新教材2024高考英語二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)專題五應(yīng)用文寫作第二講潤(rùn)色添彩“洋”氣十足教師用書

其次講潤(rùn)色添彩·“洋”氣十足策略一“包裝”讓詞匯高端起來1．求新求變同樣意義的詞語，要依據(jù)語境運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯而不是小學(xué)初中學(xué)過的詞匯。假如同樣的意義重復(fù)出現(xiàn)，要運(yùn)用不同的表達(dá)方式。如：①Tobeginwith，itcouldn'tbebetterifstudentswithmixedlevelsofEnglishcouldbegroupedtogetheronpurposeratherthanatrandom.[2024·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷]→Tobeginwith，itcouldn'tbebetterifstudentswithmixedlevelsofEnglishcouldbegroupedtogetherdeliberatelyratherthanatrandom.②Afterabusymorning,theyweretired,buttheyfeltproud.[2024·白山市三模]→Afterabusymorning,theywerewornout/exhausted,buttheyfeltproud.2．求準(zhǔn)求精寫作時(shí)不愿定每一句都要有困難句式，有時(shí)精確運(yùn)用一個(gè)單詞就會(huì)讓整個(gè)句子增色。①Inconclusion，weshouldfindawaytostudyonlinebetter．[2024·全國(guó)乙卷]→Inconclusion，weshouldfindawaytostudyonlinemoreefficiently．②Iamwaitingforyourearlyreply.[2024·全國(guó)甲卷]→Iamwaitingforyourearlyreplyeagerly/witheagerness．3．短語優(yōu)先恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用短語代替單詞，不但可以增加詞數(shù)，還有助于繞開不會(huì)表達(dá)的單詞，使得行文更加流暢。①However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritcanhelpstudentsunderstandEnglishbetter．[2024·全國(guó)乙卷]→However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritcanhelpstudentsgainadeeperunderstandingofEnglish.②Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermyinvitation.[2024·新高考Ⅰ卷]→Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyinvitationintoconsideration．③Hetriedtocarryoutaseriesofreformstomakehiscountryprosperous.[2024·全國(guó)甲卷]→Hesparednoefforttocarryoutaseriesofreformstomakehiscountryprosperous.◎針對(duì)訓(xùn)練1——升級(jí)加黑詞匯①[2024·全國(guó)乙卷]ThosewhochoosetoreadEnglishbooksandvisitEnglishlearningwebsitesonlymakeup18%and12%respectively.________________②[2024·日照市聯(lián)考]Withtheintentionofheighteningpeople'sawarenessofChina'sprofoundhistoryandculture,alotofregularactivitiesarearranged.________________③[2024·全國(guó)甲卷]Countriesshouldteamupwithoneanothertomakepracticalplansregardingoceanprotection.________________④[2024·新高考Ⅰ卷]Whenfeelingsad，Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofgoodstories.________________⑤[2024·諸暨市高三診斷性]Besides,heiswarm-heartedandwillingtohelpothersinneed,forwhichIrecommendhimtoyou.________________策略二“換裝”讓句子新奇 起來換用句式時(shí)，應(yīng)遵循以下原則：高級(jí)但不造作，多變但不離譜，困難但不晦澀。(一)特別句式，風(fēng)景獨(dú)好特別句型如倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句和感嘆句等可以使整篇文章句式更加豐富。強(qiáng)調(diào)句型1：Itis/was＋被強(qiáng)調(diào)成分＋that＋其他……ItisbylearningcookingthatIhavestrengthenedmyrelationshipwithmyparents.[2024·全國(guó)乙卷書面表達(dá)]正是通過學(xué)習(xí)烹飪，我加強(qiáng)了與父母的關(guān)系。