高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)英語作文寫作如何進(jìn)行細(xì)節(jié)拓展課件

HowtoEnrichyourWritingbyAddingDetails假使你是李華，你的英國筆友Henry最近來信，詢問你高考后的暑假安排。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語回一封信，說明你的計(jì)劃，并簡述理由。1.休息；2.讀書；3.陪伴父母；4.參加社會活動假使你是李華，你的英國筆友Henry最近來信，詢問你高考后的暑假安排。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語回一封信，說明你的計(jì)劃，并簡述理由。1.休息；2.讀書；3.陪伴父母；4.參加社會活動IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.Ofcause,Iwilldosomereadingforfun,andforknowledgeaswell.Iwillspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththemaboutmyfuturemajorchoiceanddoingsomehousework.Ifpossible,Iwilltakepartinsomesocialactivities,throughwhichIwillsurelybroadenmyhorizonsandenrichmylifeexperience.1交際性拓展Communicativeexpansion拓展2細(xì)節(jié)性拓展Detailedexpansion3邏輯性拓展LogicalexpansionHowtoadddetailstoyourwritingIamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestions.SampleOne1).Iamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestionsonhowtospendyoursummervacationmeaningfully.2).Knowingitwillbealongsummervacationbeforeyouareadmittedtoyourdreamuniversities,Iamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestionsonhowtospendyoursummervacationmeaningfully.1.給今年即將畢業(yè)的全體高三學(xué)生寫封信，信中建議他們在高考（theCollegeEntranceExamination）結(jié)束后的暑假中能夠安排一些有意義的事去做。給建議Lookforwardtoyourreply.SampleOne

Iwillappreciateitverymuchifmyapplicationcanbetakenintoconsiderationandlookforwardtoyourreply.2.聽說某中外合作辦學(xué)大學(xué)招收廣東高中畢業(yè)生，有意申請到該校英語系學(xué)習(xí)，用英語寫一封自薦信。tip：交際性拓展(communicativeexpansion)，主要集中在信件開頭與結(jié)尾，可通過背景介紹，感謝期待等內(nèi)容的添加，讓書信交際功能更生動而又有人情味。

Knowingitwillbealongsummervacationbeforeyouareadmittedintoyourdreamuniversities,Iamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestionsonhowtospendyoursummervacationmeaningfully.

Iwillappreciateitverymuchifmyapplicationcanbetakenintoconsiderationandlookforwardtoyourreply.第二節(jié)書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假定你是李華，想邀請邀請外教Henry一起參觀中國剪紙（paper-cutting）藝術(shù)展。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2.展覽內(nèi)容。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。2017全國II卷DearHenry，

I’mverydelightedtowritealettertotellyousomethingaboutChinesepaper-cuttingexhibition,whichwillstartonJune20inourschoollecturehallandlastforaweek．(展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn))

Asiswell-knowntousall，Chinesepaper-cuttingisfamousallovertheworldandI’msureyou

willbe

interestedinit，soIplantoinviteyoutopayaclosevisit.Theexhibitionisacollectionofworkscreatedbysomefamouspaper-cuttingartistsinChina.(展覽內(nèi)容)Duringtheactivity,IwillshowyouaroundourschoolandthisisagoodchanceforyoutoenjoyyourselfandlearnmoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture．

Wouldyoupleasehavealookat

theexhibitionwithme？I‘dappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.

