2024屆高三英語復(fù)習(xí)-道歉信 (應(yīng)用文寫作)答案

道歉信

1.Q023?湖南?高三湖南師大附中階段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，你的外教老師David與你約定每周六晚上一

次口語課，但是你身體有不適的癥狀，按照規(guī)定要居家隔離，因此，請(qǐng)你給David寫一封道歉信，

內(nèi)容包括：

1.表達(dá)歉意；

2.說明理由；

3.提出補(bǔ)救方案。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

【答案】

DearDavid,

I'mindeedsorrytotellyouthatIwon'tbeabletoattendtheoralclassthisSaturdayasscheduled.

Recently,I'mnotfeelingwellandrequiredtostayathomeaccordingtotherules.However,Iamveryfondof

yourclassesandwouldliketomakeupforthelostlessons.SoI'mwonderingwhetherit'spossibleforthelessonto

berecordedandifso,Imayhavethechancetolearnandreviewthroughthevideo.

Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletounderstandmysituationand

acceptmyapology.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外教老師David寫一封道歉信，因自己身體不適需要居家

隔離而不能按照原定計(jì)劃上口語課進(jìn)行道歉，并提出補(bǔ)救方案。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

確實(shí)、非常：indeed-tenibly

喜歡：befondoJbekeenon

彌補(bǔ)：makeupfbr-compensatefbr

機(jī)會(huì)：chancel-opportunity

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：However,Iamveryfondofyourclassesandwouldliketomakeupforthelostlessons.SoI'mwondering

whetherifspossibleforthelessontoberecordedandifso,Imayhavethechancetolearnandreviewthroughthe

video.

拓展句：However,becauseIamveryfondofyourclassesandwouldliketomakeupforthelostlessons,I'm

wonderingwhetherit'spossibleforthelessontoberecordedandifso,Imayhavethechancetolearnandreview

throughthevideo.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型11I'mindeedsorrytotellyouthatIwon'tbeabletoattendtheoralclassthisSaturdayas

scheduled.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

【高分句型2]SoI'mwonderingwhetherit'spossiblefbrthelessontoberecordedandifso,Imayhavethe

chancetolearnandreviewthroughthevideo.（運(yùn)用了whether引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和ifso結(jié)構(gòu)的省略句）

2.Q023?全國?高三專題練習(xí)）假如你是李華，你和你的外籍好友Andrew約好了本周末去圖書館，但是你

因?yàn)榕R時(shí)要參加學(xué)校組織的“垃圾分類，全民行動(dòng)”志愿活動(dòng)而不能赴約。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一份道歉信。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

1.表達(dá)歉意；2.簡要介紹活動(dòng)內(nèi)容和意義；3.另約時(shí)間。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案】

DearAndrew,

Ihavesignedupforavoluntaryactivitythemed“TrashSorting,AllInvolved^^andwon'tbeableto

accompanyyoutothelibrarythisweekendasplanned.Ifeelterriblysorryandwanttoexpressmydeepest

apology.

Asyouknow,westudentsshouldsparenoeffortsinimplementingthepolicyofgarbageclassification.So,I

seizedthisopportunitywithouthesitation.Onthatday,wewillgotocommunitiestopublicizethesignificanceas

wellasmethodsoftrashsortinganddirecttheresidentstoaccuratelydistinguishdifferentkindsofrubbish,which

willtakeawholeday.Consideringthat,I'mafraidIcan'tkeepmyword.ShallweputitofftillnextSunday?

Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecausedandhopeyoucanacceptmyheartfeltapology.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本文是道歉信。因參加學(xué)校組織的志愿者活動(dòng)，而不能與好朋友Andrew周末一起去圖書館，要求

考生為些給Andrew寫一封道歉信。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

計(jì)劃：plan一schedule

表達(dá)：express^-covey

真誠地：heartfelt—?sincere

希望：hope—expect

2.句式拓展

句式升級(jí)

原句：Ihavesignedupforavoluntaryactivitythemed"TrashSorting,AllInvolved,,andwon'tbeableto

accompanyyoutothelibrarythisweekendasplanned.

