綿陽(yáng)暑期培訓(xùn)學(xué)校培訓(xùn)材料書(shū)面表達(dá)樣本

靈活運(yùn)用高檔表達(dá)方式提高高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)得分近年來(lái)，高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則規(guī)定?？忌匾褂帽容^高檔表達(dá)方式方能獲取高分，而不少考生只會(huì)用構(gòu)造簡(jiǎn)樸句子來(lái)表達(dá)文意，寫(xiě)出來(lái)文章得分就低。因而，同窗們應(yīng)在平時(shí)書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練中多練習(xí)使用高檔表達(dá)方式，才干在高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)中獲得高分。一、什么是高檔表達(dá)方式普通說(shuō)來(lái)，如果一篇書(shū)面表達(dá)通篇都是單一主謂賓構(gòu)造簡(jiǎn)樸句，表達(dá)效果就比較差。各種復(fù)合句、特殊句式(倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、感嘆句、suchas列舉句型等)和帶過(guò)渡性插入語(yǔ)句子普通難度大、語(yǔ)境邏輯強(qiáng)、表達(dá)效果好，是普遍承認(rèn)高檔表達(dá)方式，也是高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)與否能獲取高分重要根據(jù)同窗們?cè)趯?xiě)英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)應(yīng)依照表達(dá)需要有選取地使用這些高檔表達(dá)方式。二、掌握簡(jiǎn)樸表達(dá)方式轉(zhuǎn)化高檔表達(dá)方式辦法簡(jiǎn)樸表達(dá)方式可以轉(zhuǎn)化成高檔表達(dá)方式，并且轉(zhuǎn)換難度也不是很大，由于高檔表達(dá)方式也是在簡(jiǎn)樸表達(dá)方式基本上構(gòu)成。下面簡(jiǎn)介幾種將簡(jiǎn)樸表達(dá)方式轉(zhuǎn)化為高檔表達(dá)方式辦法。1．將兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)樸句合并為一種由which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。which在非限制性定語(yǔ)從句中代表主句內(nèi)容，從句可由兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)樸句之一改造而成。例1：近來(lái)許多中學(xué)生亂花錢(qián)，關(guān)于這一點(diǎn)不同人有不同看法。簡(jiǎn)樸句：Recentlymanymiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutit.高檔表達(dá)方式：例2：許多男孩學(xué)抽煙，這對(duì)身體有危害。簡(jiǎn)樸句：Manyboyslearntosmoke.Itdoesharmtotheirhealth.高檔表達(dá)方式：2．在表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)陳述句前加過(guò)渡性插入語(yǔ)。某些表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)陳述句前加上inmyopinion，frommypointofview，personallyspeaking，asfarasIknow，asfarasI'mconcerned，asweallknow，asisknowntoall等插入語(yǔ)之后往往使句式更豐滿，邏輯更嚴(yán)密，說(shuō)理更充分，從而增強(qiáng)了文章表達(dá)效果。例1：簡(jiǎn)樸句：WeshouldnotspendtoomuchtimeinsurfingtheInternet.咱們不應(yīng)當(dāng)花太多時(shí)間上網(wǎng)。高檔表達(dá)方式：Inmyopinion，weshouldnotspendtoomuchtimeinsurfingtheInternet.我以為咱們不應(yīng)當(dāng)花太多時(shí)間上網(wǎng)。例2：簡(jiǎn)樸句：Takingexercisedoesgoodtoourhealth.鍛煉對(duì)健康有好處。高檔表達(dá)方式：Asweallknow／Asisknowntoall，takingexercisedoesgoodtoourhealth.眾所周知，鍛煉對(duì)健康有好處。例3：簡(jiǎn)樸句：Maryisanhonestandkindgirl.瑪麗是一種誠(chéng)實(shí)善良女孩。高檔表達(dá)方式：AsfarasIknow，Maryisanhonestandkindgirl.就我所知，瑪麗是一種誠(chéng)實(shí)善良女孩。3．在兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)樸句之間加上過(guò)渡性詞匯。為使兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)樸句之間邏輯更嚴(yán)密，過(guò)渡更自然，可在其間加上過(guò)渡性詞匯。例1：雨下得很大，咱們只得呆在旅館里。簡(jiǎn)樸句：Itrainedheavily.Wehadtostayatthehotel.高檔表達(dá)方式：Itrainedheavily；asaresult，wehadtostayatthehotel.例2：我買(mǎi)了某些時(shí)裝，又去看了一種精彩表演。簡(jiǎn)樸句：Iboughtsomefashionableclothes.Iwenttoseeawonderfulperformance.高檔表達(dá)方式：Iboughtsomefashionableclothes；，Iwenttoseeawonderfulperformance.例3：我在火車站迷了路，天也徐徐地暗了。簡(jiǎn)樸句：Iwaslostatthestation.Itwasgettingdark.高檔表達(dá)方式：Iwaslostatthestation；，itwasgettingdark.4．將兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)樸句合并為并列句。兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)樸句分別表達(dá)會(huì)令句子讀起來(lái)缺少連貫性和邏輯性，而加上并列連詞改導(dǎo)致并列句后邏輯嚴(yán)密得多，句式也高檔得多。