Unit1Myname'sGina.【寫作課】七年級(jí)上冊(cè)英語單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（人教版）

Unit1Myname’sGina.單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度自薦信人物介紹（榜樣、親人、朋友、老師、同學(xué)等）本單元寫作要求同學(xué)們能用所學(xué)的詞語和句型簡(jiǎn)單地介紹自己或他人。在平時(shí)的生活中我們常常需要向別人介紹自己或他人，內(nèi)容包括姓名、年齡、性別、號(hào)碼、外貌、愛好等。在具體的寫作中，學(xué)生應(yīng)做到以下幾點(diǎn)：1.能用be動(dòng)詞的三種形式（am/is/are）介紹自己或朋友；2.能正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)；3.能正確書寫英語句子；4.能正確書寫中英文姓名。（以思維導(dǎo)圖的形式呈現(xiàn)）【詞匯積累】1.name名字2.friend朋友3.my/his/her我的/他的/她的4.telephonenumber號(hào)碼5.fullname全名6.firstname名字/lastname姓7.middleschool中學(xué)，初中8.student學(xué)生【句式積累】※開頭句1.Hello/Hi!Mynameis...嗨！我的名字叫……2.Hello.I’mMary.你好，我是瑪麗。3.Hello/Hi!Myfriendis…/She/Heis…嗨！我的朋友是……/她/他是……4.Goodmorning/afternoon!I'm…早上好/下午好！我是……5.Hello!Thisismyfriend...你好！這是我的朋友……6.Nicetomeetyou.見到你很開心。※中間句1.I’m12yearsold.我12歲了。2.My/His/Herphonenumberis2324672.我的/他的/她的號(hào)碼是2324672.3.I’mastudentofNo.1MiddleSchool/IstudyatNo.1MiddleSchool.我是第一中學(xué)的學(xué)生。/我在第一中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。4.I’minClass3Grade7.我在七年級(jí)三班。5.She/Heisshort/mediumheight/tall.她/他矮/中等身高/高。6.She/Hehasbig/smalleyes/mouth/ears.她/他有大/小眼睛/嘴巴/耳朵。7.She/Hewearsglasses.她/他戴眼鏡。8.She/Heisthin/fit/fat.她/他瘦/健康的/肥胖的。9.She/Hehaslong/short/black/blondehair.她/他有長(zhǎng)/短/黑色的/金色的頭發(fā)。10.She/Helikestodo/likesdoing/enjoysdoing.她/他喜歡做……※結(jié)尾句1.Wearegoodfriends.我們是好朋友。2.Iliketobeyourfriend.Andyou?我想跟你做朋友。你呢？3.What'syourname？Canyoutellme?你叫什么名字？能告訴我嗎？【諺語積累】1.Isitnotajoytohavefriendsingfromafar?有朋自遠(yuǎn)方來，不亦樂乎？2.Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutsunshine.人生沒有朋友，猶如生活沒有陽光。3.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難見真情。4.Abosomfriendafarbringsadistantlandnear.海內(nèi)存知己，天涯若比鄰?！救f能寫作模板】模板①介紹人物的外形特征Ihavemademanygoodfriends.（引出人物）isoneofthem.Sheis（總體給人的感覺）.Sheistalland（身材）.Herhairis（頭發(fā)）.Shealwayswears（表情）andgivesustheimpressionthat（給人的印象）.介紹人物的外形特征介紹人物的性格特征并記敘一個(gè)典型的事例提出愿望isalwayswillingto（性格）.Sheisgoodat（特長(zhǎng)）.WheneverIhaveproblemsI.Once（引出事例）.Tomysurprise,.介紹人物的性格特征并記敘一個(gè)典型的事例提出愿望Wewill,butIhope（表達(dá)愿望）.模板②人物介紹人物介紹（年齡、外貌、身份、性格等）...isanineyearoldboy.Heisvery...and...Heisverynaughty.Andhe...典型事例（說明性格、品質(zhì)等）人物評(píng)價(jià)（喜愛、夸贊等情感）Heoften...Onedayhe......likehimverymuch.Ithinkhe...新學(xué)期開學(xué)了，請(qǐng)你在同學(xué)們面前做一個(gè)自我介紹。要求：1.詞數(shù)60左右。2.介紹中包括你的姓名、年齡、聯(lián)系方式等。3.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【審題思路】1.根據(jù)提示，確定人稱用第一人稱。2.文章需要介紹姓名，年齡，聯(lián)系方式等，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，句子之間要恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂眠B詞，使上下文連貫通暢。3.文章的詞數(shù)60左右?！炯炎餍蕾p1】Hello,everyone,nowIwanttomakefriendswithyou.MynameisGinaGreen.GinaismyfirstnameandGreenismyfamilyname.Iamagirlattheageof12,Ilikechatting(聊天)ontheInternet（上網(wǎng)）,andmyQQnumberis7845362.What’syours?