2023年1月浙江省高考讀后續(xù)寫句子仿寫學(xué)案-高考英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

2023年1月浙江續(xù)寫句子仿寫練習(xí)(原文鏈接）Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend'sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鳥),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspiderwebs(蛛網(wǎng))andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspiderwebsthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberrylinedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(懸停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthaveetosaygoodbye.”P1:Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.P2:Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.【參考范文1】Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Thememoryofthehummingbirdhadstayedwithme,andIwascurioustoseeifshewouldappearoncemore.AsIwalkedthroughthesameblackberrylinedpath,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelasenseofanticipation（預(yù)料；預(yù)期）.Thefarmwasalivewiththesoundsofnature,andeverythingseemedmorevibrant（充滿生機(jī)的；生氣勃勃的）thanbefore.Myfriendsgreetedmewarmly,andwespenttheafternoonsharingstoriesandenjoyingtheserene（平靜的）environment.Thebrokenwindowhadbeenfixed,andtheymentionedseeingthehummingbirdaround,muchtomydelight.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Itwaslikeascenefromafairytale;sheflewdirectlytowardsme,herwingsablur（模糊）ofmotion.Hovering（盤旋）infrontofme,sheseemedtoacknowledgemewithagentlenod,hertinyeyessparklingwithrecognition.Thismagicalencounterlefteveryonearoundmeinawe（敬畏；驚嘆）.Assheflewaway,herbrightcolorsglinting(閃爍）inthesunlight,Ifeltaprofoundsenseofconnectionwithnature.Itwasareminderofthebeautyandwonderthatcanbefoundinthesimplestofmoments,andamemorythatIwouldcherishforever.仿寫1：AsIwalkedthroughthesameblackberrylinedpath,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelasenseofanticipation.當(dāng)我夜晚聆聽城市的輕柔嗡嗡聲時(shí)，我不禁感到一種深深的平靜。_________________________________________________________2 當(dāng)我凝視著大海上那絢爛(vibrant)的日落時(shí)，我不禁感到一種難以言表的敬畏(awe)。_________________________________________________________仿寫2:Sheflewdirectlytowardsme,herwingsablur（模糊）ofmotion.1他迅速地沖向球門，他的腳步快得如同模糊的影子。_______________________________________________________2 舞者優(yōu)雅地在舞臺(tái)上旋轉(zhuǎn)（spun,spin的過去式及過去分詞)，她的裙擺像五彩斑斕的模糊影像。_______________________________________________________仿寫3：Hovering（盤旋）infrontofme,sheseemedtoacknowledgemewithagentlenod,hertinyeyessparklingwithrecognition.1 棲息（perch)在我頭頂?shù)臉渲ι?，那只鳥似乎用柔和的嘰喳聲（chirp)向我問好，它那鮮艷的羽毛(feather)在陽(yáng)光下閃閃發(fā)光(glisten)。 ______________________________________________________2在窗戶附近飄浮著(float)，那只蝴蝶似乎暫停了片刻，它那脆弱的(delicate)翅膀閃耀著(shimmer)各種色彩的光芒。______________________________________________________【參考范文2】

Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Theplacewasassereneasever,withthegentlehum（嗡嗡聲；嘈雜聲）ofnaturesurroundingme.AsIwalkedpastthemilkinghouse,nowwithitswindowfixed,Icouldn'thelpbutthinkofthelittlehummingbird.Theincidenthadleftaprofoundimpactonme,remindingmeofthefragility（脆弱；虛弱）andbeautyoflife.Iwanderedaroundthefarm,lostinthought,appreciatingthesimplebeautyofthecountryside.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Itwasasifshehadbeenwaitingforme.Shehoveredinfrontofme,herwingsbeatingrapidly,creatingasoft,mesmerizing（迷人的）sound.Oureyesmet,andinthatmoment,therewasasenseofrecognition,asilentacknowledgmentofthebondwehadformed.Shefluttered（揮動(dòng)；振翅）aroundmeforafewsecondsbeforesoaring（高飛；翱翔）highintothesky,leavingmewithafeelingofjoyandanunforgettablememorythatIwouldcherishforever.仿寫1:Theincidenthadleftaprofoundimpactonme,remindingmeofthefragility（脆弱；虛弱）andbeautyoflife.1 這本書對(duì)我產(chǎn)生了持久的影響，讓我想起在困難時(shí)期堅(jiān)持和希望的重要性。 ______________________________________________________2 這次演講令人鼓舞，讓我想起團(tuán)結(jié)與合作在實(shí)現(xiàn)偉大事業(yè)中的力量。______________________________________________________仿寫2：Itwasasiftheworldhadstoppedjustforthatmoment.1 就好像世界為了那一刻而停止轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)。_____________________________________________________2 就好像他能透視我的思想，無需言語(yǔ)就能理解它們。_____________________________________________________仿寫3：Shefluttered（揮動(dòng)；振翅）aroundmeforafewsecondsbeforesoaring（高飛；翱翔）highintothesky,leavingmewithafeelingofjoyandanunforgettablememorythatIwouldcherishforever.1日落給景色披上了一層溫暖的金色光輝（glow)，給我留下了對(duì)大自然之美深深的贊嘆和驚奇之情。_____________________________________________________他講述的故事生動(dòng)而引人入勝(engaging)，給我留下了一種探險(xiǎn)的感覺和去探索世界的深深地渴望。_____________________________________________________Keys:(ModelessayI)仿寫1：1 AsIlistenedtothegentlehumofthecityatnight,Icouldn'thelpbutfeeladeepsenseofcalm.2 AsIgazedatthevibrantsunsetovertheocean,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelanoverwhelmingsenseofawe.仿寫2：1 Heranswiftlytowardsthegoal,hisfeetablurofspeed.2 Thedancerspungracefullyacrossthestage,herskirtablurofcolor.仿寫3：Perchedonthebranchaboveme,thebirdseemedtogreetmewithasoftchirp,itsbrightfeathersglisteninginthesunlight.Floatingnearthewindow,thebutterflyseemedtopauseforamoment,it