2021-2022學(xué)年廣東省高三上學(xué)期聯(lián)考英語基礎(chǔ)寫作講評課件

11月26日高三英語考試基礎(chǔ)寫作日期：2021年11月30日Afterclass:1.Youcanclearlyknowtheformsofletter.2.Youcananalysewhatchallengeswewouldfaceifweareanassistanteditor.3.Youcanknowhowtoaskothersforadvice.LearningaimsContents01Enjoysomewritings04Reviseyourwriting02Detaillearning03Summary01EnjoysomewritingsEnjoysomewritings01格式！01格式+書寫！Enjoysomewritings01正確的修改示范！Enjoysomewritings01注意分段啊！Enjoysomewritings01老師也學(xué)過拼音滴，休想蒙混過關(guān)！EnjoysomewritingsIbecameaworkerinourschollEnglishnewspaper.Mydutyistohelptheeditor.01Enjoysomewritings01Enjoysomewritings01EnjoysomewritingsHowiseverythinggoing?開頭不夠吸引人！01內(nèi)容！Enjoysomewritings02DetaillearningDetaillearning02評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1.告知他此消息；3分2.分析你面臨的挑戰(zhàn)；6分3.征詢他的建議；3分4.其他（書寫；高級詞匯句型；連接等）3分02寫作三部曲：1、審體裁（類型、人稱、時態(tài)、要點信息）2、連詞成句（將所需要的信息用句式、短語翻譯成句）3、連句成篇（將句子用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~、銜接句鏈接成篇）Detaillearning分析題目011、審體裁類型：人稱：時態(tài)：要點信息：求助信第一人稱一般現(xiàn)在時1.告知他此消息2.分析你面臨的挑戰(zhàn)3.征詢他的建議1.告知

2.被錄用3.助理編輯4.校英文報5.一則消息要點信息一：tell;share;informsbthatapieceofgoodnewsbecome;beadmittedto;beselected/chosenas;work;joinassitanteditorschoolEnglishnewspaper分析面臨的挑戰(zhàn)1.會占用自己太多課余時間2.沒有相關(guān)經(jīng)驗3.不熟悉電腦，打字不快4.內(nèi)向，怕與人打交道要點信息二：？英語能力不足；語法不過關(guān)；口語不好；occupy;sapretime;balancesth.withsth.relevantexperiencebefamiliarwithbeafraidof要點信息三：征詢他的意見1.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermesomesuggestions.2.Iwillbegratefulifyoucouldhelpmetodealwiththeseproblems.銜接詞：適用于三點1）首先:tobeginwith,firstandforemost,mostimportantofall2）

而且、此外：then,next,furthermore,inaddition,besides,moreover,what’smore3）最后:

finally,eventually,lastly,atlast,lastbutnotleast

2.適用于兩點的情況(1)ontheonehand,….ontheotherhand,….

(2)foronething,….foranotherthing,….銜接句：Thereisnodoubtthatitisagoodchanceformetoimprovemyself,butIamfacingsomechalengesnow.Excitedbutnervous,Ireallydon'tknowwhatIcandotofacethechallenges.03SummarySummar