【佳作欣賞2】I’mLiHua.MyfirstnameisHua.MylastnameisLi.Mytelephonenumberis9295841.I’mfromXiWangMiddleSchool.Ihaveagoodfriend.SheisMaryBrown.HerfirstnameisMary.HerlastnameisBrown.Hertelephonenumberis3029617.1.給自己制作一張IDcard。FillinyourownIDcardandwriteaboutyourself.（注意句子首字母大寫和句號(hào)的使用以及人稱的變化。）IDCardphotoFirstName:____________photoLastName:_____________PhoneNumber:_____________Myfirstname_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】略二、分別寫出圖中人物的姓和名ZhangPengFirstname___________Lastname___________DavidBrownFirstname___________Lastname___________【答案】Peng；Zhang；David；Brown三、用英語寫出下列數(shù)字。1.120_________________________2.114_________________________3.119_________________________4.10086_______________________5.12315_______________________6.17951_______________________【答案】1.onetwozero2.doubleonefour3.doubleonenine4.onedoublezeroeightsix5.onetwothreeonefive6.onesevenninefiveone四、連一連1.Hello,I’mCindy. A.I’mChenKang.2.What’syourname? B.It’s8769548.3.Hello.I’mGrace. C.Nicetomeetyou,Cindy.4.Myname’sEric. D.Nicetomeetyou,Eric.I’mBill.5.What’shistelephonenumber? E.Hi,Grace.I’mAlice.【答案】1.C2.A3.E4.D5.B五、連詞成句，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)和大寫字母。1.is,what,his,name,last(?)_______________________________________________________2.name,is,her,Grace,first(.)_______________________________________________________3.her,what,phone,is,number,(?)_______________________________________________________4.is,your,this,number(?)_______________________________________________________5.Brown,her,is,friend,Eric(.)_______________________________________________________6.is,friend,Bill,your(?)_______________________________________________________【答案】1.Whatishisfirstname?2.HerfirstnameisBruce.3.Whatisherphonenumber?4.Isthisyournumber?5.HerfriendisEricBrown.6.IsyourfriendBill?/IsBillyourfriend?六、按要求完成下列句子。

1.HisfirstnameisAlan.(對(duì)畫線部分提問)_______________________________________________________2.MynameisTony.(改為同義句)________________________________Tony.3.Herphonenumberis92931.(對(duì)畫線部分提問)_______________________________________________________4.MyfamilynameisMiller.(改為同義句)My________________________________isMiller.【答案】1.What’shisfirstname?2.Iam3.What’sherphonenumber?4.lastname七、根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容，從方框中選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~填空，每詞限用一次。nicefriendlastnumberinEnglishfirstI'm

Alice.I'm14.I'm1No.2MiddleSchool.Ihavea(n)2.His3nameisAlanand4nameisGreen.Heisa(n)5boy.Heisvery6.Histelephone7is8765637.【答案】1.in2.friend3.first4.last5.English6.nice7.number（一）假設(shè)你是李華，Peter是你的美國網(wǎng)友。他最近發(fā)給你一封電子郵件，詢問你的個(gè)人情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，給他回一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容提示：1.Whatisyourlivinghabit?2.Howdoyougotoschool?3.Whatareyourfamilyrulesandwhatdoyouthinkofthem?要求：1.不少于80詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.必須包括所有內(nèi)容提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.