讀后續(xù)寫+靜默之聲：Jane的演講逆襲 講義 高二下學(xué)期6月期末考試英語試題

讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）閱讀下面材料,

根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,

使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasthebeginningofanewyear,andIwasinthebestclass,wheremostofthechatterboxeswere.Sadly,Iwasnotoneofthem.Mostofthetime,mymouthwaszippedverytightlyandI

hardlyhadanyfriendswhoappreciatedmysilence.Therewasaspeechcompetitionthreemonthslater.TheselectionwaslefttoourstrictEnglish

teacher,Mrs.Lee,whomIfearedthemostbecauseshehardlyeversmiledatus.Strangelythough,onthedayherdecisionwastobeannouncedtous,sheproclaimed,"Janeshallbetheonewhowill

jointhecompetition."Therewassilenceinourusually-noisyclass."Youhavetowriteaspeechtodayandshowitto

metomorrow,Jane,"Mrs.Leeinstructed,therebybreakingtheice.Thenextday,IshowedmyspeechtoMrs.Lee.Readingit,shenoddedinsatisfactionandgrinnedatmeforthefirsttime.Inthesweetestvoice,shepraisedme,"Wonderfulwork!Whydon'tyoureadittotheclass?"Instantly,mythroatwentdry.Butterfliesflutteredaroundinmystomach,crashingagainstmystomachwallsandmakingmefeelsick.Swallowinghardandtakingadeepbreath,Ibeganrecitingmyessaywiththeworstpronunciationanyonehadeverheard.However,Istumbledalittleandpanicked,unabletogoon.Theentireclassburstintolaughterastheyshouteddiscouragingwords,sayingthattheyshouldhavebeeninmyplaceinstead.HottearsstungmyeyesasIrushedbacktomyseat,weeping

silentlyinembarrassment.Afterschool,Mrs.Leecalledmetoheroffice,whereshegavemeafewpointersonhowtoovercomestagefright.Patiently,shewentthroughthespeechwithmeseveraltimesuntilmy

utterlybadpronunciationwas"cured".ItwaswithmuchpatiencethatMrs.Leeworkedthrough

thosethreemonthswithme,ensuringthatmywordswerecrispandclearandteachingmehowto

putexpressionsintomysentences.注意:1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.

開頭已給出。Paragraph1:Finally,thedayofmycompetitionarrived.______________________________________________________Paragraph2:Whenthecontestwasover,thejudgesdeclaredmethechampion.

