2024屆高三英語寫作復習專項：讀后續(xù)寫遇險類-憑借直覺走出灌木林講義素材

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasayounggirl,Iusedtolovegoingadventuring.Mydadalwaystookmedowntothebusheveryweekendandwecollectedmanysticksandstonestoaddtoourcollection.Iwasn’tlikeanyordinarygirlas1lovedtheoutdoorsevenasayoungkid.Iwasneverintodollsandteaparties.SoonIbecameoldenoughtoventureoutonmyown.WhenIventuredforththroughtheAustralianbushland,IfeltasifIwasinheaven.Therewasnothingmorebeautifulthanfeelingthecoolairbrushingacrossmyback.Theleaves

crushed

beneathmyfeetateverystep.IfeltasifIwashome.Asthesundippeddownbeyondthehorizon,therewasnothingmoretodothantoheadbackhome.OnmywayIheardascreeching(尖叫聲).ItwasthemosthorriblesoundIhadeverheardinmylife.Sureenough,Ijusthadtoinvestigate.Inthedeadofnight,Iheadedtowardsthescreechandcameacrossalakeorriverofsomesort.Lookingupanddowntheriver,Icouldn’tfindawaytocrossit.InmuchshameIdecidedtogiveup.Itwasaboutoneo’clockinthemorningandIthoughtmydadmustbegettingworried.AsImovedawayfromthelake,therewasonlyoneproblemthatIdidnotrememberwhichdirectionIcamefrom.Mybraintoldmeleftbutmyinstinct(直覺)toldmeright.InmypastexperiencesIhadalwaysgonewithmyinstinct.SoofcourseIwentwithmyinstinct.AsIwalkedoffintothedistance,Icouldseethesunbreakingoutinmydistantview.注意：l.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150

左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Afterwhatseemedlikehours,Ifeltasighofreliefrushthroughmybody.“Youarealive!”mydadshouted,“Youarealive!”【續(xù)寫思路一】主題上突出主人公在困境中的堅韌與勇氣，以及父愛、親情和自我堅持的重要性。續(xù)寫第一段可以描述主人公在荒野行走過程中對于選擇正確方向的掙扎，以及在絕望中依然堅持前行的決心。為更好地與第二段首句銜接，可在本段構(gòu)思一個場景：附近傳來的沙沙聲讓“我”不禁停了下來。“我”的心臟怦怦跳著，緊張地努力透過黑暗想看清楚是什么，“我”不知道那是野獸潛伏在陰影中，還是風在“我”耳邊耍花招，“我”屏住呼吸，靜待變化。續(xù)寫的第二段描述主人公與父親重逢時的感人一刻，并對主題進行升華。可以承接第一段描寫當“我”聽到父親的喊聲時，心中涌起了一種無法言喻的喜悅和安心。原來“我”聽到的沙沙聲是父親在尋找我時發(fā)出來的。本段可通過強調(diào)家庭的力量和父愛的重要性，以及主人公從這次經(jīng)歷中所得到的成長和啟示來進行結(jié)尾。【續(xù)寫思路二】主題上可表達親情和堅持的主題，突出主人公面對困境時的勇氣和堅持，以及父親的關(guān)心和支持。在第一段中可續(xù)寫主人公最終在疲憊和不安中找到了家的方向。熟悉的環(huán)境和涼爽的空氣使她確信自己離家很近。在迷霧中，模糊但熟悉的身影站在家前的高大樹木下，原來是她的父親！她鼓足勇氣朝著家跑去。這段時間似乎漫長無盡，但最終她感到一陣如釋重負的寬慰，因為她堅信自己的選擇是正確的。在第二段中可續(xù)寫主人公被父親發(fā)現(xiàn)的情景。父親可能會表現(xiàn)出擔心和緊張，但同時也充滿了對女兒終于能平安回來的喜悅和慶幸。他可能會溫柔地安慰主人公，告訴她一切都會好起來，并且承諾會永遠保護她。這時，主人公感受到一股溫暖和安心，知道自己不再孤獨，因為有父親的陪伴和支持。1范文1：Afterwhatseemedlikehours,Ifeltasighofreliefrushthroughmybody.Thenightenvelopedmeinitsdark,unsettlingatmosphere,withonlythefaintglowofthestarsabovetolightmyway.EverystepItookfeltheavywithuncertainty,andfeargnawedattheedgesofmymind.ButIpressedon,determinedtofindmywaybackhome.Suddenly,arustlingsoundnearbymademefreezeinmytracks.MyheartpoundedinmychestasIstrainedtoseethroughthedarkness.Wasitawildanimallurkingintheshadows,orjustthewindtricksonmyears?Iheldmybreath,waitingforanysignofmovement.“Youarealive!”mydadshouted,“Youarealive!”