書寫工整、規(guī)范。不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等。DearPeter,Thanksforyouremail.I’mveryhappytotellyousomethingaboutmyself.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________CanIknowmoreaboutyou?Ihopetogetyouremailsoon.Yours,LiHua【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意在描述一天的作息時(shí)，按照時(shí)間先后寫清楚時(shí)間點(diǎn)，避免“時(shí)間混亂”?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，描述生活習(xí)慣。按照一天時(shí)間先后的順序描述一天的作息情況；第二步，闡述家規(guī)和對(duì)家規(guī)的理解。用具體的事例來說明“家規(guī)嚴(yán)厲”，表達(dá)對(duì)父母的理解；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)希望收到回信?！緷M分作文】DearPeter,Thanksforyouremail.I’mveryhappytotellyousomethingaboutmyself.Everymorning,Igetupatsixo’clock.Thenat7:00,Igotoschool.Myhomeisnotfarfromourschool,soIusuallygotoschoolbybike.Ittakesmeonly15minutes.Ithinkit’sgoodexerciseforme.Iusuallyhavelunchat12:00atschool.Andmyclassesfinishat6:00p.m.Ihavealotofrulesathome.Forexample,whenIgethome,Imustdomyhomeworkfirst.Ihavetodothedishesafterdinner.Ican’tplaywithphonegamesonschoolnights.Imustgotobedbefore9:00.What’smore,Ican’trelaxonweekends,either.Ihavetopracticethepiano.Ithinkmostofmyfamilyrulesarestrict.ButIknowmyparentsmakethemtohelpmebebetter.SoIalwaysfollowthem.CanIknowmoreaboutyou?Ihopetogetyouremailsoon.Yours,LiHua【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①everymorning每天早晨②alotof許多③what’smore更重要的是④onweekends在周末【高分句型】①M(fèi)yhomeisnotfarfromourschool,soIusuallygotoschoolbybike.（so表結(jié)果）②What’smore,Ican’trelaxonweekends,either.（either用于否定句，一般放在句末，意為“也”）（二）假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Jack想讓你介紹一下你的一個(gè)好朋友。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示給他寫一封電子郵件介紹相關(guān)內(nèi)容。提示：1.姓名，年齡；2.頭發(fā)，身高，體型，性格；3.你喜歡他/她的理由。要求：1.語句通順，語意連貫，語法正確；2.提示內(nèi)容全部包括，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJack,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中你的好朋友的介紹要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，表明寫作意圖——介紹好朋友；第二步，具體介紹好朋友的個(gè)人基本信息及愛好等；第三步，介紹你喜歡他的理由?！緷M分作文】DearJack,I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutmygoodfriend,Tony.Heistallandthin.Hehasshortblackhair,aroundfaceandasmallnose.Heis180cmtallandofmediumbuild.He’sveryoutgoing.Helikessportsverymuchandhecanplaybasketballwell.Thatmakeshimverycoolandstrong.HisfavoritesubjectsareEnglish,math,Chinese,artandsoon.Healwaysgetsgoodgradesatschool.I’mweakatEnglish.HeoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.Heisalsofriendlyandhelpfultoothers.Wealllikehimverymuch.Yours,LiHua【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①tellsbaboutsth告訴某人關(guān)于某事②beofmediumbuild中等身材③beweakat不擅長(zhǎng)④helpsbwithsth幫助某人某事【高分句型】I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutmygoodfriend,Tony(動(dòng)詞不定式作原因狀語)（三）你的同學(xué)李大明的弟弟李小明今天早上在公園里走失，他們家很擔(dān)心。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中小明的個(gè)人資料，為他們寫一則尋人啟事。