2024年新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫培優(yōu)：如何續(xù)寫八類話題素材

2024年新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫培優(yōu)：如何續(xù)寫八類話題一、助人篇一、助人篇故事構(gòu)造三部曲故事構(gòu)造三部曲【第一步：困難描寫（消極情緒+困難處境）】【消極情緒】感到：1.aflushof(表情緒的名詞)=awaveof...=afeeling/senseof...一陣...joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/disappointment/guilt/shame...)3.(表情緒的名詞)floodedoversb=sweptoversb因...顫抖：tremble//shiver/shake(withfear,panicexcitement,rage...)【進一步細節(jié)描寫】流淚：1.Tearsblurredone'seyes.2.One'seyesgotmisty.3.One'seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.淚眼模糊4....beclosetotears幾乎要哭了5.tears(rolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face)淚水落下【第二步：助人過程呈現(xiàn)（想到辦法+動作鏈）】【突然有了一個想法】某人想到/明白...：1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat從句=Ithitsbthat從句=Itstruckmethat從句=Itdawnedonsbthat從句2.(idea,thought...)occurred/cametosb.=...came/flashedintoone'smind=...crowdedinone'smind3.One'smindbegantorace【動作鏈】主語+動作A+動作Band動作C（三個并列謂語，動作依次發(fā)生）句子+ing/ed,或者ing/ed+句子（使用條件：同一邏輯主語，主動或被動，表示動作伴隨，原因或結(jié)果）【第三步：皆大歡喜結(jié)局（感激+感動+升華）】【突然有了一個想法】過了一段時間：1.notlongafterthat,...=shortlyafterwards,...=beforelong,...=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore從句=Ittooksometimebefore從句不久,...2.foraninstant/moment一瞬間有了結(jié)果：1.Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat從句2.Butonsecondthoughts,...但是轉(zhuǎn)而一想，...3.Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.接下來發(fā)生的非常奇妙【感謝】1.Now,Iwasdefinitelygratefultoherforextendingahelpinghand(伸出援手).2.MollyandShawnmetonTuesday,andshesaysshecouldn’tthankhimenough(非常感謝他)andeveryoneinvolvedinforwhattheydidforher.【感動】1.Needlesstosay,theyweredeeplymoved(他們被深深地感動了),especiallyBernardwhofinallyfoundawaytomakemoneyforhisfamily.2.HewastouchedthatI,acompletestranger,caredsomuchabouthim(如此關(guān)心他)andsaidhewaswillingtowork.3.Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords(感動得說不出話來).Ifeltsowarmasiftherewereninesunsinmychest.4.Inoddedingratitude,eyesglisteningwithheld-backtears(眼睛因強忍的淚水而閃耀).5.Stunnedandmoved(驚訝又感動),Istaredatthenote,feelingapangofguiltaboutmypreviousthoughtthatallpeoplewereindifferent.【升華】1.Itislovethatmakestheworldgoround（是愛讓世界運轉(zhuǎn)）andBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.2.Everyonewashappyandsweet,exposingtheirsetsofwhiteteeth（露出他們潔白的牙齒）.3.Imadeupmymindtopasson“l(fā)ove”toothers（傳遞愛給其他人）.Justasasayinggoes:“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand（贈人玫瑰，手有余香）.”4.Fromthatdayon,everytimeImeetsomeonewhoneedshelp,Ialwaysreachouttothem,hopingtopassonthekindness（希望傳遞善意）thatMexicanfamilyofferedme.5.Sometimes,asmallactofkindnessmaybepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifference（會有很大不同）.2023年新高考I&II卷2023年新高考I&II卷【作文比賽】作者上中學(xué)的時候，社會學(xué)老師邀請作者參加一個寫作比賽。作者不喜歡寫作，于是想都沒想就拒絕了。但是在老師的鼓勵下，作者同意試一試。作者在寫作過程中雖然很累，但是沒有放棄，堅持下來了。在作者最終完成寫作時，作者感到寫作讓他很快樂，他已經(jīng)不在乎輸贏了?！镜谌剑航源髿g喜結(jié)局（感激+感動+升華）】【感謝】IwassohappytohearthenewsthatIimmediatelyshareditwithmyteacher.WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythankstomyteacher.Isaid,“It’syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.Withoutyourrecognitionandguidance,Icouldn’thavewrittenthisarticle.Againthankyouverymuch!”