【高考專題輔導(dǎo)】高考英語專題檢測(cè)卷（三十二） 短文改錯(cuò)

專題檢測(cè)卷(三十二)短文改錯(cuò)(建議用時(shí):40分鐘)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文,文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。1(2013·哈爾濱模擬)Skiingismyfavoritesport,eventhoughIhadonlyskiedforfourdaysinmywholelife!LastyearmyfatherpromisedthatbecausemybrotherVictordidwellinhisexams,hewouldbringusforaspecialholiday.WhenVictorgotstraightA’s,Dadsaid,“Ipromisedaspecialholiday.IthinkIshouldkeepmywords.”Victor’sdreamwastoseereallysnow.SoweflewtoSeoulatChristmasvacation,andthentookabustoMujuResort.Asweclimbupthemountain,wesawsomesnowonthetrees.Webegantoplaysnow!Nooneinmyfamilyhadevertouchedsnowbefore.Wewerealllikethelittlechildren.Wepickeditup,madesnowballs,andthrewitateachother.2ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmypockets,andIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentexperienceforthreemainreasons:beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheiradvices.Intheotherhand,Icanmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesformetofollow.3(2013·綿陽模擬)LastSaturday,ourschoolhadorganizedalloftheSenior1studentstovisitthechildrenatalocalorphanage.Wetookmanybooksthatwaspopularamongchildren,aswellasmanykindsofschoolsuppliesandtoys,tochildren.Theyweredelightedtoreceivethesegift.Weplayedsomegamestogetherandgiveperformances.Beforeleavetheorphanagewetookphotoswiththemandgavethemourcontactdetailsbutwecouldkeepintouchwithoneanother.Thatday,eachoneofushadanenjoyabletime.Wegavethechildrentheircareandhelp;forreturn,theygaveustheirsmilesandlove.Thesevoluntaryactivitiesmadeadeeplyimpressiononus.4(2013·遼寧模擬)NowadaysGrade3studentsaregeneralfacedwithalotofpressure,whichisrathercommon.Toreduceit,thefollowedsuggestionsmayhelp.Firstofall,knowexactlywhatleadtoyourpressure,andthenyoucantakemeasurestodealwithit.Secondly,setupagoalwhatisnottoohigh,inanotherwords,don’tputtoomuchpressureonyourself.Thirdly,findawaytorelaxyouoccasionally,forexample,youcanlistentomusic,goswimorjustsimplygowalking.Lastly,makefriendwithothers,suchas,yourclassmates,yourteachers,yourparents.Theywillunderstandyouandcometoyourhelpwhenyouarereallyinthetrouble.Inaword,nevergetyourselfstuckinthepressurefor“impossibleisnothing”.答案解析1.答案：Skiingismyfavoritesport,eventhoughIhadonlyskiedforfourdaysinmyhavewholelife!LastyearmyfatherpromisedthatbecausemybrotherVictordidwellinifhisexams,hewouldbringusforaspecialholiday.WhenVictorgotstraightA’s,Dadtakesaid,“Ipromisedaspecialholiday.IthinkIshouldkeepmywords.”Victor’sdreamwordwastoseereallysnow.SoweflewtoSeoulatChristmasvacation,andthentookrealforabustoMujuResort.Asweclimbupthemountain,wesawsomesnowontheclimbedtrees.Webegantoplay∧snow!Nooneinmyfamilyhadevertouchedsnowbefore.withWewerealllikethelittlechildren.Wepickeditup,madesnowballs,andthrewitatthemeachother.1.【解析】第一句had→have。主句謂語動(dòng)詞是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),所以,狀語從句的謂語動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該是現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài),不可能是過去完成時(shí)態(tài)。2.【解析】第二句because→if。