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短文改錯(cuò)專題突破練171Lastmonth,IvisitedtheGreatWallofChina.Itwaspackingwithmanytourists.Asagirlfromsmallvillage,Ifounditwasdifficultyformetogetascenicphotoopportunity.However,thesettingwasreallyattractive.Visitingthiswonderwasatiringandabsolutelyunbelievableexperience,easyprovenbythoselargecrowdsaroundme.TheymademerealizedjusthowluckyIwastobethere.Howlonghavetheyallbeenwaitingfortovisitthiswonder?SawafriendofmineinBeijinggaveusanopportunitythatotherswishtohaveintheirentirelives.Forthat,Iamforevergrateful.答案Lastmonth,IvisitedtheGreatWallofChina.Itwaswithmanytourists.Asagirlfromsmallvillage,Ifounditwasformetogetascenicphotoopportunity.However,thesettingwasreallyattractive.Visitingthiswonderwasatiringabsolutelyunbelievableexperience,provenbythoselargecrowdsaroundme.TheymademejusthowluckyIwastobethere.Howlongtheyallbeenwaitingtovisitthiswonder?afriendofmineinBeijinggaveanopportunitythatotherswishtohaveintheirentirelives.Forthat,Iamforevergrateful.2Mostpeopledirectlylinkseniorhighschoollifewithplentyofstressandendlesshomeworks.However,someinterestedactivitiesindeedcontributetoreducethepressure.LastweektheentertainmentdepartmentofourStudentUnionorganizedtheactivityinwhicheachclassshootashortmovie.OurclasschoseastorysettinginWorldWarⅡ,thatshowedthepreciousnessofpeace.Ithinkthisprocesswasagoodlessonthattaughttomehowtostrikeabalancebetweenstudyingorrelaxation.NowIamdeterminedthanevertotreasureeverythingIhaveandfightformyfuture.答案Mostpeopledirectlylinkseniorhighschoollifewithplentyofstressandendless.However,someactivitiesindeedcontributetothepressure.LastweektheentertainmentdepartmentofourStudentUnionorganizedactivityinwhicheachclassashortmovie.OurclasschoseastoryinWorldWarⅡ,showedthepreciousnessofpeace.Ithinkthisprocesswasagoodlessonthattaughtmehowtostrikeabalancebetweenstudyingrelaxation.NowIamdeterminedthanevertotreasureeverythingIhaveandfightformyfuture.3Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,intelligentrobotswillbewideusedinthefuture.Athome,robotswillhelppeopledosomehouseworkandtakingcareoftheelderly,babiesandpatients.Inadditiontothesetask,robotswillevenbeabletoplaythechessanddoexercisewithpeople.Infactories,robotswillbeusedtoperformsomedangerousjobsavoidaccidents.Robotswillchangeourfuturelifebymanyways,whatwillmakeitmorecolorfulandcomfortable.Therefore,weshouldn’tdependonintelligentrobotstoomuch,fortheyweremadetohelphumansratherthanreplaceus.Ashelpersofwehumans,robotsshouldbeusedproperly.答案Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,intelligentrobotswillbeusedinthefuture.Athome,robotswillhelppeopledosomehouseworkandcareoftheelderly,babiesandpatients.Inadditiontothese,robotswillevenbeabletoplaychessanddoexercisewithpeople.Infactories,robotswillbeusedtoperformsomedangerousjobsavoidaccidents.Robotswillchangeourfuturelifemanyways,willmakeitmorecolorfulandcomfortable.,weshouldn’tdependonintelligentrobotstoomuch,fortheymadetohelphumansratherthanreplaceus.Ashelpersofhumans,robotsshouldbeusedproperly.4Nowadaysmanypeopledriveinsteadoftakingabusorwalkingtowork.Itcausesmoretrafficjamandaccidents.Asthestudent,whatcanwedotoguaranteeoursafe?Firstofall,thetrafficrulesmustbestrictobeyed.Whenwecrossstreets,waituntilthetrafficlightturngreen.Next,don’tforgetwalkonthepavement.Finally,Ithinkitverydangerouslytowearheadphoneswhilewalkingorcycling.Sincewecan’tpayenoughattentiononthetrafficaroundus,soaccidentsmayhappen.Takinggoodcareofourselvesanddon’tletourparentsworryaboutus.答案Nowadaysmanypeopledriveinsteadoftakingabusorwalkingtowork.Itcausesmoretrafficandaccidents.Asstudent,whatcanwedotoguaranteeour?Firstofall,thetrafficrulesmustbeobeyed.Whenwecrossstreets,waituntilthetrafficlightgreen.Next,don’tforgetwalkonthepavement.Finally,Ithinkitverytowearheadphoneswhilewalkingorcycling.Sincewecan’tpayenoughattentionthetrafficaroundus,accidentsmayhappen.goodcareofourselvesanddon’tletourparentsworryaboutus.5Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutcompass.Ifthereisnoaiminourlives,wewillgetlose.Lastterm,Icouldn’tacceptthetruthwhichIfailedinmymathexamination.Idecidedtogiveitup,soIskippedfromclassesfrequently.Consideredmycase,myteacherofferedmeseveraldetailedapproachandadvisedmetosetashort-termgoaltoimprovemymath.Finally,Iworkharderthaneverandmadegreatprogressinhermath.Inmyopinion,successliesinaseriesofgoals.However,weshouldremembertomakeourtargetsclearlyandsparenoefforttorealizeourdreams.