【感動】“Iknewyou’dwin!Iamproudofyou.Youmadeit!”hesaidexcitedly.Myteacherwaswaitingforme.Holdingmyhands,hesaid“Congratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting.”【升華】Sincethen,IhavewrittenmanygoodworksandnowIamafamouswriter.Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroadtowriting.二、成長篇二、成長篇故事構(gòu)造三部曲故事構(gòu)造三部曲【第一步：成長前的苦惱（負面情緒塑造）】【孤獨】Inevermadefriendseasily,andforatimeIdidlittlemorethangetonspeakingtermswithsomeboys.我從不輕易交朋友，有一段時間，我只是和一些男孩子說說話而已。【傷心】Ifoundnothinginmypocket,afactthatseemedlikeaspearpiercingintomyheart，whichstartedtobleedimmediately.我口袋里什么也沒找到，這事實就像一支長矛刺進了我的心臟，我的心臟立刻開始流血。Lookingaroundanxiously,Ialmostburstintocrying.(我焦急地環(huán)顧四周，差點哭出來)【慚愧】Shewasoverwhelmed/overcome/consumedwithguiltandshame.(她被內(nèi)疚和羞愧淹沒)AwaveofguiltsweptovermeandIhadtoadmitthefactthatIhadgonetothemoviesandthatwastherealreasonwhyIwaslate.一陣內(nèi)疚席卷了我，我不得不承認我去看電影了，這才是我遲到的真正原因?！境靶Α縏heylaughedloudlywithCrawleyscreamingwordslike“Whatafinestbrokenwatch!”他們大聲笑著，卡勞利尖叫著說:“多好的一塊壞表啊!”【絕望】“Mymotherwouldn'tletmebringit,”Ilied,desperationboilinginsideme.“我媽媽不讓我?guī)?，”我撒了個謊，絕望在我心里沸騰?！揪o張】Meanwhile,Kariesatrestlesslyinherseatwithherfingerscrossed.與此同時，凱莉不安地坐在座位上，雙手交叉著。Shetoldtheteacherthetruth,withherheartthumping/pounding/pumpinglikeadrum.她把實情告訴了老師，心怦怦直跳。Havingpacedupanddownrestlesslyinfrontofthetheteacher'soffice,shefinallygatheredcourageandploddedin.（她在老師的辦公室前不安地踱來踱去，終于鼓起勇氣，慢吞吞地走了進去?！竞ε隆縄unknowingly(不知不覺地)avoidedinteracting(interact)withanyonebecauseIwasafraidthey’dlaughinmyface.(我在不知不覺中避免與任何人互動，因為我害怕他們會當面嘲笑我)【犯錯】Consideringtherewasnowaytopersuademymothertoletmetakethewatch,Idecidedtowaitforhertostepoutsideandslipthewatchintomypocket.SoIdid.考慮到?jīng)]有辦法說服母親讓我?guī)直?，我決定等她走出去，把手表塞進我的口袋里,我這樣做了。Kariestuffedthetestpaperintobackpackandexplainedthatshewasjusttooexcited.凱莉把試卷塞進背包里，解釋說她只是太興奮了?！镜诙剑撼砷L中（蛻變塑造）】【驚訝】Raisinghereyebrowsinsurprise,MrsRossifroze,asifrootedontheground.羅西夫人驚訝地揚起眉毛，僵住了，仿佛在地上生了根。【希望】Jaycelookeduptohim,hiseyessparklingwithhopeanddetermination.杰斯抬頭看著他，他的眼睛里閃爍著希望和決心?！窘逃c成長】“That’snottherightway.Patience,Will.Patience,”avoiceechoedinmyearsaftertheboysleft.這不是正確的方法。耐心，意志。當孩子們離開后，一個聲音在我的耳邊回響?！癢hatwasdonewasdone,”thoughtItomyself.“Whatisimportantnowistodocorrectthingsnext.”“所做的已經(jīng)做了，”我自己想?！艾F(xiàn)在重要的是下一步要糾正一些事情?！盩houghanger,embarrassmentandsadnesshungheavilyintheair,thevoicedrewmetotheawarenessofthemistakesIhadmadewhenIattemptedtoimpresstheboys.盡管憤怒、尷尬和悲傷重重地籠罩在空氣中，但這個聲音還是讓我意識到我在試圖給同學(xué)留下深刻印象時犯下的錯誤。Ishouldn’thavetriedtointegrateinsuchahastyway,norshouldIhavestolenthewatchbehindmymother.我不該如此匆忙的方式試圖融入，也不該把母親身后的手表偷走。Afterschool,IwouldtellmymotherhonestlythatIhadstolenthewatchouttoimpressfriendswhoturnedoutnottobemytruefriends.放學(xué)后，我會誠實地告訴媽媽，我偷了手表是為了給那些不是我真正朋友的朋友留下好印象。Aftersayingthatwithherfaceflushedred,shehandedthepaperandtheprizetotheteacher.說完這話，臉紅了，她把紙和獎品交給了老師。Tomysurprise,shesmiledatmeandexpressedherapologyforignoringmylonelinessaswellasmydifficultywithEnglishcommunication.令我吃驚的是，她對我笑了笑，并為忽視我的孤獨和英語交流的困難表示道歉。