2024年高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)考點(diǎn)54書(shū)面表達(dá)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)精彩結(jié)尾（重難題型）

54書(shū)面表達(dá)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)精彩結(jié)尾序號(hào)內(nèi)容精彩結(jié)尾1畫(huà)面定格——人物動(dòng)作的畫(huà)面定格精彩結(jié)尾2畫(huà)面定格——特殊寓意的寫(xiě)景畫(huà)面精彩結(jié)尾3對(duì)話結(jié)尾精彩結(jié)尾4主題升華精彩結(jié)尾5結(jié)尾留白精彩結(jié)尾6首尾呼應(yīng)精彩結(jié)尾01：畫(huà)面定格——人物動(dòng)作的畫(huà)面定格01Theystoodthereforamoment,sidebyside,waitingfortherushingholidaycurrentandfortheirplaceinit.Thenthedaughterglancedoverandmomentarilyregardedhermother.Andslowly,almostreluctantly,sheplacedherarmwithapparentlyunaccustomedaffectionaroundhermother’sshouldersandgentlyguidedherbackintothedeluge.她們并肩站在那里，等待著節(jié)日的浪潮，等待著她們?cè)诶顺敝械奈恢谩Ｈ缓笈畠簰吡艘谎?，立刻注視著她的母親。慢慢地，幾乎是不情愿地，帶著明顯不習(xí)慣的愛(ài)她把胳膊放在她母親的肩膀上，輕輕地引導(dǎo)她回到洪水中。02Hishardworkpaidoff!Holdingthesodatinfirmly,Reubenrushedfortheshoptobuythebrooch.Themomenthegotthebeautifulbrooch,heburstthroughthefrontdoorandplaceditinDora’shand.NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift.Speechlessandhappy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.他的努力得到了回報(bào)！魯本緊緊地握著汽水罐，沖向商店去買(mǎi)胸針。他一拿到那枚漂亮的胸針，就沖進(jìn)前門(mén)，把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉從來(lái)沒(méi)有收到過(guò)這樣的禮物。她高興得說(shuō)不出話來(lái)，緊緊地把兒子抱在懷里，眼淚涌了出來(lái)。03Thebutterflycleanedhertearsontheface，“No.”Godfeltabitrelievedandsaid，“Tomorrowyoucanbeehumanagain.”Butsheshookherheadandsaid,“No,Iwanttobeabutterflyfortherestofmylife...”Thenthebutterflywouldstaytogetherwithherloverforever.Onthetopofthemountain,sheseemedtoenjoythesunriseandthesunsethappilywiththem.蝴蝶擦干了臉上的眼淚，說(shuō)，“不。”上帝松了一口氣，說(shuō)。“明天你就可以變回人類(lèi)了?！钡龘u了搖頭說(shuō)，“不，我想做一輩子蝴蝶...”然后蝴蝶就會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)和她的愛(ài)人在一起。在山頂上，她似乎和他們一起快樂(lè)地享受著日出和日落。讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)精彩結(jié)尾02：畫(huà)面定格——特殊寓意的寫(xiě)景畫(huà)面01Theskywasabillionpureeyesoflightandthegrassgreenunderfoot,itwasasifnightanddayhadbeeonebeautifulmoment.Dawnhade.天空像是十億只純凈的眼睛拼接在一起，腳下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白晝已成為一個(gè)美麗的時(shí)刻。黎明已經(jīng)來(lái)臨。（黎明到來(lái)的畫(huà)面）02Dawnsentshimmeringraysovertheplacidocean,bestowingagoldenpathfromtheshoretothehorizon.黎明在平靜的海面上放射出出閃閃發(fā)亮的光線，留下一條從海岸到地平線橫亙而過(guò)的金色道路。（黎明到來(lái)的畫(huà)面）03ThecrystalandceruleanwaterwasgentleasIwadedthroughit,thesunsetlikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.當(dāng)我涉過(guò)水晶般天藍(lán)色的輕柔的水時(shí)，日落就像藍(lán)色畫(huà)布上的橙色顏料。（美好日落時(shí)的畫(huà)面）04Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight，resemblingapitchblackcurtaindrapedoverthesky.逗留在天際的最后一縷陽(yáng)光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一層漆黑的幕布覆蓋。（日落時(shí)的畫(huà)面）05Themoonundersiegebystarsseemedtolightenthenightbringingforthstarsthatshoneandhungintheblackness.Theneverendingblacknessconsumedeverything.被群星圍困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，帶來(lái)了在黑暗中閃耀和懸掛著的群星。