Unit10SectionB寫作課件人教版八年級英語上冊

Unit10Ifyougototheparty,you’llhaveagreattime!

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單元整體框架Unit10Ifyougototheparty,you'llhaveagreattime!

writingLearningObjectivesBytheendofthisclass,Iwillbeableto:writealetterofadvicebyusingwhatI’velearnedfromthereadingtext;developanawarnessofsharingproblemsandhelpingothers.FreeTalkCanyouguesswhathappenedtoher?Givehersomeadviceaccordingtoyourguess.Facingworries,how

willyouseekforhelp?123askforadviceonsocialmedia4writealettertoaprofessionaladviser5talkwithtrustworthyfriends

turntoourteachersforhelpLinda,anadviserforteenagers,hasreceivedaletteraskingforsomeadvice.Readherreplyanddiscussthequestions.Readforformat1.Whatarethenecessarypartsofthisletter?GreetingBodySignatureReadforstructure2.Whatdoesthebodypartmainlyinclude?Tip1:Makethestructureclear.Beginning:________________________Development:___________Ending:_____________ShowempathyStateproblemsGiveadviceExpresswishesReadforlanguagefeaturespolitewarmTip2:Makethelanguageconsiderate.3.Howdoyoufeelwhenyoureadtheunderlinesentences?ReadforlanguageexpressionsGroupWork:Findtherelevantexpressionsandthinkofmore.4.HowdoesLindashowherempathy?5.HowdoesLindagiveadvice?6.HowdoesLindaexpressherwishes?Group1Group2Group3Readforlanguageexpressions4.HowdoesLindashowherempathy?Youhaveeveryrighttofeelupsetaboutthat.IhavemetthesameproblemsasyoubeforesoItotallyunderstandyourfeelings.It’stotallynormaltofeelthisway.Readforlanguageexpressions5.HowdoesLindagiveadvice?You’dbetterdo...Whydon’tyoudo...Howaboutdoing...I’dliketosuggest...Itwouldbeagoodideaifyou...Readforlanguageexpressions6.HowdoesLindaexpressherwishes?Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofhelptoyou.Whateveryoudecidetodo,goodluck!Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionspracticalanduseful.Tip3:Maketheexpressionscolorful.ReadforadviceYoushouldmakeaproperplanforyourstudy.7.Whichsuggestionisbetter?Why?Youshouldmakeaproperplanforyourstudysothatyoucanfinishyourhomeworkontimeandhavemorefreetimetodowhateveryouwant.specificdetailsReadforadviceThereareacoupleofwaysIdealwithstressandIhopethesecanbebeneficialtoyouaswell,suchaslisteningtosomemusicordoingsports.personalexperienceTip4:Maketheadviceconvincing.7.Whichsuggestionisbetter?Why?Youhadbetterlearntorelaxyourself,suchaslisteningtosomemusicanddoingsports.BeginningDevelopmentEndingShowour_________State_________Giveour________Endourletterwith____________empathyadvicesincerewishesLinkingWordsspecificdetailspersonalexperiencefirstofall;what’smore;inaddition;meanwhile;lastbutnotleast.problemsFinishtheoutline.Lindaisverybusyrecentlybecauseshereceivesmanylettersaskingforhelp.Canyouhelpherreplyoneoftheseletters?Hello,IamTina.Ihavesomeproblems.Ineedyourhelp.Asyousee,Iamfat.AndIhavefewfriends,Ialwaysfeellonely.Atthesametime,mygradesaregettingworseandworse.WhatshouldIdo?Couldyouhelpme?要求：(1)根據(jù)Tina的現(xiàn)狀，給她寫一封回信，幫她解決她的問題。(2)字數(shù)100字左右。(3)書面整潔工整。

Self-checklistYesNo1.Theformatofletteriscorrect.2.Thestructureiscompleteandcorrect,includingatopicsentence,supportingdetailsandbestwishes.3.Therearevariedsentencesandspecificdetails.4.Thehandwritingisneatandthespelling,grammarandpunctuationarecorrect.Pleasecheckyourletteraccordingtotheself-checklist.Peer-checklistScoresStandardofevaluation1.Theformatofletteriscorrect.5=Excellent4=Good3=Acceptable2=NeedsImprovement2.Thestructureiscompleteandcorrect,includingatopicsentence,supportingdetailsandbestwishes.3.Therearevariedsentencesandspecificdetails.4.Thehandwritingisneatandthespelling,grammarandpunctuationarecorrect.Pleasecheckeachotheraccordingtothepeer-checklist.Whowouldyouliketoshowyourwriting?clearstructurecolorfulexpressionsconsideratelanguageconvincingadviceIt’snormaltohaveworriesinourdailylife.Learntoaskothersforhelp.Learntohelpothers.I’llputatrashcan