答案Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutcompass.Ifthereisnoaiminourlives,wewillget.Lastterm,Icouldn’tacceptthetruthIfailedinmymathexamination.Idecidedtogiveitup,soIskippedclassesfrequently.mycase,myteacherofferedmeseveraldetailedandadvisedmetosetashort-termgoaltoimprovemymath.Finally,Iharderthaneverandmadegreatprogressinmath.Inmyopinion,successliesinaseriesofgoals.,weshouldremembertomakeourtargetsandsparenoefforttorealizeourdreams.6LastweekendIwentonaeco-travelwithatravelagency.Allthewayweappreciatethebeautifulsceneryandfreshair,soafewofuspickedflowerswhilegoingsightseeing.Whatwasworse,manytouriststhrewrubbisheshereandthere.Idon’tthinkthatitisatrulyeco-travel.Aneco-travelnotonlyallowsustoexpressourlovefornature,butneedsourresponsibilityaswellas.Arealeco-travelshouldlikethis:takenothingawaybutyourgoodmemory;leavenothingbehindbutallcleanerwaterandgreentrees.Enjoyedthebeautyofnature,weshouldtrytheirbesttoprotectit.答案LastweekendIwentoneco-travelwithatravelagency.Allthewaywethebeautifulsceneryandfreshair,afewofuspickedflowerswhilegoingsightseeing.Whatwasworse,manytouriststhrewhereandthere.Idon’tthinkthatitisaeco-travel.Aneco-travelnotonlyallowsustoexpressourlovefornature,butneedsourresponsibilityaswell.Arealeco-travelshouldlikethis:takenothingawaybutyourgoodmemory;leavenothingbehindbutallwaterandgreentrees.thebeautyofnature,weshouldtrybesttoprotectit.7IliketravellingandmydreamofvisitBeijing,thecapitalcityofourcountry,cometrueduringtheNationalDayholidaysthisyear.InOctober1st,IwenttoTian’anmenSquarewithmyparents,therewewatchedtheflag-raisingceremony.AsIwatchedflagrisingslowly,Isangthenationalanthem,feelingextremelyexciting.Thenwewenttosomeotherfamoustouristattraction,liketheGreatWall.StandingontheGreatWall,Ifeltveryproudly.Ithoughtoftheoldsayingthat“OnewhofailtoreachtheGreatWallisnotahero.”AlthoughIwastired,butIreallyhadagoodtime.答案IliketravellingandmydreamofBeijing,thecapitalcityofourcountry,trueduringtheNationalDayholidaysthisyear.October1st,IwenttoTian’anmenSquarewithmyparents,wewatchedtheflag-raisingceremony.AsIwatchedflagrisingslowly,Isangthenationalanthem,feelingextremely.Thenwewenttosomeotherfamoustourist,liketheGreatWall.StandingontheGreatWall,Ifeltvery.Ithoughtoftheoldsayingthat“OnewhotoreachtheGreatWallisnotahero.”AlthoughIwastired,Ireallyhadagoodtime.8Whenaskedabouthonesty,manypeoplewillsurelysaythathonestyisveryimportanceorit’sbasictoaperson.Ithinkit’sgreatthateveryoneofushasrealizeditsimportance.However,itseemedthattherearestillsomepeoplenotfullawareofit.OnceIwenttothemarketwithmymumforabigdinnerinSaturday.Whenwewerewalkingpastthestalls,aloudnoisewascaughtmyattention.Itcamefromabutcher’sstand,whichaladyaccusedhimofinjectwaterintotheporkandaskedforthemoneyback.Butthebutcherrefusedandevenarguedthatitwouldn’tdoharmherhealth.Wecanalsoseebeinghonestareeasiersaidthandone.Ithinkweshouldplanthonestylikeatreeinourheartsothatwewon’thesitatetobehonestwhentheyareinsociety.Withit,wewillbefullytrustedandpopularwithothers.答案Whenaskedabouthonesty,manypeoplewillsurelysaythathonestyisveryorit’sbasictoaperson.Ithinkit’sgreatthateveryoneofushasrealizeditsimportance.However,itthattherearestillsomepeoplenotawareofit.OnceIwenttothemarketwithmymumforabigdinnerSaturday.Whenwewerewalkingpastthestalls,aloudnoisecaughtmyattention.Itcamefromabutcher’sstand,aladyaccusedhimofwaterintotheporkandaskedforthemoneyback.Butthebutcherrefusedandevenarguedthatitwouldn’tdoharmherhealth.Wecanalsoseebeinghonesteasiersaidthandone.Ithinkweshouldplanthonestylikeatreeinourheartsothatwewon’thesitatetobehonestwhenareinsociety.Withit,wewillbefullytrustedandpopularwithothers.9Itisknownthatsomestudentscheatinexams.Ithasthreereason.Firstofall,therearesomanyexams.Beside,theexamsgivenaredifficultyinsomeway.Secondly,somestudentshavetocheatinexamsbecauseoftheyaretoolazy.Thelastreasonistopleaseourparentsandteachers.Forsomestudents,lowmarksbroughtthemgreatpressureandmakethemdepressing.Inmyopinion,cheatinginexamsarewrong.Weshouldtakeactiveattitudetoourstudies,andtrytogetamarkwhatistrueaswellasgood.答案Itisknownthatsomestudentscheatinexams.Ithasthree.Firstofall,therearesomanyexams.,theexamsgivenareinsomeway.Secondly,somestudentshavetocheatinexamsbecausetheyaretoolazy.Thelastreasonistopleaseparentsandteachers.Forsomestudents,lowmarksthemgreatpressureandmakethem.Inmyopinion,cheatinginexamswrong.Weshouldtakeactiveattitud
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