高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫微技能之無靈主語導(dǎo)學(xué)案

無“靈”主語句,寫“情”最細(xì)膩Step1.Appreciatethecontinuationwriting.(找出含有無靈主語的句子)EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.Embarrassed,Jennydidn’tsayanything.Deadsilencesuddenlyfell.ThencameMissWalker’svoice.“WhyisLee’swatchonyourwrist?”Jennyhesitatedforawhileanddecidedtotelleveryoneaboutthetruth.However,thinkingofthewellpreparedspeech,themagicofthewatch,shechangedhermind.“ButMissWalker,couldIgivethespeechfirstandthenexplain?”Shemadearequestinatoneofbegging.Atthat,MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny’sspeechfirst.Jennymadeherwaytotheplatformwitheveryconfidence.Wordsbegantofloodoutofher.“Howcouldshemakeit?We’veneverseenJennygivesoterrific(極好的)aspeech.”Whisperswentaroundtheclassroom,andevenMissWalkernoddedwithapproval.ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.Relieved,Jennytoldeveryonethetruth,andespeciallythemagicofthewatch.“Butit’sjustanordinarywatchwithnomagic”,Leeannounced.無靈主語句，指用無生命的事物做主語，用人或社會(huì)團(tuán)體的行為或動(dòng)作做謂語，因此這類句子常常自帶擬人化的修辭色彩，把沒有生命的東西，賦予生命力，從而增加了主語的多樣性，使語言更加生動(dòng)化。Eg:她傷心地哭了。_____________________________________________無靈主語句：_______________________________________________同樣是表達(dá)“她哭了”，比起普通句式中的常見句子，無靈主語句中這種“悲傷抓住了她”的擬人化表達(dá)，瞬間提升了高級感！Step2.pare&Appreciate1.Ifelthappy.2.Shelostcourage.她失去勇氣。3.Therewasabrightsmileonhisface.4.SuddenlyIhadagoodidea.5.Therewasthickfoginthefield.6.Chinawasestablishedin1949.1.Asenseofhappinesswelledupinme.2.Couragedeserted/abandonedher.3.Abrightsmilelituphisface.4.Agoodideasuddenlyoccurredtome5.Thethickfogblankedthefield.6.TheYear1949witnessedtheestablishmentofChina.Summary:無靈主語句的結(jié)構(gòu)：_______________________________1.______________________類名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞+其他;2.______________________類名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞+其他;3.______________________類名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞+其他;4.______________________類名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞+其他;5.______________________類名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞+其他;句式1：表______________________(作無靈主語)+有靈動(dòng)詞+sb.Aburst/wave/flood/surge/rush/ripple/sense/feelingof+情感名詞+defeat(擊垮)/fail(使失望，有負(fù)于)seize/takeholdof(抓住)/sweepover/floodover/washover(襲來；席卷)/getcontrolof/creepon(慢慢產(chǎn)生)/engulf/swallow(吞噬)sb.表“某人感到……”或“一陣/一種……向某人襲來”I.高中常見的情感(emotions)類的名詞：1.幸?？鞓穇____________________________________________________________；2.激動(dòng)興奮_____________________________________________________________；3.吃驚驚訝_____________________________________________________________；4.渴望滿足_____________________________________________________________；5.恐懼驚恐______________________________________________________________；6.焦慮緊張______________________________________________________________；7.感動(dòng)感激______________________________________________________________;8.寬慰溫暖______________________________________________________________;9.尷尬羞愧_____________________________________________________________；10.后悔內(nèi)疚_____________________________________________________________；11.悲傷孤獨(dú)_____________________________________________________________；12.生氣憤怒_____________________________________________________________；13.失望絕望_____________________________________________________________；14.好奇困惑_____________________________________________________________；15.驕傲自信_(tái)_______________________16.慷慨熱情___________________________17.同情仁慈________________________18.嫉妒羨慕_________________________II.當(dāng)主語是情感類名詞時(shí)，常用于該句式的謂語有靈動(dòng)詞(短語)有:人常被情感掌控，受其制約。seize(抓住);takeholdof(抓住;攫住);grasp/grip(緊抓);tear...intopieces(把……撕成碎片)；被情感對手擊敗，getthebetterof/defeat(擊垮);eoversb.(影響,支配)；sweep/flood/rushover(席卷，襲來);washover(洗滌，侵襲);creepupon/on(不知不覺產(chǎn)生，襲來);swallow(吞噬;淹沒);fail(使失望;有負(fù)于);choke(噎住，堵住);escape(被忘掉;被忽視);desert(丟棄，遺棄);choke(使哽咽);runthrough/passthrough(掠過),givewayto(被.....代替)；等。在續(xù)寫中寫到人物的情緒或心理時(shí)，使用無靈主語句，句子瞬間得到升華。1.Angerchokedmywords.我氣得說不出話來。(某種情緒+chokemywords)2.Confidencedeserted/escaped/failedhim.他失去了自信。3.Wefeltveryhappyyesterday.