湖南師大附中高三月考七英語(yǔ)試題寫(xiě)作講義

湖師大附2024屆月考7寫(xiě)作第四部分寫(xiě)作（共二節(jié)，滿(mǎn)分40分）第一節(jié)

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假設(shè)你是學(xué)校口語(yǔ)興趣班的學(xué)生李華，你的外教Chris正在策劃一次戶(hù)外活動(dòng)，他發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢(xún)問(wèn)你的建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)。內(nèi)容包括：

1.你對(duì)活動(dòng)的建議；

2.建議的理由。注意：

1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dear

Chris,

_______________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua

參考范文Dear

Chris,

Howiseverything?Iamdelightedtohearthatyouareplanninganoutdooractivity.

Herearemy

suggestionsfortheevent.

Istronglyremenda"NatureImmersionDay",whichwillprovideuswithanopportunitytoimmerseourselvesinthebeautyofnaturewhilepracticingEnglishin

arealworldcontext.Wecanstartwith

aguidednaturewalk

inanaturereserve,observinganddiscussingthefloraandfauna.Followingthewalk,

teambuildinggames

suchastreasure

huntsorrelayracesareagoodidea.

Afterlunch,wecan

gatherforabriefdiscussionontheimportanceof

protectingourenvironment.

Ihopethesesuggestionsarehelpful.

Letmeknowifyouhaveanyotherideasorquestions.Yourssincerely,LiHua

下水作文

DearChris,

Learningthatourspeakingclubisdesigningafieldtripandyou’reconsultingmeforremendations,Iam

oncloudnine.Asanenthusiasticmember,Iwouldliketooffermyhumbleopinions.

Onsuchawarmspringday,wemaytrygoingtoaparknearby,wherewecannotjust

appreciatethenaturalscenery

butwecan

arrangeavarietyofactivities

there,includingroleplay,groupdiscussion,andmakinganimpromptuspeech.Additionally,it'simportanttoinvitemoreforeignfriendslikeyouandencouragenonnativeEnglishspeakerstoactivelyparticipatesothatwecan

havemoreaccesstolanguageuse.

Idowishourfieldtripwouldbe

afruitfulandenjoyableexperience

forallmembers.Yourssincerely,LiHua第二節(jié)（滿(mǎn)分25分）

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)二段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完成的短文。SnowflakeBentley

Inthe

dayswhenVermontfarmersworkedthelandandspenttimewithlivestock,therelived

aboyWillie

Bentleywho

loved

snow

morethan

anythingintheworld.VermontisnostrangertosnowandBentley'shappiestdaysweresnowstormdays.Hewatchedsnowflakes(雪花)onhisglove,onthevastfarm

fields,andonthedarkmetalhandleofthebarn(谷倉(cāng))door.HesaidsnowwastheblessingsofNature.However,hecouldnotsharesnowflakesbecausehecouldnotsavethem.

Later,whenhismothergavehimanoldmicroscope,he

mainlyusedittolookatsnow.Whilekidsofhisneighborschasedhensandhadsnowballfights,Williewascatchingsnowflakes.Dayafterstormydayhestudiedtheicycrystals(冰晶).

Theirdelicatepatternswereevenmorebeautifulthanhehadimagined.Williedecidedhemustfindawaytosavesnowflakessootherscould

see

their

wonderful

designs.For

threewintershetried

drawingsnowcrystals.Theyalwaysmeltedintheblacktray(托盤(pán))thatheusedtocatchthembeforehecouldfinishthedrawings.

Whenhewassixteen,Williereadofacamerawithitsownmicroscope."IfIhadthatcameraIcould

photograph

snowflakes,”hetoldhismother.Willie'smotherknewthathewouldnotbehappyuntilhecouldsharewhathehadseen.

“Spendingtimeonsnowisjustfoolishness,”hismothersaid.Still,shelovedhisson.WhenWilliewasseventeen

hisparentsspenttheirsavingsandboughtthecamera.Itcostasmuchastencows.Williewassureitwasthebestofallcameras.

Evenso,hisfirstpictureswerefailures—nobetterthanshadows.Yethewouldnotquit.Mistakebymistake,snowflakebysnowflake,Willieworkedthrougheverystorm.Winterended,thesnowmelted,andhehadno

goodpictures.Hewaitedforanotherseasonofsnow.One

day,inthesecondwinter,hetriedanewexperiment.Anditworked!Williehadfiguredouthowtophotographsnowflakes!"Noweveryonecanseethegreatbeautyinatiny

crystal,"he

said.

Nevertheless,inthosedaysnoonecared....

Despitethenewfoundfame,SnowflakeBentleysimplymadeuphismindtoproduceaperfectphoto....

Notwosnowflakesarealike.

Butyoumightnotknowthemanwhodiscoveredit.

Actually,it

canbetracedbacktoWilsonBentley,

afarmerfromVermont,theUSA,whoin1885becamethefirstpersontosuccessfullyphotographanindividualsnow

crystal—theicethat

makesupsnowflakes.

Afteryearsoftrialanderror,Bentleywasabletocapturetheintricatedetailsofsnow

crystalsbyusingapoundmicroscopeattachedtohisbellowscamera.Hewent

ontophotographmorethan5,000ofthese"iceflowers"

duringhislifetime—

never

findinganyduplicates—

andtheimagesstillshinetothisday.

