人教版八年級下冊 What's the matter-寫作能力提升練課件

UNIT1What’sthematter？UNIT1寫作能力提升練

孩子們的健康成長是每個家庭最大的愿望和期盼，也關(guān)乎國家和民族的未來。健康的生活是成長、成才的前提和保障。請根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，以“HealthyLiving”為題寫一篇80詞左右的英語作文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?.保證睡眠；4.保持樂觀心態(tài)。參考詞匯：樂觀的optimistic————————————————————————————————————————————————————內(nèi)容提示：

1.加強(qiáng)鍛煉；2.健康飲食；

［謀篇布局］理清文章要素，構(gòu)建文章結(jié)構(gòu)。［遣詞造句］就結(jié)構(gòu)圖中的要點和詞語寫出句子。1.健康的生活對于我們每個人來說都很重要。Healthylivingisvery

importantto

?everyoneofus.2.盡可能經(jīng)常做運(yùn)動對我們的身體有好處。Doingexercise

asoftenaspossible

?isgoodforourbody.importanttoasoftenaspossible3.我們必須確保每天有充足的睡眠。Wemust

makesure

?thatwehaveenoughsleepeveryday.makesure4.每天保持樂觀和高興是好的。It’sgood

tokeep

?optimisticandhappyeveryday.tokeep［巧妙銜接］

文章中使用表示順序的first，second等詞從幾個方面介紹如何保持健康，使文章顯得層次分明。［連句成篇］HealthyLivingHealthylivingisimportanttoeveryoneofus.Thefollowingcanhelpustoliveahealthylife.Therearemanythingswecandotokeephealthy.First，wemustdomuchexercise.Doingexerciseasoftenaspossibleisgoodforourbody.Second，wemusteathealthyfood，suchasgreenvegetablesandfruits.Eatinghealthilyisgoodforourhealth.Third，haveagoodsleep.Sleepingwellcanhelpustostudywell.Afteragoodsleepwewillfindwe’refullofenergy.Finally，it’sgoodtokeepoptimisticandhappyeveryday.Whenweareinthefaceofdifficulties，wecanworkthemouteasily.Ifwecanfollowtheways，wewillliveahappyandhealthylife.

你的朋友Jack由于長時間玩電腦游戲，現(xiàn)在頭痛，眼睛不舒服，背痛，睡不好覺。寫一篇短文介紹一下他的情況，并給出你的建議。要求：

1.內(nèi)容包含所提供的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)：80左右。

Jackismyfriend.Helikesplayingcomputergamesverymuch.Heoftensitsinthesamewayfortoolongwithoutmoving.Nowhehasaheadache，soreeyesandasoreback.Hedoesn’tsleepwellatnight，sohefeelstiredeveryday.

Jackismyfriend.Helikesplayingcomputergamesverymuch.Heoftensitsinthesamewayfortoolongwithoutmoving.Nowhehasaheadache，soreeyesandasoreback.Hedoesn’tsleepwellatnight，sohefeelstiredeveryday.

Ithinkit’sveryimportantforstudentstostayawayfromcomputergames.Heshouldtakebreaksawayfromthecomputer.Andheshoulddoeyeexercisestorelaxhiseyesandgotobedearlyatnight.Ithinkifhehasagoodrest，hewillfeelwellsoon.

?

Ithinkit’sveryimportantforstudentstostayawayfromcomputergames.Heshouldtakebreaksawayfromthecomputer.Andheshoulddoeyeexercisestorelaxhiseyesandgotobedearlyatnight.Ithinkifhehasagoodrest，hewillfeelwellsoon.

?一、話題分析本單元以談?wù)摗敖】蹬c急救(Healthandfirstaid)”為話題,針對健康與安全等問題,利用本單元學(xué)習(xí)的情態(tài)動詞should等提出簡單的建議。二、素材積累(一)“健康與急救”類話題常用詞匯:healthy//important//necessary//doctor//keep//fruit//strong//exercise//sleep//stayup//feelsick//liedown//haveagoodrest//gotohospital//takebreaks//giveup//beincontrolof(二)“健康與急救”類話題常用句型:開頭句1.Itisnecessaryforustokeephealthy.2.Itistruethathealthisthefirststeptosuccess.中間句1.Weshouldhaveahealthydiet.2.Remembertohavemealsontimeandeatmorevegetablesandfruit.3.Andyoushouldalsosay“No”tojunkfood.4.Itisnecessarytotakesomeexerciseeveryday.5.Giveupbadhabitslikestayinguptoolate.結(jié)尾句1.Keepinghealthyisthemostimportantthingintheworld.2.It’seasytohaveahealthylifestyle,andit’simportanttokeepahealthydiet.(三)名言警句1.Healthiswealth.健康就是財富。2.Happinesslies,firstofall,inhealth.幸福首先在于健康。(四)句子升格1.Wemustknowthewaystokeephealthy.(用Itis...todo...句式表達(dá))→Itisnecessaryforustoknowthewaystokeephealthy.2.Soweshouldexercisealoteveryday.(增加目的,擴(kuò)寫句子)→Soweshouldexercisealoteverydaytokeephealthyandstrong.三、寫作任務(wù)請結(jié)合你了解的健康知識,寫一篇題目為“TheWaystoKeepHealthy”的短文。注意:(1)語言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確,內(nèi)容要客觀；(2)80詞左右。參考詞匯:balanceddiet均衡的飲食；stayup熬夜【寫作方法及寫作模板】“總—分—總”法對健康與急救提建議總(引出話題)Importance:Healthisveryimportanttous.Soitisnecessaryto...分(具體建議)Eating:haveabalanceddiet/eatlotsoffruitandvegetablesExercise:playsportseverydaySleeping:neverworktoohard/neverstayuptoolate總(總結(jié)觀點)Doasthese.Iamsure...【高分作文】TheWaystoKeepHealthyHealthisveryimportanttous._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Soitisnecessarytoknowthewaystokeephealthy.Weshouldhaveabalanceddiet.Weshouldeatlotsoffruitandvegetables.Theyaregoodforhealth.Don’teattoomuchmeat._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________