2024屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)：書面表達(dá)（含答案）

書面表達(dá)一、高考原題1.【2023年新高考全國(guó)I卷】假定你是李華,外教Ryan準(zhǔn)備將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組,讓大家課后練習(xí)口語(yǔ),你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問題。請(qǐng)你給外教寫一封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.說明問題;2.提出建議。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearRyan,I'mLiHuafromClass3.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua2.【2022年新高考】假定你是校廣播站英語(yǔ)節(jié)目"TalkandTalk"的負(fù)責(zé)人李華,請(qǐng)給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請(qǐng)她做一次訪談。內(nèi)容包括:1.節(jié)目介紹2.訪談的時(shí)間和話題。注意:?1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearCaroline,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHu3.?【2021年新高考】你校英文報(bào)Youth正在慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿,內(nèi)容包括:

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讀報(bào)的經(jīng)歷;

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喜愛的欄目;

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期望和祝福。注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為

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Me_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、考情分析寫作基本原則一、長(zhǎng)短句原則一個(gè)短小精悍的句子，通常可以起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。尤其是當(dāng)我們把短句放在段首時(shí)，它不僅可以承上啟下，還可以揭示主題，如：Asacreature,Ieat;asaman,Iread.Althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofmind，theyareinawayquitesimilar.由此可見，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，可以給人抑揚(yáng)頓挫之感。因此，許多專家建議：在文章第一段（開頭）用一長(zhǎng)一短，且先長(zhǎng)后短；在文章主體部分，要先用一個(gè)短句解釋主要意思，然后在闡述幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候采用先短后長(zhǎng)的句群形式，這樣主體部分定會(huì)讓人賞心悅目，文章結(jié)尾只需用一長(zhǎng)一短。二、主題句原則一篇文章的開頭（有時(shí)也可在結(jié)尾）有一個(gè)主題句，也就有了中心，然后圍繞主題展開相關(guān)內(nèi)容，這樣的文章思路清晰，讓人一目了然。否則，若把主題隱藏在文章的中間，很可能使讀者感到云里霧里，不知所云。如：Tobeginwith,youmustworkhardatyourlessonsandbefullypreparedbeforetheexam.（主題句）Withoutsufficientpreparation,youcanhardlyexpecttoanswerallthequestionscorrectly.開頭一句赫然醒目，直接點(diǎn)題。三、條理性原則一般來說，如果一篇文章以第一第二、第三或首先、其次、再次等羅列要點(diǎn)會(huì)讓人感覺層次分明、條理清晰、邏輯性強(qiáng)。強(qiáng)烈推薦下列關(guān)聯(lián)詞和短語(yǔ)：1.tobeginwith，then，furthermore，finally2.tostartwith，next，inaddition，finally3.first，besides，lastbutnotleast4.mostimportantofall，moreover，finally5.foronething，foranother6ontheonehand，ontheotherhand（用來說明不同的理由或原因）四、短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則寫作時(shí)，尤其是在考試時(shí)，如果正確使用短語(yǔ)，有兩個(gè)好處：一是用短語(yǔ)會(huì)給文章增光添彩，自然會(huì)增加得分點(diǎn)；二是學(xué)生在考場(chǎng)上有時(shí)因?yàn)檫^于緊張而造成思維短路，但還得湊夠詞數(shù)，那么用短語(yǔ)替代單詞不失為一種好辦法。比如：Icannotbearit.可以表達(dá)為：Icannotputupwithit.這樣詞數(shù)明顯增加，表達(dá)也非常準(zhǔn)確。五、多實(shí)少虛原則寫文章還是應(yīng)該寫一些實(shí)際的東西，不能空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞。這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們想表達(dá)人或事物很好的時(shí)候，不應(yīng)該總用nice這樣空洞的詞，而是要使用一些諸如generous，humorous，interesting，smart，gentle，warm-hearted，hospitable之類的形容詞。這些生動(dòng)形象的詞語(yǔ)一定會(huì)讓你的文章大放異彩，令人耳目一新。六、多變句式原則1.并列（串聯(lián)）我們有時(shí)希望自己能寫出結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜的長(zhǎng)句，但又怕寫錯(cuò)。要解決這一問題，最保險(xiǎn)的寫長(zhǎng)句的方法是在句子之間加and，但它們之間最好是先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。如：Ienjoymusicandheisfondofplayingtheguitar如果二者是并列的，我們還可以用notonly…butalso…表示并列關(guān)系的詞還有：besides，furthermore，likewise，moreover等。2.轉(zhuǎn)折用了表示轉(zhuǎn)折的詞，可以使文章要點(diǎn)明確，重點(diǎn)突出。如：Thecarwasquiteold,yetitwasinexcellentcondition.Thecoatwasthin,butitwaswarm.表轉(zhuǎn)折的詞或短語(yǔ)還有：still，however，nevertheless，inspiteof，despite等3.