例1：這道題太難了，我解不出來(lái)。簡(jiǎn)樸句：Thisproblemistoodifficult.Ican’tworkitout.高檔表達(dá)方式：例2：我想買(mǎi)這輛自行車，卻沒(méi)有足夠錢(qián)。簡(jiǎn)樸句：Iwanttobuythisbike.Idon’thaveenoughmoney.高檔表達(dá)方式：Iwanttobuythisbike，butIdon'thaveenoughmoney.5．將兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)樸句合并為復(fù)合句。兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)樸句加上從屬連詞可合并成主從復(fù)合句，這是增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)境邏輯、提高表達(dá)檔次好辦法。例1：我沒(méi)有帶錢(qián)。沒(méi)能當(dāng)作那場(chǎng)電影。簡(jiǎn)樸句：Ididn’ttakeanymoney.Icouldn’tseethatfilm.高檔表達(dá)方式：BecauseIdidn’ttakeanymoney，Icouldn’tseethefilm.例2：你不早點(diǎn)出發(fā)就不能及時(shí)到達(dá)。簡(jiǎn)樸句：Youdon’tstartearly.Youcan’tgetthereintime.高檔表達(dá)方式：Ifyoudon’tstartearly，youcan’tgetthereintime.6．將陳述句改為感嘆句。陳述句構(gòu)造平凡、語(yǔ)調(diào)平緩，而轉(zhuǎn)換為感嘆句后句式變新穎，語(yǔ)調(diào)變強(qiáng)烈，表達(dá)檔次明顯得到提高。例1：陳述句：Topreventthepollutionisveryimportant．防止污染很重要。高檔表達(dá)方式：防止污染多重要啊!例2：陳述句：Sheisaclevergirl．她是一種聰穎女孩。高檔表達(dá)方式：她是一種多么聰穎女孩啊!7．將陳述句改為倒裝句。陳述句改成倒裝句后構(gòu)造新穎、情感濃烈，表達(dá)效果明顯增強(qiáng)。例1：直到太陽(yáng)落山咱們才離開(kāi)那個(gè)村莊。陳述句：Wedidn’tleavethevillageuntilthesunset.高檔表達(dá)方式：例2：那時(shí)我?guī)缀醪欢⒄Z(yǔ)重要性。陳述句：IcouldhardlyunderstandtheimportanceofEnglishatthattime.高檔表達(dá)方式：8．將簡(jiǎn)樸句改為強(qiáng)調(diào)句。簡(jiǎn)樸句改為強(qiáng)調(diào)句后語(yǔ)調(diào)更強(qiáng)烈、感情更充沛，是不可多得高檔表達(dá)方式。例l：抽煙對(duì)她身體導(dǎo)致了傷害。簡(jiǎn)樸句：Smokingdidgreatharmtohishealth.高檔表達(dá)方式：例2：咱們錢(qián)是父母辛苦掙來(lái)。簡(jiǎn)樸句：Ourmoneyisearnedthroughhardworkbyourparents.高檔表達(dá)方式：9．將普通性列舉句子改為suchas列舉句型。普通性列舉句子只起到羅列事實(shí)作用，而suchas列舉句型除具備列舉功能之外，其對(duì)稱構(gòu)造也能增強(qiáng)表達(dá)效果。例1：晚會(huì)上將有唱歌、跳舞、做游戲等節(jié)目。普通性列舉句子：Thepartywillincludesinging，dancingandplayinggames.高檔表達(dá)方式：Therewillbeafewprogramsattheparty，suchassinging，dancingandplayinggames.例2：咱們將參觀長(zhǎng)城、頤和園、紫禁城等名勝古跡。普通性列舉句子：TheplacesofinterestwewillvisitaretheGreatWall，theSummerPalaceandtheForbiddenCity，etc。高檔表達(dá)方式：Wewillvisitseveralplacesofinterest，suchastheGreatWall，theSummerPalaceandtheForbiddenCity.三、增強(qiáng)使用高檔表達(dá)方式意識(shí)掌握了簡(jiǎn)樸表達(dá)方式轉(zhuǎn)化高檔表達(dá)方式辦法，并不意味著在寫(xiě)作時(shí)一定能用上，只有增強(qiáng)使用高檔表達(dá)方式意識(shí)，養(yǎng)成使用高檔表達(dá)方式習(xí)慣，才干保證在寫(xiě)作時(shí)自然貼切地用上。典型句式模板1．Itgoeswitoutsayingthat(不言而喻).2.Whatreallycountisnot…but…真正重要不是…而是…仿寫(xiě)：03Whatreallycountisnothowfashionableyouarebutwhetheryoupossessagreatamountofknowledge，anoblecharacterandawarmheart.仿寫(xiě)：05Whatreallycountisnothowtalentedyouare，buthowperseveringyouare.仿寫(xiě)：06Whatreallycountisnottheconditionitprovides，butthereputationtheuniversitygets.3.Greateffortsshouldbemadeto….Onlyby…canweenableourcountrytotakethestrongpositionamongthepoweroftheworld.仿寫(xiě)：03ThusIsuggetthatgreateffortsshouldbemadetobethepersonthesocietyneeds,.Onlybydoingsocanyoudefinitelyenableyourselftobecomeashappyasyouusedtobe.仿寫(xiě)：05AsfarasIamconcerned，greateffortsshouldbemadetobuildyourconfidenceandperseveranc.Onlybydoingsocanyoudefinitelyenableourselvetotakethestrongpositioninourlife.仿寫(xiě)：06SinceImadeupmymind，greateffortsshouldbemadetorealizemydream.AndonlybyworkinghardcanIdefinitelyenablemyselftotakethestrongpositionamongmypeers.