無(wú)盡的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描寫(xiě)夜空的畫(huà)面）06Lookingup,IsawthesunshinebrighterthanIeverknewbefore.Isawatreeinthedistanceglistengentlyasitreflectedthesun'srays.Myconsciousnessebbedawaywiththeheat.ItookafewblinksbeforeIlandedwithathud.抬頭一看，我看到太陽(yáng)比我以前所知道的還要明亮。我看見(jiàn)遠(yuǎn)處有一棵樹(shù)反射著太陽(yáng)光，發(fā)出柔和的光輝。我的意識(shí)隨著熱度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到現(xiàn)實(shí)中，恢復(fù)了知覺(jué)。（特殊寓意）07Dottedwithglitteringstars,thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality.綴滿星光的天空，午夜的藍(lán)色，給了這一場(chǎng)景一個(gè)童話般的質(zhì)量。（神話般美麗的夜空畫(huà)面）08Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨水打著窗戶，向最后一縷陽(yáng)光告別。（雨水來(lái)臨的畫(huà)面）Kissedbytherainandglistening,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrisesfromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.潮濕的地面走起來(lái)很冷，被雨水親吻后閃閃發(fā)光。一股濃郁的泥土般的香味從地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔軟的懷抱里。（雨后清新的畫(huà)面）09TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.我在街上漫步時(shí)，樹(shù)葉在我腳下嘎吱作響。偶爾，有葉子會(huì)從我身邊掉下來(lái)，輕輕地?fù)u晃，緩緩落到到地面。（描寫(xiě)落葉的畫(huà)面）讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)精彩結(jié)尾03：對(duì)話結(jié)尾01Chestersaidhisfathertoldhimhehadtriedtosearchforhimandhisbrother,butbothbrothershadchangedtheirlastnames.“Hedoesremembermeandmyolderbrotherandhetoldmethathe’sbeenlookingforuseversincewelostcontact,”hesaid.ChestersaidhisbrotherhassinceflowntoColombiatobereunitedwithUrreaaswell.Whenaskedhowthereunionwithhisfatherwillchangehislife,Chestersaid,“Igotfamilyeverywhere,soitmightleadtomanymoretripsnow.”Chester說(shuō)他父親告訴他，他曾試圖尋找他和他哥哥，但兩兄弟都改了姓。“他確實(shí)記得我和我哥哥，他告訴我，自從我們失去聯(lián)系以來(lái)，他一直在找我們，”他說(shuō)。Chester說(shuō)他哥哥也飛去哥倫比亞和Urrea團(tuán)聚了。當(dāng)被問(wèn)及與父親的團(tuán)聚會(huì)如何改變他的生活時(shí)，Chester說(shuō)，“我的家人無(wú)處不在，所以現(xiàn)在可能會(huì)有更多的出行?！?2WhatwasmostfascinatingaboutthereunionisthatShavialsomovesothers.Nina’sfamilyhadmovedtoabiggerapartment.“I’veheardamazingstoriesaboutdogs’loyalty,butIneverimaginedthissortofthingwouldeverhappentome.Evennow,Icanhardlybelievethisdogtraveledsuchalongdistancetofindus，”saidNina，“Iwouldnevergivethiskindoffriendawayagain.Inevergrowtiredofrepeatingthis—animalsarethemostdevotedandlovingcreatures.Theyneedourloveandcare.”這次重聚最吸引人的地方在于，沙維也打動(dòng)了其他人。妮娜的家人搬到了一個(gè)更大的公寓?！蔽衣?tīng)說(shuō)過(guò)狗狗忠心耿耿的故事，但我從沒(méi)想過(guò)這種事會(huì)發(fā)生在我身上。即使是現(xiàn)在，我也很難相信這只狗走了這么遠(yuǎn)的路來(lái)找我們，”妮娜說(shuō)，“我再也不會(huì)放棄這樣的朋友了。我總是不厭其煩地重復(fù)這句話——?jiǎng)游锸亲钪艺\(chéng)和最可愛(ài)的生物。他們需要我們的愛(ài)和關(guān)心?！?3HerhusbandspoketothedirectorofHeightvale,DoloresHaworth.Soonsheofferedhimajobwork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inthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Father’sappearingwaslikeasaviortothetwochildren.Undertheguidanceoftheirfather,theytookpositiveactionsandstartedalloveragain.Theymadethebreadandthenwentoncookingporridge.Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.Itwasallrightthistime.Deliciousbreakfastwasready.Howhappytheywere!Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousandperfectbreakfastinfrontofher,shewasverysurprised.Itwasnotonlythegift,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.Thetwochildrencouldfinishcookingabreakfast,whichshedidn’texpect.Thechildrensaidloudly,“HappyMother’sDay!”Motherhuggedthemtightlyandkissedthemagainandagain.【解析】【分析】本文以母親節(jié)為線索展開(kāi)，講述了雙胞胎Jenna和Jeff為了獻(xiàn)給母親一份美味的早餐，自己動(dòng)手，做起飯餐來(lái)，但是不幸的是，他們連連失敗，后來(lái)在父親的幫助下，獲得成功，他們把早餐獻(xiàn)給親愛(ài)的母親，媽媽非常感動(dòng)的故事?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)雙胞胎失望地環(huán)顧四周時(shí)，他們的父親出現(xiàn)了?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫(xiě)他們的父親指導(dǎo)幫助他們準(zhǔn)備早餐。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“這對(duì)雙胞胎把早餐端到樓上，叫醒了他們的母親?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼?xiě)母親收到孩子們的禮物早餐，非常感動(dòng)。

2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線索：幫助——指導(dǎo)——積極——獻(xiàn)禮——感動(dòng)

3.詞匯激活

行為類(lèi)

①幫助：help/assist②.指導(dǎo)：guide/conduct

③.獻(xiàn)禮：presentagift/giveagift

情緒類(lèi)

①.積極：positive/positively/takepositiveactions

②.感動(dòng)：moved/touchedWriting1（2022·浙江·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Whateverlifethrewatuseachyear,eChristmasourfamilyhadoneconstanttradition:ourdogPepperopenedourpresentsforus.Watchingoursweetdogunwrapgiftsalwayswarmedtheholiday,whichwasoftenalittlebittersweetbecausecollege,studyingabroad,orworkmitmentsoftenkeptmytwosistersandmeaway.Oneyear,everyonemadeithomeforaChristmastogether.Ivisitedfromcollege,KaciflewinfromArizona,andKarawasbackfromIreland.Mom’sjubilancekeptherbusybakingcookiesforusall.OurChristmasseasonshouldhavebeenperfect.Itcouldn’tfeelperfect,though,becausePepper’shealthwasdeteriorating.Herlifehadalreadybeenlongerthanweexpected—shewasfourteen—andyethermindwasstillsharp.Herenthusiasmforlifemadeusfeelbetter.Butherbodycouldnotkeepupwithherspirit.She’dalreadyshowntheusualsignsofdeafnessandstiffness.Thatyear,herhipsandbacklegsstartedgivingoutonher.Weknewwewouldsoonhavetomakeadifficultdecision.ItwaslikelyPepper’slastChristmas,sowedecidedtomakesuresheenjoyedit.OnChristmasEve,wegatheredaroundthetreetoopenanearlypresent.WeeachtookaturnandthencalledPeppertoopenonemore.Buthertangledlegscouldnotnavigatetheboxesandshreddedwrappingpaperonthefloor.Shestumbledovertheobstacles,andsoonshedisappearedintothenextroom.Shecrumpledbacktothefloor,asoutofthewayasshecouldget.Wewereheartbroken.CouldPepperevenparticipateinherlastChristmas?Pepperstayedontheperipheryofallourholidayactivities.Throughouttheday,wegavegiftsbutdidnotfeelverygiving.Wesharedstoriesovercinnamonrollsthattastedbland.Weplayedgamesbythetreewhosetwinkleshaddimmed.Thatevening,Kacisaidwhatwe’dallbeenthinking:“IwishPeppercouldhavehelpedopenpresentsthisyear.”Weallputdownourmugsofspicedtea.“Maybeshestillcould,”Karasaid.“Butthere’snoneleft,”Momremindedher.Karajumpedupandlefttheroom.Weheardheropeningdrawersandcabinetsinthekitchen.注意：(1)字?jǐn)?shù)150左右，(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙上作答。Karareturnedwithaboxofdogbiscuits,scissors,apileofcolorpaper,andarolloftape.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Soon,PepperselectedherfirstChristmasgift.