初中8年級(jí)英語教案：第17講 寫作指導(dǎo)

輔導(dǎo)教案

學(xué)員姓名：學(xué)科教師：

年級(jí)：八年級(jí)輔導(dǎo)科目：英語

授課日期XX年XX月XX日時(shí)間A/B/C/D/E/F段

主題

教學(xué)內(nèi)容

族學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)

（本次課的重點(diǎn)、難點(diǎn)以及達(dá)到怎樣的情感目標(biāo)）

1.掌握議論文寫作的三要素；

2.熟練運(yùn)用寫作常用句型；

3.能夠靈活運(yùn)用連詞。

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教學(xué)建議：

1.圖片上的文字主要闡述議論文寫作的三要素，由于文字有點(diǎn)難度,需要老師學(xué)生一定的提示；

2.采取優(yōu)先選擇的方式，每個(gè)學(xué)生負(fù)責(zé)一個(gè)要點(diǎn)對(duì)文字內(nèi)容進(jìn)行解釋并表達(dá)鏡子的看法；

3.最后提取關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)對(duì)議論文寫作三要素進(jìn)行總結(jié)。

Apersuasiveessaycanalso

taketheformofasalesletter,

ajobapplication,oracollege

applicationessay.Ineachcase,

persuadingthereaderiskey.

Hereisthegeneralformatofthepersuasiveessay:

1.Introductionandthesis:Howyoufeel/

whatyouthinkaboutatopic

(e.g.,MTumblrisanexcellent

learningtool.”)

2.Bodyparagraphs(twoorthree):Provide

detailedexamplestosupportyourthesis

(e.g.,TheYUNiversity,二

PWNtheSAT,etc.)■

3.Conclusion:Wrapupyourargument

andcallthereadertoaction

(e.g.,"FollowTheYUNiversity,"

,?SupportPWNtheSAT,"etc.)

張/精講提升

教學(xué)建議:

1.范文賞析建議讓學(xué)生之間相互討論，找出文章的亮點(diǎn)及不足之處，對(duì)好詞好句進(jìn)行積累并模仿造句；

2.寫作句型部分要讓學(xué)生多造句，并提供一定的語境，比如在某種主題的寫作中可以用到那個(gè)句型；

3.寫作句型不僅僅局限于教案上所提到的，也可以進(jìn)行拓展；

4.每一類的連詞建議讓學(xué)生挑出自己擅長或者喜歡的兩個(gè)左右進(jìn)行積累即可，不需要全部掌握。

議論文寫作

一、議論文三要素

論點(diǎn)，論據(jù)和礴是議論文的三要素,論點(diǎn)是作者對(duì)所論問題所持的見解和主張；論據(jù)是用來證明論點(diǎn)

的事實(shí)和道理的根據(jù)；論證就是用論據(jù)來證明論點(diǎn)的方法和過程。一般來說,議論文每段應(yīng)有|主題句(topic

sentence)|來確定論點(diǎn)。文章結(jié)尾往往重申自己的看法、意見或建議。論證有|立論和蛹兩種,作者證明自己

的論點(diǎn)正確，是立論；反之，證明別人的論點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤，是駁論。

二、基本題型

★觀點(diǎn)議解決問題；＞計(jì)劃安排書面表達(dá):

?Myviewon...?Howtodo...??Holidays/Activites?Aletterto...

三、真題解析之觀點(diǎn)議論型

94.Writeatleast60wordswiththetopic"HeavyHaze”.(以"茫茫霧霾"為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)

點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)

提示:去年12月上旬，申城籠罩在茫茫的霧霾(wasshroudedinheavyhaze)中，陷于重度污染(severepollution)o

人們戴口罩(wearmasks)出行，霧霾天給人們的健康帶來危害，給生活和工作帶來不便(inconvenience)o

請(qǐng)你談?wù)勳F霾的成因及可行的解決方法。(2014楊浦/黃浦一模)

HeavyHaze

Thewinterin2013impressedpeoplenotforitsextremecoldnessbuttheheavyhazehangingover25provinces.

Itcausedgreatdisturbancetoourdailylife.

Obviously,hazecomesfrompollution.Manyfactoriesletthesmokeintotheairwithoutanyfilteringprocess.

Daybyday,itisnowonderthatsmoke,dirt,anddustaccumulateintheairandfinallyturnintodensehaze.