nameLiXiaomingage7appearancetall,ofmediumbuild,shorthair,bigeyes,asmallmouth,wearglassesclothesblueTshirt,brownshorts,blackshoesactivityplaysoccer,flyakite（inthepark）telephone8881234要求：內(nèi)容包含表格信息；不出現(xiàn)具體校名；字?jǐn)?shù)在6080個(gè)；首末句已給，不計(jì)詞數(shù)。Wearelookingforaboy.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇尋人啟事。②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”。③提示：文章為第三人稱，介紹丟失的小孩李小明的詳細(xì)情況，表格內(nèi)容描述完整，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，開門見山，介紹人物姓名、年齡，以及外貌特征；第二步，介紹他的穿著；第三步，聯(lián)系方式及表達(dá)感謝。【滿分作文】Wearelookingforaboy.HisnameisLiXiaoming.Heissevenyearsold.Heistallwithshorthair.Heisofmediumbuild.Hehasbigeyes,asmallmouthandabignose.HewearsglassesandablueTshirt,brownshortsandblackshoes.Heplayedsoccerandflewakitewithhisfriendsfrom8to10inthepark.Atnoon,hedidn’tebackhome.Ifyouseetheboy,pleasecall8881234.Thankyouverymuch.【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①lookfor尋找②mediumbuild中等身材③from…to…從……到……④atnoon中午⑤eback回來【高分句型】①Hehasbigeyes,asmallmouthandabignose.（并列句）②Ifyouseetheboy,pleasecall8881234.（條件狀語從句）（四）假如你是LiHua，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的信息提示，以“Mygoodfriend”為題，用英語寫一篇小短文，介紹一下你的好朋友ZhangLei?！馴hangLei的基本情況1.男孩，13歲，生日是5月5號(hào)，父母親是老師。2.最喜歡語文，也喜歡英語，因?yàn)樗J(rèn)為語文很有趣，英語很有用。3.早餐喜歡牛奶，中餐吃蔬菜，晚餐吃水果，吃得好，飲食習(xí)慣很健康。4.喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，放學(xué)后和朋友們打籃球?！褚螅?.詞數(shù)60左右。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校。Mygoodfriend________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】此作文時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，采用第三人稱口吻。此作文可分為3段落格式，第一段：介紹最好的朋友是誰、他的個(gè)人基本信息以及最喜愛的科目；第二段：介紹他最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)及其原因；第三段：介紹好朋友的飲食習(xí)慣?！緷M分作文】MygoodfriendHello,everyone!MynameisLiHua.Ihaveagoodfriend.HisnameisZhangLei.Heisaboy.Heis13.HisbirthdayisonMayfifth.Weareinthesameclass.Hisparentsareteachers.HisfavoritesubjectisChinese,becauseit’sinteresting.HelikesEnglish,too.Becausehethinksit’suseful.ZhangLeilikessports.Helikesbasketball.Healwaysplaysbasketballwithhisfriendsafterschool.Hethinksit’sfun.ZhangLeilikesbreadforbreakfastandvegetablesforlunch.Fordinnerhelikesfruit.Heeatswell.Hehasgoodeatinghabits.Isheagoodstudent?Doyoulikehim?（一）假如你叫Jenny，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示，描述你的兩個(gè)好朋友——Tina和Laura。你可以從身材、發(fā)型、五官、衣著和愛好等方面進(jìn)行描述。不少于60詞。姓名TinaLaura身高高大中等體型微胖偏瘦發(fā)型黑色短發(fā)棕色卷發(fā)眼睛大小鼻子大小穿著戴眼鏡，穿牛仔褲和運(yùn)動(dòng)鞋不戴眼鏡，穿校服愛好體育：打排球音樂：會(huì)彈鋼琴_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】此作文時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；采用第三人稱口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：引出自己有兩位朋友；第二段：從身材、發(fā)型、五官、衣著和愛好等方面描述朋友Tina；第三段：從身材、發(fā)型、五官、衣著和愛好等方面描述朋友Laura。