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讀后續(xù)寫六、提升作文顏值一、巧用形容詞Useadjectivestoconveyavividpicture!1.Janeroseatthebreakofday.2.Fortunately,wegotinthehelicopter3.Shebegansobbing.4.Marysatstillagainstthedoor.5.Wewerethrilledtoseetheboywasrescued.Wejumpedtoourfeet.6.Shewasexhausted.Shestillkeptyellingatthetopofherlung.7.Youcan'tmaginethatIwasveryanxiouswhenIknewyouwereinabadmood.→升級版:1.Janeroseatthebreakofday,_hungryandthirsty.2.Fortunately,wegotinthehelicopter,_safeandsound.3.Frightenedandfrustrated,Shebegansobbing.4.Lostintheaght,Marysatstillagainstthedoor.5.Sothrilledwerewetoseetheboywasrescuedthatwejumpedtoourfeet.6.Exhaustedas/thoughshewas,shestillkeptyellingatthetopofherlung.7.Youcan'timaginehowanxiousIwaswhenIknewyouwereinabadmood.→句式總結(jié)?、僦髦^...，adj(短語)②adj(短語)，主謂③so+adj+that...④adj+as/thoughsbis/was...⑤How+adj.+主謂Practice1.Mary滿臉通紅、氣喘吁吁地從大門口跑了進來。2.Jack是如此的焦急以至于他在他的房間里來回踱步。3.困在迷霧中，我什么也做不了，只能哭泣，無助又失落。答案:Flushedandbreathless,Maryrushedoutofthegate.SoanxiousasJackthathepacedupanddowninhisroom.Trappedinthedensemist,Icoulddonothingbutburstintotears,helplessanddisappointed.二、活用副詞①副詞使表達更具活力②副詞突出畫面感例如:1.Tearsofjoyfloodedhereyesassheprayedsilently.2."She'sstolenmywatch!”Leesaidangrily(怒地說),"Itwentmissingatschoolyesterday.3.Deeplymoved(深地被感動)，weappreciatedhimandfeltasenseofwarmth.4.Hopelesslystandingontheroadside(絕望地站在路邊),Iwassosadthatthetearswerefilledwithmyeyes.5.Myparentsscoldedmeforrunningoutofthehousesecretly(偷地跑出房間)butwerealsogladthatIwasnotseriouslyinjured(我受傷并不很嚴重).6.Totally/Absolutely/Completelyfrightened(完全被嚇著)Macrodehisbikeasquicklyashecould.三、非謂語動詞1.動詞的一種形式，可以充當出了謂語以外的其他成分。它不受人稱和數(shù)的限制。在句中起n.adj.adv.的作用。1.Hewastremblinginablanketandhesaid,“I’mcold.”=Tremblinginablanket,hesaid,“I'mcold.”2.Whenshearrivedthere,shesearchedtheunfamiliarbuilding,andaskedforZatanna'sdormitoryfromdoortodoor.=Arrivingthere,shesearchedtheunfamiliarbuilding,askingforZatanna'sdormitoryfromdoortodoor.3.ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere.Iheldthatten-dollarbillandIwonderedwhattobuyandwhotobuyitfor.=ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere,holdingthatten-dollarbillandwonderingwhattobuyandwhotobuyitfor.4.Shewrote“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus”onit.ThenshedrovemeovertoBobbyDecker'shouseassheexplainedIwasofficiallyoneofSanta'shelpers.=Havingwritten“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus”onit,shedrovemeovertoBobbyDecker'shouse,explainingIwasofficiallyoneofSanta'shelpers.Practice1.