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Karareturnedwithaboxofdogbiscuits,scissors,apileofcolorpaper,andarolloftape.Shecutasmallsectionfromthepaperandwrappedasingledogtreatinit.Shehelditupasifshehadjuststruckgold.“Nowthere’sapresentforher!”IkneltonthefloornexttoKaraandwrappedanother.KaciandMomjoinedin,too.Soon,wehadfourelegantlywrappeddogbiscuitsinarowonthefloor.weclearedthefloorofdiscardedwrappingpaper.“GogetPepper,”weurged,bouncingeagerly.Momwentintothenextroom.“Youwannaopenapresent,girl”shecoaxed.Inamoment,Pepperstuckherheadintotheroom,earsfullyperkedwithanticipationandcuriosity.Skiddedonstiltedlegstotherowofpresents,shesniffedallfourinorderandlookedbackandforth.Shedneverhadsuchawidechoicebefore.Soon,PepperselectedherfirstChristmasgift.Shenimblyturnedthepresentwithherforepaw,justlikeshewasaspryyoungdogoncemore.Shetuggedeverylastscrapofpaperoffthedogtreatbeforeshecheweditwithhercustomarygrace.Ourfamilyswelledwithglee.Pepperlickedthelastcrumbfromthefloor.Sheeyedtheremainingthreepresents,thenturnedtoMomasifasking,“MayIpleaseopenanother?”“Goahead,girl!”Momencouraged.Forthenextfewminutes,PepperopenedeachofherChristmaspresents.Whileshedid,sheremindedusofthesheerjoyofbeingtogether.Ourfamilyfeltwhole—notbecausewewereinthesameroom,city,orcountry,butbecauseourlovebondedustogether.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文以人物為線索展開(kāi)，講述了作者家每年總是讓他們家的狗Pepper來(lái)拆圣誕禮物，但是Pepper的年紀(jì)越來(lái)越大了，健康狀況很不好。于是今年家人們?yōu)镻epper準(zhǔn)備了禮物，讓Pepper自己來(lái)拆?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“Kara拿著一盒狗餅干、剪刀、一堆彩紙和一卷膠帶回來(lái)了。”可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)Kara為Pepper準(zhǔn)備禮物的過(guò)程。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“很快，Pepper選擇了她的第一份圣誕禮物?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫(xiě)Pepper拆禮物的經(jīng)過(guò)和作者的感悟。2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線索：Kara準(zhǔn)備禮物——讓Pepper拆禮物——開(kāi)始拆禮物——作者感悟3.詞匯激活行為類(lèi)回來(lái)：return/getback打開(kāi)：open/unfold進(jìn)入：gointo/getinto情緒類(lèi)期待：anticipation/expectation快樂(lè)：joy/happiness【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Shehelditupasifshehadjuststruckgold.(運(yùn)用了asif引導(dǎo)方式狀語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Ourfamilyfeltwhole—notbecausewewereinthesameroom,city,orcountry,butbecauseourlovebondedustogether.(運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句)Writing2（2023·浙江省杭州第二中學(xué)模擬預(yù)測(cè)）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Edundidnotwanttogoonahike.Sheespeciallydidnotwanttogoonalonghikeinthemountainsthatledtoatinycabin(小木屋)withnoelectricityandnorunningwater.Shewantedtostayhomereadingabookinsteadwhilewrappedinawarmblanket.“Ready?”Momaskedcheerfullyafterbreakfast.Edunlookedoutthewindowandonlysawrain,lotsofit.“Weshouldgoanotherday,”Edunsuggested.“Maybeahundredyearsfromnow.”Sheworriedshewouldgettiredonthehike.Sheworriedaboutgettingboredatthedarkcabin.Momsaiditwastimetostopworryingandgetintothecar.Edun’sbrother,Will,waswaitinginthegarage,whoworeacameraaroundhisneck.WillwasfouryearsolderthanEdunandhadclimbedmanymoremountains.He’dstartedhikingwhenhewastwoandlovedit.Becauseitwasraining,Edunhadtowearherrainpants,herrainhat,herrainjacket,andherwaterproofboots.Herjackethadaroughmaterialontheinside.Shedidn’tlikehowitfeltagainstherskin.Afterabouthalfanhour’sdrive,theyparkedatatrailhead(登山口).Therainhadstoppedbutthegroundwasstilldrippingwet.