Tornbetweenthehonorandconscience,shehadarestlessnight,tossingandturningonbed.她在榮譽和良心之間掙扎，一夜不安，在床上輾轉(zhuǎn)反側(cè)。Ipluckedupmycourageandtookmyfirststepontothesuspensionbridge.我鼓起勇氣，向吊索橋走了第一步。HesawTrashaunasatoughrolemodelwhohadaseeminglysimilarborndisabilitybutledabrilliantlife.他認為特拉申是一個堅強的榜樣，似乎有類似的先天殘疾，但過著輝煌的生活。Weoftentakeforgrantedtheverythingsthatmostdeserveourgratitude(那些值得我們感恩的事情我們經(jīng)常當作理所當然).Butwhenthetimecame,Igotuponstageandfacedoneofmygreatestfears-anddiscoveredIcoulddomorethanIevergavemyselfcreditfor.(但當時機到來的時候，我站上舞臺，面對我最大的恐懼之一——我發(fā)現(xiàn)我可以做的比我自己認為的更多。【第三步：成長后的升華（喜悅+感激+升華）】【喜悅】Dadlookedatthepaper,withhislipscurvingintoasmile.（爸爸看著報紙,他的嘴唇彎成了微笑）Hearingthat,Kariegrinnedfromeartoear,awaveofhappinessfloodingoverher.（聽到這話，卡里咧嘴一笑,幸福的浪潮涌上她的心頭)（2020.11月濰坊高三英語期中考試）【感激】Ilookedather,tearsofloveandgratitudewellingupinmyeyes.我看著她，愛和感激的淚水在我的眼睛里涌出?！窘Y(jié)尾句】IknewforsurethateverytimeIlostpatienceinthefutureIwouldremembermygrandfather’swords.(我確信，將來每次我失去耐心，我就會想起我祖父的話。)ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadtrulyrealizedthemeaningofthegift---patience.(我第一次真正體會到這份禮物——耐心的意義)Aramsaid,“Thanks,MrsRossi,forteachingmehowtomakeacaketorealizemydream.”MrsRossiheldhishands,saying,“Itisyouwhoteachmehowtosticktomydream.”亞蘭說：“謝謝羅西夫人，你教我如何做蛋糕來實現(xiàn)我的夢想。”羅西太太握著他的手說：“是你教我如何堅持我的夢想。ItdawnedonAramthat“Oneshouldsticktohis/herdreamnomatterwhathappens.”(亞蘭明白了一個人應(yīng)該堅持她的夢想，無論發(fā)生什么)SothankfulwasheforCathy’shonestythatheactuallyendedupdonatingagenerousamounttoVNSAtoshowhisgratitude.他非常感謝凱茜的誠實，他向VNSA捐贈了一大筆錢來表達他的感激之情。BraverywasthemostsignificantqualitythatIwantedhertopossess.勇敢是我希望她擁有的最重要的品質(zhì)Afterwards,itwasmyturntogiveasmalllecture,inwhichIexpressedmysinceregratitudetomymomandfriends,bowingtothemseveraltimes.之后，輪到我做了一個小型講座，在會上我向媽媽和朋友們表達了誠摯的感謝，并向他們多次鞠躬。ThenhepattedJayce’shead,“ButIthinkthisistheperfectwayGodmademe.Withfivefingers,wealsomadeitinlotsofthingsjustnow.Themissingarmislikeawingfoldedbyanangel.Onlywhenyou'retoughwillyouseethewing.他拍了拍杰斯的頭，“但我認為這是上帝創(chuàng)造我的完美方式?！庇梦鍌€手指，我們現(xiàn)在還做了很多東西。這個缺失的手臂就像一只被天使折疊起來的翅膀。只有當你很堅強的時候，你才會看到翅膀。成長類場景描寫成長類場景描寫【學(xué)習(xí)知識而成長】It'snevertoolatetolearn.Eachindividualhastherighttoacceptmorechallengesandmakemoreattempts.學(xué)習(xí)永遠為時不晚。每個人都應(yīng)該并且有權(quán)利去接受更多的挑戰(zhàn)，做更多嘗試?！痉治觥縤ndividual這里表示“個人，個體”。makemoreattempts做更多嘗試。【發(fā)揮天賦促成長】Actually,everyindividualpossessestalent.Bebravewhenyoufinditandalsomakeefforts.Youcancreatemiraclesintheend.事實上，每個人都有天賦，發(fā)現(xiàn)它的時候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最終你會創(chuàng)造奇跡?！痉治觥縫ossess擁有。createmiracles表示創(chuàng)造奇跡?！咀分饓粝攵砷L】It'snevertoolatetogoforyourdream.Aslongasyougraspeveryopportunityandtakefulladvantageofit,youwillstandachancetorealizeyourdreams.追夢永遠不晚。只要你抓住機會，充分利用機會，你就有機會實現(xiàn)夢想。Aslongaswedaretodreamanddon'tletdifficultiesgetinourway,anythingispossible.只要我們敢于夢想，不被困難所阻擋，一切皆有可能?！痉治觥縯akefulladvantageof充分利用，realizeyourdreams表示“實現(xiàn)夢想”【克服困難促而成長】Thejourneytosuccessisnotsmooth.Itisfullofchallengesanddifficulties.Weshouldbebravetofacethem.Aslongaswedon’tgiveuphopeandmakeeveryefforttoovercomeallthedifficulties,wewillsurelyachieveourgoal(success)finally.