Howcanwecurbhazethen?Levyingheavypenaltyonthoseirresponsiblefactoriesisdefinitelyamust-do.

Beforetheairisonceagainpurified,weshouldalsotakesomeactionstoprotectourselvessuchaswearingamask

andreducingexposureoutdoors.

Weshouldalltryourbesttocontributetoacleanerenvironmentformutualsurvivalandeasierlife.(126words)

94.Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Agoodwayto”（在生活中，在學(xué)習(xí)技能等各方面，每個(gè)

人都會(huì)有做某件事獨(dú)特的非常有效的好方法，請(qǐng)以“一個(gè)的好方法''為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，

標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）（2014徐匯一模）

Agoodwaytoshop19.5分

Whenpeoplesaytheywanttogoshopping,theyusuallythinkofgoingtoashoppingmall.However,shopping

inamallcanbeextremelytiring.Youmustwalkonyourfeetforhoursandhours.Ithinkagoodwaytoshopisto

shoponline.

Withthehelpofmodemtechnology,wecanbrowsethroughhundredsandthousandsofitemswithouthavingto

leaveourhome.Shoppingonlinecangiveyouachancetocomparethepriceseasily.Onceyouhavedecidedonwhat

youwant,allyouhavetodoisclickabuttonandyouritemwillarriveatyourdoorstepwithinafewdays.

Frommypointofview,shoppingonlineisagoodwaytoshop.Itisnotonlyacomfortablewaytoshop,butalso

aconvenientwaytoshop.（138words）

Beginning-TS__________________________________

MainBody-SupportingDetail!;SD2

Conclusion__________________________________

四、遣詞造句

①詞匯

1）同義詞法：Myschoolisinthewestofthecity.

Myschoolliesinthewestoftheschool.

Myschoolislocatedinthewestofthecity.

2）反義詞法：Youcaneasilyrememberthesewordsifyouusethemeveryday.

You'llhavenotrouble/difficultyrememberingthesewordsifyouusethemeveryday.

3）構(gòu)詞法：Thepartyisverysuccessful.

Thepartyisagreatsuccess.

Thepartyisofgreatsuccess.

4）同義結(jié)構(gòu)替換法：Iftheweatherisfine,we'llgohillclimbingtomorrow.

Weatherpermitting,we511gohillclimbingtomorrow.

練習(xí)：

Healthisveryimportanttous.

Weworkhardtopasstheexam.

②句子

令Thereisnodoubtthat+句子（毫無疑問的...）

Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemisfarfromsatisfaction.

Thereisnodoubtthatmoneycan'tbuyeverythinginourdailylife.

令A(yù)nadvantageof...isthat+句子（.......的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是....）

Anadvantage"usingthesolarenergyisthatitwon'tcreate/produceanypollution.

Anadvantageoftakingexercisesisthatitcanmakeuskeephealthy.

令Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子（.......的原因是....）

Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair.

ThereasonwhyIprefermusicisthatitgivesmeasenseofsatisfaction.

令Themore...themore...(愈……愈……)

Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyoumake.

Themorebooksweread,themorelearnedwebecome.

SentenceMaking

Itis+adj.of/forsb.todosth.（做…是怎么樣...）

Itiswiseofyoutobooktheticketsinadvanceorwemaymisstheshow.

Itisnecessaryforustotakeactionstoprotectthewaterfromvariouspollution.

令sparenoefforttodo=doone*sutmosttodo=tryone*sbesttodo(盡全力去...)

Weshouldsparenoefforttobeautifyourenvironment.

Weshouldtryourbesttoachieveourgoalinlife.

Weshoulddoourutmosttohelpothers.

令haveagreatinfluenceon...(對(duì)...有很大的影響)

Smokinghasagreatinfluenceonourhealth.

Parentaleducationhasagreatinfluenceonourgeneraldevelopment.

Itissaid(that)+句子（據(jù)說…）

Itisthought(that)+句子（一般認(rèn)為…）

Itisknown(that)+句子（大家都知道…）

Itisreported(that)+句子（據(jù)報(bào)導(dǎo)…）

Itisexpected(that)十句子（一般預(yù)料…）

Itisestimated(that)+句子（據(jù)估計(jì)…）

Itisbelieved(that)+句子（一般相信…）

It'sknownthatHangzhouisabeautifulcity.