句型2：主語＋助動(dòng)詞do/does/did＋動(dòng)詞原形＋...Idobelievethatonlywithjointeffortscanwehaveabettertomorrow．[2024·全國(guó)甲卷]我信任，只有大家共同努力，我們才能擁有更奇異的明天。倒裝句型1：“only＋狀語(副詞/介詞短語/when/if引導(dǎo)的狀語從句)”位于句首構(gòu)成部分倒裝，意為“只有……才……”。Itismyfirmbeliefthatonlywithjointeffortscanwehaveabettertomorrow．[2024·全國(guó)甲卷]我堅(jiān)信，只有大家共同努力，我們才能擁有更奇異的明天。,句型2：So＋adj./adv.＋情態(tài)動(dòng)詞/be動(dòng)詞/助動(dòng)詞＋主語＋that...,SoprouddidIfeelthatIsharedhouseworkwithmyparents，whichalsoshowedIhadgrownup.[2024·全國(guó)乙卷書面表達(dá)]我感到很高傲，我和父母一起分擔(dān)家務(wù)，這也表明我長(zhǎng)大了。句型3：Notonly＋助動(dòng)詞/情態(tài)動(dòng)詞/系動(dòng)詞＋主語＋謂語＋其他，but＋主語＋also＋謂語＋其他，意為“不僅……而且……”。,NotonlyhaveItriedsomethingnew，butitallowsmetotakeonresponsibilities.[2024·全國(guó)乙卷書面表達(dá)]我不僅嘗試了新事物，而且還擔(dān)當(dāng)了責(zé)任。感嘆句①what引導(dǎo)的感嘆句，中心詞是名詞。Whatawonderfultimewehadpickingapplesonthefarm！[2024·全國(guó)Ⅱ卷]我們?cè)谵r(nóng)場(chǎng)摘蘋果的時(shí)間多么奇異?。、趆ow引導(dǎo)的感嘆句，中心詞是形容詞或副詞。HowhappyIwastobeoneofthemembersinyourteam!我很興奮能成為您團(tuán)隊(duì)的一員！◎針對(duì)訓(xùn)練2——句型轉(zhuǎn)換①[2024·福建省高三適應(yīng)性練習(xí)卷]Wecanimproveourefficiencyandmakeourschoollifemeaningfulonlyinthisway.(升級(jí)為強(qiáng)調(diào)句)→______________________wecanimproveourefficiencyandmakeourschoollifemeaningful.②[2024·新高考Ⅰ卷讀后續(xù)寫]Theirfatherinstructthemsopatientlythatthetwinsmadethebreakfastfastandwell.(升級(jí)為倒裝句)→______________________________________________________thetwinsmadethebreakfastfastandwell.(二)三大句式，編排奇異從句是豐富內(nèi)容的有效手段，每一篇優(yōu)秀作文，句式都應(yīng)當(dāng)多樣，所以在寫作中，要留意打造三種從句。1．定語從句句型1:Astheoldsayinggoes;AsisknowntousAsisknowntous,treesareveryimportantnotonlytotheenvironmentbutalsotohumanbeings.[2024·黑龍江省大慶市二模]眾所周知，樹木不僅對(duì)環(huán)境很重要，而且對(duì)人類也很重要。句型2：which;who;withoutwhose;where引導(dǎo)的定語從句Inconclusion，wealllookforwardtoattendingyourclass，wherewecantakethechancetoimproveouroralEnglish.[2024·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷]總之，我們都很期盼參與您的課，在課堂上我們可以借此機(jī)會(huì)提高我們的英語口語。2.狀語從句句型1：as/when/while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句Whenmygrandfatherwasdiagnosedwithcancer,myfamilywasextremelyupsetandshocked.[2024·遼寧省重點(diǎn)中學(xué)聯(lián)合二模]當(dāng)祖父被診斷出患有癌癥時(shí)，我的家人特別懊喪和震驚。句型2：such/so...that.../sothat引導(dǎo)的狀語從句Lastweek,asportsmeetingwasheldbyourschoolinthestadium,whichwassoexcitingthatitimpressedmedeeply.[2024·衡水中學(xué)下學(xué)期高三一調(diào)]上周，我們學(xué)校在體育館實(shí)行了一場(chǎng)運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)，特別激烈人心，給我留下了深刻的印象。句型3：if和so/aslongas引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句Tobeginwith，we'dfeelprivilegedifyoucouldmatchusaccordingtoouroralEnglishlevels，ratherthanpairusrandomly.[2024·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷應(yīng)用文]首先，假如您能依據(jù)我們的英語口語水平給我們搭配，而不是隨意搭配，我們會(huì)感到很榮幸。