Unit5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame？-八年級(jí)英語下冊(cè)單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（人教版）（學(xué)生版）

Unit5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame?單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度敘述描寫談?wù)撨^去正在發(fā)生的事情本單元以＂談?wù)撨^去正在發(fā)生的事情＂為話題，講述了大事件發(fā)生時(shí)人們正在進(jìn)行的各種活動(dòng)。具體到書面表達(dá)中，要求同學(xué)們會(huì)對(duì)過去正在發(fā)生的事情進(jìn)行描述，在寫這類短文時(shí)，要運(yùn)用相應(yīng)的過去時(shí)態(tài)，如一般過去時(shí)或過去進(jìn)行時(shí)等。在寫作時(shí)要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：①明確中心思想，無論是看圖寫作，還是情景描寫，都要圍繞文章中心展開；②要注意記敘文的幾個(gè)要素，即把時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果等交代清楚；③要合理安排好寫作的順序；④敘述事件時(shí)語言簡(jiǎn)潔，把文章寫得生動(dòng)、詳實(shí)。①Ican't（事件）without（人物）。②IrememberclearlywhenI（事件），Ifelt（感想）。Myparents（做法）。TheytoldmethatandwhatIshoulddowas.IwastouchedandmadeupmymindTo（決心）.③Itis（人物）that.模板內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)①開篇點(diǎn)題②具體敘述事情③呼應(yīng)主題在寫記事文章的時(shí)候，我們可以分成以下三部分來寫:1事情的開端。交代時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)、人物和事情的起因等。在這部分的寫作中，不用詳細(xì)地展開，只需簡(jiǎn)單交代，并可使用“設(shè)置懸念”等寫作手法。2事情的經(jīng)過和高潮。詳細(xì)描寫事情是怎么開始，發(fā)展、并達(dá)到高潮的。這部分是文章的中心，所以一定要具體、詳細(xì)地描寫出事情發(fā)展全過程的細(xì)節(jié)，要盡量地真實(shí)、引人人勝。3.事情的結(jié)尾。這部分簡(jiǎn)單地進(jìn)行描寫就行，還可在這部分加上一些自己獲得的啟發(fā)和教訓(xùn)，但無須詳細(xì)展開，用一兩句話帶過就行。真題感知（2022·廣西桂林·統(tǒng)考中考真題）看圖作文：自從2021年黨中央頒布“雙減”政策以來，孩子們的課余生活變得豐富多彩了。請(qǐng)看下面這張照片，這是大明一家在公園里度周末時(shí)照的。假如你是照片中畫畫的男孩大明（Daming），請(qǐng)以“AHappyFamilyDay”為題，寫一篇英語短文，準(zhǔn)備在班里作文課上展示。寫作要求：1.短文要包含照片中的主要內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增加一些細(xì)節(jié)，寫成一篇連貫、通順的文章；2.文章80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名。參考詞匯：FamilymembersActivitiesgrandma,dad,mum,Daming,brother,sistertakepictures/photos照相paint/drawapicture畫畫sitonthegrassland坐在草地上drink/havetea喝茶rideabike騎自行車readabook看書playwith(toys/apet...)玩（玩具/寵物……）AHappyFamilyDayHi,everyone.I’mDaming.Ifeelhappybecausewehavelesshomeworknow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【單元寫作素材】◆開頭句①LastSunday,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.②Ihadaterribledaythedaybeforeyesterday.③YesterdaymorningIrodemybiketoschoolasusual.◆中間句①WhileIwasdoingmyhomework…②ButmyfatherwaswatchingfootballgamesonTV.③Hewasridingveryfastwhenacarcame.④Atthattime,Iwastakingashowerinthebathroom.⑤Justatthattime,acarstoppedandthedriverofferedtotakemetothetrainstation.⑥Iwaswaitingforthebuswhenitsuddenlyrainedheavily.◆結(jié)尾句①Whatahappyfamilywehad!②At5o’clockintheafternoon，werodebackhome.③Iwillrememberthisexperienceforever.④Iamalwaysreadytohelpotherslikethatdriverfromthenon.⑤Itwasreallyanunforgettableday.◆諺語積累1.Itneverrainsbutitpours.禍不單行。3.Withthenewdayesnewstrengthandnewthoughts.新的一天，萬象更新。必備詞匯1.敘事順序first,tobeginwith,firstofall,firstly首先secondly,then,besides,what'smore,inaddition,moreover然后atlast,lastbutnotleast,aboveall,allinall,tosumup,onthewhole,finally最后2時(shí)間描寫after.....之.