英語提升與雅思寫作-圖文

英語提升與雅思寫作_圖文.pptx什么是英語提升？為什么要提升？別跟我提CET-4，CET-6,600分又如何？也別跟我提TEM-4，TEM-8，80分又如何？考試英語困惑了我們，也戕害了我們，一代又一代走不出牢籠……禍國殃民論什么是英語提升？為什么要提升？禍國殃民自然是語不驚人誓不休，但是……對80%學(xué)生而言，讓他們學(xué)習(xí)英語的確是在謀財害命！而他們學(xué)習(xí)英語，是在慢性自殺！什么是英語提升？為什么要提升？But

why?因為，你沒有提升你的英語！沒有提升的英語學(xué)了沒用！你學(xué)的英語：只會考試，刷分！只會見面問聲好，臨別說再見，迷失時問路，講演時自我介紹……外國人都學(xué)會漢語了，這些英語沒有用武之地了！什么是英語提升？為什么要提升？你以為英語是這樣學(xué)的背四六級單詞學(xué)習(xí)蒙答案的技巧看四六級閱讀，做選擇題背作文模板看外國電視，學(xué)幾句罵人的口語哪些人需要英語提升？華南農(nóng)業(yè)大學(xué)這樣的名校學(xué)子志在四方的學(xué)子希望international

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較高境界能與Englishnativespeakers自由交流，幾乎沒有障礙能讀英文報刊，迅速捕捉文章的gist能相當(dāng)容易地聽懂英語新聞，看懂英文原版電影，不用subtitles能用相當(dāng)decent的書面英文通順邏輯地表達自己的觀點更高境界能很好地欣賞英文脫口秀節(jié)目（JimmyFallon;SethMeyers;Ellen…)能做雙語同傳（interpreting)能用英語進行辯論(debating)能用英語寫SCI論文如何提升英語？以讀促寫閱讀幾本經(jīng)典英文小說（PrideandPrejudice;Persuasion;TessoftheD’bervilles;FarewelltoArms…)長期閱讀英文報紙(BBC;Washingtonpost;TheGuardian;TheEconomist;NationalGeographic;theNewYorker;the21stCentury…)長期閱讀本專業(yè)英文文獻(本專業(yè)期刊、著作）以聽練說BBC;VOA;NBC;CCTV…Sitcoms:Friends;TwoandaHalfMen;TheBigBangTheory…Movies:Roman

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Ryan…如何提升英語？特別推薦/聽力普特英語聽力：/html/listening/在線英語聽力室：如何提升英語？特別推薦/閱讀《讀外刊學(xué)雅思》：加公眾號ieltswriting4u，即可閱讀。提升雅思詞匯：閱讀外刊，記雅思詞匯，準(zhǔn)確，有效熟悉雅思閱讀：外刊題材難度與雅思閱讀相當(dāng)積累雅思寫作素材：外刊的語言表達和論證素材，一般模板不可比擬名家選注：知名雅思培訓(xùn)專家親自選材注釋英語閱讀網(wǎng)：www.雅思高分策略雅思（IELTS）體現(xiàn)了英語提升精神聽：既有信息類一般材料，也有講座性學(xué)術(shù)材料說：與老外面對面交流，考驗?zāi)阌糜⒄Z交流的綜合能力讀：來自外刊、有一定難度的語言材料寫：既要求描寫信息，也要求寫議論文雅思高分策略雅思基本情況雅思是劍橋大學(xué)開發(fā)的全球性考試希望到英聯(lián)邦國家留學(xué)、移民的外國人均需要參加雅思考試各個學(xué)校雅思分?jǐn)?shù)要求有一定差異，好學(xué)校均要求總分6.5，單科不低于6分。劍橋大學(xué)需要總分7.5，單科不低于7分2014年，中國雅思考生達到59萬人次很多大學(xué)已經(jīng)開始“雅思計劃”并出臺相關(guān)政策雅思高分策略如何取得理想成績？到培訓(xùn)機構(gòu)學(xué)蒙答案、押題（what’stheuse?)自己苦背雅思詞匯、做各種真題和模擬題（bitter,lonely,notefficient)提升英語水平，到靠譜的培訓(xùn)機構(gòu)學(xué)習(xí)考試技巧（highlyrecommended)雅思大作文的三種題型Argumentation:

給出兩個對立的觀點，要求對其進行分析，然后給出自己的觀點。

Afterhighschool,somepeoplegotocollegetopreparethemselvesforfuturecareer,whileothersgotojobmarkettoincreasetheirworkexperience.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.雅思大作文的三種題型Discussion

給出一個觀點，要求分析這個觀點是否合理/利弊，并提出自己的觀點。

Inmanypartsoftheworldthereiscontinuouscoverageofsportontelevision.Somepeoplebelievethisdiscouragestheyoungfromtakingpartinanysportthemselves.Discussthisviewandgiveyourownopinion.雅思大作文的三種題型Report

給出一個現(xiàn)象/問題，要求分析這個現(xiàn)象/問題產(chǎn)生的原因及其后果，并提出解決辦法。

Majorcitiesgrowintothesurroundingcountryside,asaresult,youngpeoplefromthecountryarenowlivinginthecity.Whatproblemsarecausedduetothecities'continuedgrowth?Whatarethereasonsandwhatsolutionscanyousuggest?

雅思作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解讀◆1.Taskresponse（論點+論據(jù)）◆2.CoherenceandCohesion（連貫）◆3.LexicalResource（詞匯）◆4.GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy（句子）雅思作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解讀霧里看花型：能圍繞題目寫點別人模模糊糊能看懂的東西=4分Withoutahealthybody,otherfactorsareneedn’ttoconsider.Becauseitisimpossibletoeverycitizenshaverighttodepriveothersinthiscivilsociety.Inconclusion,dependsondifferentsituation,lawscanbeintroducetobanjoininsomemachinework.雅思作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解讀半夢半醒型：勉強能看懂，有些正確的句子，有些正確的單詞，詞能達意=5分

Today,astheworldpopulationkeepsboosting,unemploymentisasevereandhardsolvingproblem.Inmyperspective,whethertheyshouldbearrestedreallydependsonhowseriousthelawthattheybrokeare.Instead,hecanbeeducatedinthepoliceofficeandpayafine,towarnhimnotdoitanymore.雅思作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解讀湊合著過型：有點想法，有點邏輯，多數(shù)能看懂，有點復(fù)雜句，有幾個好詞=6分

Wecandrawaconclusionthatthestudentsmayadapttothesocietyearlieriftheygotoworkimmediately.However,theyarenotskillfulenough.Itisabetterchoicetostudyindepth.Therefore,althoughthereareadvantagesforstudentstogotowork,theyhadbetterstudybeforeworking,unlesstheyaregoingtostudyartsubjectsinthefuture.雅思作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解讀明明白白我的心型：有些想法，有些清晰，有些好詞，有些好句子，有些錯誤=7分

Inrecentyears,whetherthestudentswhograduatefromhighschoolshouldgotocollegeorgotojobmarketbecomesaheatedtopicamongpeople.Itisbelievedbysomethatcollegehelpsthemprepareforfuturecareerwhileothersthinkjobmarketcanincreasetheirworkexperience.Basically,law-breakersaresenttojailwiththepurposeofpreventingthemfrombeingagainstthelawandprotectinginterestofothercitizens.雅思作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解讀我的心思你最懂型：有思想，清晰，不少好詞，不少好句子，錯誤很少=8分

