2024屆高三英語寫作復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)：讀后續(xù)寫遇險(xiǎn)類-憑借直覺走出灌木林講義素材

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasayounggirl,Iusedtolovegoingadventuring.Mydadalwaystookmedowntothebusheveryweekendandwecollectedmanysticksandstonestoaddtoourcollection.Iwasn’tlikeanyordinarygirlas1lovedtheoutdoorsevenasayoungkid.Iwasneverintodollsandteaparties.SoonIbecameoldenoughtoventureoutonmyown.WhenIventuredforththroughtheAustralianbushland,IfeltasifIwasinheaven.Therewasnothingmorebeautifulthanfeelingthecoolairbrushingacrossmyback.Theleaves

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beneathmyfeetateverystep.IfeltasifIwashome.Asthesundippeddownbeyondthehorizon,therewasnothingmoretodothantoheadbackhome.OnmywayIheardascreeching(尖叫聲).ItwasthemosthorriblesoundIhadeverheardinmylife.Sureenough,Ijusthadtoinvestigate.Inthedeadofnight,Iheadedtowardsthescreechandcameacrossalakeorriverofsomesort.Lookingupanddowntheriver,Icouldn’tfindawaytocrossit.InmuchshameIdecidedtogiveup.Itwasaboutoneo’clockinthemorningandIthoughtmydadmustbegettingworried.AsImovedawayfromthelake,therewasonlyoneproblemthatIdidnotrememberwhichdirectionIcamefrom.Mybraintoldmeleftbutmyinstinct(直覺)toldmeright.InmypastexperiencesIhadalwaysgonewithmyinstinct.SoofcourseIwentwithmyinstinct.AsIwalkedoffintothedistance,Icouldseethesunbreakingoutinmydistantview.注意：l.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150

左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afterwhatseemedlikehours,Ifeltasighofreliefrushthroughmybody.“Youarealive!”mydadshouted,“Youarealive!”【續(xù)寫思路一】主題上突出主人公在困境中的堅(jiān)韌與勇氣，以及父愛、親情和自我堅(jiān)持的重要性。續(xù)寫第一段可以描述主人公在荒野行走過程中對(duì)于選擇正確方向的掙扎，以及在絕望中依然堅(jiān)持前行的決心。為更好地與第二段首句銜接，可在本段構(gòu)思一個(gè)場(chǎng)景：附近傳來的沙沙聲讓“我”不禁停了下來?！拔摇钡男呐K怦怦跳著，緊張地努力透過黑暗想看清楚是什么，“我”不知道那是野獸潛伏在陰影中，還是風(fēng)在“我”耳邊?；ㄕ校拔摇逼磷『粑?，靜待變化。續(xù)寫的第二段描述主人公與父親重逢時(shí)的感人一刻，并對(duì)主題進(jìn)行升華?？梢猿薪拥谝欢蚊鑼懏?dāng)“我”聽到父親的喊聲時(shí)，心中涌起了一種無法言喻的喜悅和安心。原來“我”聽到的沙沙聲是父親在尋找我時(shí)發(fā)出來的。本段可通過強(qiáng)調(diào)家庭的力量和父愛的重要性，以及主人公從這次經(jīng)歷中所得到的成長(zhǎng)和啟示來進(jìn)行結(jié)尾?！纠m(xù)寫思路二】主題上可表達(dá)親情和堅(jiān)持的主題，突出主人公面對(duì)困境時(shí)的勇氣和堅(jiān)持，以及父親的關(guān)心和支持。在第一段中可續(xù)寫主人公最終在疲憊和不安中找到了家的方向。熟悉的環(huán)境和涼爽的空氣使她確信自己離家很近。在迷霧中，模糊但熟悉的身影站在家前的高大樹木下，原來是她的父親！她鼓足勇氣朝著家跑去。這段時(shí)間似乎漫長(zhǎng)無盡，但最終她感到一陣如釋重負(fù)的寬慰，因?yàn)樗龍?jiān)信自己的選擇是正確的。在第二段中可續(xù)寫主人公被父親發(fā)現(xiàn)的情景。父親可能會(huì)表現(xiàn)出擔(dān)心和緊張，但同時(shí)也充滿了對(duì)女兒終于能平安回來的喜悅和慶幸。他可能會(huì)溫柔地安慰主人公，告訴她一切都會(huì)好起來，并且承諾會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)保護(hù)她。這時(shí)，主人公感受到一股溫暖和安心，知道自己不再孤獨(dú)，因?yàn)橛懈赣H的陪伴和支持。1范文1：Afterwhatseemedlikehours,Ifeltasighofreliefrushthroughmybody.Thenightenvelopedmeinitsdark,unsettlingatmosphere,withonlythefaintglowofthestarsabovetolightmyway.EverystepItookfeltheavywithuncertainty,andfeargnawedattheedgesofmymind.ButIpressedon,determinedtofindmywaybackhome.Suddenly,arustlingsoundnearbymademefreezeinmytracks.MyheartpoundedinmychestasIstrainedtoseethroughthedarkness.Wasitawildanimallurkingintheshadows,orjustthewindtricksonmyears?Iheldmybreath,waitingforanysignofmovement.“Youarealive!”mydadshouted,“Youarealive!”

