Dteqwg新東方考研英語FLASH課堂作文筆記

新東方考研英語FLASH課堂作文筆記

新東方考研英語FLASH課堂作文筆記

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2001年英語平均分52.79分。作文平均11分作文在40-70分之間

寫作課的學習方法：

Dt八字方針：背誦一一杰出詞匯；杰出句型；文章里杰出的句子；萬能的框架;

經典范文

eqwg默寫、互譯、描紅

新東方一種文章只用一種寫法

三個時期：牢記、效仿、持之以恒

考研英

一、考生寫作的逆境及其計策

語1、滔滔不絕意識流

FLAS中文：情感分段；觀點由讀者領會

英文：邏輯分段；觀點由作者交待

H課堂''猴子原那么"：themonkeyprinciple——提綱原那么，注重命題

作文筆的提綱

量化：200個字，12—15句話

記2、無話可說真難受

91—96年：社會性的問題聯(lián)系生活實際

3、真情顯露沒必要只需要''相關"

無名考作文是制造一個機會展現(xiàn)書面表達英語的能力，應該把構思的時刻

降低到最低限度

4、英語表達憋得慌

達到12分：安全第一：句子結構，語法簡單原那么：詞匯

達到17分以上：詞匯多變：多使用同義詞、近義詞

句子結構多變：一定要有復雜的句子結構

樹干：謂語部分、核心部分

耀眼的錯誤：1主謂一致；2動詞時態(tài)；3定冠詞和不定冠詞

4名詞單復數(shù)；5介詞、副詞的搭配；6拼寫錯誤

樹枝：狀語從局、定語從局、非謂語從局等

綠葉：各種修飾對每一個句子，從寫作的角度，從這三個層次上用心體會每

一個句子

5、處于被動危害大：寫作應是主動的，幸免不利于自己的詞和句

從錯誤中提高自己。寫2001年作文題

二、透視91年到2001年真題,提煉重點題型，歸納總結經典段落

1、歷屆真題

從91年開始一一第一次考研作文命題，差不多上和托福作文命題差不多

''Wheretolive,inthecityorthecountry?”

title開頭有一句話：Somepeoplethinkthatpeoplelivinginthecountry

enjoymoreadvantagesthanthosewholiveinthecity.

outline

1.convenoencesofthecity

2.attractionsofthecountry

3.disadvantagesofboth

4.mypreference

PrivateCar

Nowadays,anyChinesecanenjoytheluxuryofowningaprivatecarif

hecanaffordit.

Outline：

1.advantagesofowningaprivatecar

2.disadvantagesofowningaprivatecar

3.shoulditbenecessarytoenlargetheprivatecarmarket?Whyorwhy

not?

假如認為不應該進展小汽車，最后一段就寫不應該進展小汽車的幾個理由。

假如最后一段表示支持，調整結構：

第1段寫小汽車的好處

第2段寫小汽車的壞處

第3段寫什么緣故要進展小汽車

92年----標題

Forabetterunderstandingbetweenparentandchild

1.Presentsituation:lackofcommunicationbetweenparentandchild

2.possiblereasons:adifferentlikesanddislikes

b.misunderstanding

c.others

3.suggestions:a.forparentsb.forchildren

第二段不管是單數(shù)依舊復數(shù)，都應該寫幾個理由

第三段不管是單數(shù)依舊復數(shù)，至少要寫到兩點

詳細記錄92年提綱一一經典題型之一

93年----AdvertisementonTV

1.Presentstate2.Reasons3.Mycomments

94年----Onmakingfriends

1.theneedforfriendshipi什么緣故要交朋友）

2.truefriendship（說明性段落--卜大經典段落之一）-----參看97年1月

四、六級考試寫掉這三個段落《大學英語考試高分作文》

3.myprincipleinmakingfriends

95年----Theprojecthope

1.presentsituation2.necessityoftheproject3.mysuggestion

96年（不成功）----Goodhealth

1.importanceofgoodhealth2.waystokeepfit3.myownpractice

97年依舊不成功

1.interpretthepictures

2.predictthetendencyoftobaccoconsumptionandgiveyourreasons

98年圖畫作文

一只母雞拿著一張紙，上面寫著''如此承諾〃一一本母雞承諾下的雞蛋有蛋清、

蛋黃、蛋殼……，旁邊有一首打油詩

1.writeoutthemessageconveyedbythecartoon

2.giveyourcomments

99年

Directions:

1.youressayshouldcoverthesethreepoints:

2.possiblereasonfortheeffect

3.yoursuggestionforwildlifeprotection

essay:論文----introduction,body,conclusion

歷史留給我們的是

1、幾個經典段落2、outline（思路）

圖畫作文比較公平客觀

92年是第一個經典題型，99年是第二個經典題型

2000年是第3大經典題型

1.Describethepicture（描述圖表--卜大經典段落之一）

2.Deducethepurposeofthedrawerofthepictures（畫家的意圖---十

大經典段落之一）

3.Suggestyourcountermeasures

98年命題不成功一一沒有想到現(xiàn)實生活中人是如何觀賞漫畫的

2000年1、看畫2、畫家想干嘛3＞看了畫以后會要采取什么行動

Abriefhistoryofworldcommercialfishing

漫畫不需要動專門多腦筋看漫畫時不需要想太多

2000年

Asisshowninthepictures,wecanseeclearlythatwiththeincrease

ofcommercialfishing,thenumberoffishessharply/dramatical1y

decreased.Inonepicture,therewerevariouskindsoffishandonlyone

fishing-boatin1900.Onthecontrary,in1995therewasonlyonefish,

with（but的重心在后面，with的重心在前面）manyfishing-boats.

Thepurposeofthispictureistoshowusthatdueattentionhastobe

paidtothedecreased.Ifweletthissituationcontinue/goasitis,

wewon'tknowwherefishisinthefuture.Bythattime,ourenvironment

willsufferagreatdestruction.

Therefore,itisimperativeforustotakeeffectivemeasures.Forone

thing,weshouldappealtoourauthoritiestomakestrictlawstocontrol

commercialfishing.Foranother,weshouldenhancetheawarenessof

peoplethattheoceanresourcesareveryvitaltous.Onlyinthisway

canweprotectouroceanresources.AlsoIbelievethatwehumanscan

overcomethisdifficulty,andwewillhaveabrightfuture.

1、本文185個詞2、12個句子第1段3句話，53個單詞第2段

4句話，60個單詞

第3段5句話，72個單詞

提綱第一點里面要你干什么你就干什么

1?代表一種方向（問題有，又有解決問題的方案，構成整體的漫畫）

Today,theearth'sdesertsarespreadingandgettinglargerand

desertificationisaseriousproblemfacingtheworld.Themajorreason

forthisisirresponsiblecuttingdownoftrees.Asisshowninthefirst

cartoon,whenpeoplecutdowntreesdesertforcesonandbecomes

irrepressible.第一段就在分析緣故

作文在判卷的時候注重兩個方面：語言、內容

1、句子的主語和謂語是否一致2、時態(tài)3、名次的單復數(shù)

4、定冠詞和不定冠詞5、搭配6、單詞的拼寫

套用句型時要對句型部分句法結構功能專門清晰

詞匯兩個方面：1詞匯面的寬度2詞匯的難度

語法的兩個原那么：1語法的精確性2語法的復雜性

thecaption=thewordsread漫畫中的說明文字

具體的東西抽象化，抽象的東西具體化。

Asisshowninthepictures,wecanseeclearlytherelationshipbetween

peopleandthedeserts.Inthefirstpicture,peoplearefleeingfrom

greedysandhillsbecausetheyhavecutdownallthetrees.Thecaption

reads:Asthesandadvantages,weretreatinthesecondpicture,the

peoplehavereturnedcarryingtools,waterandyoungtreestoplantthe

landagain.Thecaptionreads:Asweadvance,thesandretreats.描述

圖片

2001年（經典題型）

1場景2提綱3圖畫

第1段描述圖畫、畫家意圖

第2段具體例證

第3段具體做法

2001年大綱樣題

Widespreadtobaccoconsumptionhasledtograveconsequences,yetthe

tobaccocompaniesstillclaimthattheymaleavaluablecontributionto

theworldeconomy.Thereisadiscussioninanewspaperontheabovetwo

viewpoints.