It'sbelievedthatmorephysicalexerciseswilldogoodtoourhealth.

SentenceMaking

③段落一關(guān)聯(lián)詞

令并列與遞進(jìn):and,also,aswellas,besides,moreover,inaddition,whafsmore,etc.

令轉(zhuǎn)折：but,however,although,though,etc.

令對(duì)比:or,while,insteadof,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,etc.

范文賞析

MyViewonE-books

NowadaysE-booksbecomemoreandmorepopularbuttheattitudetowardstoE-booksdiffers.AsfarasIam

concerned,e-booksarehelpfulbecauseofthefollowingreasons.

Firstly,e-booksareveryconvenient.Withthelittlebodysize,wecanputitinthepocketandgoanywherewith

them.Inthisway,wehavemuchtimetoreadbooksandenlargeourknowledge.Besides,e-bookscancombinestudy

andentertainmentperfectly.Withitsvariousfunction,wecanuseitnotonlyforlearningbutalsoforfun.

Furthermore,e-bookcanplaytheroleoffriends.Itgivesusbookstoread,itplaysgameswithus,whatismore,we

canputmanythingswelikeintoitandsoon.

Tosumup,wecandrawaconclusionthate-booksareveryimportantforus,especially,ouryoung.

五'復(fù)查

2遍一1遍看查聊寫、語法'標(biāo)點(diǎn)|等問題;

2遍不出聲讀查，靠語感檢查語句是否通順、連貫等；

/Rs達(dá)標(biāo)PK

教學(xué)建議：

1.寫作部分根據(jù)課堂時(shí)間安排靈活調(diào)整，如果時(shí)間不充足，可以讓學(xué)生寫出大綱和要點(diǎn)即可;

2.在限定的時(shí)間內(nèi)完成；

3.相互交換批改，表揚(yáng)正確率最高的學(xué)生；

4.做對(duì)的學(xué)生給做錯(cuò)的學(xué)生講題；

5.讓每個(gè)學(xué)生簡單總結(jié)一下錯(cuò)誤原因及應(yīng)該注意的問題。

PARTI.Writeapassageofatleast80wordsonthetopic“Asuggestiontomydearschool!”（以“給學(xué)校的一個(gè)

建議！”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）（2014靜安一模）

（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名，校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）

Questionsforreferenceonly（以下問題僅供參考）

Whataren'tyousatisfiedwithinyourschool?Yourreasons?

Whatisyoursuggestion?

Wouldyougiveyourpossiblesolution（s）?

70'

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PARTII期末綜合（2010延安初三摸底卷）

I.MultipleChoices（269）

1.Thisisastoryaboutone-eyedmonster.

A.aB.anC./D.the

2.Mysonwillreturntocollege__________theendofAugust.

A.onB.inC.atD.for

3.Theyneedlittlebread,__________they?

A.needn'tB.don'tC.needD.do

4.EverywinterSimonand_________gettogethertolookateachother'sdrawings,

A.weB.ourC.usD.ours

5.1hopemybrother_________wellsoon.

A.willbeB.isC.tobeD.wouldbe

6.You'dbetter_________outtotelltheboys__________playfootball.

A.go,nottoB.go,don'tC.togo,nottoD.togo;don*t

7.ShelikeswalkingalongHuaihaiRoadso,shemanyworld'stopdesignernames.

A.isfamiliarwithB.wasfamiliarto

C.isfamiliartoD.wasfamiliarwith

8.Whenyoumeetanewwordinapassage,don*t_________thedictionaryatonce.Trytoguessthemeaningofit

first.

A.lookupB.useC.lookoutD.lookfor

9.-Ifthereare_________peopledriving,therewillbe_________airpollution.

—Yes,theairwillbefresher.

A.less,lessB.less,fewerC.fewer,fewerD.fewer,less

10.1rememberMum_________youabouthisreturntoShanghaiatthetablethismorning.

A.istellingB.toldC.hastoldD.totell

11.Gardenersareveryhelpfultokeepourhousingestates_________.

A.wonderfullyB.beautifulC.clearlyD.well

12.ShanghaiisbiggerthaninAustralia.

A.anyothercityB.anyothercities

C.alltheothercitiesD.anycity

13.Weate_________fordinnerduringourstayinThailand.