后afterashort/longtime/period在一段很短/很長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間后afterwards后來;然后assoonas........fromthattimeon從那時(shí)起immediately立刻;立即lately最近;近來;不久前nowadays現(xiàn)在;如今recently最近shortly馬上;立刻sincethen從那時(shí)起when,while...的時(shí)候3.地點(diǎn)詞匯church教堂tower塔bridge橋station車站dormitory宿含supermarket超市shop商店hospital醫(yī)院theater劇院playground操場(chǎng)cinema電影院museum博物館4.動(dòng)作描寫gooutforapicnic去野餐haveaparty舉行聚會(huì)gocamping去露營(yíng)rideahorse騎馬Haveawalk散步flykites放風(fēng)箏takephotos拍照hurryt0..匆忙趕到...seeadoctor看醫(yī)生setoff出發(fā)watchthematch看比賽climbmountains爬山5.結(jié)尾詞匯thanksto多虧asaresult結(jié)果luckily幸運(yùn)地because/becauseof因?yàn)閍tlast/intheend最后必備句型1.介紹事情的開端(1)Oneday/Theotherday/Acoupleofdaysagowhilehew...he.一天/前幾天當(dāng)他正........(2)itwassnowing/rainingheavilyonMonday/Sundaymorningwhen...星期一1星期天早上，正在下著大雪/雨，....(3)AIIthroughmyjuniorhighschool,Icouldn'tforget..在我整個(gè)的初中生涯中，我不能忘記....(4)Lastweek,whenIwasonmywayhome,somethingterriblehappened.上個(gè)星期，當(dāng)我在回家路上的時(shí)候，一些糟糕的事情發(fā)生了(5)Theeventtookplace/happened/occurredintheearlymorning.那件事情發(fā)生在一大早。2.描寫事情的過程(1)Withouthesitation,Idecidedtogivehimahand.毫不猶豫，我決定幫助(2)ItwasmyfirsttimetoMountTai.那是我第一次去泰山。(3)Wespentmanyhourstalkinghappily我們愉快地交談了幾個(gè)小時(shí)。(4)Thelineofpeoplewasendless.人們排成的隊(duì)伍看不到盡頭。3.交代事情的結(jié)尾(1)rneverforgethedaywhenwevisitedthefarm.我將永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記我們參觀農(nóng)場(chǎng)的那一天。(2)Whatapleasanttrip!多么愉快的一次旅行啊!(3)Thiswillbeanunforgettableexperience.這將會(huì)是一次難忘的經(jīng)歷。(4)Ihaveneverseenaedylikethat.我從未看過那樣的喜劇。(5)1hadfunatthepartytonight.今晚我在聚會(huì)上玩得很愉快。【話題范文剖析】某英文報(bào)社正在舉辦以“AnUnforgettableExperience”為題的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示投稿，講述令你難忘的一次經(jīng)歷。提示：Whendidithappen？Wheredidithappen？Whatwereyoudoing？Whatweretheothersdoing？Whywasitunforgettable?要求：1．詞數(shù)：80左右；2．書寫工整，句式規(guī)范，條理清楚，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)使用正確。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________◆◆思路點(diǎn)撥◆◆范文欣賞AnUnforgettableExperienceOnOctober1st，2022，Iplannedtotakethebustothetrainstation.WhenIwaswaitingforthebusatthebusstop，itbegantorainsuddenly.Unluckily，Iforgottotakemyumbrella.Istoodintherain，withtherainbeatingheavilyagainstmybody.Justatthattime，acarstoppedandthedriverofferedtotakemetothetrainstation.IwassomovedthatI'llneverforgetthisexperience.Iamalwaysreadytohelpotherslikethatdriverfromthenon.（一）動(dòng)作類短語1.步行回家walkhome 2.去上班gotowork3.入睡fallasleep 4.下大雨rainheavily5.洗熱水澡takeahotshower 6.發(fā)出響聲gooff7.接pickup 8.逐漸變?nèi)鮠iedown9.確認(rèn)；確信makesure（二）時(shí)間類短語1.當(dāng)暴風(fēng)雨來的時(shí)候atthetimeoftherainstorm2.在那個(gè)時(shí)候atthattime3.在地震時(shí)atthetimeoftheearthquake（三）其他短語1.沉默地insilence 2.做某事有困難havetroubledoingsth3.一團(tuán)糟inamess 4.首先；起初atfirst句子積累（一）佳句欣賞與模仿1.IwassoscaredthatIcouldhardlythinkclearlyafterthat.【so...that...如此……以至于……】在臺(tái)風(fēng)來臨時(shí)，我如此地害怕以至于待在床上一動(dòng)不動(dòng)。