年月讀后續(xù)寫完整版

Continuationwriting浙江省2017年11月讀后續(xù)(hòuxù)寫真題第一頁，共十頁。Howtodescribeaperson?specificeventsimile(比喻(bǐyù))“She'sreallynice,mymom.Mymom'samagicgardener.Shecanmakeanythinggrow.Andshe'sagoodfairy（仙女(xiānnǚ)）.WhenI'msadshecanmakemehappy.Shecansinglikeanangle,androarlikealion.She'sreally,reallynice,mymom.Mymom'sasbeautifulasabutterfly,andascomfyasanarmchair.She'sassoftasakitten,andastoughasarhino(犀牛).”vivid/concrete/imaginativeLanguage:Content:easyto_________understandable/comprehensibleleaveadeep_____impressiveAvividimageofaMom.parallelism(排比(páibǐ))第二頁，共十頁。Whatkindofpersonwasyourmominyourmind?Giveanexample.“Inmymind,mymomwasahardnutbecauseneverwouldshe

givemeallowancetodatewithmyfriendsduringmyadolescence.--Ms.Chen”optimistic;faithful;warm-hearted;considerate;generous;humorous;intelligent......“Inmymind,mymomwas......becauseneverwouldshe......”stubborn;strict;bigmouth;bossy;bad-tempered.....第三頁，共十頁。Pre-readingWhatkindofpersonwasthewriter'smominthispassage?“mymother-loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful”Howdidthewriterdescribehismom'sforgetfulness?Bygivingadescriptionof“our_________________familytrip”strange/surprisingamusing/interestingspecificeventWhat'sthepropermeaningof“strange”here?A.unusualorsurprising,especiallyinawaythatisdifficulttounderstandB.notfamiliarbecauseyouhavenotbeentherebeforeormetthepersonbefore第四頁，共十頁。Readthegivenpassage.(Timeline)(Storyline/plot)(Feelingline)the1stdaydroveoffagain“unwillingbrave”2hourslaterafter...“returned..toget..Momhadforgotten”whenusingbathroom“stand..playlookout”hadaterriblepicture“nervous”onthe4thor5thnighthadtrouble...gotanidea..turneddown..“nervous/relieved”saidgoodbyeo..droveoff“Whoknewifwe'deverseethemagain?”What'sthetoneofthissentence?A.SeriousB.ModestC.SympatheticD.HumorousTip:wecanreflectaperson'spersonalitybydescribing(1)herbehaviordirectly;(2)others'behaviorintheindirectway.forgetfulforgetfulforgetful?“Humoristhebestcondiment(調味劑)?！癢hat'sthetoneofthispara?A.SeriousB.ModestC.SympatheticD.Humorous第五頁，共十頁。ReadthegivensentencesP1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.P2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheways.Whatarethekeywordsinthesetwosentences?Whatdidwedowiththetent?Whathappened?Howdidwefeel?Whatdidwesee?Howdidwefeel?Mom:Dad/kids:eagertoexperiencethetentunwillingbuthadtogiveinforgotsomenecessities“Momgotagreatidea...setupthetentthere?Dadturneddown..”Mom:absent-mindedandforgetfulTrip:strange;surprisesandamusementcontextecho(上下文呼應(hūyìng))“eager/excited”“unwilling;nervours..”Addhumor第六頁，共十頁。Write(p1)Tip1:運用(yùnyòng)不同詞性。Howtowrite“eager”動詞V名詞N形容詞Adj副詞desire/urgetodo..eagereagerness/desire/urgency..desired/hungry/thirsty/urgenteagerly/urgently/hungrily..“媽媽急于(jíyú)體驗帳篷?！盡omwas

morethan

eagertoexperiencethetent.Momhada

strong/overwhelming

eagernessto...Momdesired

eagerlyto...Tip2:運用(yùnyòng)形容詞/副詞。第七頁，共十頁。Write(p1)Howtowrite“excited”Tip3:運用(yùnyòng)不同句型?！眿寢尲拥亟ㄗh(jiànyì)我們搭帳篷”Momwasexcitedtosuggestustotrythetent.____________,Momsuggestedustotrythetent.Momsuggestedweshouldtrythetent,___________________________________(眼睛(yǎnjing)里閃著興奮的光芒).Excitedwithhereyesglitteringwithexcitement.withherbodyshakedinexcitement.=shakingherbodyexcitedlyhereyes/mouthwideopen.Bodylanguage第八頁，共十頁。Write(p2)HowtowritethesurroundingsIwonderifit'sbecauseIhaven'tbeenabletobeoutdoorsforsolongthatI'vebeensocrazyabouteverythingtodowithnature.Icanwellrememberthattherewasatimewhenadeepbluesky,thesongofthebirds,moonlightandflowers

couldneverhavekeptmespellbound.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingclouds

heldmeentirelyintheirpower.--Book1Unit1Thelake

shonelikeglassinthesettingsunandlookedwonderful.Inthevalleys,colorfulbutterfliesflewaroundusandwesawmanyyaksandsheeps

eatinggreengrass.Atmidnighttheskybecameclearerandthestars

grewbrighter.