Writeanessaytothenewspaper

1）criticizing（評論）theirviewand

2）justifyyourstand.

Inyouressay,makefulluseoftheinformationprovidedinthepictures

printedbelow.Youshouldwriteabout200wordsonanswersheet2.

（picture:theyear1997）

原先的經典圖表題：提綱+圖表

1、描述圖片

2、幾個可能的理由

3、建議措施

經典題型之五：

現(xiàn)在的圖表題：場景+提綱+圖表

十大經典段落

1現(xiàn)狀2說明性段落3描述性段落（圖表圖畫）開頭段落

4緣故列舉（alistofreason）-----主體段落

5舉例（2001年考研題，參看97年1月四六級考題）

6意圖分析7利和弊（自己總結）一一中間段落

8結尾（自己總結）9建議措施10推測以后

學術性英語的功能段落不是survival而是academic

范文三

在寫一些文章時，不可幸免的會有一些核心概念。幸免重復。

人口增長、野生動物、滅絕、構成危險

突出寫作的語言意識。

Thetwocharts....

increaseintheU.S.populationhasbeenaccompanied...

corresponding

decline

Fartoomany太多的

specieshavebeenlostalready被動語態(tài)----說明立場

Thisposesadangerto被...構成危險

Asthehumanpopulationexpands,moreandmorewildanimalsarehunted

forfood...

orbecause...

theyarethoughtto...

presentathreatto...

butstudiesshowthatoneoftheprimarycauses...

disappearance

thismakesuswonder...

otherlifeforms與其他生命方式

inharmony和諧相處

sharethisplanet共享那個星球

Inmyopinion,

itisimperativeto迫切的

Inmyopinion,itisimperativetotakesteptoreversethedisturbing

trendillustratedinthecharts.Onemeasurewouldbetoforbidthe

buildingofcitiesinareaswherewildlifeisthreatenedwithextinction.

But,moreimportantly,manmustlearntostoppollutingtheenvironment,

orhehimselfwillbecomeextinct,

reverse(a.)相反的(v.)逆轉過來

disturbing令人困惑的

illustratedinthecharts

Onemeasurewouldbeto...

But,moreimportantly,

forbid

extinction

stoppollutingtheenvironment

or表示否那么

1、人口增長了幾次？

...theincreaseintheU.S.population

Asthehumanpopulationexpands...

…populationgrowth...

2、野生動物。

...wildlifespecies...

...species...

...wildanimals...

...wildlife...

...otherlifeforms...

...wildlife....

3、野生動物的消亡、滅絕

…h(huán)avebeenlostalready...

...disappearanceofwildlife...

…extinction.

...becomeextinct.

4、構成危險。

...posesadangerto...

…presentathreadto...

...isthreatenedwith...

范文-1■?一

Statisticsinpeople'sDailyExpensesinXi'an

19951996199719981999

Food66%61%48%41%36%

Clothing9%10%12%15%18%

Recreation4%5%8%9%11%

Others21%24%32%35%35%

Total100%100%100%100%100%

經典的十大段落是排列組合，產生新的段落的。

好的東西，最后一段可能要推測。

現(xiàn)狀一一緣故一一推測以后（好的東西）

——建議、措施（不行的東西）

語言句式專門清晰。

Whatisshowninthetableaboveindicatesthatdramaticchangeshave

takenplacein...

...from...to.

Theexpensesonfoodhavedeclinedby30%whilethoseonclothingand

recreationhaveincreasedrespectivelyby9%and7%.Thestatisticsof

riseandfallseemtoexistinisolationbutcloselyrelatedtoone

another.

...declinedby...

...while...（表對比）

…increasedrespectivelyby...