Atthetimeofthetyphoon,IwassoscaredthatIstayedinbedwithoutmoving.2.IhadtroublethinkingclearlyafterthatbecauseIwasveryafraid.【havetroubledoingsth在……方面有困難】由于雨下得非常大，我走路回家相當(dāng)困難。Ihadtroublewalkinghomebecauseitrainedheavily.3.Ben’sdadwasputtingpiecesofwoodoverthewindowswhilehismomwasmakingsuretheflashlightsandradiowereworking.【while當(dāng)……時(shí)候，連接兩個(gè)同時(shí)發(fā)生的動(dòng)作】我爸爸正在關(guān)窗戶時(shí)，我媽媽在掃地。Whilemydadwasclosingthewindows,mymomwassweepingthefloor.4.Althoughthestormbrokemanythingsapart,itbroughtfamiliesandneighborsclosertogether.【although雖然；盡管】盡管他累了，但他還是繼續(xù)工作。Althoughhewastired,hewentonworking.（二）用when與while連接兩個(gè)句子when是一個(gè)從屬連詞，它引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)時(shí)間狀語從句，when后通常用短暫性動(dòng)詞；while后通常用持續(xù)性動(dòng)詞，因此它所引導(dǎo)的狀語從句中，謂語動(dòng)詞常用進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)。1.Iwasdoingmyhomework.TyphoonSanmeicame.(while)TyphoonSanmeicamewhileIwasdoingmyhomework.2.Myfriend,LiBing,wasmakinghiswayhome.TyphoonSanmeicame.(when)Myfriend,LiBing,wasmakinghiswayhomewhenTyphoonSanmeicame.典例：某英文網(wǎng)站的＂StudentLife＂欄目正在向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題為＂AtimewhenImadesomeonehappy＂，請(qǐng)你寫一篇英文稿件，內(nèi)容需包括以下要點(diǎn)：1.Whowasthepersonyoumadehappy?2.Whenwasit?3.Whatdidyousayordo?4.Whydiditmakehim/herhappy?5.Howdidyoufeelatthatmoment?注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右（題目不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)可能透考生真實(shí)身份的任何信息。AtimewhenImadesomeonehappy________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作展示】Lastsummer,thoughitwashot,IvolunteeredtoteachchildrenEnglishinruralarea.WhenIarrivedthere,Icouldn'tadjusttotheweatherandlifestyle.However,astimewentby,IfoundmyselfquitehappywhenIsawthestudentsIwasteachingmadegreatprogress.Inordertoteachthem,Ihadtokeeponlearningaswell.Asaresult,myEnglishimprovedalot.Also,Imadefriendswithsomeofmystudents.Wearestillkeepingintouchbyletternow.Inaword,notonlydidIhelpthoseinneed,butalsoImyselflearnalotthatsummer.IfIhaveanotherchancetodovolunteerwork,Iamreadytogo.（一）1．同學(xué)們對(duì)“司馬光砸缸”的故事一定有著很深的印象吧？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖片及提示，用英語簡(jiǎn)要敘述一下“司馬光砸缸”的故事，并談一談你從故事中學(xué)到了什么。80詞左右(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。SimaGuanghitthetank(缸)playhideandseek(捉迷藏),fullofwaterfallinto,befrightened(驚恐的),cry,runforhelpthinkover,pickup.throwatbreak,besavedSimaGuanghitthetankOnceuponatime,therewasaboynamedSimaGuang.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）假如你是李磊，今天英語老師讓大家分組講述各自的周末生活，你被小組成員推選為代表。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格，用英文向同學(xué)們描述一下你們組的成員在昨天的以下時(shí)間里在做什么。TimeActivityName9:00a.m.2:00p.m.6:00p.m.LindaReadingDoingherhomeworkCookingdinnerPaulPlayingfootballStudyingmathTakingashowerZhangXinListeningtomusicWashingclothesHavingdinner要求：（1）語句通順、符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）不少于70詞（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Allofushadawonderfulweekend.Lindawasreadingat9:00a.m.yesterday.