3.名詞性從句句型1：What引導(dǎo)的主語從句＋be＋n./that...WhatimpressesmemostamongmanyhistoricalfiguresinChinaisFanZhongyan.[2024·全國(guó)甲卷書面表達(dá)]在中國(guó)的很多歷史人物中，給我印象最深的是范仲淹。句型2：Itis＋adj/n.that...It'snecessarythatweshouldraisechildren'slaborconsciousnessandinvolvetheminhousework.[2024·山東省聊城市一模]我們有必要培育孩子們的勞動(dòng)意識(shí)，讓他們參與家務(wù)勞動(dòng)。句型3：Iholdthefirmbeliefthat...我堅(jiān)信……Thereisnodoubtthat...毫無疑問……Thereisnodenyingthat...不行否認(rèn)……Thereisnodenyingthatwewillmakeadifferencetothemarineenvironmentwithjoinedefforts.[2024·全國(guó)甲卷]不行否認(rèn)，我們將共同努力，對(duì)海洋環(huán)境作出巨大貢獻(xiàn)。句型4：Idohopethat...IdohopethatthesetipswillbehelpfultoyouandIwishyouthebestofluckinthecompetition.[2024·河北省高三二模]我希望這些建議能對(duì)你有所幫助，祝你在競(jìng)賽中好運(yùn)。◎針對(duì)訓(xùn)練3——完成句子①[2024·沈陽市三模]我們所知道的是，我們?nèi)祟惒荒軟]有野生動(dòng)物，因?yàn)樗鼈冊(cè)诒３肿匀黄胶夥矫姘l(fā)揮著重要作用。__________________wehumanbeingscouldnotlivewithoutwildlife,becausetheyplayanimportantroleinkeepingthebalanceofnature.②[2024·安徽阜陽市3月質(zhì)量檢測(cè)]此外，我還做過兼職英語編輯，從中我獲得了相關(guān)閱歷。Besides,Ihavetakenthepart-timejobasanEnglisheditor,________________________．③[2024·深圳市高三二模]這次閱歷給我的教訓(xùn)是，只有英勇地?fù)?dān)當(dāng)失敗的全部責(zé)任，而不是指責(zé)別人，才能取得勝利。________________________________onlybybravelytakingfullresponsibilityforfailureratherthanblamingotherscanwesucceed.(三)活用非謂語，讓表達(dá)言簡(jiǎn)意賅用非謂語動(dòng)詞整合簡(jiǎn)潔句、并列句或復(fù)合句，提升表達(dá)檔次，使句子凝練高端。非謂語的正確運(yùn)用能體現(xiàn)出學(xué)生的語法功底，相比于從句，非謂語更加生動(dòng)簡(jiǎn)潔。句型1：knowing/representing/learning...知道/代表/聽說……Learningthatwe'llberandomlypairedtodotheoralpractice，Ifeelanurgetoexpressmydifferentvoice.[2024·新課標(biāo)卷Ⅰ]得知我們將被隨機(jī)配對(duì)進(jìn)行口語練習(xí)，我有表達(dá)自己不同聲音的沖動(dòng)。句型2：aimingto...為了……Aimingtomakeourschoolmoreattractiveandcreateabetterenvironment,theStudents'Unionorganizedtheactivity“GreenSchool,WeAreinAction”．[2024·撫順市高三模擬]為了讓我們的學(xué)校更有吸引力，創(chuàng)建一個(gè)更好的環(huán)境，學(xué)生會(huì)組織了“綠色校內(nèi)，我們?cè)谛袆?dòng)”。句型3：Absorbedin...用心于……Facedwith...面對(duì)……Knownas...作為……而出名KnownasaChinesewriterandpoliticianintheSongDynasty，F(xiàn)anZhongyanwashighlyappreciatedbecausehemadegreatcontributionstosociety.[2024·全國(guó)甲卷書面表達(dá)]作為中國(guó)宋代聞名的作家和政治家，范仲淹因其對(duì)社會(huì)的巨大貢獻(xiàn)而受到高度贊許。句型4：with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)：with＋賓語＋todo(將來的動(dòng)作)，主句with＋賓語＋doing(主動(dòng)或進(jìn)行)，主句with＋賓語＋done(被動(dòng)或完成)，主句Withhereyesfixedonthefloor,Liyacameoverandapologizedinalowvoice,“Youmeanalottous.”[2024·廣東省高三二模]Liya眼睛盯著地板，走了過來，低聲致歉：“你對(duì)我們來說很重要。”Withourexchangeprogramdrawingtoanend,Iwanttoexpressoursinceregratitudetoyouforyourkindnessandgenerosity.[2024·武漢市四月質(zhì)量檢測(cè)]在我們的溝通項(xiàng)目即將結(jié)束之際，我想對(duì)您的友好和慷慨表示誠(chéng)意的感謝。