應(yīng)用文之求助信-2024年高考英語考前沖刺必背作文(模板、素材、分類押題范文)(新高考專用)

專題04應(yīng)用文之求助信

寫作要點(diǎn)

第一段:自我介紹(收信人非熟人)，交代求助的背景及寫信的目的；

第二段:詳細(xì)描述求助的具體內(nèi)容，告知聯(lián)系方式(必要時(shí))；

第三段:表達(dá)希望得到對方的幫助并致謝。

寫作結(jié)構(gòu)

求助信開頭部分表達(dá)寫作目的“請求幫助”

①Iamwritingtoaskforyourhelp.

②Iamwritinginthehopeofyourassistancein...

(3)1wonderwhetherIcouldaskyouafavor.

@1wonderifyoucouldsparesometimetohelpme.

⑤Iamanxioustogethelpfromyou.

求助信中間部分陳述求助的主要內(nèi)容

①Ihavesomedifficultiesin...

②WhatIamworriedaboutalotisthat...

(3)1ampoorinovercomingthedifficultiesin...

④Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforhelp.

(§)1hopeyoucouldletmeknowif...

?Wouldyouliketodomeafavorto...?

⑦Iwouldlikeyoutointroducesomegoodwaystolearngrammar.

@Inthemeanwhile/Atthesametime,Ibegyouto...sothat...Also,Iwouldlikeyouto...

求助信結(jié)尾部分表達(dá)希望得到對方的幫助

①Thankyouforyourtimeandpatience,andI'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

(2)1wouldliketothankyouforyourgeneroushelpinthiscase.

③Couldyoupleasehelpme...?

④I'dappreciateitifyou'dliketooffermeahelpinghand.

?Wouldyoupleasebekindenoughtooffermesomeadvice?

寫作模板

Dear,

IamLiHua,astudentfromXXXschool.（正式一些的求助信需要進(jìn)行自我介紹）/Howareyoudoing

thesedays?（求助熟悉的人需要寒暄問候一下）I'mwritingtoyouinthehopeofseekingforhelp.（說明寫信

目的）/1wonderwhetherIcouldaskyoutodomeafavor.（正式一點(diǎn)的求助）

Facedwithsomanyproblems,Ihavetoturntoyouforhelp.First,Ihavetroublein_______遇到的困

難1,What'smore,_____遇到的困難2isalsoverydifficultformetodo.（中間段具體說明

困難）WouldyouliketointroducetomesomegoodwaystosothatIcan________more

easily?Idobelieveyoucanhelpmesolvethesepuzzles.

Iwouldbegreatlygratefultoyouifyoucouldlendmeahelpinghand.Iamlookingforwardto

receivingyourearliestreply.（表達(dá)謝意,期待來信）

Yours,

LiHua

寫作素材

Writingl:2020全國HI卷

假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)根據(jù)英語課文改編了一個(gè)短劇。給外教MissEvans寫封郵件，請她幫忙指導(dǎo)。

郵件內(nèi)容包括：

1.劇情簡介；

2.指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；

3.商定時(shí)間地點(diǎn)。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】

DearMissEvans,

Howiseverythinggoingthesedays?IamLiHua.I,togetherwithmyclassmates,haveadaptedashortplay

fromthetextTheNecklace,butwemeetwithsometrouble.Now,Iamwritingtoaskyoutogiveussome

guidance.

Asweallknow,inthestoryMathildeLoiseldreamedofawealthylifestylebuthervainobsessionendedup

withherlifetimeofmiseryanddespair,ruiningherlife.However,wefinditextremelytoughtousepropertonesto

speakthelines,whichhasvexedusforquitealongtime.Hopefullyyouwouldbesokindastogiveussomehelp

withthisproblem.

Ifit*sconvenientforyou,let'smeetat8:30onSundaymorningintheschooltheatre.Wewouldappreciateitif

youcoulddousafavor.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

Writing!:2018年11月浙江卷

假定你是李華，乘坐FL753航班抵達(dá)倫教后發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包遺失。請給航空公司寫一封郵件說明情況并尋求

幫助。內(nèi)容包括：

1.行程信息；

2.錢包特征；

3.聯(lián)系方式。

注意:

1.詞數(shù)80左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案】

Iamwritingtoreportthelossofmywallet,On1stNovember,2018Iflewbusinessclassonyourflight753

fromChinatoLondon.

IclearlyrememberitwaswithmeimmediatelyIboardedtheplane.However,onarrivalinLondonHeathrow

Airport,Ifounditgone.Iguessitmusthaveslippedoutofmypocketduringtheflight.Itisablackleatherone

witharound200dollars,myIDcard,and2creditcardsinit.Alongwiththeitemsmentionedabove,thewallet

containsafamilyphoto,mypreciousmemory.Asyoucanimagine,thesematteralottome.