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）今天是星期六(10月6日)，上午8:10在新華大街上發(fā)生了一起交通事故。由于司機(jī)沒注意到兩個(gè)學(xué)生而發(fā)生事故。司機(jī)嚴(yán)重受傷，已被送往醫(yī)院救助。兩個(gè)學(xué)生受輕傷。假如你是南京一中的學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你就此事故寫一篇日記。內(nèi)容要求：1.要寫出事故發(fā)生的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2.要寫出事故的大致情況，可以適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容；3.就此寫出你的有關(guān)安全的觀點(diǎn)。寫作要求：1.一定要注意寫日記的格式；2.內(nèi)容流暢，可以適當(dāng)添加你自己的觀點(diǎn)；3.不少于80詞。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（四）2022年6月10日，李華的家鄉(xiāng)四川雅安市蘆山縣發(fā)生了一場(chǎng)地震，地震造成了巨大的損毀，但幸運(yùn)的是，李華一家安然無恙。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你描述一下地震發(fā)生時(shí)家里人的活動(dòng)情景及感受：1.李華在浴室里洗澡；2.爸爸在電腦旁工作；3.媽媽在廚房里做晚餐；4.爺爺奶奶在客廳看電視。要求：1．結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)通順，語言規(guī)范，書寫清晰；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)的人名，學(xué)校名等信息；3．80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

MynameisLiHua.Therewasanearthquakeatabout5:00p.m.onJune1st.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（五）圖示作文：仔細(xì)觀察圖片，展開合理想象，然后寫一篇英語短文。提示詞：acigarettecase香煙盒；bin垃圾箱。要求：1.詞數(shù)在80～100之間；2.字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（六）假如你是王磊，紅旗中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生，你們學(xué)校的校刊計(jì)劃開辟一個(gè)“Fables（寓言）tellus”專欄，現(xiàn)面向全體學(xué)生征集稿件。你打算報(bào)名參加，并選取了《鄭人買履》這個(gè)故事。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖片和文字提示，寫一篇英文短文，講述這個(gè)寓言故事。要求：1.短文內(nèi)容需包括圖片信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.書寫規(guī)范，語言準(zhǔn)確，行文連貫；3.不少于100詞；開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Longlongago,amanofthestateofZhengwantedtobuyapairofshoes.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（七）仔細(xì)觀察圖片描述，展開合理想象，然后寫一篇短文。要求：(1)話題作文或圖示作文任選其一。(2)詞數(shù)：80~100之間。(3)字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2021·山東濟(jì)寧·統(tǒng)考中考真題）某英文網(wǎng)站的WeekendLife專欄正面向中學(xué)生征文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的4幅圖片，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的稿件，描述你與同學(xué)上周日的經(jīng)歷。注意：1.短文應(yīng)涵蓋前三幅連環(huán)圖片的主要信息，并對(duì)第四幅圖片中可能的情節(jié)發(fā)展做出合理推斷和簡(jiǎn)要評(píng)述；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何透露考生真實(shí)身份的信息；3.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：enjoy，vomit（v.嘔吐），seeadoctorLastSundayIhadapicnicintheparkwithtwofriends.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2020·陜西·統(tǒng)考中考真題）某英文網(wǎng)站開展關(guān)于“美麗校園,健康生活”的征稿活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖示內(nèi)容積極投稿,倡導(dǎo)同學(xué)們“愛護(hù)校園環(huán)境,健康快樂生活”。keeptheschoolcleandosportslookafteryourselfother1.參考提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.語句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整;3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等);4.詞數(shù):不少于70詞。(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________