通往成功的路不會平坦，充滿挑戰(zhàn)和艱辛。我們要勇敢面對。只要不放棄希望并竭盡全力克服所有困難，我們最終會實現(xiàn)我們的目標（成功）。【分析】smooth表示“平坦的”overcomeallthedifficulties表示“克服困難”；makeeveryeffort表示“做出努力”；aslongas，表示“只要”，引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句。2024年1月浙江省高考首考2024年1月浙江省高考首考【路癡Eva】Eva在高中的第一周很努力去適當新環(huán)境。對Eva來講，最大的挑戰(zhàn)就是在偌大的校園里找方向。因為方向感差，她決定只記住上課的地方。在體育課上，教練Pitt要求同學(xué)們跑一英里。這對Eva來說，又是一個極大的挑戰(zhàn)。通過對自己的心理暗示，Eva決定不再關(guān)注一英里的距離，而是專注于力爭跑到跑道上的下一個具體的點，比如那棵橡樹的影子或跑道的拐彎處。最終，她成功地完成了跑步?！镜诙剑撼砷L中（蛻變塑造）】【驚訝】WhenCoachPittsaid“Nicework!”toheratthefinishline,Evawassurprised.Whathadseemedtobeachallengingtasktoherminutesbeforewasnowaccomplished.Amilewasneverwhatshehadthoughtalongway!【希望】CoachPitt’sencouragingaffirmationimprovedherself-identity.Fearanduneasinessbegantofadeawayandasenseofconfidencecametoher.【教育與成長】Itmarkedaturningpointwhereshelearnedthetrickthatitwasherpersistenceandappropriatestrategythatmattered.Furthermore,sherealizedthatshecouldovercometroublesinlifeaslongasshiftingthewayofthinking.【第三步：成長后的升華（喜悅+感激+升華）】【喜悅】ToEva,suchexperiencesbroughtheragiantstepofgrowth.【感激】ThankingCoachPitt,shehadagreatthoughtrunninginhermind.【結(jié)尾句】Thoughsometimesitseemedanimpossiblemission,iteventuallyturnedapreciousopportunityforgrowth.Itwasamagictrick!三、趣事篇三、趣事篇故事構(gòu)造“兩大核心技巧”故事構(gòu)造“兩大核心技巧”【核心技巧1：矛盾塑造（尷尬+緊張）】Sonervouswashethat(他太緊張了)hedroppedtheelectriccarvingknife.他太緊張了，他太緊張了，他掉下了電動雕刻刀。Igotintoapanic(陷入驚慌之中)asIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.當我緊緊地壓在桌子上，我的頭移動試圖找到正確的角度時，我陷入了恐慌(陷入驚慌之中)，但這是沒有用的。Sweatingandnearlytearing(汗流浹背，眼淚差點流下來),IcouldimaginehowsillyandstrangeIwasatthatmomentbasedonthecontinuinglaughterfrommyparentsandJason.汗流浹背，眼淚差點流下來，根據(jù)我父母和杰森持續(xù)的笑聲，我可以想象出我當時是多么的愚蠢和奇怪。Blushingscarletinstantly,shefeltembarrassmentalmostwreathedherentirely.她立刻漲紅了臉，感到尷尬幾乎把她整個包圍起來?！竞诵募记?：快樂結(jié)局塑造（感激+開心）】Dad'scalmsmilereflectedhismotto"All'swellwithus,neverfear."爸爸平靜的微笑反映了他的座右銘"一切都好，永遠不要害怕。"ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadtrulyrealizedthemeaningofpatience.這是我第一次真正意識到耐心的意義。Weusuallytakelifeforgranted,butthestoryshowsusthatthereisalwaysbeautyinourheart.我們通常認為生活是理所當然的，但這個故事告訴我們，在我們的心中永遠有美麗。Thewordsbroughtwarmthtomyheartandtearstomyeyes.Ifeltluckytobeapartofthismischievousyetlovingfamily.這些話讓我心中滿是溫暖，也讓我熱淚盈眶。我很幸運能成為這個淘氣而又充滿愛的家庭的一員。2024年1月浙江省高考首考2024年1月浙江省高考首考【南瓜卡頭】一個家庭在萬圣節(jié)南瓜雕刻的傳統(tǒng)。作者與弟弟們在尋找最大的南瓜，并在廚房桌子上進行雕刻。作者試圖將頭塞進南瓜里證明自己的南瓜是最大的，但卻發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的頭被困在了南瓜里?！竞诵募记?：矛盾塑造（尷尬+緊張）】PanicturnedintodesperationasIstruggled,theweightofthepumpkinpressingdownonme,mybreathechoingintheconfinedspace.Myfamily'sinitiallaughterturnedintoconcern,andtheygatheredaround,offeringadviceandencouragement.Mymom'svoicewassoothingasshetoldmetostaycalm,whilemysiblings'worriedfacespeeredatme.【核心技巧2：快樂結(jié)局塑造（感激+開心）】Theroomeruptedincheers,andIwasmetwithhugsandrelievedsmiles.Myfacewasred,andmyprideslightlybruised,butthewarmthofmyfamily'ssupportmadeitallworthwhile.Theimageofmewithapumpkinstuckonmyheadbecameasymbolofourfamily'sjoy,creativity,andabilitytoturneventhemostawkwardsituationsintosomethingpositive.Thatyear,thepumpkincarvingwasn'tjustaboutcompetition;itwasareminderofthelove,laughter,andtogethernessthatdefinedourfamily.