陜西省2024八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)下冊(cè)Unit10I'vehadthisbikeforthreeyears寫(xiě)作能力提升練課件新版人教新目標(biāo)版

UNIT10I’vehadthisbikeforthreeyearsUNIT10寫(xiě)作能力提升練

童年是令人難忘的。你一定還保存著你小時(shí)候最喜歡的東西吧。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇不少于80詞的短文，向大家介紹一下它。要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，條理清晰，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；要點(diǎn)提示：1.它是什么；2.你是如何得到它的，擁有它多久了；3.它對(duì)你有什么特別之處。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

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［謀篇布局］厘清文章要素，構(gòu)建文章結(jié)構(gòu)。

我最喜愛(ài)的物品［遣詞造句］就結(jié)構(gòu)圖中的要點(diǎn)和詞語(yǔ)寫(xiě)出句子。1.

我最喜愛(ài)的來(lái)自童年的物品是一只泰迪熊，我已經(jīng)擁有它12年了。Myfavoritethingfromchildhoodisateddybear.

Ihavehaditfor12

years

?.Ihavehaditfor12

years2.

我非常喜歡我的泰迪熊，因?yàn)樗芷?，而且它穿著我最喜?ài)的顏色的衣服。Ilikemyteddybearverymuchbecauseit’sbeautifuland

dressedinmyfavoritecolor

?.dressedinmyfavoritecolor

3.

我喜歡它也是因?yàn)樗俏业哪棠逃H手制作的。Ilikeitalsobecausemygrandma

madeitbyherself

?.madeitbyherself4.

我想對(duì)我的泰迪熊表示感謝，我會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)保存它以使自己想起奶奶。Iwantto

saythankstomyteddybear

?.Iwillkeepitforeverto

remindmyselfofmygrandma

?.saythankstomyteddybearremindmyselfofmygrandma

文中說(shuō)明喜歡的原因時(shí)，用到了Ilike...because...，使得行文流暢、緊湊。［巧妙銜接］［連句成篇］Myfavoritethingfromchildhoodisateddybear.Ihavehaditfor12years.Mygrandmagaveittomeonmythirdbirthdayasabirthdaygift.Ilikemyteddybearverymuchbecauseit’sbeautifulanddressedinmyfavoritecolor.Ilikeitalsobecausemygrandmamadeitbyherself.Theteddybearhasgivenmemanysweetmemories.IrememberwhenIwasyoung，Iwasscaredatnight.SoIsleptwiththeteddybeareverynight.Itcouldmakemefeelsafe.IfIhadtospendanightawayfrommyhome，Ialwaysbroughtitalongwithme.Iwanttosaythankstomyteddybear.Iwillkeepitforevertoremindmyselfofmygrandma.

我校準(zhǔn)備以“AGiftfromtheHeart”為題舉辦征文比賽，要求參賽者分享在一些特別的日子(生日、節(jié)日……)用心準(zhǔn)備的禮物。寫(xiě)作要求：

詞數(shù)不少于70。3.表述禮物的意義。

AGiftfromtheHeart

Itwasthelastdayofthatterm.Myclassmateswereveryexcitedatthecomingholiday.Butmyfriend，Mike，lookedunhappybecausehefailedtheEnglishtest.

AGiftfromtheHeart

Itwasthelastdayofthatterm.Myclassmateswereveryexcitedatthecomingholiday.Butmyfriend，Mike，lookedunhappybecausehefailedtheEnglishtest.

要點(diǎn)提示：1.介紹特別的日子；2.分享贈(zèng)送的禮物；

Whilethinkingabouthowtocheerhimup，IsawmyEnglishnotebook.Althoughitwasveryimportanttome，Idecidedtogiveittohim.Helookedatmeinsurprise.HeknewhowcarefullyItookthenotes.ItoldhimthatIcouldalsohelphimlearnEnglish.

Mikehasmadeprogresswiththehelpofmygift，thenotebook.It’snotexpensivebutit’sfrommyheart.

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Whilethinkingabouthowtocheerhimup，IsawmyEnglishnotebook.Althoughitwasveryimportanttome，Idecidedtogiveittohim.Helookedatmeinsurprise.HeknewhowcarefullyItookthenotes.ItoldhimthatIco