我小心翼翼地打開信，希望能找到一些有關(guān)錢包主人身份的線索。2.女孩微笑著，長發(fā)在微風中飄動。3.他的妻子傷心極了，眼里滿是淚水。4.他又沮喪叉低落，低著頭，走在隊伍的最后。5.他聚精會神地聽著，咬著嘴唇，眼睛盯著地板。6.天亮時Jane醒了，覺得頭暈暈的。7."當然有圣誕老人啊"，奶奶說道，一邊用手指撥弄著我的頭發(fā)。8.她穿著圣誕老人的服裝，悄悄溜進房間，沒有被看到。9.Ronny沉浸在強烈的恐懼感中，一句話也說不出來。10.好奇心切，她從河岸邊跑開，穿過田野去追兔子。11.他痛苦地喘著氣，強迫自己站了起來，邁著緩慢的步子，搖搖晃晃地開始走。答案:1.Iopenedthelettercarefully,hopingforsomecluetotheidentityoftheownerofthewallet.2.Thegirlsmiled,withherlonghairflowinginthebreeze.3.Hiswifewasindeepsorrowwithhereyesfilledwithtears.4.Depressedandlow-spirited,hewalkedattheendofthelinewithhisheaddrooping.5.Helistenedwithcloseattention,bitinghislipsandstaringatthefloor.6.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeupwithherheadspinning.7."Ofcourse,thereisaSantaClause."Grandmasaid,strokingherfingersthroughmyhair.8.DressedinaSantaClauscostume,sheslippedintotheroomwithoutbeingnoticed.9.Immersedinastrongsenseofscare,Ronnycouldn'tutterasingleword.10.Burningwithcuriosity,sheranawayfromtheriverbankandacrossthefieldtochaseaftertherabbit.11.Gaspingwithpain,heforcedhimselftohisfeetandwithslow,shakysteps,begantowalk. 四、with的復合結(jié)構(gòu)句式①:with+情感名詞，主謂/[withone'seyesfullof+n.]1.周圍的人滿意地笑了。Peoplearoundmesmiledwithsatisfaction.2.她生氣地盯著我。Shestaredatmewithanger.3.我熱淚盈眶,沖出公寓，沿著街道跑。Withmy eyesfulloftears,Irushedoutoftheflatandranalongthestreet.4.他停下來轉(zhuǎn)向我，眼里滿是恐懼。Withhiseyesfullofterror,hestoppedandturnedtome.句式②:with+賓語+doing/done/todo,主謂1.Hestoodsilently.Tearsofregretwererolling/sliding/strearingdownhischeeks.=Hestoodsilentlywithtearsofregretrollingdownhischeeks.2.Herushedtotheroom.Hisheartbeatwildly.=Herushetotheroomwithhisheartbeatingwildly.3.Asherplanwasruinedbytheaccident,sheletoutacrywithanger.=Withherplanruinedbytheaccident,sheletoutacrywithanger.4.Asalltheexamswerepassed,shedancedwithjoy.=Withalltheexamspassed,shedancedwithjoy.Practice:① Heissmiling__________②Heburiedhisfaceinhishands,crying_________.③Seeingtheunexpectedpresent,shejumpedtoherfeet________.④Afterseveralattemptstosaveherself,shesatstillinthelift,waitingforrescue__.⑤Figuringoutthatshehadmadeastupidmistake，shesmiled____andapologizedtotheman.五、無靈主語一、Whatis"無靈主語"→用無生命的事物做主語，用人或者是社會團體的行為動作做謂語="無靈主語+有靈謂語"[有種擬人化表達]eg:Romewitnessedmanygreathistoricevents.羅馬發(fā)生過許多重大歷史事件。Rome-→無生命的事物witness-→目擊，是人的動作，有靈謂語→→無靈主語:物品，動作，情感，時間，地點等vs有靈主語:有生命的①Suddenly,Ihaveagoodidea.→→→②Agoodideasuddenlystrikesme.二、無靈主語的分類①情感狀態(tài)的抽象名詞+謂語→描寫人物情緒/心理時，可以替換掉"sbfeel..."“情感狀態(tài)的抽象名詞+謂語動詞”的描寫有：①Feargrippedthevillage.(整個村莊籠罩在恐怖之中)②Couragedesertedhim.(他失去了勇氣)③Angerchokedmywords.