◎針對(duì)訓(xùn)練4——用非謂語升級(jí)句式/__完成句子①[2024·新高考全國(guó)Ⅰ卷]IrepresenttheEnglishprogramofourschool'sradiostation.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutogiveaninterview.→__________________ourschool'sradiostation,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutogiveaninterview.②[2024·新高考Ⅰ卷]Theradioprogramwasfoundedin2016.Itaimedtoprovideagoodplatformforthestudentstosharetheirschoollife.→Theradioprogramwasfoundedin2016,________________tosharetheirschoollife.③[2024·全國(guó)甲卷]要開主題班會(huì)了，我寫信征求您的建議。________________，I'mwritingtoaskyouforsomeadviceonit.④此外，中心部分被青草覆蓋，和矗立在那里的雕塑，反映了我們的校內(nèi)文化。Besides,thecentralpartcanbecoveredwithgrasswithasculpturestandingthere,________________.(分詞作狀語)策略三“改裝”讓微小環(huán)節(jié)豐滿起來在英語寫作中，適當(dāng)增加微小環(huán)節(jié)內(nèi)容，能使習(xí)作流暢、豐滿，達(dá)到應(yīng)有的表達(dá)效果。一、列舉詳細(xì)的實(shí)例來補(bǔ)充說明1．suchas.../like...將來，我認(rèn)為我們學(xué)?？梢怨?yīng)一些活動(dòng)。Inthefuture,IthinkourschoolcouldprovidesomeactivitiessuchasreadingbookclubsorEnglishcornerstofurtherinspirestudents'interestinlearningEnglish．[2024·全國(guó)乙卷]2．forexample/instance如今，我們中的一些人在校內(nèi)里養(yǎng)成了一些壞習(xí)慣。Nowadays,someofushaveformedsomebadhabitsoncampus.Forinstance,somestudentsleavethelightsoninthedaytime;someleavemuchfoodonthetableaftereating．3．...aswellas...我們將組織一系列的活動(dòng)。Wewillorganizearangeofactivities,includingperformancesontraditionalChinesemusicalinstruments,folkdancesaswellasChinesemartialarts.二、增加狀語成分1．增加目的狀語①我們學(xué)校將實(shí)行一場(chǎng)中國(guó)民間舞蹈表演。Inordertoenrichthecampuslifeofinternationalstudents,aChinesefolkdanceperformancewillbegiveninourschool.②此外，練習(xí)你的漢語口語。Furthermore,practiceyourspokenChinesesothatyoucanexpressyourselfmoreclearlyandfluently．[2024·鞍山市其次次監(jiān)測(cè)]2．增加結(jié)果狀語①此外，我的英語很好。Moreover,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,enablingmetocommunicatewithforeignguestssmoothly．[2024·長(zhǎng)郡中學(xué)模擬試卷一]②將支配一系列與環(huán)保相關(guān)的講座。Aseriesoflecturesrelatedtoenvironmentalprotectionwillbearranged,thusarousingpeople'sawarenessoflivingalow-carbonlife．3．增加緣由狀語我認(rèn)為我適合這項(xiàng)職位。IthinkI'mqualifiedforthepositionbecauseIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,especiallywrittenEnglish．4．增加方式狀語Bydoing...首先，每個(gè)人都有機(jī)會(huì)展示他們對(duì)這本書的理解。Firstly,everyonewillhavethechancetoshowtheirunderstandingofthebookbyparticipatinginthefreediscussions.[2024·福建省四月聯(lián)合測(cè)評(píng)]5．增加動(dòng)詞-ing形式作狀語①全部的家庭成員圍坐在桌子旁。Allfamilymemberswouldsitaroundthetable,tastingdeliciousdumplings,watchingperformancesandchattinghappily．[2024·山東省淄博市高三一模]②我寫信申請(qǐng)這個(gè)職位。KnowingthattheschoolEnglishnewspaperislookingforaneditorresponsibleforthecolumn“TraditionalChineseCulture”，I'mwritingtoapplyfortheposition.6．增加with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作狀語我們學(xué)校組織一系列活動(dòng)。