在that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句中,又包含一個(gè)條件狀語從句。在爸爸許諾時(shí),考試還沒進(jìn)行,所以,應(yīng)該用if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句。3.【解析】第二句bring→take。此處的take表示“帶我們?nèi)ァ?不能用bring。4.【解析】第四句words→word。keepone’sword是固定詞組,意為“遵守諾言”。5.【解析】第五句really→real。用形容詞修飾名詞。6.【解析】第六句at→for。forChristmasvacation意為“去度圣誕假期”。7.【解析】第七句climb→climbed。文章敘述的是過去的事情,故應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)。8.【解析】第八句play后面加with。playwithsnow意為“玩雪”。9.【解析】第十句去掉the。littlechildren表示泛指,其前面不用定冠詞。10.【解析】第十一句第二個(gè)it→them。此處的them指的是snowballs,而不是snow。2.答案：ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighdecidedschool.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollaringettingdollarsmypockets,andIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentwhentotallyexperienceforthreemainreasons:beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold∧.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheirtoadvices.Intheotherhand,Icanmakemyownfutureplan.IhavemaderulesforadviceOnmetofollow.myself1.【解析】將第一句中的decide改為decided。全文時(shí)態(tài)以過去時(shí)為主。2.【解析】將第二句中的get改為getting。havetrouble(in)+doing。3.【解析】將第三句中的dollar改為dollars。前面有fifty。4.【解析】將第四句中的while改為when。when就在這時(shí)，并列連詞。5.【解析】將第五句中的total改為totally。修飾后面的形容詞用副詞。6.【解析】將第六句中的of去掉。這里是because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句。7.【解析】在第六句中的told后面加上to。不定式省略，但不定式符號(hào)to需保留。8.【解析】將第七句中的advices改為advice。advice為不可數(shù)名詞。9.【解析】將第八句中的In改為On。ontheotherhand固定詞組，另一方面。10.【解析】將第九句中的me改為myself。這里是為自己的意思。3.答案：LastSaturday,ourschoolhadorganizedalloftheSenior1studentstovisitthechildrenatalocalorphanage.Wetookmanybooksthatwaspopularamongchildren,wereaswellasmanykindsofschoolsuppliesandtoys,to∧children.Theywerethedelightedtoreceivethesegift.Weplayedsomegamestogetherandgivegiftsgaveperformances.Beforeleavetheorphanagewetookphotoswiththemandgavethemleavingourcontactdetailsbutwecouldkeepintouchwithoneanother.Thatday,eachoneofsoushadanenjoyabletime.Wegavethechildrentheircareandhelp;forreturn,theyouringaveustheirsmilesandlove.Thesevoluntaryactivitiesmadeadeeplyimpressionondeepus.1.【解析】將第一句中的had去掉。LastSaturday是一般過去時(shí)的時(shí)間狀語。2.【解析】將第二句中的was改為were。that引導(dǎo)的定語從句修飾先行詞manybooks,在從句中作主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)。3.【解析】在第二句中的to后面加上the。特指那些孩子們。4.【解析】將第三句中的gift改為gifts。前面是these。5.【解析】將第四句中的give改為gave。與前面的played為并列謂語。6.【解析】將第五句中的leave改為leaving。before是介詞，后面應(yīng)用動(dòng)名詞。7.【解析】將第五句中的but改為so。這里是因果關(guān)系。8.【解析】將第七句中的第一個(gè)their改為our。與前面的we呼應(yīng)。9.【解析】將第七句中的for改為in。inreturn作為回報(bào)。10.【解析】將第八句中的deeply改為deep。impression是名詞，用形容詞修飾。4.答案：NowadaysGrade3studentsaregeneralfacedwithalotofpressure,whichisgenerallyrathercommon.Toreduceit,thefollowedsuggestionsmayhelp.Firstofall,knowfollowingexactlywhatleadtoyourpressure,andthenyoucantakemeasurestodealwithit.leadsSecondly,setupagoalwhatisnottoohigh,inanotherwords,don’tputtoomuchthat/whichotherpressureonyourself.Thirdly,findawaytorelaxyouoccasionally,forexample,yourselfyoucanlistentomusic,goswimorjustsimplygowalking.Lastly,makefriendwiths