Hasanybodyhappenedtofindit?Pleaseemailmeatxxx@

Thankyouforyourtimeandsupport.

Yourssincerely

LiHua

押題范文

1.（遼寧省丹東市五校協(xié)作體2023-2024學(xué)年高12月試題）

假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。近期你校外教Steve做了一場關(guān)于讀后續(xù)寫的講座。請你用英文給他寫

一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括

1.表達(dá)感謝并簡述你的收獲；

2.說明你在讀后續(xù)寫中的困惑并尋求幫助。

參考詞匯:讀后續(xù)寫continuationwriting

注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearSteve,

Yours,

Lihua

【答案】

DearSteve,

I'mwritingtoexpressmythanksforthewonderfullectureyoudeliveredoncontinuationwriting.Pveleared

reallyalot.However,Iamstillpuzzledbysomedifficultiesinit.

Forinstance,Ifindithardtograspthethemeofthepassage.Besides,Ialsofeelithardtocontinuewhen

confrontedwithnewwords.WhatcanIdo?Wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?

Iwouldbereallygratefulifyoucouldhelpmeout.Thankyouverymuchagain.Yourearliestreplywouldbe

appreciated.

［導(dǎo)語］本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生對于近期校外教Steve做了一場關(guān)于讀后續(xù)寫的講座這一情況，

用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，表達(dá)感謝并簡述收獲，說明自己在讀后續(xù)寫中的困惑并尋求幫助。

［詳解］1.詞匯積累

困惑的:puzzled-*confused

止匕外:BesidesfWhat'smore建議：advice-suggestion感激的:gratefulfthankful

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句:I'velearnedreallyalot.However,Iamstillpuzzledbysomedifficultiesinit.拓展句:Thoughl'velearned

reallyalot,Iamstillpuzzledbysomedifficultiesinit.

［點(diǎn)睛］

【高分句型l］Besides,Ialsofeelithardtocontinuewhenconfrontedwithnewwords.（運(yùn)用了連詞when引導(dǎo)

的時(shí)間狀語從句）

［高分句型2］Iwouldbereallygratefulifyoucouldhelpmeout.（運(yùn)用了連詞f引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）

2.（四川省德陽市第五中學(xué)2023-2024學(xué)年高三12月試題）

假定你是李華，在外刊閱讀中遇到了困難，嘗試一些方法后仍未達(dá)到預(yù)期效果。請你給外教Marcus寫

一封郵件尋求幫助，內(nèi)容包括：

1.嘗試方法；

2.請求指導(dǎo)：

3.表達(dá)感謝。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100左右。

DearMarcus,

Howiseverythinggoing?

【答案】

DearMarcus,

Howiseverythinggoing?RecentlyweareencouragedtoreadmoreforeignmagazinestoimproveourEnglish,

butIhavemuchdifficultywithit,soIamwiringforyourgenerousassistance.

Itissobigaheadacheformesincedespitetryingvariousmethods,Ihaven*tyetachievedthedesiredresults.

Forinstance,Iattemptedtoresorttoadictionarytolookupunfamiliarwordswhilereading.However,Ifindit

quitetime-consuminganditinterruptstheflowofmyreading.Inaddition,Itriedreadingthearticlesaloudtohelp

understand,butthecomplexityofthecontentandstructurewasasubstantialchallenge.Giventhatyouhaverich

experienceinreadingandteachinginforeignmagazines,couldyoukindlyoffermesomeguidancetohelpmeout?

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldreplytomeatyourearliestconvenience.Thankyouinadvanceforyour

energy.

Yourssincerely.

LiHue

［導(dǎo)語］本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外教Marcus寫一封郵件，就在外刊閱讀中遇到的困難尋求幫

助。

［詳解］1.詞匯積累

鼓勵(lì):encouragefinspire盡管:despite_*inspiteof

止匕夕卜:naddition-*what'smore提前:madvance-^ahead

2.句式拓展

并列句變復(fù)合句

原句:RecentlyweareencouragedtoreadmoreforeignmagazinestoimproveourEnglish,butIhavemuch

difficultywithit,soIamwiringforyourgenerousassistance.

拓展句:RecentlyweareencouragedtoreadmoreforeignmagazinestoimproveourEnglish,butIhavesomuch

difficultywithitthatIamwiringforyourgenerousassistance.

［點(diǎn)睛］

【高分句型1］Itissobigaheadacheformesincedespitetryingvariousmethods,Ihaven*tyetachievedthe

desiredresults.（運(yùn)用了since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）

［高分句型2］Giventhatyouhaverichexperienceinreadingandteachinginforeignmagazines,couldyoukindly

offermesomeguidancetohelpmeout?（運(yùn)用了giventhat引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）

3.（海南省?？谑协偵絽^(qū)海南中學(xué)2023-2024學(xué)年高三試題）

假如你是李華。本學(xué)期你校開設(shè)了英語口語課，由于你不太適應(yīng)外教Mike的授課，你決定給他寫一封

求助信。內(nèi)容包括：

1.談?wù)勀忝媾R的具體問題；

2.希望得到幫助。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

DearMike,

IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinOralEnglishclass.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearMike,

IamLiHuaoneofyourstudentsinOralEnglishclass.Iamwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.