因果文章中使用了表示因果關(guān)系的詞后，可以讓你的句式變得豐富多彩，語(yǔ)言富于變化，更具說服力。如：Thesnowbegantofall,sowewenthome.表示因果關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞或短語(yǔ)還有：then，therefore，consequently，asaresult，forthisreason，sothat等。4.失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重）有時(shí)突然出現(xiàn)一個(gè)不合乎常理的句子，必然會(huì)吸引別人的注意力，顯得與眾不同。其實(shí)就是使用了主語(yǔ)從句、表語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句。如：ThisiswhatIcando.Whetherhecangowithusornotisnotsure.5.附加定語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)從句或者是插入語(yǔ)的恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用，也會(huì)讓人感覺你既有深厚的語(yǔ)法功底，又具有極強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。如：Themanwhomyoumetyesterdayisafriendofmine.Idon'tenjoythebookyouarereading.Mr.Liu,ouroralEnglishteacher,iseasy-going.6.排比文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過于此，如果要讓你的文章更加精彩的話，可以使用多個(gè)對(duì)偶、多個(gè)不定式、多個(gè)動(dòng)詞、多個(gè)短語(yǔ)等，如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢(shì)。如：Whetheryourtastesaremodernortraditional，complexorsimple，thereisplentyinLondonforyou.Nowadays，energycanbeobtainedthroughvarioussourcessuchasoil，coal，naturalgas，solarheat，windandoceantides.Wehavegottostudyhard,toenlargeourscopeofknowledge,torealizeourpotentialsandtopayforourlife.七、挑戰(zhàn)極限原則挑戰(zhàn)極限聽似很難，但并非高不可攀。在學(xué)生的文章中，很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨(dú)立主格之類的句子，因?yàn)閷W(xué)生要么想不到，要么怕寫錯(cuò)。其實(shí)這一語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目并不難，它只是分詞的一種特殊形式分詞要求前后主語(yǔ)一致，而獨(dú)立主格則有自己的邏輯主語(yǔ)。Theweatherbeingfine,alargenumberofpeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternHills.Africaisthesecondlargestcontinent,itssizebeingaboutthreetimesthatofChina.這種句子出現(xiàn)在文章中一定會(huì)令人刮目相看，很自然地成了一個(gè)得分點(diǎn)。三、變式訓(xùn)練4.假如你是李華。最近你的好友林浩來信說他升人高中以后感到不太適應(yīng),不知道如何結(jié)交新朋友。請(qǐng)用英文給他回信,給出一些建議,主要內(nèi)容包括:1.面帶微笑,對(duì)人友好;2.樂于助人,學(xué)會(huì)傾聽。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearLinHao,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua5假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Tony在你因病住院期間經(jīng)常在網(wǎng)上輔導(dǎo)你學(xué)英語(yǔ)，并鼓勵(lì)你積極面對(duì)病情。請(qǐng)寫封郵件表示感謝，內(nèi)容包括：1.說明寫信目的；2.回顧Tony對(duì)你的幫助；3.再次表達(dá)謝意。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearTony,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua6.假定你是校學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華,你校將于下周開展以"LaboristheMostBeautiful"為主題的勞動(dòng)周活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義發(fā)起倡議，內(nèi)容包括：1.學(xué)生目前對(duì)勞動(dòng)的態(tài)度；2.勞動(dòng)的意義：3.呼吁參加。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dearfellowstudents,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheStudentUnion7.10月4日是世界動(dòng)物日(WorldAnimalDay),中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)社(ChinaDaily)將舉行全球青少年“愛護(hù)動(dòng)物,尊重生命”的線上演講活動(dòng)。假設(shè)你是李華,想申請(qǐng)成為演講代表。請(qǐng)用英文向組委會(huì)寫一則申請(qǐng)信,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：(1)寫信目的；(2)申請(qǐng)?jiān)颍?3)個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)。注意：(1)寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。DearSir/Madam,MynameisLiHua.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely,LiHua8.假定你是高一新生李華,你的同校交換生Mike給你寫郵件,表達(dá)對(duì)于選科的困惑,不知道應(yīng)該選物理還是選歷史,想問你的看法,請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)郵件,要點(diǎn)如下:1.表示理解并安慰;2.分析選科應(yīng)該根據(jù)什么;3.分享自己的選科想法以提供參考。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearMike,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua

答案以及解析1.答案：DearRyan,I'mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit'snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon'tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.Yourssincerely,LiHua2.答案：DearCaroline,

BeinginchargeoftheEnglishprogram"TalkandTalk"runbyourschoolbroadcaststation,Ifeelmuchprivilegedtoinviteyoutoourprogramforalivetalkshow.

Theprogram,meanttopromotetheinterestofthestudentsinEnglishlearningandbroadentheirhorizons,iswidelypopularamongusstudents.Theinterviewwillbeheldat9thiscomingSundaymorning,lastingaboutanhour.②YourtalkshowcancoveranythingrelatedtoEnglish,orwhatschoollifeislikeinyourcountry.

Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyinvitation.Yourssincerely,LiHua3.答案：YouthandMe

WhenourschoolEnglishnewspaperYouthiscelebratingits10thanniversary,Irememberreadingthenewspaperforthefirsttime.AtthattimemyEnglishwasamess.AndIevenwantedtogiveitup.ButtheinterestingstoriestoldinsimpleEnglishinthenewspaperattractedmeandrestoredmyconfidenceinlearningEnglish.Fromthenon,IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.

Ofallthecolumns,IlikethecolumnofTravelingAllOverTheWorld,whereIcangetinformationaboutalotofthingsabroadsuchasmusic,literature,education,sports,scienceandtechnology,whichcannotonlyimprovemyEnglish,especiallytheabilitiesofEnglishreadingandwriting,butalsobroadenmyhorizons.

IhopeYouthwillbemuchmorehelpfultothestudentsinthefuture!4.答案：DearLinHao,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletter.Fromyourletter,Iknowyouhavedifficultymakingnewfriendsinhighschool.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.First,youshouldsmileandtrytobefriendlywhenyoumeetpeople.Youshouldalsocare-aboutyourschoolmates.Ifyouarealwaysreadytohelpthem,theywillunderstandyoubetter.Second,itisimportantforyoutobeagoodlistener.Thatway,whenpeoplearewithyou,theywillfeelcomfortableandhappy.Finally,itisbetterforyoutotakeanactivepartinclassactivitieswhereyoucanshowyourtalent.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.Yours,LiHua5.答案：DearTony,I'mwritingtoexpressmygratitudetoyouforyourhelpandencouragementduringmystayinhospital.Undoubtedly,ifitwerenotforthefactthatyouhelpedmelearnEnglishonlineeveryday,Icouldn'thavemademyEnglishstudygosmoothlyasusual.It'syourconstantencouragementandpositiveattitudetowardslifethatguidemeoutoflowspiritsandhelpmedealwithmyillness,studyandlifeinsuchasoundway.Manythankstoyouagain.Wishyouallthebest.Yours,LiHua6.答案：Dearfellowstudents，Currently,laboreducationhasbeenincreasinglyattachedgreatimportanceto,butsomestudentsjustburythemselvesinbooks,believingthatlaborisawasteoftime.However,itisnecessaryforustodoit.Actually,timespentlaboringisrewarding.Itcanpromoteourpracticalskills,strongwil,unityandcooperation.Meanwhile,wewillalsobegiventhepreciouschancestocontributeourshareandrewardedwithaspiritualfulfillment.Therefore,activelyengageinlaborandtakeourobligationbothathomeandatschool.Itwillturnouttobeverybeneficialandessential.TheStudentUnion7.答案：DearSir/Madam,MynameisLiHua.WithWorldAnimalDayaroundt