高中英語作文課件

高考作文類型：A.數(shù)據(jù)說明類文章B.提示議論文類文章C.看圖說話類文章影響高考英語書面表達得分的幾個因素1.語篇信息是否完整2.行文是否連貫流暢，語言是否得體。3.是否使用高級詞匯4.是否使用復(fù)雜句5.卷面整潔,書寫工整寫作根本步驟：仔細審題，列舉大綱。２．圍繞要點，寫出句子。３．添加過度，確保連貫。４．先求正確，再求靈活。５．認真眷寫，卷面整潔。Introduction(topic)Body(supportingideas)ConclusionTheoutlineofthewriting:Conclusionparagraph:…Introductionparagraph:…Point2…BodyPoint1…supportingidea1supportingidea2supportingidea1supportingidea2Tomanystudents,schoollifeisboringandtiring.However,Ifindmyschoollifemeaningfulandcolourful.generalstatementtopicstatementTopicparagraph(Introductionparagraph)GeneralstatementTopicstatement

SupportingParagraphs(Body)Paragraphs

Firstly,...Secondly,...Moreover,...Finally,...However,...Inaddition,…Furthermore,...ConclusionPersonally,…inconclusion,inbrief,Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthat...

Insummary,itiswiser...

Agoodparagraphisonewithvariedsentencepatterns.豐富的句式：(常用到的句型結(jié)構(gòu)〕利用不同的句型來表達同一個意思，能增加文章的文采。e.g.What

akindboyheis!

How

disappointedhewas!

感慨句強調(diào)句e.g.It

wasthisyoungboythat

helpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyou

solvethisproblem.There

comesthepolicecar.

Hardly

hadtheygottothestation

when

theymettheyoungman.e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreet

withahandbaginherhand.倒裝句省略句with短語e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecan

findmuchusefulinformation.

Let’scometothemainteaching

building,atthebackofwhichstands

theschoollibrary.定語從句e.g.That’swhat

Ishoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoever

needshelpatpresent.各種名詞性從句

e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.

Themoment

wereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.

Solongas

weworkharderatourlessons,

we’llcatchupsoonerorlater.各種狀語從句1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.〔使用名詞性從句〕2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒裝句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用強調(diào)句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虛擬語氣〕What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice怎樣使用較豐富的句式和高級詞匯WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.

5.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用過去分詞)6.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)7.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.〔nomatterwhat狀語從句〕

8.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.〔祈使句+and…〕Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.9．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒裝句)10.Weallthinkheisagreatman.(thinkhighlyof)11.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.(turnout)12.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(themore…themore)Nosoonerhadhecome

backfromBeijing

than

hewassentabroad.Weallthinkhighlyofhim

.Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.因H7N9流感病毒在全球迅速漫延，為了防止這種病毒在你校傳播，作為校播送員的你，代表學(xué)生會向全校學(xué)生作如下宣傳，內(nèi)容如下：1．注意個人衛(wèi)生，經(jīng)常使用肥皂和清水洗手；2．要有充足的睡眠，勤于鍛煉；3．要減少學(xué)習(xí)壓力，注意足夠營養(yǎng)；4．防止前往擁擠場所，不要到處扔垃圾注意：格式已經(jīng)給出，120詞左右。Boysandgirls,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________StudentUnionBoysandgirls,MayIhaveanattention,please?ItiswellknownthatnewH7N9fluvirusisspreadingallovertheworld.Inordertopreventthevirus['va?r?s]

fromhappeninginourschool,everystudentshouldpayattentiontothefollowing:

Firstly,weshouldfocusonourpersonalhygieneandfrequentlywashhandswithsoapandcleanwater.Secondly,

althoughwehavemuchknowledgetolearn,we’dbetterhaveadequatesleepandoftendophysicalexercise.Thirdly,reducingstressonstudyandkeepingpropernutritionareimportantaswell.Finally,theschoolrequestseverystudenttoavoidgoingtocrowdedplaces,forexample,netbars,anddon’tthrowrubbishhereandthere.Ihopeeveryonehasahealthyandmeaningfullifeinourschool.StudentUnion假設(shè)你是李華，你的班里來了一位英國交換生Paul。他在和你的交談中表示在中國學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大。請你給他寫封信，給他提一些建議。主要包括以下內(nèi)容：1．請求老師和同學(xué)的幫助2．不要總想著考試成績，要多想自己的進步3．多做運動4.……注意：1.詞數(shù)：100字左右；2.可適當(dāng)參加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.信的開頭已為你寫好〔不計入總詞數(shù)〕。DearPaul,Iquitesympathize['s?mp?'θa?z]withyouandunderstandthegreattroubleyouaresufferingfrom.Becauseofthis,Ifeelunhappytoo.

Isuggestyoucommunicateyourtroubletoyourteachersandclassmatessoastogethelpfromthem.Youarenotsupposedtothinkaboutyourexamsallthetime,whichonlymakesyoumorestressedout.Instead,youshouldthinkabouttheprogressyouhavemadeinyourstudy,whichwillsurelyincreaseyourownconfidence.

Inaddition,Iadviseyoutodomoreexerciseinyoursparetimetorelieveyourstress,becausesportswillalsohelpyousleepbetteratnight.Asforme,Iwouldliketolistentoclassicmusicinmysparetime.

Ihopeyouwillgetoutofyourtroublesoonerandlivehappily.We'rethebestfriends,sojusttellmewhatIcandoforyou，let'ssolvetheproblemtogether!I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishes!

Yourssincerely,LiHua目前浪費現(xiàn)象比較普遍，近日你校圍繞該主題在學(xué)生中展開討論。請你根據(jù)以下要點，用英語寫一篇短文，給某一英文報的“CampusTrends(校園熱點)欄目投稿，希望大家減少浪費，建設(shè)節(jié)約