四、親情篇四、親情篇故事構(gòu)造“三板斧”故事構(gòu)造“三板斧”【第一板斧：沖突構(gòu)造（誤會、犯錯等）】只有沖突才能體會親情的彌足珍貴。沖突原因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合（代溝）、誤會等。這一部分可以給出的情感是：生氣，難過，后悔，內(nèi)疚，煩惱，傷心?！旧鷼狻课覌寢尩芍?，這是在我有一個重組家庭之前她從未做過的事。“你可以撿起來的?！彼f?！澳遣艑Α！盡ymotherglancedatme.SomethingsheneverdidbeforeIhadastepfamily.“Youcouldhavepickeditup."shesaid.“Thatwouldhavebeenthekindthingtodo.”他生氣地握緊拳頭，但是弟弟卻激動地揮著手。Hefoldedhisfistangrily,buthisyoungerbrotherwavedhishandsexcitedly.Jackson試著說什么，但Carter太生氣了，他一個字也聽不進去。Jacksonkeptsayingsomething,butsoangrywasCarterthathecouldn'tevenhearaword.【后悔】我意識到我裙子上的蝴蝶結(jié)打得很不好。我本應(yīng)該請媽媽幫忙的。IrealizedhowpoorlyItiedthestringonmyskirtwhichwasoverleggings.Ishouldhaveaskedmomforhelp.【內(nèi)疚】一想到我對他所做的一切，遺憾和內(nèi)疚就像沒休止的潮水一樣向我襲來。ThinkingaboutwhatIhaddonetohim,regretandguiltoverwhelmedmelikeendlesstides.每當我想到亨利濕了的書，我的臉都會變紅了。WheneverIthoughtofHenry'swetbook,myfaceturnedred.【煩惱】WatchingShirley’ssmilefadingaway,Peterfrowned.看著雪莉的微笑漸漸消失，彼得皺起了眉頭?！緜摹慨斔^她三歲妹妹的桌子時，Amanda感覺她的心情像天空一樣灰暗。Amandafeltasgrayastheskyoutsidewhenshelookedacrossthetableatherthree-year-oldsister.【犯錯】Tocoverhisterribleaction(為了掩蓋他糟糕的行為，不定式作狀語)，theterrifiedboygluedthepiecestogetherhastilyandputthevasebacktoitsplace.Fearingpunishment(害怕懲罰，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語),thesuddenlyinspiredboysaidthataneighbor'scatjumpedinfromthewindowandhecouldn'tdriveitawaynomatterhowhardhetried.Glancingatthechocolateswithhesitation,(猶豫地看著著巧克力,非謂語),theboytimidlyraisedhisheadbeforehismother.【第二板斧:沖突化解(解釋、道歉、彌補、回憶等)】【道歉】“對不起，”他說到，輕輕的摸摸Jackson的頭?！癐'msosorry."hesaid,gentlypettingJackson'shead.他放下手，小心翼翼的看了Carter一眼，然后低下了頭。Heputdownhishand,glancedcautiouslyatCarterandloweredhishead.Tohersurprise,shesmiledatmeandexpressedherapologyforignoringmyloneliness(為她忽略我的孤獨道歉)aswellasmydifficultywithEnglishcommunication.【原諒】他媽媽把手指放在他嘴唇讓他停止說話，在他額頭上吻了一下，然后走出了書房。Hismothersilencedhimbygentlyputtingherfingeronhislips,gaveasoftkissonhisforeheadandwalkedoutofthestudy.【開心】“我想給你一個驚喜!”他指向一個包裝精美的盒子，眼里閃爍著光芒?！癐wantedtosurpriseyou!”hepointedataneatlywrappedboxwithhiseyesgleaming.看到他的家人圍坐著，和諧地待在一起，卡特感覺到一種幸福感。Seeinghisfamiliessittingtogetherandstayingtogetherharmoniously,Caterfeltasurgeofhappiness.歡快的歌唱飄蕩在房間里，兩姐妹沉浸在音樂的美中。Cheerfulsingingfloatingintheroom,thetwosistersimmersedthemselvesinthebeautyofthemusic.【感激】如果沒有亨利的幫助,我就不會順利地完成我的演出了。ButforHenry'shelp,Iwouldn'thavefinishedmyperformancesmoothly.Ilookedather,tearsofloveandgratitudewelling(well)upinmyeyes.Afterwards,itwasmyturntogiveasmalllecture,inwhichIexpressedmysinceregratitudetomymomandfriends,bowing(bow)tothemseveraltimes.【回憶】在這時，毫無預(yù)料地，Carter突然想起B(yǎng)illy躺在地上哭的回憶，一直在他腦?；匦?，提醒著他一些事情。Atthatmoment,unexpectedly,thememoryofthesightofBillycryingonthegroundoccurredtoCarter,hoveringinhismindandremindinghimsomething.看著Jackson，Carter忍不住想象他的弟弟花整天小心涂好那輛車的情景。LookingatJackson,Cartercouldn'thelpimagininghislittlebrotherspendingthewholedaycarefullypaintingthecar.