Thestatisticsofriseandfallseemtoexistinisolationbutclosely

relatedtooneanother.

Therearetwofactorsaccountingfor

...resultingfrom...由于...而產生的,形成的resultingin表結果

..playsanimportantpartin...

Anotheroneis...

Asaresultofsuchashift...

…increasesyearafteryear.

Formtheanalysesmadeabove,wemaycometoconclusionthat...

...thetendencyindicatedinthetablewillcontinueinthebetter

direction.

經典圖表作文

一、描述圖表：注意粗線條的描述，寫出趨勢、結論性的東西

二、分析背后的緣故：什么緣故是圖表上的這種趨勢。且沒講一點應該拓展一

下。這三點是透過現(xiàn)象看本質

三、建議、措施

圖表作文的變體（要求對圖畫進行描述）

1、信息

2、對信息的看法必須具體的描述

第一段依舊是粗線條的描述

第二段進行深入細致的描述信息*圖表語言*

第三段發(fā)表個人看法

寫法：1、分析背后緣故。

2、對圖表的進展趨勢，發(fā)表個人看法。

3、一樣性的評論（緣故、趨勢）

情形+提綱+圖表

Themajorityofpeoplewouldagreethat...

bypayingtaxestothegovernmentandemployinghundredsofworks.

當它的情形部分是兩個觀點，而圖表本身又暗示了一個觀點，在第一段要點擊

對方的觀點。然而絕對不展開。

Personally,Ibelievethat...

...threatenstodomoreharmthangood

Firstly,

isresponsiblefor...是造成...的緣故

Accordingtothesurvey(/diagram),

accountfor占幾分之幾

andamongthem

Thefact...alsosuggeststhat...

isreducedfrom...to...

havecometorealize...

thenegativeeffectsofsmoking

Asisindicatedinthepicture(Accordingtothesurvey)

substantiallyexceeds大大超過thegainintheindustry

*觀點全部來自于數(shù)據*

表層結構寫出來，摸索就生成觀點。

數(shù)據就變成論證。

專門要求：圖表語言

Inconclusion

thenotionof...isnotjustifiable那個觀點是站不住腳的

Itishightimethat正是...的時候

范文二十五：

Directions:

A.Writeanessaydiscussingthetwooppositeopinionsgivenbelow,give

bothsomereasons,andmakeyourcommentsorsuggestions.

Therearetwomainopinionsconcerningthedevelopmentofprivatecars

inChina:Onemaintainsthattheirfreedevelopmentshouldbeencouraged,

whiletheotherarguesthatitmustbesternlyrestricted.

Shouldthedevelopmentofprivatecarsbeencouragedorrestrictedin

China?

Firstofall,theprivatecarisasymboloffreedom....However,too

manyprivatecarscanleadtotrafficjams,

ItseemstomethatChina,atitspresentstageofdevelopment,should

restrictthenumberofprivatescars.…

范文二十五

HowToImproveOrReformOurCurrentCollegeEntranceExaminationSystem.

看成三點：1、現(xiàn)狀2、緣故3、建議、措施

范文二十六

圖表作文的變體

情形+提綱+圖表

應用文：即書信

寫作語言

原那么：1、將句型對比中文翻譯，是否能夠看明白

2、看明白后是否明白句法功能

學習方法：有時刻看兩三頁

不管用任何一種句型，同一類型的句子不需要把握太多；要選擇最有把

握、最能消化的。

重視語言的表達（實質性的漲分數(shù)）

Thereisagrowingconcernoverthestudentswhodon'tputtoomuch

emphasisonstudy.Somestudentsalwaysidleawaytheirtime,playing

cards,drinking,gambling.Theseproblemsarereallyserious.Takinginto

accountallthesefactors,wecansafelycometotheconclusionthatthe

studentswillwastemoretimeiftheydon'tmakegooduseofit.

Thereisagrowingconcernover....

puttoomuchemphasison...

idleawaytheirtime...

Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wecansafelycometothe

conclusionthat....