I’mlookingforwardtoreceivingyourreplyassoonaspossible．(殷切希望)

Yours，LiHuaInChina,thewintervacationfallsduringtheChineseNewYear,somoststudentstakepartindifferentSpringFestivalactivities.SampleTwoInChina,thewintervacationfallsduringtheChineseNewYear,somoststudentstakepartindifferentSpringFestivalactivities,suchasvisitingfamily,enjoyinglotsoffood,andmostimportantly,gettingluckymoney.1.中英寒假生活調(diào)查，向英國朋友介紹中國學(xué)生的寒假生活。InChina,theChineseknotisasymboloffriendship.SampleTwoInChina,theChineseknotisasymboloffriendship,

reunion,harmonyandgoodluck.2.你準(zhǔn)備了中國結(jié)作為禮物送給外國網(wǎng)友，感謝他的幫助。細(xì)節(jié)拓展可通過兩方面進(jìn)行:1.下義延伸，即通過適當(dāng)添加例子，將寫作內(nèi)容具體化。（suchas,forexample,like…）2.平行補(bǔ)充：挖掘?qū)懽鲗ο蟮牟煌矫妗?.InChina,thewintervacationfallsduringtheChineseNewYear,somoststudentstakepartindifferentSpringFestivalactivities,suchasvisitingfamily,eatinglotsoffood,andmostimportantly,gettingluckymoney.2.InChina,theChineseknotisasymboloffriendship,

reunion,harmonyandgoodluck.DeareditorI’msogladtogivemypersonalopinionsonmyfavoritenewspaperEnglishMonthlysetupbytheStudentUnion.I’mahighschoolstudentwhoisenthusiasticaboutreadingnewspapersandIwanttolearnsomethingfromthem.IthinkEnglishMonthlyhasmanyadvantages.Foronething,it’srichincontent,rangingfromeconomytocivilization.Foranother,it’saguidetoEnglishlearning.Throughit,Icanhaveagoodknowledgeofwhat’sgoingonathomeandabroadandI’veimprovedmyEnglishreadingskills.IfonlyyoucouldintroducesomemoreaboutChinesetraditionalcultureandinspirationalstoriesintheculturecolumn.HereIreallyhopeEnglishMonthlywillattractmorereaders.

Yours,Lihua.SampleThree1.邀請他來中國體驗(yàn)文化。

2.暑假建議你去學(xué)車。IwouldliketoinviteyoutocometoChinathissummer.Youcanlearntodriveinordertogetadrivinglicense.WhynotpayavisittoChina,

sothatyoucanhaveatasteofChinesecultureinperson?Youcanlearntodriveinordertogetadrivinglicense,whichwillenableyoutodriveinyourdailyroutine.sothatwhich表結(jié)果3.向外國朋友介紹中國傳統(tǒng)繪畫，推薦同學(xué)李雷為導(dǎo)游。4.李華，考試不要緊張。I’dliketorecommendmyclassmateLiLeitobeyourguide.LiHua,don’tbenervouswhiletakingexams.AsIknow,youwantsomeonewhohasabroadknowledgeoftraditionalChinesepainting,soI’dliketorecommendLiLeitobeyourguide.LiHua,don’tbenervouswhiletakingexams,because

itwillpreventyoufromconcentratingyourattentiononthetestpaper.SampleThree表原因邏輯性拓展前因，后果,讓步，遞進(jìn)…拓展小技巧背景介紹；感謝期待；下義延伸（舉例子）；平行類拓展（多方面；多角度）

掌握拓展技巧，在于先寫出句子主干(核心信息)，再根據(jù)需要增添附加成分。邏輯性拓展交際性拓展細(xì)節(jié)性拓展拓展小結(jié)前因，后果,讓步，遞進(jìn)…NoticeNextweek,ourEnglishClubwillholdaseriesofactivitiesduringour“EnglishLearningWeek”.WehavepreparedavarietyofactivitiesonEnglishlearning,suchaswatchingEnglishfilms,holdingpartiesandgettingtogetherwithforeignstudents.TherewillalsobeanEnglishspeedcontest,inwhichourforeignteacher,Peter,willbethejudge.Theseactivitieswillbeheldateveryeveningclassinourschoolhallnextweek.IamsuretheseactivitieswillnotonlyhelpimproveyourspokenEnglish,butalsobringyoumuchfun.Ireallyexpectyourenthusiasticparticipation.(2018全國Ⅱ)你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則通知,請大家觀看一部英文短片Growing

Together,內(nèi)容包括:1.短片內(nèi)容