2023年新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫提分技能10 讀后續(xù)寫：作步創(chuàng)意 模板法

八步創(chuàng)意模板法高考英語讀后續(xù)寫教學(xué)課件八步創(chuàng)意模板法（1）情緒：消極情緒（2）細(xì)節(jié)：進一步解釋描寫（3）轉(zhuǎn)折：個人的努力或借助外界（4）轉(zhuǎn)機：事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機，并抱有希望，感到欣慰（5）失望：但是問題還是沒有解決或出現(xiàn)了新問題（6）新法：突然有了一個想法（一句話說明這個想法）（7）結(jié)局：過了一段時間；事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折（8）總結(jié)：點題，呼應(yīng)前文第1步：消極情緒典型表達是：感到（這個可以有很多表達方式，并且可以結(jié)合在每一個環(huán)節(jié)中，可有非謂語動詞形式和介詞短語）1.aflushof(表情緒的名詞)=awaveof...=afeeling/senseof...一陣...2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)3.(表情緒的名詞)floodedoversb=sweptoversb

因...顫抖tremble//shiver/shake(withfear,panicexcitement,rage...)第2步：細(xì)節(jié)進一步細(xì)節(jié)描寫典型是：流淚；心里想……流淚：1.Tearsblurredone'seyes.

2.One'seyesgotmisty.

3.One'seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.淚眼模糊4....beclosetotears幾乎要哭了5.tears(rolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face)淚水落下

心里想1.

Aninnervoicetoldsbthat

從句內(nèi)心的聲音告訴某人...

2....thought/saidtooneself第3步：轉(zhuǎn)折（個人努力或借助外界）典型是：鼓起勇氣或另外一方的鼓勵；毫不猶豫pluckup/take/gather/one'scourage(todo...)

毫不猶豫：1.sbcouldhardlywaittodosth

2.withoutasecondthought3.withouteventhinking

4.withoutdelay

5.withouthesitation第4步：事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機，并抱有希望，感到欣慰典型表達是：似乎：1.Itwaslikedoingsth好像...2.Itseemedasif/that...好像...希望：1.hopingthat

從句抱著一絲希望

2.see/feelaglimmerofhope看到一絲希望3.tryinghardtodosth

第4步：轉(zhuǎn)機事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機，并抱有希望，感到欣慰典型表達是：欣慰：1....breathedasighofrelief松了一口氣

2....sighedwithrelief松了一口氣3.(Awaveof)relieffloodedthrough/washedoversb

4.toone'srelief,..

使人欣慰的/放心的是第5步：失望但問題還是沒有解決或出現(xiàn)了新問題Amandafeltasgrayastheskyoutsidewhenshelookedacrossthetableatherthree-year-oldsister.典型是：不幸的是；不知道做什么不幸的是：1.Butbadluckforsb,...但是某人真不走運3.,butinvain

4.,butwithoutsuccess

5.,butnouse

第5步：失望但問題還是沒有解決或出現(xiàn)了新問題不知道做什么1.Sbdidsth,wonderingwhattodonext.2.Sbdidsth,notknowingwhattodonext.3.Sbdidsth,unsureofwhattodonext.

4.Sbwasatalosswhattodo.5.Sbwasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot.感到難以決定...第6步：新法突然有了一個想法：一句話表示想法典型：某人想到/明白...;

有了主意1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat

從句=Ithitsbthat

從句=Itstruckmethat

從句

=Itdawnedonsbthat

從句2.(idea,thought...)occurred/cametosb.=...came/flashedintoone'smind=...crowdedinone'smind3.One'smindbegantorace第7步：皆大歡喜過了一段時間，事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折過了一段時間1.notlongafterthat,...=shortlyafterwards,...=beforelong,...=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore

從句=Ittooksometimebefore從句不久,...

2.foraninstant/moment一瞬間

第7步：皆大歡喜過了一段時間，事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折

有了結(jié)果1.Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat

從句2.Butonsecondthoughts,...但是轉(zhuǎn)而一想，...3.Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.

接下來發(fā)生的非常奇妙第8步：最后總結(jié)，點題典型是：直到...才意識到...1.

倒裝句：Notuntil

時間狀語

didsbrealize/noticethat

從句2.

強調(diào)句：Itwasonly時間狀語

thatsbrealizedthat

從句

還記得某人的話；還在某人的腦海中1.One'swords(echoed/rangout)inone'sears.2.One'swords(voice/song)lingered/whisperedinone'smind/head.

3.One'sheadwasstillfullof...第8步：最后總結(jié)，點題經(jīng)歷與教訓(xùn)1.Whata/an...lessonsbtaughtme(sblearnedfromsb)!

(valuable/useful/great/painful)2.Whata/an...experiencesbhad!

(enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesting/valuable)3.Downdeepinone'sheart,...在某人的內(nèi)心深處高考真題實戰(zhàn)演練浙江卷（2018年6月）故事梗概：父親帶兒子去西部荒野的一個朋友家體驗農(nóng)場生活，見父親和叔叔騎馬，兒子也很想騎，于是親身上馬體驗。臨走叔叔告誡我們不要走偏了路（"Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!"）。一路上，風(fēng)景優(yōu)美，讓人陶醉。Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.讀后續(xù)寫八步創(chuàng)意寫作1.Awaveofnervousnesssweptovermeespeciallywhenthehorseranlikecrazy.（情緒）2.Myheartpoundingandmypalmssweating,aninnervoicetoldmethatIhadtocalmdown.（細(xì)節(jié)詳述）3.Thoughinapanic,Ipluckedmycouragetopullonthereigns.（轉(zhuǎn)折：個人努力）4.Luckily,itdidn’ttakelongbeforeIsettleddownthehorse.（轉(zhuǎn)機：成功，希望來了）5.Justatthatmoment,Dadranover,gaspingforair.（銜接句：新問題來了）6.“Boy,wearewayoffthetrack.”Hesaidseriously,alookofconcernspreadingacrosshisface.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.1.Hungryandfrustrated,wetriedtofindawayoutbutinvain.(努力，失敗)2.Itsuddenlydawnedonmewecouldrodedowntherivernearby.（突然有了辦法）3.Unexpectedly,theriverbroughtustothefamiliartrackatlast.（開始做）4.Afterwhatseemedtwohours,UnclePaul’sfarmhousedidcomeintosight.（成功了）5.Myfather’sfacebrightenedup,sodidmine.（感受）6.Uponourarrival,U