Undoubtedly,thosewhodonotobeythelawsshouldbeputintoprisonsothattheywouldnolongerbeabletoharmothercitizens.Oncebeingputintojail,thelaw-breakersarealmostisolatedfromtheoutsideworldandtheywouldbewatchedalldaylong.Inaddition,sincetherearefewthingstodointheprison,thecriminalscanreflectwhattheyhavedonewrong,changetheirattitudetowardslifeorthesocietyandthinkabouthowtheycanhelptooffsettheimpactoftheirmistakeinordertobeforgiven.雅思作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解讀6、7、8分段作文比較6分：思想基本清楚，語言基本準(zhǔn)確、通順、無大錯7分：思想比較清楚，語言比較準(zhǔn)確、通順、豐富8分：思想相當(dāng)清楚，語言相當(dāng)準(zhǔn)確、靈活9分：思想非常清楚，語言非常準(zhǔn)確、地道從6分段到7分段，要注意句式的豐富性（用點從句，用點if…,since…,though…引導(dǎo)的句子）從7分段到8分段，要注意思維邏輯的順暢，語言表達的靈活性（句式多樣，分詞短語，介詞短語，抽象名詞主語）從8分段到9分段，要注意思維的深刻性，語言表達的地道性。（帶有一定哲理性，讀起來是真正的英語）高分作文分析Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:

Countriesarebecomingmoreandmoresimilarbecausepeopleareabletobuythesameproductsanywhereintheworld.

Doyouthinkthisisapositiveornegativedevelopment?Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.Writeatleast250words.高分作文分析-節(jié)奏5個段落290wordsPara.1:2sentences,43words,14%Para.2:3sentences,96words,32%Para.3:3sentences,66words,22%Para.4:2sentences,59words,20%Para.5:1sentence,36words,12%11sentencesinall,27.3words/sentence;53wordsinthelongestsentence;8wordsintheshortest.首位段1/3;中間段2/3。高分作文分析-節(jié)奏28words–15words(Para.1)15words-53words–28words(Para.2)23words–35words–8words(Para.3)24words–35words(Para.4)36words(Para.5)長短句配合，把握節(jié)奏感段落首句用短句，論證句用長句，段落結(jié)論句（若有）用短句。高分作文分析-用詞Istronglybelievethatthismoderndevelopmentislargelydetrimentaltocultureandtraditionsworldwide.

(Para.1)Acountry’shistory,languageandethosareallinextricablyboundupinitsmanufacturedartifacts.(Para.2)Thiseventuallyputsold-schoolcraftspeopleoutofwork.(Para.3)Toseethesameproductsinshopstheworldoverisboring,anddoesnotimpelvisitorstoopentheirwalletsinthesamewaythattrinketsorsouvenirsuniquetotheparticularareado.(Para.4)高分作文分析-句型Thespreadofmultinationalproductscanoftenbringinitswakealossofjobs,aspeopleturntobuyingthenewbrand,perhapsthinkingitmoreglamorousthantheonetheyareusedto.（8-9分）

比較：Thespreadofmultinationalproductscanoftenmakepeoplelosetheirjob,becausepeoplewillbuythenewbrand,fortheythinkitis