Asastudent,busyasIamwithmystudy,Ialsodomanyinterestingthings

suchasreadingnovels,writingarticlesatthetwo-dayweekend.Al1work

noplaymakesJackadullboy.It'sreallytrue!

...busyasIamwithmystudy...

AllworknoplaymakesJackadullboy.

這些詞句就向沙漠中的金子閃閃發(fā)光，不能不是閱卷人感到驚喜。

實際上，所謂的金子無非是語言的variety,即用詞的變化，用句的變化,

就語言而論不存在那個詞好，那個詞不行，那個句子好，那個句子不行的說法。

所謂語言漂亮是指語言的變化。

詞匯：1、詞匯的寬度；2、詞匯的難度

基礎差的同學得分：詞匯的寬度能夠貫徹寫作意識。

第一檔：沒有詞匯概念

第二檔：有意識的換掉重復的詞

第三檔：挑戰(zhàn)詞匯的難度

句子結構：1、句子結構的精確性；2、句子結構的復雜性a.句型的開端多變

化b.包含從句

第一檔：沒有語法概念

第二檔：句子結構沒有什么錯誤

第三檔：努力做復雜句子結構

1、詞的變化

如要表示''使"不要僅靠make;

a)Thissocietystillmakeswomenunabletoenjoyequalrights.

b)Womenarestilldeniedequalrights.

a)Theincidentmademerecalloneofmypastexperiences.

b)Theincidentremainedmeofoneofmypastexperiences.

如要表達''越來越"，不要只使用moreandmore：

a)MoreandmorestudentsfindlearningEnglishhasbecomemoreandmore

difficult.

b)Studentsingrowingnumbersfindlearninghasbecomeincreasingly

difficult.

a)Moreandmoreteenagerssmokecigarettesinrecentyears.

b)Teenagesmokingisontheriseinrecentyears.

a)Moreandmoreteachersaredemandedwiththedevelopmentofeconomy.

b)Thereisanincreasingdemandforteacherswiththedevelopmentof

economy.

如要表達''大多數(shù)〃。不要一味用most：

a)Moststudenttakeapart-timejobafterclass.

b)Thevastmajorityofstudentstakeapart-timejobafterclass.

a)Mostpeopletakepartinsportsofdifferentkinds.

b)Theconsiderableproportionofpeopletakepartinsportsofdifferent

kinds.

a)Mostcollegestudentstakeanegativeattitudetowardssmoking.

b)Thelargepercentageofcollegepopulationtakeanegativeattitude

towardssmoking.

如要用''不僅...而且....〃不要只用notonly...butalso：

a)Thefactorsforariseinteenagesmokingisnotonlysocialbutalso

psychological.

b)Thefactorsforariseinteenagesmokingispsychologicalaswellas

social.

a)Takingapart-timejobcannotearnalittlemoney,butalsohavean

opportunitytocontactwithsociety.

b)Takingapart-timejobmeansalittlemoneyyoucanearn.Italsomeans

anopportunitytocontactwithsociety.

a)Oldpeoplegotoparknotonlytodoexercisebutalsotomakefriends.

b)Oldpeoplegotoparkasmuchforcompanionshipasforexercise.

aplusoraminus利于弊strengthensandweakness

drawback缺點

TV:ABlessingoracurse一篇作文的主體段如下

Asisoftenpointedout,televisionkeepsonebetterinformedaboutthe

currentevents,allowonetofollowthelatestdevelopmentsinpolitics

andscience,andoffersendlessseriesofprogrammerswhichareboth

instructiveandscience,andoffersendlessseriesofprogrammerswhich

arebothinstructiveandstimulating.Themostdistantcountries,the

strangestcustomsandattractivescenesofnaturearebroughtrightinto

one'sroom.Yethereagain,thereisdanger.ThemainproblemwithTV

hasbeenitsnegativeeffectonpeopleingeneral.Forexample,rubbishy

commercialsandharmfulprogramscontributingtotheriseinviolence

andcrimeinthestreets.

