試題導練（十四）

試題導練（十四）試題展示閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Ihadbeenswimmingpetitivelyforaboutfiveyearsandwasreadytoquit.IwasoftentheonlyAfricanAmericanattheswimmingpetitionsandourteamcouldn'taffordgooduniforms.However,mynumberonereasonforwantingtoquitwasthatIkeptreceiving“HonorableMentions".Anyathleteknowsthatyoudon'twanttohaveabookshelffullof“HonorableMentions",whichyougetjustbecauseyoushowedup.Onesummerday,thedaybeforeabigswimmeet,IdecidedtotellmygrandmathatIwasquittingtheswimteam.WhenItoldher,shelookedmeintheeyeandsaid,“Baby,rememberthesewords‘Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.’Yourgrandmotherdidn'traiselosersorquitters.Yougotothatmeettomorrow,andyouswimlikeyouareagrandchildofmine,youhear?”Iwastooafraidtosayanythingbut“Yes,ma'am.”Thenextdaywearrivedattheswimmeetlate,missingmy groupofswimmersinthe15/16agegroup.MycoachinsistedthatIbeallowedtoswimwiththeoldergroup.Iknewthatshewasincludingmeintheracesothatourjourneytothemeetwouldnotbewasted,andshehadnoexpectationswhatsoeverthatIwouldeinanythingbuteighthplaceandonlythat,becausethereweren'tninelanes.AsImountedtheboard,alltheothergirlslookedatme.Iquicklynoticedthatthesegirlswereallheretodojustonethingbeatme.Allofasudden,mygrandma'swordsranginmyhead,“Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.Youswimlikeyouareagrandchildofmine.”“Yes,Grandma,IwillswimlikeIamagrandchildofyours,"Isaidtomyself.注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右。Paragraph1:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析①人物:I;mygrandma;mycoach;theothergirls②情節(jié)線:③主題:1)面對困難,永不言棄,才能收獲成功;親人的鼓勵給予我們勇氣、動力和信心。④情感線:readytoquit→tooafraidtosayanythingbut“Yes,ma'am.”→Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.(confident)→?作者已經(jīng)參加了五年的游泳比賽,準備退出。然而,奶奶堅定的支持和鼓勵的話語讓作者不得不又去參加游泳比賽。在比賽的那天,作者卻遲到了,沒趕上自己年齡組的游泳賽,教練卻堅持讓她和年齡大一點的選手比賽,作者無奈接受了這樣的安排。比賽開始前,想起奶奶的話,信心又被激發(fā)出來。思考:根據(jù)閱讀部分的情感線,在接下來的續(xù)寫部分,作者的情感可能會有哪些變化?努力比賽→依然只獲得“HonorableMentions”→感到氣餒,徹底退出游泳比賽;奮力拼搏→贏得比賽→堅定信心→感悟到奶奶話語的力量。續(xù)寫時,同學們可以根據(jù)自己推演出來的故事情節(jié),恰當體現(xiàn)某種情感變化。細讀語言①第一段:However,mynumberonereasonforwantingtoquitwasthatIkeptreceiving“HonorableMentions”.此句表明作者想退出游泳比賽的最主要原因是她這些年在所參加的游泳比賽中都是被授予“榮譽獎”。思考:作者已經(jīng)參加了五年的游泳比賽,卻每次都被授予“榮譽獎”,她心灰意冷,準備退出比賽。然而奶奶說的話卻迫使作者又一次走進游泳比賽的現(xiàn)場。她會有怎樣的表現(xiàn)呢?續(xù)寫第二段中的ItwasthenthatIheardtheclapsandcheersaroundme暗示作者的比賽結(jié)果如何呢?她這一次是否會贏得比賽?②第二段:‘Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit.'此句是作者的奶奶激勵她時說的一句話,并且這句話在閱讀部分最后一段再次出現(xiàn)。思考:正是奶奶說的這句話激勵作者又一次走進游泳比賽現(xiàn)場，奶奶說的這句話貫穿全文。在續(xù)寫部分,我們可否再次提及這句話回響在作者耳畔,與上下文之間進行較好的呼應?③高頻詞:swim,quit, my grandma,Quittersneverwinandwinnersneverquit是本文的關鍵詞和句,在閱讀部分反復出現(xiàn),是串聯(lián)整個故事發(fā)展脈絡的重要成分。思考:這些高頻詞和句如果在續(xù)寫部分出現(xiàn),會如何決定故事的走向呢?作者在此次游泳比賽中表現(xiàn)如何呢?奶奶說的話對她起到了什么作用呢?她是否還會考慮退出游泳比賽呢?研讀首句第一段首句:關鍵詞:harder;首句譯文:撲通一聲!我游得比以前任何時候都賣力。第二段首句:關鍵詞:heard,clapsandcheers;首句譯文:就在那時,歡呼聲和掌聲淹沒了我。續(xù)寫部分預測:第一段內(nèi)容:奶奶激勵的話促使作者又一次走進了游泳比賽現(xiàn)場。比賽過程中,作者充滿了力量,希望不會辜負奶奶的期望。