【滿分作文】I’mJenny.Ihavetwogoodfriendsatschool.TheyareTinaandLaura.Tinaistallandalittleheavy.Shehasshortblackhair.Shehastwobigeyes.Hernoseisbig,too.Shewearsglasses.Andsheoftenwearsjeansandsportsshoes.Shelovessportsandsheplaysvolleyballverywell.Lauraisthinandofmediumheight.Shehascurlybrownhair.Shehastwosmalleyesandasmallnose.Shedoesn’twearglasses.Shealwayswearstheschooluniform.Shelikesmusicverymuch.Shecanplaythepianoverywell.（一）（2023·福建·中考真題）某地“美麗鄉(xiāng)村（BeautifulVillage）”項(xiàng)目吸引了不少外賓，暑假期間需要數(shù)名擅長(zhǎng)英語的小導(dǎo)游。假定你是李華，希望成為其中的一員。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合以下表格提示，給該項(xiàng)目的外事負(fù)責(zé)人王先生寫一封英文自薦信。詞數(shù)80左右。Whatkindofpersonyouare?friendly,active…Whatyouaregoodat?speakEnglish,tellstories…Whatyoucando?introducelocalculture,helpforeigners…注意事項(xiàng)：1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名和地名。DearMr.Wang,IamLiHua.Iamgladtoknowthatyouareinneedofsometourguides.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【思路解讀】①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為一封自薦信；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第一人稱為主?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，承接開頭，介紹自己想成為“美麗鄉(xiāng)村”項(xiàng)目的英語小導(dǎo)游；第二步，具體闡述自己具備的品質(zhì)和擅長(zhǎng)做的事；第三步，最后書寫結(jié)尾，再次表達(dá)希望成為小導(dǎo)游中的一員?！緷M分作文】DearMr.Wang,IamLiHua.Iamgladtoknowthatyouareinneedofsometourguides.I’dliketobeoneofthem.IthinkIamsuitableforthejob.Firstofall,Iamfriendlyandpatient.Iamactiveinmanyactivities.Besides,IspeakEnglishwellandhavewonseveralprizesinEnglishspeakingpetitions.Iamalsogoodattellingstories.SoIcanintroducelocalculturetoforeignersinEnglish.Mostimportantly,IhavevisitedthebeautifulvillagemanytimesandIcanhelpforeignersbetterunderstandthelifeofthevillage.IwouldbethankfulifIcouldbegiventhechance.Yours,LiHua【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】①besuitablefor適合于……②introducesthtosb向某人介紹某物③Mostimportantly最重要的是【高分句型】①IthinkIamsuitableforthejob.（省略that的賓語從句）②IwouldbethankfulifIcouldbegiventhechance.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句；被動(dòng)語態(tài)）（二）（2022·四川宜賓·中考真題）親愛的同學(xué)，三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束，你一定有很多感慨。在此之際，請(qǐng)你以“MyFavoriteTeacher”為題，用英語寫一篇短文向?qū)W校?？⑽臋谀客陡?。內(nèi)容包括：1.最喜歡的老師；2.簡(jiǎn)單介紹該老師（外貌或性格）；3.喜歡他（她）的理由（兩個(gè)）；4.最想對(duì)老師說的話。注意：1.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名（只用Mr./Ms./Miss+姓；學(xué)科）；3.詞數(shù)100左右。開頭已為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MyFavoriteTeacherHowtimeflies!Mythreeyearjuniormiddleschoollifewillbeoversoon.Lookingback,Ihavemanymemoriesofmyteachers.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解讀】本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第三人稱為主。文章可分為三段式：第一段文章已給。第二段闡述喜歡的這位老師是誰、他(她)的外貌或性格、以及喜歡的原因。最后一段介紹自己想對(duì)老師說的話。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。【滿分作文】MyFavoriteTeacherHowtimeflies!MythreeyearMiddleschoollifewillbeoversoon.Lookingback,Ihavemanymemoriesofmyteachers.Asforme,myfavoriteteacherisMs.Li,ourEnglishteacher.Sheisabitthinbutverybeautiful,withapairofthick