2025屆高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫微技能之無靈主語

讀后續(xù)寫微技能InanimateSubjectinContinuationWriting

（無“靈”主語句

寫“情”最細(xì)膩)/?n??n?m?t/LearningObjectives(學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)):1.KnowandmastetheusageofInanimateSubjects.2.UnderstandandbeawareofthedifferencesbetweenChineseandEnglishexpressiononfeeling.3.Beabletojudge,appreciateandapplyInanimateSubjectstowriting.Step1.Appreciatethecontinuationwriting.

(找出含有無靈主語的句子)

EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.Embarrassed,Jennydidn’tsayanything.Deadsilencesuddenlyfell.Thencame

MissWalker’svoice.

“WhyisLee’sonyourwrist?”Jennyhesitatedforawhileanddecidedtotelleveryoneaboutthetruth.However,thinkingofthewell-preparedspeech，themagicofthewatch,shechangedhermind.“ButMissWalker,couldIgivethespeechfirstandthenexplain?”Shemadearequestinatoneofbegging.Atthat,MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny’sspeechfirst.Jennymadeherwaytotheplatformwithevery

confidence.

Wordsbegantofloodout

ofher.

“Howcouldshemakeit?We’veneverseenJennygivesoterrific(極好的)aspeech.”Whisperswentaroundtheclassroom,andevenMissWalkernoddedwithapproval.ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,

astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.

Relieved,Jennytoldeveryonethetruth,andespeciallythemagicofthewatch.“Butit’sjustanordinarywatchwithnomagic”,Leeannounced.

無靈主語句，指用___________________，用人或社會團(tuán)體的行為或動(dòng)作做謂語，因此這類句子常帶有擬人化的修辭色彩，把沒有生命的東西，賦予生命力，從而增加了主語的多樣性，使語言更加生動(dòng)化。1.她傷心地哭了。_________________________(無靈主語句)____________________________Shecriedsadly.Asadnesscameoverher.她傷心不已。同樣是表達(dá)“她哭了”，比起普通句式中的常見句子，無靈主語句中這種“悲傷抓住了她”的擬人化表達(dá)，瞬間提升了高級感！WhatisInanimate/?n??n?m?t/Subject?無生命的事物做主語Step1.Compare&Appreciate1.Ifelthappy.2.Shelostcourage.

她失去勇氣。3.Therewasabrightsmile

onhisface.4.SuddenlyIhadagood

idea.5.Therewasthickfoginthe

field.6.Chinawasestablishedin

1949.1.Asenseofhappiness

welledupinme.2.Couragedeserted/her.3.Abrightsmile

litup

hisface.4.Agoodideasuddenly

occurredtome5.Thethickfogblankedthefield.6.TheYear1949witnessedtheestablishmentofChina.emotionemotionexpressionactionweathertime無靈主語句的結(jié)構(gòu)：________________________________1.

情感(emotion)類名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞+其他

feelingandemtionasthennanimatesubject無靈主語+有靈動(dòng)詞+其他2.

表情(expression)類名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞+其他3.

行為(behavior)或動(dòng)作(action)類名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞+其他4.

自然現(xiàn)象(fog,snow,night)類名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞+其他5.

時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)(time/place)類名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞+其他無“靈”主語句,寫“情”最細(xì)膩句式1：Aburst/wave/flood/surge/rush/ripple/sense/feelingof+情感名詞+defeat(擊垮)/fail(使失望，有負(fù)于)seize/takeholdof(抓住)/sweepover/floodover/washover(襲來；席卷)/getcontrolof/creepon(慢慢產(chǎn)生)/engulf/swallow(吞噬)sb.表“某人感到……”或“一陣/一種……向某人襲來”在讀后續(xù)寫中寫到人物的情緒或心理時(shí)，不要總是使用sbfeel......嘗試使用無靈主語句。1.Hefeltnervous.Awaveofnervousnesswashedoverhim.(無靈主語句)一陣緊張的情緒涌上他的心頭。常見的表情感(emotion)狀態(tài)的名詞：1.幸?？鞓穇_______________________________；2.激動(dòng)興奮________________________________；3.吃驚驚訝________________________________；4.渴望滿足________________________________；5.恐懼驚恐________________________________；6.焦慮緊張________________________________；7.感動(dòng)感激________________________________;8.寬慰溫暖________________________________;9.尷尬羞愧________________________________；10.后悔內(nèi)疚________________________________；11.悲傷孤獨(dú)________________________________；12.生氣憤怒________________________________；delight,enjoyment,happiness,joy,pleasureexcitement，thrillamazement,astonishment,shock,surpriseeagerness,satisfaction,contentmentfear,fright,horror,terror,scareanxiety,nervousness,tension,worry,concernappreciation,gratitude(asurgeof)relief,relaxation,warmthawkardness,embarrassment,shameregret,(afeelingof)guilt(asenseof)sadness,sorrow,grief,lonelines