Hisvoicecutthroughthesilencelikeabeaconofhope,guidingmetowardssafety.Withasurgeofrelief,Istumbledtowardsthefamiliarsound,tearsofgratitudestreamingdownmycheeks.Mydadrushedtoembraceme,hisstrongarmswrappingaroundmeinaprotectivehug.Inthatmoment,allmyfearsmeltedaway,replacedbyoverwhelminggratitudeforhisunwaveringloveandsupport.Aswemadeourwaybackhometogether,Ivowednevertounderestimatethepowerofinstinctandtheimportanceoffamilyinguidingusthroughlife'sdarkestmoments.默寫版：Afterwhatseemedlikehours,Ifeltasighofreliefrushthroughmybody._____________________________________________________________________夜晚把我籠罩在黑暗而令人不安的氣氛中，只有上方微弱的星星照亮了我的路.EverystepItookfeltheavywithuncertainty,andfeargnawedattheedgesofmymind._______________________________________________________________我堅(jiān)持了下來，決心找到回家的路.Suddenly,arustlingsoundnearbymademefreezeinmytracks.MyheartpoundedinmychestasIstrainedtoseethroughthedarkness.Wasitawildanimallurkingintheshadows,orjustthewindtricksonmyears?_________________________________________________________我屏住呼吸，等待任何移動(dòng)的跡象.“Youarealive!”mydadshouted,“Youarealive!”

Hisvoicecutthroughthesilencelikeabeaconofhope,guidingmetowardssafety.______________________________________________________我如釋重負(fù)，跌跌撞撞地走向熟悉的聲音，感激的淚水順著臉頰流了下來.Mydadrushedtoembraceme,hisstrongarmswrappingaroundmeinaprotectivehug.__________________________________________________________________在那一刻，我所有的恐懼都煙消云散了，取而代之的是對(duì)他堅(jiān)定不移的愛和支持的感激之情.Aswemadeourwaybackhometogether,___________________________________________________________發(fā)誓永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)低估本能的力量andtheimportanceoffamilyinguidingusthroughlife'sdarkestmoments.03范文2：Afterwhatseemedlikehours,Ifeltasighofreliefrushthroughmybody.LostinthedenseAustralianbush,surroundedbyunfamiliarsoundsandshadows,fearhadgrippedmetightly.ButasIcontinuedtofollowmyinstinct,

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eventuallyledmetoafamiliarclearing.Therelieffloodedovermelikeawarmwave,washingawaythepanicanduncertainty.Itwasamomentoftriumph,atestamenttotheresilienceofthehumanspiritinthefaceofadversity.“Youarealive!”mydadshouted,“Youarealive!”

Hisvoiceechoedthroughthetrees,filledwithamixtureofreliefandconcern.Rushingtowardsme,heenvelopedmeinatightembrace,hiswarmthandfamiliarscentcomfortingmelikenothingelsecould.TearswelledupinmyeyesasIrealizedhowcloseIhadcometodanger,howfortunateIwastohavefoundmywayback.Inthatmoment,Iknewthatnomatterwherelife'sadventurestookme,Iwouldalwaysfindmywayhome,guidedbytheloveandsupportofthosewhocaredforme.默寫版：Afterwhatseemedlikehours,Ifeltasighofreliefrushthroughmybody.___________________________________________________迷失在茂密的澳大利亞灌木叢中,surroundedbyunfamiliarsoundsandshadows,fearhadgrippedmetightly.ButasIcontinuedtofollowmyinstinct,

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eventuallyledmetoafamiliarclearing._____________________________如釋重負(fù)如暖波般涌上心頭，洗去了恐慌和不確定性.Itwasamomentoftriumph,atestamenttotheresilienceofthehumanspiritinthefaceofadversity.“Youarealive!”mydadshouted,“Youarealive!”

_____________________________________________________________他的聲音在樹林中回響，充滿了寬慰和擔(dān)憂.Rushingtowardsme,heenvelopedmeinatightembrace,hiswarmthandfamiliarscentcomfortingmelikenothingelsecould.______________________________________________________________________當(dāng)我意識(shí)到自己離危險(xiǎn)有多近，能找到回來的路是多么幸運(yùn)時(shí)，淚水奪眶而出.Inthatmoment,Iknewthatnomatterwherelife'sadventurestookme,Iwouldalwaysfindmywayhome,guidedbytheloveandsupportofthosewhocaredforme.范文3：Afterwhatseemedlikehours,Ifeltasighofreliefrushthroughmybody.Despitethedarknessenvelopingmeandtheuncertaintyofmysurroundings,Ipressedon,guided

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