在比賽中,她可能會遇到強勁的對手,但是奶奶的話語縈繞在她耳畔,激勵她奮力拼搏,盡自己最大的努力來應對這場游泳比賽。續(xù)寫首段應講述作者比賽的經(jīng)過和心理活動。第二段內(nèi)容:根據(jù)續(xù)寫第二段首句ItwasthenthatIheardtheclapsandcheersaroundme,可推測,續(xù)寫第二段應講述作者獲得了17/18歲年齡組游泳比賽的冠軍,以及作者獲勝后的感想,結(jié)尾應給予讀者正能量,揭示和強調(diào)主題。微寫作練習根據(jù)要求和括號內(nèi)的提示完成下列句子。遭遇打擊局面落后補全句子:①Icouldn't__________________(追上)theotherpetitors,and__________________(遠遠落后).②Theotherswimmers__________(超過)meand_________________________(讓我望塵莫及).身心疲憊①擴充句子:Halfwaythroughtherace,Ifelttired.Halfwaythroughtherace,Ialreadybeganto_______________(感到非常疲憊).②轉(zhuǎn)換表達:Theintensepetitioncausedmetobreakdown.Theintensepetitiondroveme_________________________(瀕臨崩潰).堅持不懈激發(fā)動力轉(zhuǎn)換表達:Mygrandma'swordssoundedinmyear.①Allofasudden,mygrandma'swords____________________(回響在我耳邊).②Atthatmoment,thepowerfulwordsofmygrandma_________________________(又一次回響在我耳邊).全力以赴補全句子:①Iwilledmyarmsandlegstokeepswimmingand used_________________________(最后一點力氣)toswimthelast50meters.②SoenergeticwasIthatI____________________(游得比以前更快了).Withmyarmsmovingsmoothly,Icutthroughthewater____________________(像飛魚一樣).得償所愿擊敗勁敵①補全句子:AssoonasItouchedthewall,Ilookedupatthescreen,_______________(焦急地等待)theresult.②擴充句子:Icouldn'tbelievetheresult.I_______________(幾乎不敢相信)theresult.③轉(zhuǎn)換表達:Thoughitwasanarrowvictory,Iwonmyfirstbigracethatday._________________________(雖然險勝),Iwonmyfirstbigracethatday.自我突破補全句子:①IrealizedI_________________________(創(chuàng)造了一個新的個人最好成績)itwasabrandnewrecord.②Myconfidence__________(恢復)andIspenttherestoftheeventgluedtomyseat,tooexcitedtolookanybodyintheeye,andit_______________(最終成為)themostfortablemeetforme.登臺領獎①補全句子:_________________________(眼淚順著我的臉頰流下來)asIstoodonthewinner'spodium.②擴充句子:Iacceptedtheawardtoapplause.Iacceptedtheawardto____________(雷鳴般的)applause.銜接連貫合并句子:1.IwassurprisedtofindthatIhadahalfbodylengthleadovertheothergirls.Thegirlssoonspedupandnarrowedthegap.①IwassurprisedtofindthatIhadahalfbodylengthleadovertheothergirls.________(連詞),theysoonspedupandnarrowedthegap.②IwassurprisedtofindthatIhadahalfbodylengthleadovertheothergirls,__________________________(定語從句). 2.Istoodonthewinner'spodium.Iwepttearsofjoy.①Istoodonthewinner'spodium_________(連詞)wepttearsofjoy.Istoodonthewinner'spodium,_______________________(動詞ing形式).小試身手請你將自己的習作寫在題目后的橫線上吧!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：遭遇打擊1.①catchupwith;fellfarbehind②passedby;leftmeinthedust2.①feelextremelytired ②totheedgeofbreakdown 堅持不懈1.①ranginmyhead/cars②echoedagaininmyears2.①everylastbitofstrength②swamfasterthanever;likeaflyingfish得償所愿1.①waitinganxiouslyfor ②couldhardlybelieve ③Narrowvictoryasitwas2.①setanewpersonalbest②wasrebuilt/restored;endedupbeing3.①Tearsrandownmyface②thunderous銜接連貫1.①However②whosoonspedupandnarrowedthegap2.①and ②weepingtearsofjoy 小試身手Onepossibleversion:SPLASH!IswamharderthanIhadeverswumbefore.Afterthefirstflipturn,IwassurprisedtofindthatIhadahalfbodylengthleadovertheothergirls.However,theysoonspedupandnarrowedthegap.Halfwaythroughtherace,thegirltomyleftalmostdrewlevelwithme.whileIalreadybegantofee