拓展句：Ihavesignedupforavoluntaryactivitywhichisthemed“TrashSorting,AllInvolved^^andwon'tbeable

toaccompanyyoutothelibrarythisweekendasplanned.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecausedandhopeyoucanacceptmyheartfeltapology.（運(yùn)用

了過去分詞作后置定語和省略連詞的賓語從句）

[高分句型2]Onthatday,wewillgotocommunitiestopublicizethesignificanceaswellasmethodsoftrash

sortinganddirecttheresidentstoaccuratelydistinguishdifferentkindsofrubbish,whichwilltakeawholeday.（運(yùn)

用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

3.0022?廣東東莞?高三?？茧A段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，你的朋友Sarah曾邀請(qǐng)你參加她下個(gè)星期四的生日

晚會(huì)，可是弟弟生病了，需要人照看，不能去參加。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一封道歉信。

1.表達(dá)歉意；

2.解釋原因；

3.提出彌補(bǔ)的辦法。

注意：

L詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearSarah,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearSarah,

FmindeedverysorrythatIwon'tattendtoyourbirthdaypartyasIwasplannedbefore.

Asforthesuddenchange,Ihavetoadmitithasanunavoidablereason.Mylittlebrotherarebeingsickfordays.

Soitisnecessaryforhimtobecared.Iamresponsibleforlookingafterhimwhilemyparentsareworking.

Therefore,Ihavetostaytoaccompanyhimthatday.Ihopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandforgivemy

absence.

Isitpossibleforyouandmetohaveaprivatemeeingatthisweekend?Idolongforapleasantchatwithyou

andgivethepresenttoyou.

ItismuchtomyregretthatImissthechanceofsuchahappyget-toghther.Onceagain,pleaseacceptemy

secereapology.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生向朋友Sarah寫一封道歉信。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

出席，參加：attendtakepartin

承認(rèn)：admit一concede

原因：reason—cause

必需的：necessary一essential

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Idolongforapleasantchatwithyouandgivethepresenttoyou.

拓展句：Idolongforapleasantchatwithyouandgivethepresenttoyou,whichstandsformybestwishtoyou.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]

Asforthesuddenchange,Ihavetoadmitithasanunavoidablereason.（運(yùn)用了省略that的賓語從句）

【高分句型2]

ItismuchtomyregretthatImissthechanceofsuchahappyget-toghther.（運(yùn)用了it作形式主語）

4.（2023?廣西?統(tǒng)考模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，你和你的朋友Mike約好了本周六去博物館，但是由于你臨

時(shí)要參加“美麗市容，從我做起”（BeautifUlcity,Startfromme）的志愿者活動(dòng)而不能與其同行。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要

點(diǎn)給他寫一封道歉信。

1.表達(dá)歉意；

2.簡介志愿者活動(dòng)；

3.另約時(shí)間。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearMike,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearMike,

Havingsignedupfbravoluntaryactivity,Fmterriblysorryfornotbeingabletotourthemuseumwithyou

thisSaturday.Therefore,Vwritingtoexpressmysincereapologyfortheinconveniencecausedallofsudden.

Asyouknow,Tvebeenwaitingforachancetodevotemyselftoraisingpublicawarenessofenvironmental

protection.Consequently,whentheopportunitytovolunteercame,Iseizeditwithouthesitation.Onthatday,all

thevolunteerswillputuppostersabouthowtoleadalow-carbonlifestyleandpickupthetrashalongtheroads,

whichwilltakeawholeday.Consideringthat,IamafraidthatIwon'tkeepmyword.Itispossibleforustofixed

anotherdatewhenyouareavailable.