A.somethingspecialB.specialsomething

C.anythingspecialD.specialanything

14._________peopleCelebratedDisneyland's50thbirthdayinCaliforniaonJuly17,2005.

A.ThousandofB.ThousandsofC.ThousandsD.Tenthousands

15._________dayitis!It'sgoingtorainagain.

A.WhataB.HowaC.WhatD.How

16.—Isitdifficultdriving?

—Someonefindsitdifficult,butIdon't.

A.learnB.learningC.tolearnD.learnt

17.Hemustbehonest,_________heislovedbyall.

A.butBsoC.forD.or

18.Hisaunt_________liveinthecountry,butnowshe_________thelifeinthecity.

A.isused;isusedtoB.usedto;isused

C.usedto;isusedtoD.isusedto;usedto

19.ThreeyearshavepassedDavidandPierebecamepenfriends.

A.sinceB.beforeC.thatD.when

20.You_________decidenow.Youcantellmeyourdecisionlater.

A.don'thavetoB.mustn'tC.cannotD.shouldn't

21.—_________doyouhaveyourhaircut?

—Onceamonth.

A.HowoftenB.HowmuchC.HowlongD.Howmany

22.—Whenthetrain?

—Intenminutes.

A.has...leftB.willbe...leaveC.is...leavingD.did...leave

23.ItisamazingthatShakuntala'sbraintook50secondstofindtheanswertheunderlinedpartmeans

A.funnyB.excitingC.amusingD.surprising

24.Ifyoustudyharder,youcanlearnyourEnglishbetter.Theunderlinedpartmeans

A.explainB.changeC.achieveD.improve

25.Couldyoutellme?

A.whydidyougotoLondonB.thatyouhavebeentoLondon

C.ifyouhavegonetoLondonD.whetheryouhavebeentoLondon

26.—PmsosorryIleftmyhomeworkathome.

—_________Remembertobringittomorrow.

A.That*sallright.B.You'rewelcome.

C.Pmgladtohearthat.D.Mypleasure.

II.WordDerivation(8‘)

1.Guilinisoneofthemost(scenery)areasinChina.

2.Canyougivemean(explain)forbeinglate?

3.The(chemistry)thatitthisfactoryproducedhaspollutedtheenvironment.

4Itisthe(two)timeformetogotoXi'an.

5.Theairwassocoldthatwecouldhardly(breath).

6.Thefamilyhada(pleasure)triptoBeijingthissummer.

7.Chinaisbecomingmoreandmore(attract)topeoplearoundtheworld.

8.TheexperienceinAustraliainJulywas(true)unforgettable.

III.Readthepassageandfillintheblankswiththegivenwords.(7*2')

ThreeThingstoDoBeforeYouAre18

Areyouboredwithyourdailylife?Herearesomethingsyoushouldtrybeforeyouare18,becauseafterthatit'stoo

late.

Campoutinthegarden

Ifyoudon'thaveyourowngarden,findafriendwhohasone!Youwillneed:twoorthreefriends,asmalltent,

sleepingbagsandwarmblankets.Takealotoffoodanddrinkwithyouintothetentandplaygamesu1

itgetsdark.Whenitgetsdark,tellghoststories,andatmidnight,eatallyoursweets.Youwillneedatorchorelse

youwon'tbeabletoseeallyoursweets,anditm2gettooscary.

Learntoswim

Seriously,thisissoimportantthatitcans3yourlife.Ifyoucan'tswimwell,youwon'tbeableto

dowatersportslikewaterskiing,surfinganddiving.Eventakingaboattripwillbedangerousforyou.Makesureyou

doit.

Collectsomething

Oneofthebesthobbiesforunder-18siscollectingthings.Youcouldcollectk4ofstamps,oryou

couldcollectthingsthatmakeyourememberwhatyouhavedone,likecinematicketsforfilmsyouhaveseenor

emailsfromfriends.Thebestwaytocollectistohaveaspecialalbumtoputyourcollectioninandtowritewhateach

thingm5toyou.Thatwayyouwon'tforget.

Tryatleastonekindofteamsports

Beingagoodteamplayerisanimportantskillinlife.Youcan'tjustthinkofyourself,buthavetoworkwellwith

otherpeople.Otheradvantagesofteamsportslikebasketball,footballandbaseballarethattheykeepyoufitand

healthy,andtheyarealsogreatfun.Teamsusuallyhaveagoods6lifetoo-you'llgotolotsof

partiesandmakemanyfriends.