“We’llbetherebyafternoon!”Mompromised.Theafternoonsoundedfaraway.Willidentifiedabirdsittingonanearbybranch—“Foxsparrow!”—thenheraceddownthetrailandwassoonoutofsight.Edunrestedunderapinetree.“Youcan’tforcemetowalk,”Edunsaid.“You’reright,”saidhermomsmilingly,standingunderthetree,too,“Butyouwillneverknowwhatmaylieaheadandamazeus.”注意：1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；4.續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1:ThinkingMomwasright,Edunfollowedherdownthetrail.Paragraph2:Twentyminuteslater,theysawthecabin.【答案】Paragraph1:ThinkingMomwasright,Edunfollowedherdownthetrail.Theypassedawaterfall,tinyyetclear.ThetricklingofwatermadeEdunfeelbetter.Toheramazement,astheywalkedon,therewasalwayssomethingtolookforinthewetgreenwoods:animaltracks,wildflowers,littlecreeks.SoontheycaughtupwithWill,whoeagerlyshowedthemthephotoshetookoftheFoxsparrowrestingonabranch.Togethertheywenton,strollingpastscratchybushes,climbingovergrayrocksandhikingthroughdwarftrees.Edunloomedabovethoselittletrees,exclaiming,“Look,Mom,I’magiant.”Unknowinglytheyhadalreadydonemostoftheclimb.Paragraph2:Twentyminuteslater,theysawthecabin.EdunandWillstartedracingupthehill.Finally,theretheywereinthesmallbutcozycabin.Throughitswindow,Edunsawfarawaymeadowsandlakes,andmanymoremountains,awholenewworldemergingbeforehereyes.Thatnight,everybodystayeduplatetoseethestars.Somanystarsclusteringupthere,Edunproposed,“Ineedtotakeapictureofthem.”“Click!”Thecamerafrozethemoment.Radiantwithasmile,EdunapproachedMomandhuggedher,whispering,“Mom,thankyouforhavingmee!”【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文以人物為線索展開(kāi)，講述了艾頓不想去山里遠(yuǎn)足，但還是和家人一起出發(fā)了，由于下雨而不得不穿上的雨衣使得艾頓感覺(jué)不舒適。半小時(shí)后，他們到達(dá)了登山口，威爾沿著小路去追小鳥(niǎo)，艾頓想要停下休息，媽媽告訴艾頓，如果不繼續(xù)走，就永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)知道前方有什么能使他們驚訝?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“艾頓認(rèn)為媽媽是對(duì)的，就跟著她走了?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫(xiě)艾頓繼續(xù)前行，看到了美麗的風(fēng)景，不知不覺(jué)間，已經(jīng)完成了大部分攀登。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“二十分鐘后，他們看到了小屋?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫(xiě)他們來(lái)到小屋，晚上看星星，艾頓感謝媽媽邀請(qǐng)自己來(lái)。2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線索：繼續(xù)前行——美麗的風(fēng)景——完成大部分攀登——到達(dá)小屋——看星星——感激3.詞匯激活行為類(lèi)①尋找：lookfor/searchfor/seek②繼續(xù)前行：goon/moveon/keeponmoving③擁抱：hug/embrace/holdinone’sarms情緒類(lèi)①舒適的：cozy/fortable②面帶微笑：radiantwithasmile/withasmilingface【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Toheramazement,astheywalkedon,therewasalwayssomethingtolookforinthewetgreenwoods:animaltracks,wildflowers,littlecreeks.(由連接詞as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】SoontheycaughtupwithWill,whoeagerlyshowedthemthephotoshetookoftheFoxsparrowrestingonabranch.