WordsfailtoconveyhowapologeticIfeelandIhopethatyoucanacceptmyheartfeltandgenuine

apology.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給朋友Mike寫信，告訴他你因參加“美麗市容，從我做起”志

愿者活動(dòng)而不能按時(shí)和他同去博物館而表達(dá)歉意，并另行約定去博物館的時(shí)間。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

非常：terribly-awfully

突然：allofasudden-suddenly

機(jī)會(huì)：opportunity一chance

安排：fix—?arrange

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Havingsignedupfbravoluntaryactivity,Fmterriblysorryfornotbeingabletotourthemuseumwithyou

thisSaturday.

拓展句：I'mterriblysorryfbrnotbeingabletotourthemuseumwithyouthisSaturdaybecauseIhavesignedup

fbravoluntaryactivity.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型11Havingsignedupforavoluntaryactivity,Tmterriblysorryfornotbeingabletotourthe

museumwithyouthisSaturday.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）

（高分句型2]WordsfailtoconveyhowapologeticIfeelandIhopethatyoucanacceptmyheartfeltandgenuine

apology.（運(yùn)用了how引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

5.⑵）23金國?高三專題練習(xí)）假定你是李華，寒假中作為交流生短期去英國培訓(xùn)，回國時(shí)因?yàn)榇颐Γ逊?/p>

東Bob的音樂光盤夾在行李中帶了回來?，F(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你給Bob寫一封道歉信，要點(diǎn)如下：

1,對(duì)自己帶走音樂光盤表示歉意；

2.提出解決的辦法；

3.再次請(qǐng)求原諒。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

DearBob,

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】

DearBob,

Iamwritingtomakeanapologytoyou,forIforgottoreturnamusicCDwhichIborrowedfromyoulast

week.YesterdayIcamebackfromEnglandandfounditinmyluggage.Iamsosorrythatyoucannotlistentoitat

present.

TheCDwhichIborrowedfromyouismadeinEngland,soIbelieveyoucanfindanotheroneinyourlocal

store.HowaboutyourbuyinganotherCDbyyourselfandIwillpayforit?Ifyoucannotfindasimilarone,I

wouldsenditbacktoyouthroughapostoffice.Andifthereareanyothersolutionsyoulike,pleaseletmeknow.

Iamterriblysorryagainformycarelessness.Pleaseforgivemeforanyinconveniencecaused.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，就將房東Bob的光盤帶走一事寫一封道歉信。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

相信：believe—?ensure

購買：buy—purchase

發(fā)現(xiàn)：find—^pot

解決辦法：solution-settlement

2.句式拓展

同義句改寫

原句：Iamsosorrythatyoucannotlistentoitatpresent.

拓展句：SosorryamIthatyoucannotlistentoitatpresent.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Iamwritingtomakeanapologytoyou,forIforgottoreturnamusicCDwhichIborrowed

fromyoulastweek.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]TheCDwhichIborrowedfromyouismadeinEngland,soIbelieveyoucanfindanotheroneinyour

localstore.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句）

6.0023?全國?高三專題練習(xí)）假如你是李華，你和你的朋友Mike約好了本周末去博物館，但是你因?yàn)榕R

時(shí)要參加學(xué)校組織的“美麗市容，從我做起”的志愿活動(dòng)，而不能同行。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一封道歉信。

1.表達(dá)歉意；2.簡介活動(dòng)內(nèi)容和意義；3.另約時(shí)間。

注意：字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右

【答案】

DearMike,

Havingsignedupforavoluntaryactivity,I'mterriblysorryfornotbeingabletotourthemuseumwithyou

thisSaturday.Therefore,Vwritingtoexpressmysincereapologyfortheinconveniencecausedallofsudden.

Asyouknow,I'vebeenwaitingforachancetodevotemyselftoraisingpublicawarenessofenvironmental

protection.Consequently,whentheopportunitytovolunteercame,Iseizeditwithouthesitation.Onthatday,all

thevolunteerswillputuppostersabouthowtoleadalow-carbonlifestyleandpickupthetrashalongtheroads,

whichwilltakeawholeday.Consideringthat,IamafraidthatIwon'tkeepmyword.Itispossibleforustofixed

anotherdatewhenyouareavailable.