Writeyourfamilytree

Whenyouareyoung,gettoknowalltheolderpeopleinyourfamilyandfindoutasm7asyoucan

aboutwhentheywereyoung,Drawafamilytreeandmakenotesabouteachpersonsothatyouwon'tforget.

Keys:untilmightsavekindsmeanssocialmuch

筑;我的收獲

（以學(xué)生自我總結(jié)為主，TR引導(dǎo)為輔，為本次課做一個(gè)總結(jié)回顧）

1.議論文三要素：論點(diǎn)，論據(jù)和論證

2.遣詞造句:同義詞法反義詞法構(gòu)詞法同義結(jié)構(gòu)替換法

3.句子

Thereisnodoubtthat+句子

Anadvantageof...isthat+句子

Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子

Themore...themore...Itis+adj.ofYfbrsb.todosth.

sparenoefforttodo=doone'sutmosttodo=tryone'sbesttodohaveagreatinfluenceon...

《課后作業(yè)

教學(xué)建議：

1.包含預(yù)習(xí)下次課單詞與短語和復(fù)習(xí)本次課內(nèi)容兩部分；

2.規(guī)定學(xué)生在30分鐘內(nèi)完成；

3.要求學(xué)生對(duì)不確定有疑問的題目做標(biāo)記；

4.下節(jié)新課前讓學(xué)生相互批改表揚(yáng)正確率最高的學(xué)生；

5.讓作對(duì)的學(xué)生給做錯(cuò)的學(xué)生講題，老師進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充；

6.老師對(duì)錯(cuò)誤率較高的題目相關(guān)的知識(shí)點(diǎn)進(jìn)行復(fù)習(xí)。

【鞏固練習(xí)】

I.Choosethebestanswer（選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)拇鸢福?010延安初三10月月考）

1.sighherestandsformistake.

A)A...aB)A...theC)The...aD)The...the

2.Tomwillsell_______stampstohelpthepoorchildreninthewestofChina.

A)thousandofB)twothousandofC)twothousandD)twothousand

3.Nowadayspeopleusuallyget______informationfromTV,newspaperandtheInternet.

A)quiteafewB)anumberofC)alotofD)apairof

4.—Jack,howareyoufeelingtoday?

—Much_____.1thinkIcangotoschooltomorrow.

A)goodB)betterC)wellD)best

5.A:IsLucyknockingatthedoor?

B:It_____beLucy.SheisinAmericannow.

A)needn,tB)mustn,tQcan'tD)maynot

6.Ifsrainingheavily.We_____homeonfoot.

A)hadbetternottogoB)wouldbetternotgoC)hadbetternotgoD)wouldbetternottogo

7.Maryhasboughtthreeticketsforthe2010WorldExpo.Oneisfor______and______ireforherparents.

A)her,theothersB)herself,theother

C)her,othersD)herself,therest

8.He'sneverseenthisfilmbefore,______he?

A)isn,tB)hasn'tQisD)has

9.—Wouldyoulikesomesnacksorapieceofchocolatecake?

-_____.1don'thaveanyfoodbeforegoingtobed.

A)NeitherB)BothC)EitherD)None

10.Hisjokesounded_______,anditmadeallthepeoplelaughalot.

A)amazingB)clearlyC)amusingD)well

11.Ifsyourdutytothelightbeforeyouleavetheclassroom.

A)turnoverB)tumupC)turnoffD)turnon

12.TomwillreturntheCDtomeassoonashefinisheswatchingit.

A)comebackB)givebackC)turnbackD)takeback

13.Thepolicemanfinallyseizedtherobbersandsentthemtoprison.

A)tookcareofB)tookholdofC)tooktheplaceofD)tookchargeof

14.Tomverysoondecided.

A)whathewoulddonext.B)whenwouldheleave.

C)howwouldhespendtheholiday.D)wherewouldhelive.

15.一I'msorryIamlatefortheparty.—.

A)AllrightB)ThafsallrightC)ThafsrightD)You,reright.

II.Filltheblankswiththeverbintheirproperforms.(用動(dòng)詞的適當(dāng)形式填空)

1.TomareportwhenItelephonehimyesterdayaft