“IjustwishIknewhowtohelpher,"Amandasaidtoherself,thinkingofLi'sfrightenedeyes(想到Li害怕的雙眼)，【第三板斧:親情升華(誠實、珍惜等)】1.Fromthenon,thethreechocolatesrangthealarminhishearteverytimeheintendedtolie,remindinghimtobehonest提醒他要誠實(非謂語).2.Inoddedfirmly,knowingaflowerofkindnessandfriendshipbegantoblossom(善良和友誼之花開放)inbothofourhearts.3.ThisexperiencetransformedmyattitudetowardsHenryandourrelationshiphasalsobeenharmonious(我們的關(guān)系變得和諧)sincethen.4.正是亨利的善良讓我感受到了我們家庭的溫暖。我會用心珍惜它的。ItwasHenry'skindnessthatmademefeelthewarmthfromourfamily.Iwilltreasureitwithallmyheart.mischievousyetlovingfamily.這些話讓我心中滿是溫暖，也讓我熱淚盈眶。我很幸運能成為這個淘氣而又充滿愛的家庭的一員。2024年1月浙江省高考首考2024年1月浙江省高考首考【母親節(jié)的驚喜】雙胞胎Jenna和Jeff為了獻給母親一份美味的早餐，自己動手，做起飯餐來，但是不幸的是，他們連連失敗的故事?！镜诙甯?沖突化解(解釋、道歉、彌補、回憶等)】【原諒】Knowingwhattheywerepreparingfor,hewasgreatlysurprised.Soimmediately,heofferedtogetinvolvedinthekids’job.【開心】Inaflash,sweetsmellfilledtheairinthekitchen.Totheirdelight,thebreakfastwasasuccessintheend."HappyMother'sDay,darlingMummy!"thrilledvoiceyellingfromtheirthroat,thetwinshuggedtheirmomtightly.【感激】Movedandexcited,motherheldthetwinswithherwarmarmsaswell.Hereyeswidenedatthesightofthebreakfasttray.【回憶】Behindthechildrenstoodtheirfather.Toshedlightonthegameofthegift,hetoldthemotherthewholestory.【第三板斧:親情升華(誠實、珍惜等)】Afterlearningaboutwhathappened,sherosequicklytogazeattheboy’shandwithmovedtearsrollingdownhercheeks.“Thankyou,myhoney!”saidthemother.五、人與動物篇五、人與動物篇故事構(gòu)造“三套路”故事構(gòu)造“三套路”【套路一：可愛型動物故事情節(jié)】可愛型動物，如狗，鳥等，主要構(gòu)思陪伴、忠誠，或者人救助動物生命，動物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情節(jié)。TheyweregladtoseePoppycomingbacktoherusualself（他們很高興看到Poppy又回到以前的自己）,guidingthelittledogondailywalksandevenintroducingtoitherfavoritetoys.2.Smilingeversobright（笑得更加燦爛。）,hecalledouttohisparents,whotuggedhiminforalonghug.3.Herparentswatchedthemplayingaroundandsmiledwithrelief（輕松地笑了）–Poppywasbacktoheroldcheerfulself!【套路二：兇猛型動物故事情節(jié)】兇猛的動物，如狼、熊等，一般會給人造成生命威脅，所以主要是以遇險、脫險的故事情節(jié)為主?！竞ε隆?.Terrified（非常害怕）,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.2.Seeingtheapproachofthepolarbear,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch（被恐懼嚇呆，害怕到動也不能動）.3.MywifeElligraspedmyclothesandtrembled,swallowinghard（抓住我的衣服，顫抖著，使勁吞口水）.4.Anumbingchillgrippedme（一種麻木的寒戰(zhàn)擢緊了我）.5.Thinkingofthewolf’sbloodymouth,Macwasnearlydeadwithfright（幾乎給嚇死）6.Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror（被一種強烈的恐懼感所控制）,mypalmssweating.【求助與獲救】1.Atthesightofit,Elliwavedherhandswildly（瘋狂地揮手）,screaming,“Help!”2.Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospot（驚奇地發(fā)現(xiàn)）thatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.3.Havingpulledthemassivebodyoutofthestump,Briancleanedthewounds（清潔傷口）andthengavehimcarefultreatment.Beckykneltdownandtendedtothewolf（蹲下來照顧狼）togetherwithBrian.4.Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppy（擦干小狗）tillhehadbecomedry.5.Usingarockasthesupportingpoint,Iunlockedthechainandsetthewolffree（放走這只狼）.【套路三：主題升華設(shè)計】可愛型動物主題：陪伴、珍愛生命、自然和諧、忠誠等。兇猛型動物主題：難忘的經(jīng)歷、獲得教訓(xùn)、感謝他人救助等。