Youknow,Icomefromajuniorhighschoolinthecountryside,whereteachersdon*tspeakmuchEnglishin

class.NowIfinditreallyhardtofollowyouinclass.Ihopeyoucanrecommendsomelisteningmaterialstomeso

thatIcanimprovemylisteningafterclass.Besides,couldIpracticespeakingwithyouforhalfanhouratweekends

atyourconvenienttime?

Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldlendmeahelpinghand.

Yours,

LiHua

［導(dǎo)語］本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假如你是李華。本學(xué)期你校開設(shè)了英語口語課，由于你不太適應(yīng)外教Mike

的授課，你決定給他寫一封求助信。

［詳解］1詞匯積累

尋求幫助:seekhelpfrom->turntosb.forhelp感謝:grateful-*thankful止匕夕卜:besidesffinaddition

din：spokenEnglish-+oralEnglish

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句:Besides,couldIpracticespeakingwithyouforhalfanhouratweekendsatyourconvenienttime?

拓展句:Besides,Ihopelcanpracticespeakingwithyouforhalfanhouratweekendsatyourconvenienttime,

whichIthinkcanhelpimprovemyspokenEnglish.

［點(diǎn)睛］

［高分句型1］IhopeyoucanrecommendsomelisteningmaterialstomesothatIcanimprovemylisteningafter

class.（運(yùn)用了目的狀語從句）

［高分句型2］Youknow,Icomefromajuniorhighschoolinthecountryside,whereteachersdon'tspeakmuch

Englishinclass.（運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）

4.（2024屆浙江省溫州市高三11月第一次適應(yīng)性考試試題）

假定你是李華，在外刊閱讀中遇到了困難，嘗試一些方法后仍未達(dá)到預(yù)期效果。請你給外教Marcus寫

一封郵件尋求幫助，內(nèi)容包括：

1.嘗試方法：

2.請求指導(dǎo)。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卷的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearMarcus,

【答案】

DearMarcus,

Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.IamwritingtoseekyourguidanceonaproblemIhavebeenfacingwhile

readingforeignmagazines.Despitetryingvariousmethods,Iamunabletocomprehendthearticlesaseffectivelyas

Iwouldliketo.

Ihavetriedusingonlinetranslationtoolsandlookingupunfamiliarwordsinthedictionary,butthesemethods

havenotyieldedthedesiredresults.Ibelievethatwithyourexpertiseandguidance,Icanimprovemyreading

skillsandbetterunderstandthecontentofthesemagazines.

Woulditbepossibleforustoscheduleameetingoracalltodiscussthisfurther?Iwouldgreatlyappreciate

anyadviceortipsyoumayhave.

Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

［導(dǎo)語］本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假定你是李華，在外刊閱讀中遇到了困難，嘗試一些方法后仍未達(dá)到預(yù)期

效果。請你給外教Marcus寫一封郵件尋求幫助，內(nèi)容包括:1.嘗試方法:2.請求指導(dǎo)。

［詳解］

1.詞匯積累方法:methodfmeans提高:improvefenhance感謝:appreciate-*thank建議:tipfsuggestion

2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句:Despitetryingvariousmethods.IamunabletocomprehendthearticlesaseffectivelyasIwouldliketo.拓展

句:AlthoughIhavetriedvariousmethods,IamunabletocomprehendthearticlesaseffectivelyasIwould

liketo.

［點(diǎn)睛］

［高分句型1］Iwouldgreatlyappreciateanyadviceortipsyoumayhave.（運(yùn)用了省略關(guān)系代詞的限制性定語從

句）

［高分句型2］Ibelievethatwithyourexpertiseandguidance,Icanimprovemyreadingskillsandbetterunderstand

thecontentofthesemagazines.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

5.（重慶市2023-2024學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期10月質(zhì)檢試題）

假定你是李華，將擔(dān)任杭州亞運(yùn)會(AsianGames)的國際志愿者。在接待外國友人方面，你有一些困惑,

于是你寫信給曾經(jīng)擔(dān)任過倫敦奧運(yùn)會志愿者的外教James求助。

要點(diǎn)如下：1具體的困惑2希望得到幫助。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearJames,

Howiseverythinggoing?Iamreachingouttoseekyourvaluableassistanceasanoviceinternational

volunteerfortheupcomingAsianGamesinHangzhou.Ihaveencounteredsomedifficultiesrecentlyandwould

greatlyappreciateyourhelp.

I'm