WordsfailtoconveyhowapologeticIfeelandIhopethatyoucanacceptmyheartfeltandgenuineapology.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假如你是李華，你和你的朋友Mike約好了本周末去博物館，但是你因

為臨時(shí)要參加學(xué)校組織的“美麗市容，從我做起”的志愿活動(dòng)，而不能同行。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一封道歉

信。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

參觀：visit—tour

非常：awfiilly—terribly

提高：promote—raise

機(jī)會(huì)：opportunity^chance

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Havingsignedupforavoluntaryactivity,I'mterriblysorryfornotbeingabletotourthemuseumwithyou

thisSaturday.

拓展句：I'mterriblysorryfornotbeingabletotourthemuseumwithyouthisSaturdaybecauseIhavesignedup

foravoluntaryactivity.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Havingsignedupforavoluntaryactivity,I'mterriblysorryfornotbeingabletotourthe

museumwithyouthisSaturday.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）

[高分句型2]WordsfailtoconveyhowapologeticIfeelandIhopethatyoucanacceptmyheartfeltandgenuine

apology.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句）

7.Q023?江蘇揚(yáng)州?高三統(tǒng)考階段練習(xí)）假如你是李華，與朋友Smith約好了本周末去高郵市博物館，因故

不能赴約，請(qǐng)給他寫封道歉信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表2K歉意；

2.說明原因;

3.另約時(shí)間。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearSmith,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearSmith,

I'mwritingtosincerelyapologizefornotbeingabletoaccompanyyoutoGaoyouMuseumthisweekend.

Myheadmasterinformedmethatwewouldparticipateinavoluntaryactivitytohelpcreateacivilizedcity,

whichissoimportantthatIdon'twanttomissit.ThatisthereasonwhyIwon'tbeavailableatthattime.Ififs

convenientforyou,wecanmakeitnextweekend,orletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.

Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假如你是李華，與朋友Smith約好了本周末去高郵市博物館，因故不能

赴約，請(qǐng)給他寫封道歉信。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

道歉：apologizefbr-makeanapologyfor

參加：participatein一takepartin

重要的：important-vital

真誠地：sincerely一genuinely

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：I'mwritingtosincerelyapologizefornotbeingabletoaccompanyyoutoGaoyouMuseumthisweekend.

拓展句：I'mwritingtosincerelyapologizebecauseIwon'tbeabletoaccompanyyoutoGaoyouMuseumthis

weekend.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]I'mwritingtosincerelyapologizefornotbeingabletoaccompanyyoutoGaoyouMuseum

thisweekend.（運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作賓語）

[高分句型2]Myheadmasterinformedmethatwewouldparticipateinavoluntaryactivitytohelpcreatea

civilizedcity,whichissoimportantthatIdon'twanttomissit.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）

8.0023遼寧大連?大連八中?？迹┘俣闶歉咧猩钊A，因未來職業(yè)選擇問題與爸爸意見不同而引發(fā)矛盾。

倆人因此發(fā)生爭(zhēng)吵。請(qǐng)你給爸爸寫一封道歉信。內(nèi)容包括：

1.誠懇表示道歉

2.解釋你選擇的理由（可堅(jiān)持己見或三思后接受爸爸的建議）

3.表達(dá)對(duì)爸爸的理解、感激和對(duì)未來的期許

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Dearfather,

Love,

LiHua

【答案】Sample1:

Dearfather,

Howareyoudoing?Iamwritingtoapologizetoyouformyrudeattitudelastnight.Ishouldn'thave

quarreledwithyouandIamnowfeelingverysorryforthat.

However,Istillwanttosticktomychoice,onlyfocusingonplayingmybandandwillhaveacareerinmusic.

Asyouknow,IwasbomwithsometalentformusicandIhavebeenlearningtoplaytheguitarsinceIwas6,

whichhasbroughtmemuchjoyandconfidence.Besides,manyyouthshavetakenupjobsinthemusicindustry

andearnedalivingbyentertainingpeopleaswell.WhatIwanttogainfrommycareeristhatitcanbothgivea

playtomytalentandbringjoytoothers.