1.ElliandIlearnedourlesson（學(xué)到一個教訓(xùn)）:Beawareofabearwithatoothache.2.Despitethechillautumnwind,theirhomewasfilledwiththewarmthofloveandreunion（充滿愛和團聚的溫暖）.3.Therainthatcamethatdaywasamiracle（那天下的雨是一場奇跡）,savingourfarm,justlikemyboysavedalife.4.Appearingtobefeelingbetter,thewolfslowlyraisedhisheadandgaveagentlekisstoBecky’shandasiftoexpressthanks（好像在表達感謝）.Whatawarmscene!2023年浙江1月卷2023年浙江1月卷【救助蜂鳥】作者被邀請去一個農(nóng)場野餐，發(fā)現(xiàn)一個房子里有只蜂鳥被蜘蛛網(wǎng)困住了，作者把蜂鳥救了，把蜂鳥帶出去的時候它遲遲不肯走，當作者走到一條布滿黑莓的小路時，它開始動了，但是卻不肯飛走，徘徊著，后來終于飛走了，當作者準備離開時，蜂鳥又飛到作者面前，好像是在和作者告別?！咎茁芬唬嚎蓯坌蛣游锕适虑楣?jié)】可愛型動物，如狗，鳥等，主要構(gòu)思陪伴、忠誠，或者人救助動物生命，動物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情節(jié)。AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.Irushedbacktothedesertedhouse.Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound.Aflashofmovementcaughtmyattention.Iturnedaroundtoseethesamehummingbirdhoveringintheair.Itseemedthatthebirdwaswaitingforme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasiftryingtoconveysomedeep,unspokengratitude..【套路三：主題升華設(shè)計】可愛型動物主題：陪伴、珍愛生命、自然和諧、忠誠等。Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightofthissoundandgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.六、友情篇六、友情篇故事構(gòu)造“三步法”故事構(gòu)造“三步法”【第一步：友情出現(xiàn)危機或困難（故事沖突）】【內(nèi)疚】1.Overwhelmedbyguilt（充滿內(nèi)疚）,AsadquicklypickedupthewalletandstrodetoFahad,“Ifounditoverthere,andIthinkitisyours.”2.Murmuringinalowvoice（小聲地低語）,hedodgedAsad’sshiningeyes,somehowevennotdaringtolookintothem.3.Shenowcoulddonothingbutfeeltheregretburninginherheart（感覺內(nèi)疚在她心里燃燒）.4.Ariananodded,beginningtofeelguilty（開始感到內(nèi)疚）.【困難與幫助】1.Notknowingwhattodo（不知道該做什么),hewalkedoutoftheclassroomandsatonabenchinfrontofthecanteen.2.“ThebestthingyoucandoforAshleyistotreatherwithkindnessandsympathy（用善意和同情對待她).”3.WhenArianagavethelunchtoAshley,shesawtearswellupinAshley’seyes（眼淚都流出來了).【破裂】1.BecausethesewerethepeopleIconsideredmyfriends.Ibrokedowninfrontofher.Sheapologized.ButIfeltcheatedon.Itoldheraboutmydecisionofnotwantingtocontinuethisfriendshipfurther（我不再繼續(xù)這份友誼的決定).Webothmissedeachother.Butneitherofuswantedtogivethelasttry.2.Duringthetrip,weintentionallyavoidedeachother（有意避開彼此).However,Icouldn’thelpglancingatherwhensheturnedbackandIsensedthesame.【第二步：友情彌補（解釋、認錯、彌補）】【原諒/和好】1.Blushed,shebrokethesilence(打破沉默),“Iamsorryagain.Ididn'tmeantohurtyou."Tearsstreamingdown,shecontinued,“Ishouldhavetalkedtoyouearlier."Istoodupandreachedouttohugher(伸出手擁抱她),“Iamsorry,too.Ishouldhavebeenmoregenerous.”2.Butdeepdown,webothknowalltheargumentisjustabouthelpingustogrowintoabetterindividual(幫助我們成長為更好的個體)insteadofenemies.3.Therefore,webothlearnedtobetolerantandbraveenoughtoalwaysforgive(足夠忍耐和勇敢去原諒).【開心描寫】1.得知我們將有一個晚餐，我非常激動。I'mthrilledtoknowthatwe'llhavedinnertogether.2.他非常激動，露齒而笑。Excitementcreptoverhisheartandmadehimgrinfromeartoear.3.這頓飯使我激動不已。想象一下我們將在機場暢飲。I'mbuzzingforthedinner.Imagine,we'regoingtodrinkfreelyattheairport.【第三步：友情升華（懂得珍惜）】1.ItwasonthatverydaythatTommadehisfirstfriendinthenewschool,andhetrulyreckonedthevalueofsincerityandhonesty(明白真誠和誠實的價值)inarelationship.2.SoassoonastheplanelandedIcalledhimandsaid,“Luke,thatwassuchawonderfulthingyoudidforme(那是你為我做的最美妙的事情).Thankyou.”3.一個忠誠的朋友抵得上成千上萬的親戚。