethereontime.Ihaverequestedanotherpeopletomeetyou.Iapologizesisncerely.Iwillinviteyoutovisitfamousplaces.Itwillbrodernourviews,what'smore,itwillenrichourlifeexperience.IfIwereyou,Iwillneverforgetthiscountry.Apologizeagain.YourssincerelyLiHuaAccordingtotheapologetictone,trytotellwhetherthelanguageisproperinthebeginningandendingparts.Ifnot,howwillyoupolishthem?feelsorrysomethinghappendrecentlypragmatic(語用)wordspellingaccuracy準(zhǔn)確性courtesy禮貌用語politesincereproperdiction(措詞)LanguagesincerelyOnceagain,yourforgivenesswillbehighlyappreciated.Wishyouapleasantjourney.tothepointpoliteTip2:Beginandendtheletterpolitelyandbriefly.hopeforforgivenessIwouldliketoconveymyearnestapologyfornotbeingabletopickyouupatthehighspeedrailwaystationLanguagebankofbeginningandendingforaletterofapologyBeginningApologyEndingWish&furtherapologyIamwritingtooffermyapologyfornotbeingableto.Iwouldliketoexpressmydeepestapologyfor...Iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyouformyfailingto...Excusemeformynotbeingableto...Imustbegyourforgivenessfor...IamsorrytoadmitthatI...Onceagain,Iamsorryforalltheinconveniencecaused.Hopefully,youcanacceptmyapologyandunderstandmysituation.Ihopeyoucanforgiveme.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldpardonme.ReasonsThereasonwhyIfailedtokeepmypromiseisthatImustattendanimportantmeeting.1)____________________________________,Ifailedtokeepmypromise.(Ving作狀語表示原因）2)Ihaveanimportantmeetingtoattend,_________________________________________________(定語從句)Trytorewritethestatementsforreasonsindifferentways.HavinganimportantmeetingtoattendwhichmakesitimpossibletokeepmypromiseLanguagediversitySolutions

1.IpromiseIwillarrangeformyco-workerTimtopickyouup.(同位語從句）

Imakeapromisethat_______________________________________

2.Hewillwaitforyouatthearrivalexit.

_____________________________hewillwaitforyou.（強(qiáng)調(diào)句）Tip3:Statereasonsandsolutionswithvariouspatterns.Trytorewritethestatementsforsolutionsindifferentways.ItisatthearrivalexitthatIwillarrangeformyco-workerTimtopickyouup.LanguagediversityLanguagemeetingsolutionreasonssentencepatternIwillarrangefor...attendanimportantmeetingpresentanimportantmeetingWithanimportantmeetingtoattend,IhavetoThereasonfor…isthat….Thereasonwhy…isthat….Havinganimportantmeetingtoattend....Itisbecause…that….verbphrasecomeupwithasolutionresolvetheproblemWhatIpromiseis..sorttheproblemoutverbphraseTomakeacompensation(補(bǔ)償)...sentencepatterninformedby...DearEric,Iwouldliketoconveymyearnestapologyfornotbeingabletopickyouupatthehighspeedrailwaystation.I'veplannedtodoit,however,havinganimportantmeetingtoattend,Ifailedtokeepmywords.Thus

ImakeapromisethatIwillarrangeformyco-workerLiLeitomeetyou.Itisatthearrivalexitthathewillwaitforyou.And

Onceagain,yourforgivenesswillbehighlyappreciated.Wishyouapleasantjourney.YourssincerelyLiHuaOneversionlinkingwords假定你是李華，最近幾個(gè)月你每天都和英國朋友Alice通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)練習(xí)口語，但這周末你因回鄉(xiāng)下看望祖父母而無法繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)。請你給Alice寫一封郵件，表達(dá)歉意。內(nèi)容包括：1.無法繼續(xù)練習(xí)口語的原因；2.補(bǔ)救措施。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫Homeworkstructurecontentapologyreasons&solutionwish&apology對這周末無法一起練習(xí)口語表達(dá)歉意Iamindeedsorrytotellyouthat...1.周末要回鄉(xiāng)，沒有無線信號，所以無法繼續(xù)練習(xí)Thereasonfor...isthat...keepon...2.下周一返回繼續(xù)練習(xí)；中國名著作為補(bǔ)償makecompensation;Chineseclassics希望不會造成不便causesb.anyinconvenienceDearAlice,IamindeedsorrytotellyouthatIwon'tbeabletodooralpracticewithyouthisweekend.Duringthepastfewmonths,wehavemadeitaruletosetasideonehourfororalpractice.IhavemadegreatprogressinmyspokenEnglish.However,Iwillgobacktomyhometowntovisitmygrandparentsthisweekend.SincethereisnoWif