Hisvoicecutthroughthesilencelikeabeaconofhope,guidingmetowardssafety.Withasurgeofrelief,Istumbledtowardsthefamiliarsound,tearsofgratitudestreamingdownmycheeks.Mydadrushedtoembraceme,hisstrongarmswrappingaroundmeinaprotectivehug.Inthatmoment,allmyfearsmeltedaway,replacedbyoverwhelminggratitudeforhisunwaveringloveandsupport.Aswemadeourwaybackhometogether,Ivowednevertounderestimatethepowerofinstinctandtheimportanceoffamilyinguidingusthroughlife'sdarkestmoments.默寫版：Afterwhatseemedlikehours,Ifeltasighofreliefrushthroughmybody._____________________________________________________________________夜晚把我籠罩在黑暗而令人不安的氣氛中，只有上方微弱的星星照亮了我的路.EverystepItookfeltheavywithuncertainty,andfeargnawedattheedgesofmymind._______________________________________________________________我堅持了下來，決心找到回家的路.Suddenly,arustlingsoundnearbymademefreezeinmytracks.MyheartpoundedinmychestasIstrainedtoseethroughthedarkness.Wasitawildanimallurkingintheshadows,orjustthewindtricksonmyears?_________________________________________________________我屏住呼吸，等待任何移動的跡象.“Youarealive!”mydadshouted,“Youarealive!”

Hisvoicecutthroughthesilencelikeabeaconofhope,guidingmetowardssafety.______________________________________________________我如釋重負，跌跌撞撞地走向熟悉的聲音，感激的淚水順著臉頰流了下來.Mydadrushedtoembraceme,hisstrongarmswrappingaroundmeinaprotectivehug.__________________________________________________________________在那一刻，我所有的恐懼都煙消云散了，取而代之的是對他堅定不移的愛和支持的感激之情.Aswemadeourwaybackhometogether,___________________________________________________________發(fā)誓永遠不會低估本能的力量andtheimportanceoffamilyinguidingusthroughlife'sdarkestmoments.03范文2：Afterwhatseemedlikehours,Ifeltasighofreliefrushthroughmybody.LostinthedenseAustralianbush,surroundedbyunfamiliarsoundsandshadows,fearhadgrippedmetightly.ButasIcontinuedtofollowmyinstinct,

the

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bymorningsunlight

eventuallyledmetoafamiliarclearing.Therelieffloodedovermelikeawarmwave,washingawaythepanicanduncertainty.Itwasamomentoftriumph,atestamenttotheresilienceofthehumanspiritinthefaceofadversity.“Youarealive!”mydadshouted,“Youarealive!”

Hisvoiceechoedthroughthetrees,filledwithamixtureofreliefandconcern.Rushingtowardsme,heenvelopedmeinatightembrace,hiswarmthandfamiliarscentcomfortingmelikenothingelsecould.TearswelledupinmyeyesasIrealizedhowcloseIhadcometodanger,howfortunateIwastohavefoundmywayback.Inthatmoment,Iknewthatnomatterwherelife'sadventurestookme,Iwouldalwaysfindmywayhome,guidedbytheloveandsupportofthosewhocaredforme.默寫版：Afterwhatseemedlikehours,Ifeltasighofreliefrushthroughmybody.___________________________________________________迷失在茂密的澳大利亞灌木叢中,surroundedbyunfamiliarsoundsandshadows,fearhadgrippedmetightly.ButasIcontinuedtofollowmyinstinct,

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eventuallyledmetoafamiliarclearing._____________________________如釋重負如暖波般涌上心頭，洗去了恐慌和不確定性.Itwasamomentoftriumph,atestamenttotheresilienceofthehumanspiritinthefaceofadversity.“Youarealive!”mydadshouted,“Youarealive!”

_____________________________________________________________他的聲音在樹林中回響，充滿了寬慰和擔憂.Rushingtowardsme,heenvelopedmeinatightembrace,hiswarmthandfamiliarscentcomfortingmelikenothingelsecould.______________________________________________________________________當我意識到自己離危險有多近，能找到回來的路是多么幸運時，淚水奪眶而出.Inthatmoment,Iknewthatnomatterwherelife'sadventurestookme,Iwouldalwaysfindmywayhome,guidedbytheloveandsupportofthosewhocaredforme.范文3：Afterwhatseemedlikehours,Ifeltasighofreliefrushthroughmybody.Despitethedarknessenvelopingmeandtheuncertaintyofmysurroundings,Ipressedon,guided

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bymyinstinct.EverystepItookfelthea