故事解讀

在那個(gè)人們只是農(nóng)耕土種、飼養(yǎng)家畜的時(shí)代，美國(guó)佛蒙特州的人們對(duì)自然現(xiàn)象的美麗和奧秘并不感興趣，更不用說(shuō)去欣賞那些微不足道的雪花了。然而，對(duì)于威利·本特利來(lái)說(shuō)，雪花的美麗和獨(dú)特性卻是無(wú)法抗拒的。他先是試圖把雪花畫(huà)下來(lái)，但每次都是雪花融化了，他還沒(méi)畫(huà)完。有一天，他與他母親說(shuō)，“如果我有那臺(tái)相機(jī)，我就可以拍雪花了?！彼赣H不理解地對(duì)他說(shuō)：“把時(shí)間花在雪地上是愚蠢的”。但盡管如此，威利的父母還是在孩子十七歲的那一年用可以買(mǎi)上十頭奶牛的錢(qián)給他買(mǎi)了一架當(dāng)時(shí)最好的相機(jī)（多米感言：父母對(duì)孩子的愛(ài)真是超級(jí)偉大?。拇?，威利癡迷于拍攝雪花，盡管周?chē)娜硕紝?duì)他的努力嗤之以鼻，但他從未放棄過(guò)。他明白，自己的任務(wù)是將這些自然界中最微小、最脆弱的美麗展現(xiàn)給世界。因此，他繼續(xù)投身于拍攝雪花的工作中，不斷地嘗試、改進(jìn)、完善，終于有一天，他找到了拍攝的竅門(mén)。續(xù)寫(xiě)審題

第一段：提示句“然而，在那些日子里，沒(méi)有人在乎?！?/p>

我們的續(xù)寫(xiě)應(yīng)該馬上接著寫(xiě)威利自己的想法和反應(yīng)是什么（自然，他會(huì)繼續(xù)鉆研技術(shù)，突破自己，拍出了更多更好的雪花來(lái)了）。結(jié)合下一段的首句提示，在該段段末應(yīng)該寫(xiě)他因?yàn)樾∮忻麣猓瑥亩玫搅恕把┗ū咎乩钡拿雷u(yù)。

第二段：提示句“盡管剛剛成名，雪花·本特利還是下定決心要拍出一張完美的照片。”

我們的續(xù)寫(xiě)應(yīng)該馬上接著寫(xiě)本特利因?yàn)閳?zhí)著追求完美主義，終于成為了眾人關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)，但他并未因此而沾沾自喜拍出了絕美的雪花。他的努力和細(xì)致讓他捕捉到了那些令人嘆為觀(guān)止的細(xì)節(jié)。他成功了！故事告訴我們：一個(gè)人不但要生活，還要會(huì)生活。只有你的全力付出才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)生活中處處是美景，哪怕微不足道到一片雪花、一絲塵土，也可足以驚艷到你。愛(ài)美，就去發(fā)現(xiàn)美、探究美吧！支架句子1.He

captured

theperfectsnowflakeimage,

amasterpieceofclarity

andbeauty

thatwouldberememberedforgenerations.2.Throughcountlessefforts,Bentley'sperseverancebeganto

payoff.3.SnowflakeBentley'scontributionliesnotjustinhisphotographsbutinhis

unshakablededicationtoperfectionism.4.Hetaughtusthattruesuccessliesnotin

thesuccessandstatus

wereceive,butin

theachievementandsatisfaction

wegainfromknowingthatw

havetriedallout.

下水作文1

Nevertheless,inthosedaysnoonecared.

Howeverhard

Bentleyworkedonhisphotography,everyonestillreferredhisworkto

ajokeorasillystuff.Thoughencountering

failureafterfailure,Bentley

nevergaveup.Witheachnewsnowfall,Williewould

setouttocapturetheuniqueshapesandpatternsofsnowflakes.Hespenthours

huddlingoverhismicroscopeandcamera,capturingthe

delicatebeauty

ofeachsnowflake.Astheyearswentby,hisphotosbecamemoreandmore

detailedandlifelike.Peoplebegantonoticehisworkandunderstandhim.Slowly,he

gotthenicknameof

SnowflakeBentley.(92words)

Despitethenewfoundfame,SnowflakeBentleysimplymadeuphismindtoproduceaperfectphoto.

Inlateryears,he

pushedtheboundariesof

hisphotographyskillsandeventually

developedaspecialtechnique

thatallowedhimtocapturesnowflakesinthreedimensions,revealingtheirintricateandoftensurprisingstructures.Hiswork

isrecognizedasapioneeringcontributionto

thefieldofsnowflakephotography.Today,SnowflakeBentley'sphotoscontinuetoinspirepeoplearoundtheworld.Hisstoryremindsusthat

eventhesmallestandmostoverlookedobjectsinnaturecanholdimmensebeautyandwonder.

Loveitandjustdoit!(84words)

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Nevertheless,inthosedaysnoonecared.

Theoutsideworldmighthavebeen

indifferentto

thebeautyofsnowflakes,butforBentley,eachonewasamasterpieceofnature,

uniqueandirreplaceable.Hesawinthemnotmerelythepatternsandshapesbutalsothestoriesoftheirformation,thesecretsoftheatmospheretheyhadtraveledthrough.His