好學生：brilliantstudents,topstudents,outstandingboyandgirls,

studentsofhighability

makeefforts二make(exert/devote/direct)

untiring(painstaking/concerted/consistent/tremendous

/persistent/sustained)efforts

WatchingtoomuchTVisharmfultooureyesight二HeavyexposuretoTVwill

produceharmfuleffectoneyesight.

TheprogressIhavemadesurpriseme.

Thisleadsmetotheconclusionthatmoneydoesn,tmeaneverything.

2、句型的變化

ThecareerIpursue

Avarietyofreasonshaveledmetochoosethisoccupationoverother

morelucrativeones.First,teachingislearning.Tomakemylectures

moreinteresting,Ihavetoreadingmorebooks,explorenewknowledge

andgainabetterunderstandingoftheworld-theverythingIliketo

doinmylife.Second,teachingmeansfreedom.Asateacher,Icanfreely

expressmyopinionsandexplaintheminmyownwaysincenobodywill

interferewithme.Finally,Iliketeachingbecauseitoffersacertain

peaceofmind.Nomorerushingtocatchingamorningbus,nomoreanxiety

topleaseaboss,andnomoreworriesaboutbeinglaidoffbecauseyou

aregettingold.

文中有4個詞的短句First,teachingislearning.也有27個詞的長句Tomake

mylecturesmoreinteresting,Ihavetoreadmorebooks,explorenew

knowledgeandgainabetterunderstandingoftheworld一theverything

Iliketodoinmylife.有簡單句，也有復雜句Asateacher,Icanfreely

expressmyopinionsandexplaintheminmyownwaysincenobodywi11

interferewithme;還有同位語句，斷裂句，排比句，比較句等，因而文章讀起

來節(jié)奏感強。所謂句子變化，要緊是指句子的開頭要有變化，句子的結構要有

變化，句子的長度要有變化。不要連續(xù)使用幾個簡單句，要學會使用復雜句。

所謂句子變化，要緊是指句子開頭要有變化，句子結構要有變化，句子的長度

要有變化。

1、不要連續(xù)使用幾個簡單句，要學會使用復雜句

a)Teenagersarepressuredbyschoolwork.Theyarealsoencouragedby

theirpeers.Undersuchcircumstances,theyresorttosmoking.But

sometimestheyfeelalittleguilty.

b)Pressuredbyschoolworkandencouragedbytheirpeers,teenagersoften

resorttosmoking,thoughttheyfeelalittleguiltysometimes.

Arecentstudyreportsthatcollegestudentsnowareprimaryinterested

ingradesandeconomicsuccess,thattheyareexpectedtocheatonexams

morefrequentlythanthosewhograduated10yearsago,andthattheyare

moreconcernedwiththeirownpersonalfuturethanwithproblemsof

society.

2、不要總是以有生命的名詞和人稱代詞開頭

a)ManypeoplethinkbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.

b)Itiswidely(commonly)thought/believed/held/accepted)thatbirth

controlisquitenecessaryinChina.

a)Moreandmorepeopleagree(realize/areaware)thatwomenshouldenjoy

fullequalitywithmen.

b)Thereisagrowingagreement(realization/awareness)thatwomenshould

enjoyfullequalitywithmen.

a)ManyChinesepeoplehavegonetotheU.S.inthepast15years,

b)Thepast15yearshavebroughtmanyChinesepeopletotheU.S..

a)Wealmostforgetthisevent.

b)thiseventisnowalmostfadingfromourmemory.

a)Studentsshouldcertainlymakecontinuousefforts.

b)Continuouseffortsonthepartofstudentsarecertainlyrequired,

onthepartof=of

a)Weeasilydrewtheconclusionthroughtheinvestigation.

b)Theinvestigationeasilyledustotheconclusion.

3、不要千篇一律的使用主動態(tài)

a)Wemaythinkmoreoftheelderlywholiveapartfromtheirchildren.

b)Morethoughtsmaybegiventotheelderlywholiveapartfromtheir

children.