Whatdoyouthinkofmyidea?Isn'titagreatwaytoexploitmypotential,bemyselfandlivemyownlife?

Love,

LiHua

Sample2:

Dearfather,

Howiseverythinggoing?Iamwritingtomakeanapologytoyouformybadmannersyesterdayevening.I

regretquarrelingwithyouaboutmychoiceofmajor.

Ihavethoughtalotaboutyoursuggestionsandnowrealizedthatyouradviceisreasonableandpractical.

Anyway,beingalawyerinthefutureasmyprofessionisarewardingjob,whichwillguaranteemeafinancially

stablelifesothatIcandomoreformyfamilyandthesociety.Meanwhile,playingabandinmysparetimecanbe

arelaxinghobbyandcontentmymentalneeds.Ifsreallyawin-winchoice.

Isincerelythankyouforyourconstructivesuggestionandguidanceatthecrucialmomentofmylife.

Love,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給爸爸寫一封道歉信，為因未來職業(yè)選擇問題與爸爸意見不

同而引發(fā)矛盾，發(fā)生爭(zhēng)吵的事情道歉。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

然而：however一nevertheless

選擇：choice-option

另外：besides^moreover

謀生：earnaliving一makealiving

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：However,Istillwanttosticktomychoice,onlyfocusingonplayingmybandandwillhaveacareerinmusic.

拓展句：However,Istillwanttosticktomychoice,whichistofbcusonplayingmybandandhaveacareerin

music.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Asyouknow,IwasbornwithsometalentformusicandIhavebeenlearningtoplaythe

guitarsinceIwas6,whichhasbroughtmemuchjoyandconfidence.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句和

as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]WhatIwanttogainfrommycareeristhatitcanbothgiveaplaytomytalentandbringjoytoothers.

（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的主語從句和that引導(dǎo)的表語從句）

9.Q022重慶?高三重慶八中?？茧A段練習(xí)）假定你是李華，作為芝加哥大學(xué)（ChicagoUniversity）的交換生

正在美國學(xué)習(xí)。今天早晨你騎車上學(xué)時(shí)不小心刮擦到了一輛停在路邊的汽車。由于著急上學(xué)，你無法在原

地等候車主。請(qǐng)用英語寫一張留言條，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表明身份；

2.簡述事情經(jīng)過；

3.道歉并表示愿意賠償；

4.聯(lián)系方式：Tel:5893677；E-mail:lihua@

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearSir/Madam,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearSir/Madam,

FmLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina,studyingatChicagoUniversity.I'msosorrythatmybike

scratchedyourcarwhenIwasridingtoschoolthismorning.

Iunderstanditwillcertainlyputyouinaverybadmood.IsincerelyapologizeforwhatIdidandpromiseI

willcoveralltherelevantcosts.Asschoolwillstartsoon,Ican'twaitonthesceneforyou.Pleasecontactmeat

5893671orlihua@.ManyapologiesagainforalltheinconvenienceI'vecausedyou!

Bestregards!

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文?？忌钊A今天早晨騎車上學(xué)時(shí)不小心刮擦到了一輛停在路邊的汽車。

由于著急上學(xué)，無法在原地等候車主。請(qǐng)李華用英語寫一張留言條。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

誠摯地：truly-sincerely

支付：pay—cover

聯(lián)系：touch一contact

開始：start—begin

2.句式拓展

陳述句變強(qiáng)調(diào)句

原句：Asschoolwillstartsoon,Ican'twaitonthesceneforyou.

拓展句：ItisasschoolwillstartsoonthatIcan,twaitonthesceneforyou.

[高分句型l]ManyapologiesagainforalltheinconvenienceI'vecausedyou!（運(yùn)用了省略that的定語從句）

[高分句型2]Asschoolwillstartsoon,Ican,twaitonthesceneforyou.（運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從