(用無靈主語轉(zhuǎn)換同義句，盡可能用多種表達(dá))____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.______________________________________floodedoverhim.一種輕松感涌上心頭。5.當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎(jiǎng)時(shí)，她興奮極了。Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,___________________________her.6.當(dāng)我在等待結(jié)果時(shí)，我緊張極了。____________________________________________whenIwaswaitingfortheresult.____________________________________________whenIwaswaitingfortheresult.7.媽媽感到既自豪又溫暖。(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)Motherfelt____________________________________________________________.8.母親想控制她的感情，但流下了晶瑩的淚水。(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)Themothertriedtohideheremotion,but_____________________________________.句式2:主語是表示________________________________類名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞(短語)+....用于該句型的名詞(作無靈主語)有:face臉,eye眼,heart心,hand手,finger手指,laughter笑聲,smile微笑,tears眼淚,voice聲音,words話等。用于該句型的有靈動(dòng)詞(短語)有:brighten/lightup(照亮,煥發(fā));flash/twinkle(閃爍,閃現(xiàn));wellupin(涌出,涌現(xiàn));spreadacross/flashacross(浮現(xiàn),露出);befill...with...(充滿);flash(閃爍)；cloudover顯得陰沉(恐懼、憤怒、憂愁);crumple(弄皺);linger(縈繞,繼續(xù)存留);echo(回蕩)等。1.Herfacelitup/brightenedwhenIgaveherthepresent.我給她送禮物時(shí)，她的臉上煥發(fā)出了光彩。2.Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑聲在房間里縈繞。3.________________________________wasabsenttoday.(2022新高考I卷)今天他那大大的笑容不見了。4.___________________toexpressmyhappiness.語言無法表達(dá)我的高興心情。5.老師的鼓勵(lì)溫暖了她的心,她感到一陣興奮。_______________________________herheart.Shefelt_______________________。6.他一看到熟悉的字跡，便熱淚盈眶。Themomenthesawthefamiliarhandwriting,_________________________________.7.當(dāng)我開始大聲鼓勵(lì)時(shí),我周圍的其他人也喊起來“加油,大衛(wèi),你能做到的!”(2022·新高考Ⅰ)AsIstartedtoshoutencouragement,____________________________________.“eonDavid,youcandoit!”(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)8.考試前，Tom感到非常焦慮、緊張。①Beforetheexam,_____________________________________________.Hecouldfeelhispalmssweating,heartpoundingwildlyinhischest.②Beforetheexam,____________________________________________.Hefeltthathisheartalmostleapedfromhisbody.句式3:表_________________________________的名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞+....用于該句型的名詞(作無靈主語)有:常見的表行為或動(dòng)作的名詞有thought/idea(想法);sight(看到);glance/look(看到);taste(味道),smell,feeling(感受);scene(場景);visit;arrival;walk等。用于該句型的有靈動(dòng)詞有:arouse(喚起);occurto/strike/hit(突然想到);fill...with充滿；stun(使震驚);bring(帶來);change(改變);remind(想起);make(使變得),leave(留下),drive(驅(qū)使)等動(dòng)詞。1.Thesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror.看到這個(gè)情景我心中充滿了恐懼。2.Atenminutes’walkbroughtustothehotel.我們步行十分鐘就到了旅館。3.我突然想到一個(gè)好主意。（一句多譯）Asplendidideasuddenly_____________________me.Asplendidideasuddenly_____________________me.Asplendidideasuddenly____________________________mymind.Asplendidideasuddenly_____________________________mymind.Agood/splendidideasuddenly_________________________________mymind.idea,thought...+hit/struck/occurredto+sb.該句式也可用it作為形式主語:Itsuddenlyhit/struck/occurredto/dawnedonsb.that從句,其中that從句是真正的主語。4.他們突然想到他們可以給媽媽做早餐慶祝母親節(jié)。(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)_________________________________________________theycouldmakebreakfastforMothertocelebrateMother’sDay.5.我突然想到我應(yīng)該有自己的錢,并計(jì)劃如何使用它。(2021·浙江高考)

__________________________________________Ishouldhavemyownmoneyandplannedhowtospendit.6.一看到這張照片我就想起了難忘的杭州之旅。________________________________meoftheunforgettabletriptoHangzhou.7.想到不久就去看望他奶奶，他心中感到十分快樂。_____________visitinghisgrandmotherverysoon___________________________.看到/想到......,某人就感到(某種情緒)Thesightofsthfillone’sheartwith+情緒情緒+sweepoversb+atthesightofsth.Thesightofsth+makessb.+情緒Eg:Thethoughtofgoingabroadforfurtherstudymakeshimexcited.8.早餐香甜的味道喚醒了媽媽,一股幸福的暖流涌上她的心頭。(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)___________________________________________themother,whofeltawarmwaveofhappinesswellingupinherheart.句式4表________________________等的名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞+...。用于該句型的名詞(作無靈主語)有：fog/mist(霧),sun(太陽),sunshine(陽光),moon(月亮),moonlight(月光),rain(雨),snow(雪),dawn(黎明破曉);night,darkness(黑暗)等。用于該句型的有靈動(dòng)