4、不要總是用if\because\then,要注意使用書面英語。

a)Ifyoucomparebicycleswithcarscarefully,youwillfindbicycles

aresuperiortocars.

b)Carefulcomparisonofbicycleswithcarswillshowthesuperiorityof

theformeroverthelatter.

a)Ifweonlyapplybookknowledge,wewillnotgetgoodresults.

b)Theapplicationofbookknowledgealonewon,tbringyougoodresults.

a)Ifwecanbetterunderstandthegreaterpressureofpopulationgrowth,

wewillhaveacorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.

b)Abetterunderstandingofthegreaterpressureofpopulationgrowth

isessentialtoacorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.

a)Whenawomanseesthatsheisgoingtobelaidoff,shebeginstoworry

alldayandnight.

b)Themereprospectoflay-offwouldsetawomantoworryalldayand

night.

5、不要對動詞過分依靠，要學會用名詞結構來表達意思。

a)Thestyleoflivinghasbecomemoreandmorepopularandacceptedby

moreandmoreandmoreyoungpeople.

b)Thestyleoflivinggasfounditsgrowingpopularityandacceptance

amongyoungpeople.

a)Itistimeforustoreviseeducationalsystemandthenprovideitto

oursociety.

b)Itistimeforustoprovideoursocietyarevisededucationalsystem.

a)IfwearewatchingtoomuchTV,ourreadingabilitywillbeseriously

affected.

b)HeavyexposuretoTVwillexertannegativeeffectonoutreading

ability.

a)Ifwedon,trecognizetheseriousproblemofgrowingpopulation,we

willmakeabigmistake.

b)Failuretorecognizetheseriousnessofgrowingpopulationwilllead

toabigmistake.

6、不要總是用確信句來表達，要學會用否定句來表達確信的意思。

a)Everyyoungboyandgirlwantstoearnalittlemoneytohelpcover

highercollegecost.

b)Thereishardlyayoungboyandgirlwhodoesn,twanttoearnalittle

moneytohelpcoverhighercollegecost.

a)Wheneveryoupickupanewspaper,youwillalwaysfindadvertisements,

b)Itisimpossibletopickupanewspaperwithoutfindingadvertisements.

a)Gatheringaroundandlisteningtomotherorfatherreadagoodstory

isthebestpastimestobringafamilyclosertogether.

b)Fewpastimesbringafamilyclosertogetherthangatheringaroundand

listeningtomotherorfatherreadagoodstory.

a)Foodisthemostbasicissuetoindividualandnationalsurvival.

b)Noissueisasbasictoindividualandnationalsurvivalasfood.

7、恰當使用排比、平行句

a)Iaminfavorofequalrightsforwomen.Ithinkwomenshouldespecially

havetherighttocompetewithmenforjobsonequalterms.Theyshould

getthesamepayasmenforthesamejob.Theyshouldalsohaveequal

opportunitiesforpromotion.

b)Iaminfavorofequalrightsforwomen,especiallytherighttocompete

withmenforjobsonequalterms,therighttogetthesamepayasmen

forthesamejob,andtherighttoequalopportunitiesforpromotion.

a)Thenationwidecontroversyoverthecurrentreformswilltestthe

courageofourpeople.Thoughthecontroversywecanalsoseethe

determinationofourgovernment.

b)Thenationwidecontroversyoverthecurrentreformswilltestthe

courageofourpeopleandthedeterminationofourgovernment.

范文：

PerhapsthemostinterestingpersonIhaveevermetisan(interesting)

Italianprofessorofphilosophywhoteaches(courses)attheUniversity

ofPisa(inItaly).AlthoughIlastmetthismaneightyearsago,Ihave

notforgotten(overthelongyears)hisspecialqualities.