___________________________________文章梗概：這篇文章講述了主人公Jane在新年伊始被選為參加演講比賽的選手，盡管她平時(shí)沉默寡言，但在Mrs.Lee老師三個(gè)月的耐心指導(dǎo)下，她克服了舞臺(tái)恐懼和發(fā)音問題。最終，在比賽日，Jane以出色的表現(xiàn)贏得了冠軍，不僅贏得了同學(xué)們的尊重，也證明了自己的成長和變化。在這篇短文中，伏筆主要體現(xiàn)在以下幾個(gè)方面：Jane的沉默：文章開頭提到Jane通常很沉默，這為她在演講比賽中的表現(xiàn)設(shè)置了對(duì)比，為后續(xù)的轉(zhuǎn)變埋下伏筆。Mrs.Lee的選擇：Mrs.Lee選擇Jane參加演講比賽，盡管Jane平時(shí)并不引人注目，這個(gè)選擇為Jane的潛力和成長提供了機(jī)會(huì)。舞臺(tái)恐懼：Jane在班級(jí)前演講時(shí)的緊張和失敗，為她后來克服恐懼、取得成功設(shè)置了挑戰(zhàn)。在續(xù)寫中，這些伏筆得到了回應(yīng)：Jane的轉(zhuǎn)變：在續(xù)寫的第一個(gè)段落中，Jane在大賽中的表現(xiàn)展示了她從沉默到自信的轉(zhuǎn)變。Mrs.Lee的指導(dǎo)：在Jane準(zhǔn)備比賽的過程中，Mrs.Lee的耐心指導(dǎo)幫助Jane克服了發(fā)音問題和舞臺(tái)恐懼，這在續(xù)寫的第二個(gè)段落中得到了體現(xiàn)，Jane的成功是對(duì)Mrs.Lee指導(dǎo)的直接回應(yīng)。同學(xué)們的態(tài)度變化：Jane贏得比賽后，同學(xué)們的態(tài)度從最初的嘲笑變?yōu)樽鹬睾蜌J佩，這反映了Jane的成長和變化對(duì)周圍人的影響。主題：通過這些回應(yīng)，短文展現(xiàn)了Jane個(gè)人成長的故事，以及她如何在挑戰(zhàn)中找到自己的聲音，并最終獲得成功。在續(xù)寫中，重要的情節(jié)應(yīng)該聚焦于Jane的內(nèi)心變化、她在比賽中的表現(xiàn)，以及她如何贏得同學(xué)們的尊重和認(rèn)可。以下是這些情節(jié)的詳細(xì)展開：重要情節(jié)一：Jane的內(nèi)心變化。在比賽日，Jane感到前所未有的平靜和自信。這是由于她在過去三個(gè)月里與Mrs.Lee的練習(xí)，以及她對(duì)自己能力的逐漸認(rèn)識(shí)。重要情節(jié)二：Jane在比賽中的表現(xiàn)。Jane在臺(tái)上的表現(xiàn)流暢而自信，她的演講內(nèi)容深刻，發(fā)音清晰，完全克服了之前的舞臺(tái)恐懼和發(fā)音問題。重要情節(jié)三：比賽結(jié)束后的反應(yīng)。當(dāng)評(píng)委宣布Jane為冠軍時(shí)，她的同學(xué)們和老師都為她鼓掌，她之前在班級(jí)中的失敗經(jīng)歷被這次的成功所取代。參考范文：Paragraph1:Finally,thedayofmycompetitionarrived.Theauditoriumwaspackedwithspectators,aseaoffacesthatseemedtostretchendlesslybeforeme.Myheartpoundedinmychestlikeadrum,echoingtherhythmofmynervousanticipation.AsIstoodbackstage,Icouldhearthemurmurofthecrowd,agentlehumthatgrewlouderwitheachpassingmoment.Mrs.Lee,standingbesideme,squeezedmyshoulderreassuringly."Remember,Jane,"shewhispered,"you'vecomealongway.Trustyourself."Withadeepbreath,Isteppedontothestage,thebrightlightsmomentarilyblindingme,butIfeltasurgeofconfidence.ThemonthsofpracticewithMrs.Leehadpreparedmeforthismoment,andIwasready.Paragraph2:Whenthecontestwasover,thejudgesdeclaredmethechampion.Awaveofreliefandjoywashedovermeasmynameechoedthroughtheauditorium.Theapplausewasthunderous,atestamenttothehardworkandperseverancethathadbroughtmetothispoint.Myclassmates,whohadoncelaughedatmyattempts,nowlookedatmewithadmirationandrespect.AsIwalkedoffthestage,Mrs.Leemetmewithawarmembrace."Iknewyoucoulddoit,"shesaid,hereyesglisteningwithpride.Itwasn'tjustthevictorythatmademeproud;itwasthejourney,thetransformationfromasilentobservertoaconfidentspeaker.Ihadfoundmyvoice,anditwasavoicethatresonatedwithstrengthandclarity,avoicethatwouldnolongerbesilenced.下水文：Paragraph1:Finally,thedayofmycompetitionarrived.TheairwasthickwithanticipationasIstoodbackstage,myheartpoundinginsyncwiththeclock'sticking.Theauditoriumwasabuzzwithexcitement,andIcouldsensetheweightofexpectationonmyshoulders.Yet,insteadoffear,Ifeltastrangecalmness.Mrs.Lee'sguidancehadbeenmyanchor,andherbeliefinmehadignitedasparkwithin.AsIsteppedontothestage,thespotlightenvelopedme,andItookmyplaceatthepodium.Theaudiencehushed,andinthatsilence,Ifoundmystrength.Ibegantospeak,mywordsflowinglikeariver,steadyandtrue.Paragraph2:Whenthecontestwasover,thejudgesdeclaredmethechampion.Theroomeruptedinapplause,asymphonyofapprovalthatresonatedwithmyeveryheartbeat.Asenseofelationfilledme,notjustfortheaccoladebutforthejourneyitself.AsIlookedoutintothecrowd,Isawmyclassmatescheering,theirfacesbeamingwithpride.Mrs.Lee'ssmilewasthebrightestamongthem,asilentconfirmationthatIhadnotonlywonthe