anger,annoyance,rage，fury,irritation13.失望絕望_______________________________；14.好奇困惑_______________________________；15.驕傲自信_______________________________;16.慷慨熱情_______________________________;17.同情仁慈_______________________________;18.嫉妒羨慕_______________________________.disappointment,

depression,despairation,frustration,hopelessness

generosity;passion,enthusiasm;jealousy,envy;admirationsympathy;kindnesspride;confidencecuriosity;confusion,puzzlement當(dāng)主語是情感類名詞時(shí)，常用于該句式的謂語有靈動(dòng)詞(短語)有:人常被情感掌控，受其制約。情感似人“手”,seize(抓住);takeholdof(抓住;攫住);grasp/grip(緊抓);tear...intopieces(把……撕成碎片)；被情感對手擊敗，getthebetterof/defeat(擊垮);comeoversb.(影響,支配)；情感似動(dòng)物，悄無聲息來到身邊，sweep/flood/rushover(席卷，襲來);washover(洗滌，侵襲);creepupon/on(不知不覺產(chǎn)生，襲來);swallow(吞噬;淹沒);fail(使失望;有負(fù)于);choke(噎住，堵住);escape(被忘掉;被忽視);desert(丟棄，遺棄);choke(使哽咽);runthrough/passthrough(掠過),givewayto(被.....代替)等。在續(xù)寫中寫到人物的情緒或心理時(shí)，使用無靈主語句，句子瞬間得到升華。1.Anger

chokedmywords.我氣得說不出話來。(某種情緒+chokemywords)2.Confidence

deserted/escaped/failedhim.他失去了自信。3.Wefeltveryhappyyesterday.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4._________________________________floodedoverhim.一種輕松感涌上心頭。Afeelingofhappinessseized/

tookholdofusyesterday.

Asenseofpleasure

welledupin

usyesterday.Awaveofjoystruck/hit/floodedover/sweptoverusyesterday.Aburstofdelight

ran/passedthrough

ourfacesyesterday.

Agreatsenseofrelief5.當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎(jiǎng)時(shí)，她興奮極了。Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,____________________________________________her.6.當(dāng)我在等待結(jié)果時(shí)，我緊張極了。____________________________________________whenIwaswaitingfortheresult.________________________________________________________whenIwaswaitingfortheresult.7.媽媽感到既自豪又溫暖。Motherfelt_______________________________________________________________.(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)8.母親想控制她的感情，但流下了晶瑩的淚水。Themothertriedtohideheremotion,but_______________________________________________.(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)awildexcitementtookholdof

NervousnesstookholdofmeAwaveofnervousnesswashedovermeawaveofprideandwarmthsweep

overhertheglitteringtearsfailedherPractice:用無靈主語表達(dá)以下情緒。1.我很高興。2.我很傷心。3.我很害怕。4.我很絕望。5.我很焦慮。

Asenseofjoyandhappinessswept/floodedoverme.

Awaveofsadnesswelledupinme.Alook/flood/burstofhorror/fearwelledupin/sweptover/swallowed/overwhelmedme.Afeelingofdeapirseized/swallowed/overwhelmedme.Afloodoftension/nervousnesswelledupin/sweptoverme.句式2:主語是表示_________________________________”的名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞(短語)用于該句型的名詞(作無靈主語)有:face臉,eye眼,heart心,hand手,finger手指,laughter笑聲,smile微笑,tears眼淚,voice聲音,words話等。用于該句型的有靈動(dòng)詞(短語)有:brighten/lightup(照亮,煥發(fā));flash/twinkle(閃爍,閃現(xiàn));wellupin(涌出,涌現(xiàn));spreadacross/flashacross(浮現(xiàn),露出);befill...with...(充滿);flash(閃爍)；cloudover顯得陰沉(恐懼、憤怒、憂愁);crumple(弄皺);linger(縈繞,繼續(xù)存留);echo(回蕩)等。(恐懼、憤怒、憂愁);crumple(弄皺);linger(縈繞,繼續(xù)存留);echo(回蕩)等。身體部位/“音、容、笑、貌1.Herface