Firstofall,Iwasimpressedfromthebeginningbyhiscompletedevotion

toteaching(hisstudents).Becausehislectureswerealways

well-preparedand(invariably)clearlydelivered,(agreatmany)

studentsalwaysswarmedintohisclassroom,(fillingtheclassroomto

capacity).His(many)followersalsoappreciatedthefactthathe

(thoroughly)believedinwhathetaught(tostudents)andthathewas

always(intellectually)stimulating(tohear).Furthermorehecouldbe

countedonineveryclasssessiontoexplainhisideasinanimaginative

way,introducingsuch(various)aidstostudentunderstandingasoi1

paintings,phonographrecords,piecesofsculpture,andguestlecturers

(whowereinvitedtospeaktotheclass).Onceheevensangasongin

class(beforethestudentseyes)inordertoillustratea

(philosophical)point.

Second,Iadmiredthefactthathewouldconferwithstudents(atalmost

anytime)outsideoftheclassroomortalkwiththemonthetelephone.

Drinkingcoffeeinthesnackbar(afterhavingtaughtaclass),hewould

easilymakefriendswithstudents(withgreatease).Sometimeshewould

(issuea)challenge(to)astudenttojoinwithhiminagameofchess.

Atothertimes,hewouldquitereadilyjoingroups(ofstudents)to

discusssubjectsranging(broadly)fromastronomytoscubadiving.Many

youngpeoplevisitedhim(atonetimeoranother)inhisofficefor

academicadvice;otherscametohishomeforthe(purposeof)social

evenings.

Finally,Iwas(favorably)impressedandattractedbyhislivelywit.

Hebelievesthatnoclasshourisasuccessunless(duringit),the

studentsandtheprofessor(haveareasontojointogetherto)share

severalchucklesandatleastoneloudlaugh.Throughhis(inimitable

andcaptivating)senseofhumor,hemadelearning(muchmore)lasting.

Ifitistrue,(asitseemstobe),thatlifemakesawisemansmileand

afoolishmancry,thenmyfriendis(withoutquestion)trulyawiseman.

Probablythebestexample(hecouldpossiblyhavegiventous)ofhis

witisthis(interesting)ideawithwhichheonceendedalecture:It

isasdangerousformantomodelhimselfuponhisinvention,themachine,

asitwouldbeforGodtomodelhimselfuponhisinvention,themachine,

asitwouldbeforGodtomodelhimselfuponHisinvention.

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的文章

二、十個經典段落

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T0L24網絡課堂將連續(xù)推出新東方2002年最新的考研英語作文范文，包括：議

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方寬敞考研學員并預祝大伙兒考試成功！Task1

A.Title:Privatecar

B.Wordlimit:about200words(notincludingthegivenopeningsentence)

C.Yourcompositionshouldbebasedontheoutlinebelowandshouldstart

withthegivenopeningsentence:''NowadaysanyChinesecanenjoythe

luxuryofowningaprivatecar-ifhecanaffordit.〃

D.YourcompositionshouldbewrittenneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.

Outline:

1)Advantagesofowningaprivatecar.

2)Disadvantagesofowningaprivatecar.

3)Shoulditbenecessarytoenlargetheprivatecarmarket?Whyorwhy

not?

Nowadays,anyChinesecanenjoytheluxuryofowningaprivatecar-

ifheorshecanaffordit.Havingacarofyourownmeansnomoretraveling

toworkoncrowdedbusesorsubwaytrains,andyoucandropoffthe

childrenatschoolontheway.Moreover,italsomeansthatyoucanenjoy

theweekendsandholidaysbetter,becausewithacaryoucangotoplaces

wheretheregularbusesandtrainsdonotgo,andsoyoucanfindaquiet

scenicspotwithnocrowds.

However,therearedrawbackstoowningacar.Foronething,withthe

increaseincarownershipinrecentyears,theroadsarebecomingmore

andmorecrowded,oftenmakingthejourneytoworkmoreofanightmare

thanadream.Foranother,itisnotcheaptorunacar,astheprices

ofgasolineandrepairsareconstantlyrising,nottomentiontheprices

youhavetopayforalicenseandinsurancecoverage.

Havingconsideredbothsidesoftheargument,Ihavecometothe

conclusionthattheadvantagesofowningacaroutweighthe

disadvantages.Therefore,itseemstomethatChi