WiththeWorldHeritageDayapproachingonApril18,ourschoolhasarrangedarangeofactivities.[2024·石家莊市教學(xué)質(zhì)量檢測(cè)二]三、增加定語成分①介紹名人故事Besides,thestoriesofworld-famouspeoplearealsoattractivetome，whichhelpmelearnalotfromthem．②介紹活動(dòng)Aimingtomakeourschoolmoreattractiveandcreateabetterenvironment,theStudents'Unionorganizedtheactivity,whichtookplacelastSaturdayafternoon．四、增加個(gè)人感受、評(píng)價(jià)、希望、倡議等1．增加個(gè)人感受雖然這個(gè)暑假我覺得很累，但我為我所做的事情感到很興奮。AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdidbecauseIgotaknowledgeoffarmingexperience．2．增加評(píng)價(jià)我想這樣的活動(dòng)是必要的和有意義的。Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful，fromwhichIlearnthatweshouldhelppeoplewhoareintroubleifpossible．3．增加希望我希望在大家的努力下，我們的操場(chǎng)能變得更加干凈整齊。[2024·安徽省名校聯(lián)盟高三聯(lián)考]Ihopethatwitheveryone'sefforts,ourplaygroundcanbecomemuchcleanerandtidier.4．增加倡議我從這次閱歷中學(xué)到的是疼惜和疼惜我們的社區(qū)是我們的責(zé)任。WhatIlearntfromthisexperienceisthatitisourdutytoloveandprotectourcommunity.SotheChairmanofourschoolrecommendsourschoolholdaseriesofactivitiestocallonstudentstotakeactiontodoit．◎針對(duì)訓(xùn)練5——依據(jù)提示增加相關(guān)微小環(huán)節(jié)①[2024·湖北省高三其次次模擬]____________________________________，ourschoolisorganizinganactivityonline,________________________．(增加分詞作狀語，介紹活動(dòng)目的；增加定語從句，說明舉辦時(shí)間)②You'dbetterworkoutregularly________________________________.(sothat添加目的)③[2024·全國(guó)甲卷]________________(只要我們盡力),wewillmakeadifferencetothemarineenvironment.(增加條件狀語從句)④[2024·山東省四月新高考聯(lián)合模擬]________________________，humanbeingshavedamagedtheenvironmentseriously,andwearefacedwithseriousproblems________________.(dueto表達(dá)緣由，like列舉)⑤________________，Iamwritingtoinviteyoutospenditwithmyfamily,________________．(增加分詞作狀語；who引導(dǎo)的定語從句)策略四“扮裝”讓語篇靚麗起來依據(jù)行文或段落須要，在句與句或段與段之間適當(dāng)增加過渡詞語，使文章渾然一體。1．表示“首先”的詞語：first/firstly,firstofall,tobegin/startwith等。①Firstofall,wemustmakefulluseofevery45-minutelesson.②Tobeginwith,smokingshouldbebannedinpublicareas.2．表示“其次”的詞語：second/secondly,besides,inaddition,what'smore,furthermore,moreover等。①Secondly,weshouldgetupearlytomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions.②What'smore,goodbookscanhelpustodevelopgoodcharacters.③Besides,Iamoutgoing,responsibleandhaveagoodcommandofcommunication,whichwillhelpmetointroducethebeautifulhistorytothecustomers.3．表示“最終”的詞語：last/lastly,lastbutnotleast,mostimportantly等。①Lastbutnotleast,therearevariousextra-curricularactivitiesforstudents,whichdiscoveranddevelopstudents'interestsandhobbies.[2024·廣東省深圳市其次次調(diào)研]②Mostimportantly,outgoingandenthusiastic,I'mkeenonbeingavolunteer,providingservice.4．表示“總之”的詞語：inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,in