litup/brightenedwhenIgaveherthepresent.我給她送禮物時(shí)，她的臉上煥發(fā)出了光彩。2.Laughter

lingeredaroundtheroom.笑聲在房間里縈繞。3.______________________________________wasabsenttoday.(2022新高考I卷)今天他那大大的笑容不見了。4.語言無法表達(dá)我的高興心情。________________toexpressmyhappiness.5.老師的鼓勵(lì)溫暖了他她的心，她感到一陣興奮。__________________________________________________herheart.Shefelt_____________________________________________________.HisusualbigtoothysmileWordsfailTheteacher’sencouragementwarmedawaveofexcitementsweepover

her

comeover

6.他一看到熟悉的字跡，便熱淚盈眶。Themomenthesawthefamiliarhandwriting,___________________________________.7.當(dāng)我開始大聲鼓勵(lì)時(shí),我周圍的其他人也喊起來“加油,大衛(wèi),你能做到的!”(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)AsIstartedtoshoutencouragement,___________________________________________________________.“ComeonDavid,youcandoit!”(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)tearswelledupinhiseyesothervoicesaroundmetookupthecall8.考試前，Tom感到非常焦慮、緊張。①Beforetheexam,________________________________________

__________.Hecouldfeelhispalmssweating,heart

poundingwildlyinhischest.②Beforetheexam,_______________________________________

__________.Hefeltthathisheartalmostleapedfrom

hisbody.

afloodofnervousnesswelledupinTomnervousness/tensiontookholdofTom句式3:表________________________+有靈動(dòng)詞常用于該句型的名詞(作無靈主語)有：表行為或動(dòng)作的名詞有thought/idea(想法);sight(看到的情景，景象);visit(拜訪);glance/look(看到);taste(味道),smell(味道),feeling(感受);sense(場景);arrival;walk等。常用于該句型有靈動(dòng)詞(謂語)有：occurto/strike/hit(突然想到);arouse(喚起);stun(使震驚，給人深刻印象);bring(帶來);change(改變);remind(想起);make(使變得),leave(留下),drive(驅(qū)使)等。行為或動(dòng)作的名詞句式3:表______________________________________的名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞

1.Thesightofthescene

filledmewithhorror.

想到這個(gè)情景我心中充滿了恐懼。2.Atenminutes’walk

broughtustothehotel.

我們步行十分鐘就到了旅館。行為(behavior)或動(dòng)作(action)3.我突然想到一個(gè)好主意。Asplendidideasuddenly________________me.Asplendidideasuddenly________________me.Asplendidideasuddenly___________________mymind.Asplendididea

suddenly___________________mymind.Asplendidideasuddenly___________________mymind.Asplendidideasuddenly___________________mymind.struck/hitoccurredtofalshedintocrowdedintojumpedintocameacross4.他們突然想到他們可以給媽媽做早餐慶祝母親節(jié)。

(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)_________________________________________________

theycouldmakebreakfastforMothertocelebrateMother’sDay.5.我突然想到我應(yīng)該有自己的錢,并計(jì)劃如何使用它。(2021·浙江高考)

____________________________________Ishouldhavemyownmoneyandplannedhowtospendit.Ithit/struck/occurredto/dawnedonthemthatIwasstruck/hitbythethoughtthatidea,thought...+hit/struck/occurredto+sb.該句式也可用it作為形式主語:Itsuddenlyhit/struck/occurredto/dawnedonsb.that從句,其中that從句是真正的主語6.一看到這張照片我就想起了難忘的杭州之旅。_________________________________________________meoftheunforgettabletriptoHangzhou.7.想到不久就去看望他奶奶，他心中感到十分快樂。_____________________visitinghisgrandmotherverysoon____________________________________________________.ThesightofthepictureremindsThethoughtoffilledhisheartwithgreathappiness

看到/想到......,某人就感到(某種情緒)Thesightofsthfillone’sheartwith+情緒情緒+sweepoversb+atthesightofsth.Thesightofsth+makessb.+情緒Thethoughtofgoingabroadforfurtherstudymakeshimexcited.

8.早餐香甜的味道喚醒了媽媽,一股幸福的暖流涌上她的心頭。(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)___________________________________________________________

themother,whofeltawarmwaveofhappinesswellingupinherheart.Theinvitingsmellofthebreakfastawoke句式4表____________________________等的名詞+有靈動(dòng)詞用于該句型的名詞(作無靈主語)有：fog/mist(霧),sun(太陽),sunshine(陽光),moon(月亮),moonlight(月光),rain(雨),snow(雪)