(由關(guān)系代詞who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，省略的關(guān)系代詞that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句)Writing3（2022·河北·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ArianaPorterwasveryexcited.Tomorrowwillbeanewdayandanewbeginning,well,kindof.TomorrowArianawillgotoaboardingschool!Nolittlesistertosharearoomwith,peaceandquiet.Sheateherfavouritehomemadecurryforthelasttimethatyear.Then,shecurledupinhercleanbedandshuthereyes.Excited.Thenextday,Arianawokeup,jumpedintoherbestclothesandflewdownstairs.Afteraquickbreakfast,thewholefamilylinedupandsaidtheirgoodbyes.Ariana’slittlesistertriedtohugher,butsheshruggedLilianaoff.Andoffshewenttoboardingschool.Happy.However,whenArianagotthere,everyonelookedunweling.Ateachershowedhertoherdorm.Itwascoldanddark!Afewdayslater,Arianagotseveralletters.Therainbowonewasfromherlittlesisterandanotherfromherparents.Arianacouldn’tevenbebotheredtoopenthem.Shejustthrewthemintothemainhall’sfireplacewhennobodywasaround.Everyday,Arianatriedtomakefriends.Itwasanall-girlsschool.Unfortunately,shehadnoluck.Shetriedtogivegirlsgifts,shetriedtobefriendly,buttheyshruggedheroffjustlikeshedidtohersister.Twomonthspassedtryingtofindnewfriends,butwithoutsuccess.Arianafeltmoreandmorelonely.Somethingwasmissinginherlife.Somethingindescribable.Something,ormaybesomeone.Weekafterweekwentbyandthen,oneday,holdingyetanotherbatchofmail,Ariana’shearttrembled.Sherealizedwhatshewaspainfullymissing,herFAMILY.Whenevershewasdown,wheneversheneededhelporfort,theywerethereforher.Always.Thistimesheopenedthelittlerainbowenvelopeandsmiled.Readingitfilledherheartwithjoy.Arianacouldn’treply,fortheschooldidn’tallowthat,soshedecidedtohidethelettersunderherpillow.Thepilegrewlargerandtheyweresoimportanttoher,forthelettersgaveherthegreatestfortwhenshewasawayfromhome.Monthspassedeagerlywaitingforthedaywhentheschoolyearends.Nomoredormlifeandunfriendlygirls.Arianaskippedtomathclassexcitedly,butcouldn’tconcentrate,shedreamedaboutgoinghome.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。FinallyitwasthedaytogohomeandArianastartedtopack.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Arianawasleavingthedormwhensherealizedsheforgotsomethingimportant.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】FinallyitwasthedaytogohomeandArianastartedtopack.Shewassoexcitedatthethoughtofseeingherfamily,whomshehadnotseenforalongtime,especiallyhercutelittlesister,thatshecouldnotstoppacking.Atthismoment,afeelingofhappinessarosespontaneously.Shecouldn'twaittogetoutofthedorm,theunfriendlyclassroomandthegirls,andshewassoexcitedtogobackhome.Arianawasleavingthedormwhensherealizedsheforgotsomethingimportant.Thepilesoflettersunderherpillowwereofgreatimportancetoher.Becauseitwastheselettersthatgavehertheconfidenceandcouragetocarryonwhenshewashavingthetoughesttime.Everywordintheletterwasthebestencouragementwhichinspiredhernottogiveup.Shepickedupthethickstackofletterscarefullyandpackedthemup,whilethinkingofthewarmscenesathomewithherfamily.Atthatmoment,sherealizedthatitwasthewarmthandpanyofherfamilythatenabledhertogothrought