(我氣的說不出話)④Awaveofnervousnesswashedoverhim.(一陣緊張的情緒涌上他的心頭)⑤Achillofhorrorsuddenlysweptoverhim.(他突然感到不寒而栗)⑥Excitementseizedhim.(他好興奮)Tips:◆常見的情緒名詞：happiness,joy,delight開心快樂；surprise,astonishment驚奇驚訝；shame羞恥羞愧；anger憤怒；despair絕望；regret遺憾后悔；sorrow悲傷；horror驚恐；anxiety焦慮；disappointment失望沮喪；satisfaction滿意滿足；puzzlement困惑不解；等等?！舫Ｒ姷闹^語動詞：seize侵襲；choke噎住堵?。籪lood充滿；creep不知不覺產(chǎn)生；grip緊抓；givewayto被xx代替；washover洗滌侵襲；deserted丟棄遺棄；等等。②思考/動作行為的名詞+謂語→描寫人物動作/思考行為時，可以替換"sbdo..."“思考/動作行為的名詞+謂語動詞”的描寫有：①Thesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror.(看到這個情景我心中充滿了恐懼)②Aterriblethoughtsuddenlystruckme.(我突然想到一個可怕的想法)③Atenminutes’walkbroughtustothehotel.(我們步行十分鐘就到了旅館)④Thethoughtofseeinghersonverysoonfilledherheartwithgreathappiness.(想到不久就要見到她的兒子，她心中感到十分快樂)Tip：◆常見詞匯補充，可根據(jù)文中人物動作或思考的行為，挑恰當?shù)脑~自行搭配：常見的人物行為詞匯有：sight看到，thought想法，glance一瞥，look看到，idea想法，feeling感受，walk走路；等等?！舫Ｒ姷闹^語動詞：overwhelm壓倒；strike打擊侵襲；arouse喚起；remind想起；fill...with充滿xx；change改變；bring帶來；等等。③身體部位/音容樣貌+謂語→描寫人物外貌性格時，可以替換"sbis..."“身體部位/音容類名詞+謂語動詞”的描寫有：①Smilecrumpledhisface.(他笑得一臉皺紋)②HerfacebrightenedwhenIgaveherthepresent.(我給她禮物時，她的臉上煥發(fā)出了光彩)③Hiswordssentmeaquiverthroughmybody.(他的話讓我全身不寒而栗)④Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.(笑聲在房間里縈繞)⑤TearswelledupinAnni'seyes.(淚水從安妮的眼中涌出)Tip：◆常見詞匯補充，可根據(jù)文中的人物的外貌或性格，挑恰當?shù)脑~自行搭配：常見的身體部位/音容的名詞有：face；laughter；smile；tear；words說的話；等等?！舫Ｒ姷闹^語動詞：lightup，brighten照亮；linger繼續(xù)存留；wellup涌出；flash閃爍；crumple弄皺；等等。④時間地點場景類+謂語→描寫故事的時間或背景時“時間/地點/場景類名詞+謂語動詞”的描寫有：①Ahushfellupontheclassroom.(教室一片寂靜)②Beijinghaswitnessedgreatchangesinrecentyears.(北京見證了最近幾年的的巨大變化)③Duskfoundthechildcryinginthestreet.(黃昏時，孩子在街上哭)④Thatchillyafternoonwitnessedhimtrudginginthesnow.(那個寒冷的下午，他在雪地里跋涉)⑤Nighthasfallenoverthecountry.(夜幕已經(jīng)籠罩著鄉(xiāng)間)Tip：◆常見詞匯補充，可根據(jù)文中需要交代的時間或地點背景，挑恰當?shù)脑~自行搭配：常見的時間/地點/場景類名詞：slience，hush安靜沉默；dusk黃昏；dawn黎明破曉；morning；afternoon；night；等等?！舫Ｓ玫闹^語動詞有：see看見；witness見證；find發(fā)現(xiàn)；fall降臨進入；等等。⑤自然現(xiàn)象類名詞+謂語→描寫環(huán)境時，可以替換"Itissunny..."“自然現(xiàn)象類名詞+謂語動詞”的描寫有：①Asuddenshowerkilledthewind.(突然下了一陣雨，風停了)②Aheavyrainvisitedthecity.(這個城市剛下過一場大雨)③Thesunhascomeout.(太陽出來了)④Thethickfogblanketedthefield.(濃霧籠罩著整個大地)Tip：◆常見詞匯補充，可根據(jù)續(xù)寫所需的環(huán)境描寫，挑恰當?shù)脑~自行搭配：常見的自然現(xiàn)象名詞：sun；sunshine；moon；moonlight；fog，mist霧；rain；earthquake地震；等等?！舫Ｒ姷闹^語動詞：blanket覆蓋；come；bring；prevent妨礙阻止；strike打擊侵襲；threaten威脅/即將來臨；等等。練習一1.他沒有了勇氣。Couragedesertedhim.2.他感到非常輕松。Agreatsenseofrelaxationfloededoverhim.3.他感到不寒而栗/恐懼。Asenseofhorrorseized/creptuponhim.4.一陣焦慮撕名