高考英語應用文-咨詢信-范文與重點短句子講義

范文與重點積累【仿寫演練】假設你叫李華，高考過后計劃暑假期間到美國去參加中美學生交流活動。請寫一封咨詢信，詢問相關事宜。內容包括：1.

對申請者的相關要求；2.

課程的相關事宜；3.

住宿和吃飯的條件；4.

需要做的相關準備。注意：1.

詞數(shù)80個左右；2.

可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.

開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearSirorMadam,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thanksagainforyourtime,andI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua參考答案1DearSir/Madam,

I’mplanningtotraveltotheUSAintheingJuly.Therefore,I’mwritingtoinquireabouttravelroutesofyouragency.

IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.So,couldyoupleaseremendsomesuitabletravelroutes?Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.

Areplyatyourearliestconvenienceishighlyappreciated.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求寫一封電子郵件?！驹斀狻康?步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文為一封電子郵件：假定你是李華，打算今年暑假去美國旅游。請你給TravelAmerica國際旅行社寫一封電子郵件進行咨詢，內容如下:1.請其推薦合適的旅游路線；2.請其告知相關的旅游費用。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：intheingJuly（在即將到來的七月）；inquireabouttravelroutesofyouragency（詢問你的旅游路線）；havealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms（看看一些獨特的自然風光，領略一下當?shù)氐娘L土人情）；remendsomesuitabletravelroutes（推薦一些合適的旅游路線）；等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！军c睛】本文內容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。同時文中使用高級句子。IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhich

Ihopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.句中使用非限制性定語從句；I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,

coveringallthetravelingexpenses.現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語。參考答案2DearSirorMadam,

Iamveryinterestedintheexchangeprogramyouoffered.Iamwritingtoobtainsomemoredetailedinformationaboutit.

Firstly,IjustgraduatedfromanordinaryhighschoolandIwonderwhatqualificationsarerequiredforapplicants.

Secondly,ifadmitted,whatcoursesamIgoingtotake,anddoIneedtobuyanybooksaheadoftime?Inaddition,wouldyoubesokindtointroducetometheconditionsofboardandacmodations?Bytheway,ifIneedtomakeanyotherpreparations,letmeknow,willyou?

ThanksagainforyourtimeandI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于咨詢信。要求考生就“高考過后計劃暑假期間到美國去參加中美學生交流活動”的相關事宜進行咨詢?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累提供：offer→provide得到：obtain→get/gain普通的：ordinary→usual/mon提前：aheadoftime→inadvance2.句式拓展原句：Iamwritingtoobtainsomemoredetailedinformationaboutit.拓展句：Thereasonwhy

Iamwritingtoyou

isthat

Iwanttoobtainsomemoredetailedinformationaboutit.Bonnie來幫你：原因狀語從句引出寫作動機，建議句式背過哦！【點睛】[高分句型1]

Iamveryinterestedintheexchange