Itdawnedonmethatoneloyalfriendisworthtenthousandrelatives.4.Ifwereallyvalueourfriendsandfriendship,alwayscherishtheirpresenceandshowwillingnesstomaintainandnurturetherelationship(愿意保持和培養(yǎng)這段關(guān)系).4.Appearingtobefeelingbetter,thewolfslowlyraisedhisheadandgaveagentlekisstoBecky’shandasiftoexpressthanks（好像在表達感謝）.Whatawarmscene!2022年浙江1月卷2022年浙江1月卷【隊友合作】“我”在完成心理學(xué)課程項目的過程中，克服與隊友性格不合、隊友生病住院等種種困難，最終完成項目的故事。【第二步：友情彌補（解釋、認錯、彌補）】【原諒/和好】Tokeepupwithhispace,Icompletelygaveupmyidlewaysandimmersedmyselfintheproject.Gradually,hechangedhisaloofattitudeandevenofferedmehelp.Itseemedthatwehadgonefromstrangerstocomradesinarms.【第三步：友情升華（懂得珍惜）】Tomycomfort,asIexpressedmyconcernbyhisbed,myteammatetoldmethathetrustedme.Tearsofexcitementandgratitudeblurredmyvision.Butformypartner,nothinglikethiscouldhavehappened.Sowhenhethumbedupwithararebiggrin,itsuddenlydawnonmethatweweretobecomekindoflifelongfriends.七、歷險篇七、歷險篇故事構(gòu)造“三套路”故事構(gòu)造“三套路”【套路一：惡劣環(huán)境要烘托】1.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats，gotonourhorses，andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains（慢慢地向山走去）.2.NeverhadIseensuchalovelycreatureinmylife,soIfolloweditstrackwithoutthinkingtwice（不假思索地追隨它的足跡）.3.Intheprocessofseekingforit,Iwastotallyimmersedinthecharmofnature（完全沉浸在大自然的魅力中）.4.What'sworse,hedidn'thaveanyfoodorwaterwithhim,letalonehiscellphoneorothersupplies（更不要說他的手機和其他日用品）.5.Wewereinthemiddleofnowhere,wearingonlyunderwear,withoursuppliesburntintoashes（把我們的物品燒成灰燼）,includingourcellphones.【套路二：轉(zhuǎn)折思維技巧好】【我們迷路了，正在想辦法如何脫離困境】Suddenlyitoccurredtousthatwecouldkeeptothetracktoguideusback.Butitwasgettingdarkeranddarker,thusmakingitincreasinglydifficultforustomakeouttheroad.（突然我們想到我們可以堅持小路引導(dǎo)我們回去。但天色越來越暗，使我們走路越來越困難。）解析：這個例子屬于“正”變“負”的模式。迷路后，想到了辦法，屬于“正向”，但是外在環(huán)境不允許：天色太晚。屬于“負向”。1.Ultimately,wewereback,safeandsound（安然無恙）.2.Wejumpedintothewarmvehicleandtheforesterdroveustotherangerstation（開車送我們?nèi)パ策壵荆?whereweweregivenclothesandwereabletocallourparents.【套路三：萬能升華要牢記】【萬能句1】Thatdaywassounforgettablethatitwouldstayinmymemoryforever.那天是如此難忘，它將永遠留在我的記憶。遇到危險并且最終成功脫險的經(jīng)歷，想必對我們每個人來說一定是一生中難忘的經(jīng)歷。所以這個句子使用的場合還是挺多的。句子中使用了so...that的句式結(jié)構(gòu)：如此......以至于。unforgettable是一個形容詞，表示“無法忘記的”。【萬能句2】OnlythendidIrealizethatitwasbraverythatcanconquerwhateverdifficultycameintheway.直到那時，我才意識到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困難。遇到危險后，勇敢面對，才能解決問題。這個句子突出了“勇敢”這個核心，這在“脫險型”的故事里，是非常恰當?shù)?。這句話使用了倒裝的結(jié)構(gòu)和強調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)合的方式，也屬于高分亮點句。1.Sittingintheguestroom,Ifounditreallyblissfultobeaccompaniedbyourbelovedones.（有我們所愛的人陪伴真的很幸福）.2.Despitefeelingweak,Nicholaswasgenerallyinagoodcondition,andhewasreallyhappyashewascarriedbacktotheskiresorttoreunitewithhisfamily（和他的家人團聚）.3.Asourvanchugged((發(fā)動機緩慢運轉(zhuǎn)時)發(fā)出突突聲)downthefreeway,Ithoughtthistripmightnotbesobadafterall.Good-bye,regularoldsummervacation.Hello…TripofaLifetime（一生一次的旅程）4.Appearingtobefeelingbetter,thewolfslowlyraisedhisheadandgaveagentlekisstoBecky’shandasiftoexpressthanks（好像在表達感謝）.Whatawarmscene!2020年浙江6月卷2020年浙江6月卷【人熊對抗】夫婦在拍攝過程中遇到一只年輕的雄性北極熊被他們烹飪的食物吸引而來，嘗試闖入被圍欄圍起來的營地。夫婦倆必須采取措施保護自己，同時等待救援的到來?！咎茁芬唬簮毫迎h(huán)境要烘托】【北極熊襲擊護欄】1Thepolarbear'smassivepawsclawedatthewirefence,eachswipeleav