高中英語(yǔ)-高考考綱對(duì)書面表達(dá)的要求-公開課課件

第五檔（很好）（21－25分）：覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容；應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致；應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。Criteria

and

requirements

for

NMET.Advanced

words

（較高級(jí)的詞匯）Advanced

structures（較豐富的句式）Proper

connective

words（恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞）1).

I

like

English

very

much

.English

is

my

favorite.It’s

beyond

my

understanding.He

burst

intotears

at

the

sight

of

thesnake.2).

I

can’t

understand

it.3).

He

cried

when

he

saw

the

snake.4).

Suddenly

I

thought

out

a

good

idea.5).

It

is

the

most

important

that

you

should

put

your

heart

into

study.A

good

ideaoccurred

to

me.struckflashed

into

my

mind.came

to

me

in

aflash.The

point

/key

is

that

you

should

focus

your

attention

on

study.1).

Because

the

weather

was

good,

our

journey

wascomfortable.2).We

all

think

he

is

a

great

man.3).When

he

spoke,

he

felt

more

and

more

excited.4).

The

students

there

needn’t

pay

for

their

books.5).

As

a

result

the

plan

was

afailure.Thanks

to

…Owing

to/Due

to

…think

highlyoffree

of

chargeturn

out

/prove

to

be…the

more…,

the

more…1).In

our

school,

there

are

twenty-sixclassrooms.2).You

can

find

my

house

easily.3).

Many

houses

arebeing

built.巧用習(xí)語(yǔ)——增加文采Our

school

consists

of...under

construction.have

no

trouble

finding

…under01020304discussionRepairInvestigationprotection1）.

I

don’t

want

to

live

with

a

stranger

in

a

hotelroom.2）.

I

was

very

eager

to gohome.3）.

She

shouted

loudly

,

“I’ve

succeeded!”洋味兒十足——才是好文章share

…with…can’t

wait

to…at

the

top

ofhunger

for…be

dying

to…be

desperate

to…make

it1).

To

my

surprise,

the

little

girl

knew

so

manythings.2). As

soon

as

he

came

back

from

Beijing,hewas

sent

abroad（倒裝句）.3).He

did

not

know

what

had

happened

until

hehad

read

the

news

in

the newspaper.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句）What

surprised

me

most

is

that

...No

sooner…than

.It

was

notuntil…that...frighten/shock/puzzle/interest/delight/strike/impress…No

sooner

had

he

come

back

from

Beijing

than

hewas

sentabroad.1).

Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2).

Though

I’m

weak,I’ll

make

the

effort.(as倒裝句)3).I

won

the

competition

because

of

her

help.(用虛擬語(yǔ)氣）On

hisarrivingWeak

as

I

amBut

for...,

I

couldn’t

havewon…4).I

won’t

believe

what

he

says.（讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）5).She

walked

out

of

the

lab

and

many

students

followed

her.(過(guò)去分詞)Whatever

…followed

by

many

students.—————邏輯角度合適的過(guò)渡性詞匯時(shí)間順序first,

second,

then,

finally/at

last

,

soonimmediately,

suddenly空間順序here,

there,

on

one

side…on

theotherside,in

front

of,

at

the

back

of,

next

to對(duì)稱順序for

one

thing,

for

the

other

thing,

ononehand,on

the

other

hand轉(zhuǎn)折順序—————but,

however,

while,

though,otherwise——————————因果順序because,

since,

as,

thanks

to,

as

aresult(of)條件順序as

long

as,

so

long

as,

on

condition

that,if,

unless讓步順序—————though,

as,

even

if/though,whether,who (what,when,

where)everwhat’s

more,

besides,

to

make

thematter

worse,

what’s

worsein

a

word,

altogether,

all

in

all,

ingeneral遞進(jìn)順序表示總結(jié)1).

You

gave

me

much

help

andencouragement.___

___

____,

I

couldn’thave

succeeded

without

you.____

____

___2). (總的來(lái)說(shuō)）,your(In

a

wordAll

in

allanswer

is

not

so

satisfying.3).

Generally

speaking

一般來(lái)說(shuō)）,physicsis

much

more

difficult

than

mathematics.Part

1

Fill

in

theblanks.4).____

_________（令我驚恐的是），

Isaw

him

fall

down

from

thetree.5).

This

bike

is

awesomely

beautiful

.(然而），

I

can’t

afford

it.To

myhorrorNeverthelessPart

2

choose

the

proper

connective

words.first,

what’s

worse/more,besides/in

addition,

now,

in

myopinion,

As

far

as

I’mconcerned,in

my

view,

from

the

point

of

myview.?___1___

many middle

school___2__Nowstudents

are

fat

and

there

arereasons

for

it.

Some

eat

too

muchmet

and

too

many

snacks.

Some

sittoo

long

but

seldomexercise.

Getting

fat

has

quite

a

fewdisadvantages.

_First

_,

being

fatmakes

it

difficult

for

one

to

walk

ormove

as

others.3

,to

be

fat

usually

means

to

beweak,

and

it

is

easy

for

a

fat

person

to

sufferfrom

many

kinds

of

diseases.

At

the

sametime.

A

fat

person

gets

tired

easily,

whichdecreases

his

study

efficiency.____4,

to

be

fat

is

not

a

goodthing

for

us

middle

students.

We

should

try

toeat

less

meat

but

morevegetables.___5_____,

we

should

try

our

best

to

takepart

in

all

kinds

of

sports.

If

so,

we

are

sure

tolose

weight

and

stay

healthy.What’s

moreIn

myopinion_BesidesPart

3

put

the

sentences

into

right

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