高考書(shū)面表達(dá)慣用高檔句式1.Therebe(exist，live，lie，stand…)sb./sth.2.sb.have(has/had)sth.3.sb.find/think/feel+it+n./adj.+(forsb.)todosth.Wethinkitourdutytoworkhard.Shefindsitnecessarytotakedownnoteswhilelistening.Theyfeelitimportanttohavesomeworkingexperience.4.~themost+形容詞+名詞+(that)+主詞+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read…HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhad.5、Nothingis+more+形容詞+thanto+VNothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.沒(méi)有比接受教誨更重要事。6、~cannotemphasizetheimportanceof~toomuch.（再怎么強(qiáng)調(diào)...重要性也不為過(guò)Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch.7、Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...（不可否認(rèn)...）Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlivinghavegonefrombadtoworse.Thereisnotdenyingthatsuccessfulbusinessliesinahealthybodyandmind.8、Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子~~（全世界都懂得...）Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.9、Thereisnodoubtthat+句子~~（毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)...）Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired.毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)咱們教誨制度令人不滿意。10、Anadvantageof~isthat+句子（...長(zhǎng)處是...）Anadvantageofusingthesolarenergyisthatitwon‘tcreate(produce)anypollution.11、Thereasonwhy+句子~~~isthat+句子（...因素是...）Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair.Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycansupplyfreshairforus.12、So+形容詞+be+主詞+that+句子（如此...以致于...）Sopreciousistimethatwecan’taffordtowasteit.13、Adj/n.+as+Subject（主詞）+be，S+V~~~（雖然...）Richasourcountryis，thequalitiesofourlivingarebynomeanssatisfactory.{bynomeans=innoway=onnoaccount一點(diǎn)也不}雖然咱們國(guó)家富有，咱們生活品質(zhì)絕對(duì)令人不滿意。Childassheis，shepaysmuchattentiontoherbehavior.14、The+~er+S+V，~~~the+~er+S+V~~~The+more+Adj+S+V，~~~the+more+Adj+S+V~~~（愈...愈...）Theharderyouwork，themoreprogressyoumake.Themorebooksweread，themorelearnedwebecome.15、By+doingsth.，sb.candosth.（借著...，..可以..）Bytakingexercise，wecanalwaysstayhealthy.借著做運(yùn)動(dòng)咱們可以始終保持健康。16、Itissaid/reported/known/thought/believed(that)Itisbelieved(that)readingincreasesourknowledgeandbroadensourmind.17、Onnoaccountcanwe+V~~~（咱們絕對(duì)不能...）Onnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge.咱們絕對(duì)不能忽視知識(shí)價(jià)值。18、Itistime+S+過(guò)去式（該是...時(shí)候了）Itistimetheauthoritiesconcernedtookproperstepstosolvethetrafficproblems.19、依照我個(gè)人經(jīng)驗(yàn)?…Accordingtomypersonalexperience，…=Basedonmypersonalexperience，…Accordingtomypersonalexperience，smilehasdonemealotofgood.20、Thereisnoonebut~~~（沒(méi)有人不...）Thereisnoonebutlongstogotocollege.沒(méi)有人不渴望上大學(xué)。21、Itis+n/adj+that/todo…Itisamustthateverybodyshouldknowhowtousecomputers.Itisconvenientforustobeabletousecomputers22、Thatisthereasonwhy~~~（那就是...因素）Summerissultry.ThatisthereasonwhyIdon‘tlikeit.23.Forthepast+時(shí)間，S+當(dāng)前完畢式...（過(guò)去...年來(lái)，...始終...）Forthepasttwoyears，Ihavebeenbusypreparingfortheexamination.24、Since+S+過(guò)去式，S+當(dāng)前完畢式。Sincehewenttoseniorhighschool，hehasworkedveryhard.25、Itpaysto+V~~~（...是值得。）Itpaystohelpothers.協(xié)助別人是值得。