morefashionablethanthelocalbrand.（7分）再比較：Moreandmoremultinationalproductscanoftenletpeoplewithoutjob,becausepeoplewillbuythenewbrand,theythinkthenewbrandisbetterthantheoldbrand.(5-6分）高分作文分析-句型Somemayarguethatallpeopleareentitledtohaveaccesstothesameproducts,butIsaythatlocalobjectssuitlocalconditionsbest,andthatfacelessuniformityworldwideisanunwelcomeanddrearyprospect.（8-9）比較：Somepeoplemaysay/claimthatallpeopleshouldbeallowedtousethesameproducts,butIsaythatlocalobjectsarebetter,andthatitisnotaverygoodpicturetoseetheworldhasthesameface.(6-7)再比較：Somepeoplemaysaythatweallshouldusethesameproducts,butIthinkthelocalthingsarebetter,Idon’tliketoseetheworldhasthesameface.(5)高分作文分析-句型Toseethesameproductsinshopstheworldoverisboring,anddoesnotimpelvisitorstoopentheirwalletsinthesamewaythattrinketsorsouvenirsuniquetotheparticularareado.(8-9分）比較：Itisboringifweseethesameproductsinshopseverywhereintheworld,andwewillnotbuythem,butwhenweseethelocalproducts,wemayopenourwallets.(6分）再比較：Itisboringtoseethesameproductseverywhereintheworld,youwon’tbuythem,butwhenweseethelocalthings,wemaybuyit.(5分）高分作文分析-句型…thenumberofcarsthatareexportedfromanothercountryshoulddecreaseandthepricesofcarshouldincreaseincasetheyareovercrowded.(5)比較：…thenumberofcarsimportedfromothercountriesshouldbecontrolledwhilethepriceofcarsshouldbeincreasedtopreventpeoplefrombuyingthem.(6)再比較：…whiletheimportationofforeigncarsshouldbediscouraged,thepriceofthedomesticcarsshouldbeincreasedtoupsetthepotentialbuyers.(8)高分作文分析-句型Iftheyusedthebusandtraininsteadoftheircar,theproblemwouldresolvealittle.(5)

比較：Iftheychoosetotravelwiththebusandthetraininsteadoftheircar,thetrafficproblemwillbecomelesssevere.(6)

再比較：Ifthepublicmeansoftransportationsuchasthebusandthetrain,ratherthantheirowncar,becometheirprimarychoice,thetrafficproblemwillbeeffectivelyalleviated.(8)高分作文分析-思維發(fā)展共5段。第一段點題，并提出自己觀點：國家趨同現(xiàn)象不好；第二到四段分別從三個方面論述自己觀點（第二段認(rèn)為，國家趨同會喪失多元性和豐富性；第三段認(rèn)為產(chǎn)品的國際化可能讓本地工人失業(yè)；第三段認(rèn)為，產(chǎn)品趨同會降低游客購買當(dāng)?shù)丶o(jì)念品的欲望，從而影響旅游業(yè)），第五段重述自己的觀點。因此，從文章結(jié)構(gòu)上講，本范文非常完整。老雅認(rèn)為，唯一不足的是，作者顯然沒有考慮第2-4段中三個理由之間的邏輯先后順序。其實，應(yīng)該先從employment談起，再談tourism，最后談culturaldiversityandrichness，這個順序由淺入深，更為符合邏輯發(fā)展基本順序。雅思作文-從7分到8分Youshouldspendabout40minutesonthistask.Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.Writeatleast250words.

Somepeoplethinkthatalluniversitystudentsshouldstudywhatevertheylike.Othersbelievethattheyshouldonlybeallowedtostudysubjectsthatwillbeusefulinthefuture,suchasthoserelatedtoscienceandtechnology.

Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.原文的問題分析結(jié)構(gòu)不合理，引入話題太長（170/414，41%）句型死板(21sentences,414words)…itislikelythattheyhavecometoaparadiseofknowledgeaswellasfreedom.…itistheirturntochoosewhattheywouldliketostudy.…itismorelikelyforustoinsistonitandmakeagreatachievementinthefuture.…itcanbereallydifficultforhimtocometothepeakofhiscareer.…itisbetterforustolearnwhatwearereallyinterestedin…原文的問題分析句式控制不嚴(yán)密，不靈活：用了when,if,itis…,which…;但沒看見分詞短語，沒看到抽象名詞做主語；沒看到比較句型。用詞不考究，鮮能給考官留下深刻印象用了relieve,restrict,distinguish這個級別的詞匯，沒有看見生動的比喻或者修辭性詞匯。結(jié)尾延伸得太厲害，引入了新話題。對原文的評價能圍繞話題展開論述語言表達清楚，有較好的用英語句子和詞匯來表達自己的思想結(jié)構(gòu)不盡合理語言不夠靈活多變表達和思維不夠簡練，比較拖沓表達地道程度不夠創(chuàng)造性使用語言的能力不夠Band:7Whenstudentsarerelievedfromtheheavyburdenofendlesshomeworkinseniorhighschoolsandgetenrolledinuniversities,itislikelythattheyhavecometoaparadiseofknowledgeaswellasfreedom.Allinall,itistheirturntochoosewhattheywouldliketostudy.唐老雅修改：Relievedfromtheoverloadedburdenofhomeworkinseniorhighschool,manystudentsgointocollegeonlytofindthattheyhaveplungedintotheseaofknowledgeandwithoutanybodytellingthemwheretoswim.However,somepeoplemaystarttoworryaboutuniversitystudents’freechoices——howcouldtheychoosewhattheyshouldstudyinthenextfouryearsatsuchayoungage?Howcouldtheyknowwhichsubjectisusefulandwhichisuseless?Whatiftheystudysometotallymeaninglesssubjectsandidletheirvaluabletimeaway?唐老雅修改：Somepeoplearefilledwithmisgivingsaboutuniversitystudents’freechoices:howcouldtheypossiblytell,atsuchayoungage,whichsubjectismoreusefulthanothersandchooseitastheirfocusofstudyinthenextfouryearswhichareprobablythemostvaluabletimeintheirentirelife?

Frommyperspective,thesepeopleseemtobetooconsideratetohavealong-termprogrammeforyoungstudents’development.Inmyopinion,choosingsubjectsbythemselvescanbemorehelpfulforindividualstudentsaswellasthewholesociety.Thatistosay,parents,universityandsocietyshouldencouragestudentstostudywhattheylike,insteadofrestrictingthemtocertainpracticalsubjects.唐老雅修改：Inmyview,however,suchconsiderationsseemrathersuperfluous,forchoosingasubjectbystudentsthemselvesisbeneficialbothtothestudentsandthewholesocietyaswell.Firstly,interestisthebestteacherinourlife.Whenwehavepassiononwhatwearedoing,itismorelikelyforustoinsistonitandmakeagreatachievementinthefuture.唐老雅修改Firstly,asthesayingaptlyexpresses,“interestisthebestteacher”,whichmeansonlywhenwehavepassionforsomethingcanwedoitbetter.Forexample,agoodteachermustlovehisstudentsandkeephisstudents’interestinmind;aprofessionaldoctorneedstobehumaneandsympathetictowardshispatients;atoppianistshouldbecrazyabouthiscomposition,tonamejustfew.Onthecontrary,ifapersonisnotfascinatedaboutwhatheisstudying,itcanbereallydifficultforhimtocometothepeakofhiscareer.唐老雅修改Agoodteachermustloveteachingandkeepthestudents’interestinmind,andaphysicianmustlovelife-savingbeforehecanbehumaneandsympathetictowardshispatients,whileapianistshouldbecrazyaboutplayingandthenbecomeatop-notchartist.Contrarily,apersonnotfascinatedbywhatheisdoingismuchlesslikelytogetanywhereinhiscareer.Secondly,thedifferencesbetweenusefulnessanduselessnessarehardtodistinguish,tosomeextend.唐老雅修改Secondly,theboundarybetween“useful”and“useless”subjectsisnotthatclear-cutassomepeoplemighthaveexpected.Scienceandtechnologyarecertainlyofgreatimportanceinthedevelopmentofoursociety,butothersubjectsrelatingtophilosophyandliteraturecanalsobepriceless,whichmaynotmakealargeprofitdirectly,butmayupdateourculturefromalongperspective.Sowecannotjustsimplysaywhichsubjectisusefulandwhichisuseless.Aslongasweputourheartintowhatwearestudying,wecanmakeituseful.唐老雅修改：Undoubtedly,scienceandtechnologyisofparamountimportancetothedevelopmentofourworld,butitdoesnotfollowthatotherlesspracticalsubjectslike