托福寫作語料庫(kù)：年長(zhǎng)朋友的建議是否比同齡人的建議更有用

托福寫作語料庫(kù)：年長(zhǎng)朋友的建議是否比同齡人的建議更有用智課網(wǎng)TOEFL備考資料托福寫作語料庫(kù)：年長(zhǎng)朋友的建議是否比同齡人的建議更有用摘要：今天小編為大家分享原創(chuàng)托福寫作語料庫(kù)系列文章，幫助考生思路拓展，積累精彩寫作語料。祝福大家文思泉涌，妙筆生花，破題如竹！【觀點(diǎn)類】Gettingadvicefromfriendswhoareolderthanyouismorevaluablethangettingadvicefromfriendsyoursameage.Doyouagreeordisagree?從年長(zhǎng)的朋友處得到的建議比從同齡的朋友處得到的建議更加有價(jià)值?（2016年4月9日）【頭腦風(fēng)暴】常言說，姜是老的辣，酒是陳的香。一個(gè)人的成熟和智慧和他的經(jīng)歷和閱歷息息相關(guān)。有誰青春不迷茫，有誰年少不輕狂，不聽老人言，吃虧在眼前?！舅悸吠卣埂磕觊L(zhǎng)者的人生智慧和生活閱歷可以幫助年輕人少走或不走彎路。當(dāng)我們身處逆境時(shí)，需要來自他人的建議，年長(zhǎng)者的人生智慧、生活經(jīng)歷、思辨頭腦對(duì)于我們的指導(dǎo)意義更大。有趣的例證就是：大學(xué)的愛情風(fēng)花雪月，男生喜歡美麗女神，女生喜歡帥氣男生，但是，單純的愛情被膚淺的快樂吸引，情侶們很少考慮家庭的背景，或者是兩者的興趣志向是否相同，這時(shí)候，年長(zhǎng)朋友的建議對(duì)于未來幸福婚姻有很重要的影響，因?yàn)?，年長(zhǎng)的朋友經(jīng)歷過了才懂得大學(xué)美好愛情不等于未來和諧的婚姻，僅有愛是不能結(jié)婚的。再比如：年輕人求學(xué)的時(shí)候，可以選擇海外留學(xué)或者國(guó)內(nèi)讀書，這時(shí)候，可能父輩們的建議和鼓勵(lì)對(duì)于我們學(xué)業(yè)的成功就有極其重要的指導(dǎo)意義，因?yàn)?，很多的年輕人都是讀書無意識(shí)，人生無意識(shí)。年長(zhǎng)者的眼光通常更加長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)，年長(zhǎng)者的閱歷通常更加豐富，因此，他們的建議是有價(jià)值的?！咀骷伊?chǎng)】對(duì)比年輕人朋友的建議，從年長(zhǎng)的朋友處得到的建議更有價(jià)值。【首段】背景介紹+爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn)+作家立場(chǎng)Aclosefriendiswhateveryindividuallongsafter.Afterall,adaywithoutfriendshipislikeadaywithoutsunshine.Atruefriendshouldbeonefromwhowecanresorttoforhelporgetvaluablesuggestionswhenweareintimeofadversity.Peoplediffergreatlyintheirviewsastowhetherornotguidanceandadvicefromolderfriendsissuperiortothecounterpartsfrompeers.AsIseeit,advicefromelderlyfriendsdeservesmorepraises,althoughsuggestionsfromourpeersareneverwithouttheirmerits.【二段】年長(zhǎng)的朋友的建議的利好Forastart，richlifeexperiencecouldbeseenasasortofpreciouswealth,includingthosebitterorfrustratingexperiences.Everyindividualgrowsupviaexperiencingfailureordilemma,onemight，attimes，feelpuzzled，thereby，heorsheneedsadviceandguidancefromfriends.Undersuchcircumstances,olderfriendscouldbeourbestteachersbecausetheyhaveaccumulatedapooloflifewisdom,thus,theiradvicecouldbepreciouslifeguidance.Asurveyispersuasiveenoughtojustifymystand,thesurveyconductedbyVista,afterconsultingmanypeoplehavefoundthatmostrespondentsclaimedthatcomparedwithcommunicatingwithpeers,theyprefertogetadvicefromelderlyfriends,fortheirsuggestionscouldhelptodiminishthelikelihoodoffailureandavoiddetours【三段】年長(zhǎng)的朋友的建議的利好ThisdebateremindsmeofmyUnclePaul,whoisasuccessfulbusinessleader.MyunclehadstudiedinNewZealandformorethanfiveyears,so,hestronglyrecommendedmetostudyabroadwhenfacingwiththeoptionofstudyingathomeorfurtheringmystudyinaforeigncountry.Hissuggestionwasthatayoungmancouldbecomemature,tenaciousandconfidentbypersonalstruggleinanunfamiliarenvironment.Afterlisteningtomyuncle’sadvice,Istudiedevenharderduringtheprocessofselfimprovement,IhappilyfoundthatIcanbemoreattentiveandhavemoreself-discipline.Moreimportantly,Ihadacleargoaltofightfor.Itwasthesuggestionformmyunclethathelpsmetohardenedmyhearttostudyoverseas.IhaddeliberatelychosentoleadthelifeIdesire,forthelifewisdomlearningfrommyunclecouldbeconsideredasashortcuttosuccess.【四段】年輕朋友的建議也有利好Indeed,Ihavetoconcedethatsuggestionsfrompeersmightstilltheirmeritstosomeextent.Anargumentholdbysomepeopleisthatpeopleofthesimilaragehavealotincommonsuchasgrowthenvironmentoreducationalbackground,inthissense,theircommunicationcouldbemoreconvincing.Furthermore,somepeoplemightarguethattheexperiencesofpastbearlittlerelevancetotoday'slife.WhatIwanttorebut,however,isthatyoungster'sunderstandingaboutlifeisfarfrommaturecomparedwiththosefromolderfriends,afterall,olderfriendsaremorefar-sightedandwise.【尾段】再次亮明觀點(diǎn)Inclosing,Ire-affirmmyconvictionthatguidanceandsuggestionsfrommaturefriendsexpertafarmoreprofoundandbeneficialeffectonone’saction.【經(jīng)典語料】getadvicefrom=acquiresuggestionsfrom=gainguidancefrom從......處獲得建議ismorevaluablethan=isbetterthan=issuperiort比 更好friendsofyoursameage=friendsofsimilarage=peers同齡人4 iswhateveryindividuallongsafter 是人人渴望的Adaywithoutfriendshipislikeada