26、Itisnouse(good)doing…It’snogoodtalkingwithoutthinkingcarefully.27.Itisnecessary/important/essentialthat+sb.(should)+dosth.Itisimportantthatwe(should)keepthepublicplacesclean.28、Whata+Adj+N+S+V!=How+Adj+a+N+V!（多么...！）Whatanimportantthingitistokeepourpromise!Howimportantathingitistokeepourpromise!遵守諾言是多么重要事！29、notonly…butalsoInjustthreeyears，shehadnotonlyfinishedallthelessons，butalsoreceivedherDoctor’sdegree.Forestscannotonlyfreshtheairbutalsoreducenoise.30、Dueto/Owingto/Thanksto+N/Ving，~~~（由于...）Thankstohisencouragement，Ifinallyrealizedmydream.31、Iamgreatlyconvinced(that)=Iamgreatlyassured(that)我深信…Iamgreatlyconvincedthatpreventionisbetterthancure.我深信防止是于治療32、not…untilIdidn’tknowthetruthuntilshetoldmewhathappened.YesterdayIdidn’tgotosleepuntilmidnight.

Step1．仔細(xì)審題Step2.理清要點(diǎn)Step3.譯寫(xiě)單句Step4.連句成篇Step5.檢查潤(rùn)色Step1．仔細(xì)審題Step2.理清要點(diǎn)Step3.譯寫(xiě)單句Step4.連句成篇Step5.檢查潤(rùn)色Step6.定稿抄寫(xiě)范例：題目：依照如下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇簡(jiǎn)介香港短文，字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右。香港位于中華人民共和國(guó)東南部，面積1045平方公里，人口600多萬(wàn)，被稱為“東方明珠”。1842年鴉片戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)后，當(dāng)時(shí)中華人民共和國(guó)政府被迫將香港割讓給英國(guó)。1997年她已回到祖國(guó)懷抱，其前景會(huì)更美好。參照詞匯：明珠pearl[p?:l]，鴉片opium

[?upi?m]第一步：仔細(xì)審題本文屬闡明性文章。第二步：理清要點(diǎn)1、香港地理位置、面積和人口。2、鴉片戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)后香港處境。3、1997年她回到祖國(guó)懷抱。4、其前景會(huì)更美好。第三步：譯寫(xiě)單句香港位于中華人民共和國(guó)東南部，面積1045平方公里，人口600多萬(wàn)，被稱為“東方明珠”HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Herareais1,045k㎡.Herpopulationismorethan6million.Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.1842年鴉片戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)后，當(dāng)時(shí)中華人民共和國(guó)政府被迫將香港割讓給英國(guó)。ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar.1997年她已回到祖國(guó)懷抱，其前景會(huì)更美好。In1997，shereturnedtomotherland.Herfutureisverybeautiful.第四步：連句成篇HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Herareais1,045k㎡and(←.Her)populationismorethan6million.Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar.In1997，shereturnedtomotherlandand(←.Her)futureisverybeautiful.第五步：檢查潤(rùn)色1HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof(←Herareais)1,045k㎡and(←.Her)hasapopulationofmorethan6million(←populationismorethan6million).Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernmentafterthe1842OpiumWar，andthepeopleinHongKonglivedahardlife.In1997，shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareandwillbeworkinghardtomakehermorebeautiful.(←.Herfutureisverybeautiful.)第五步：檢查潤(rùn)色2HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045k㎡andhasapopulationofmorethan6millionand(←.She)iswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842，thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritain(←ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernment)aftertheOpiumWar，andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot(←livedahardlife).AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997(←In1997，shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareand)，thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina，andtheywillworkhard