2024年中考英語(yǔ)真題分類匯編（全國(guó)）（第一期）專題31 書面表達(dá) 考點(diǎn)3 咨詢建議類（第01期）（解析版）

專題32書面表達(dá)考點(diǎn)3咨詢建議類（第01期）（2024·四川南充·中考真題）假如你是李明，最近你的英國(guó)筆友Eric發(fā)來(lái)求助郵件。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面郵件的內(nèi)容給他寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示理解；2.給出建議；3.表達(dá)希望。From:EricTo:LiMingSubject:Givemeahand!DearLiMing,YouknowI’mstudyinginanewschoolnowandIdon’tknowanyonehere.Ifindithardtogetonwellwithmyclassmates.Wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Eric注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名。To:EricFrom:LiMingSubject:Re:Givemeahand!DearEric,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiMing【答案】參考范文DearEric,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavetroubleingettingonwithyourclassmates.ItisunderstandablefornewstudentstohavesuchproblemsIhavesomesuggestionsforyou.Firstly,Istronglyadviseyoutokeepsmiling.It’sawaytoshowyou’refriendly.What’smore,youaresupposedtobehelpful.Everybodywantstomakefriendswithpeoplewhoalwayshelpothers.Finally,trytofindsomeonewhohasthesameinterest.Ifyouhavethesamehobbies,youwillhavemoretotalkabout.Thenyouwillbefriendssoon.Abovearemysuggestionsforyou.Ireallyhopeyouwillgetonwellwithyourclassmatesandliveahappyschoollife.LiMing【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給郵件內(nèi)容完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，表達(dá)自己很抱歉聽到這個(gè)消息；第二步，具體給出自己的建議；第三步，最后書寫小結(jié)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①advisesbtodosth建議某人做某事②what’smore而且③trytodosth嘗試做某事[高分句型]①Everybodywantstomakefriendswithpeoplewhoalwayshelpothers.（定語(yǔ)從句）②Ifyouhavethesamehobbies,youwillhavemoretotalkabout.（條件狀語(yǔ)從句）（2024·四川遂寧·中考真題）今年5月第五屆“中國(guó)好家風(fēng)”全國(guó)啟動(dòng)儀式在北京隆重舉行。傳承優(yōu)秀家風(fēng)是中華民族家國(guó)情懷的重要體現(xiàn)，為響應(yīng)號(hào)召，你校校報(bào)英語(yǔ)專欄將舉辦“孝敬長(zhǎng)輩，從我做起”的主題征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下的結(jié)構(gòu)圖提示，結(jié)合自己的生活，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文，向該專欄投稿。注意：1.文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文章應(yīng)包含所給要點(diǎn)提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文章語(yǔ)句通順，行文連貫；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。參考詞匯：virtue(n.美德)

accompany(v.陪伴)

raise(v.養(yǎng)育)

educate(v.教育)LoveandRespecttheEldersAsweallknow,respectingandcaringforoureldersisnotonlyatraditionalChinesevirtuebutalsoourduty.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文LoveandRespecttheEldersAsweallknow,respectingandcaringforoureldersisnotonlyatraditionalChinesevirtuebutalsoourduty.Growingup,I’veseenmygrandparents’selflessloveanddedicationtoourfamily.Theyhelpedtolookaftermeandraisemesothatmyparentscouldfocusontheirwork.Therefore,weshouldloveandrespectourelders.Toachievethis,wecanhelpourelderswiththeirchores.Spendingtimecommunicatingwithoureldersisimportantsothattheydon’tfeellonely.It’salsonecessarytotakethemtodoexercise,suchaswalkinginthepark,tokeepthemhealthy.

Inconclusion,aseveryonewillgrowoldoneday,it’simportanttotakeactionnow.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)”為主；③提示：根據(jù)提示信息，結(jié)合自己的生活進(jìn)行寫作，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，邏輯清晰。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接開頭，結(jié)合自己的生活介紹為什么要關(guān)愛(ài)及尊敬長(zhǎng)輩；第二步，介紹如何關(guān)愛(ài)及尊敬長(zhǎng)輩；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)，號(hào)召大家采取行動(dòng)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①focuson集中于②spendtimedoingsth花時(shí)間做某事③inconclusion總之[高分句型]①Theyhelpedtolookaftermeandraisemesothatmyparentscouldfocusontheirwork.(sothat引導(dǎo)目的狀語(yǔ)從句)②Spendingtimecommunicatingwithoureldersisimportantsothattheydon’tfeellonely.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))（2024·吉林·中考真題）當(dāng)我們遇到自己無(wú)法解決的問(wèn)題或煩惱時(shí)，應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)積極向他人尋求幫助。請(qǐng)以“AskingforHelp”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：（1）積極應(yīng)對(duì)問(wèn)題或煩惱的必要性；（2）尋求幫助的益處；（3）結(jié)合生活經(jīng)歷，簡(jiǎn)述你或他人尋求幫助的一個(gè)事例；（4）提供尋求幫助的方法(至少兩個(gè))。寫作要求：（1）語(yǔ)言流暢，層次清晰，內(nèi)容可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）詞數(shù)90—100，開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（3）書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔；（4）文中不能出現(xiàn)考生姓名和學(xué)校名稱。AskingforHelpTheremightbesomeproblemsorworriesinlife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AskingforHelpTheremightbesomeproblemsorworriesinlife.Whenweencounterproblemsortroublesthatwecannotsolveourselves,weshouldlearntoactivelyseekhelpfromothers.It’simportanttoaskforhelp,anditwillhelpyourelax.Lastyear,myEnglishgrammarwasweak.Becauseofthisproblem,myEnglishwasnotgood.SoIwenttoaskmyEnglishteacherforhelp.Withthehelpofmyteacherandmyownefforts,myEnglishscorehasgraduallyimproved.NowI’vereallylearnedhowtolearnlessonsmyself.Inaword,itisnormaltohaveproblems.Whenwemeetproblems,wecanaskpeoplearoundusforhelp,suchasteachers,classmatesorparents.Inaddition,wecanalsosearchtheInternetforsolutions.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹積極應(yīng)對(duì)問(wèn)題或煩惱的必要性以及尋求幫助的益處；第二步，結(jié)合生活經(jīng)歷，簡(jiǎn)述自己尋求幫助的一個(gè)事例；第三步，最后給出提供尋求幫助的方法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①askforhelp尋求幫助②becauseof因?yàn)棰踚naword總之[高分句型]Whenweencounterproblemsortroublesthatwecannotsolveourselves,weshouldlearntoactivelyseekhelpfromothers.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）（2024·黑龍江綏化·中考真題）當(dāng)畢業(yè)的歌聲再次響起，即將離校的你一定有許多心里話要說(shuō)……假如你是李華，請(qǐng)假據(jù)你初中四年的經(jīng)歷，給學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹寫一封信，對(duì)他們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活提幾點(diǎn)建議。寫作要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.詞數(shù)不少于80詞。（信的格式已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）Dearfriends,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文Dearfriends,Howisitgoing?It’stimeformetoleaveschool.Hereismyadviceforyou.First,asstudents,it’simportantforyoutostudyhardatschool.Youmustlistentotheteachercarefullyinclassanddoyourhomeworkcarefullyafterschool.Second,it’salsoimportanttokeephealthy.Tokeephealthy,youcanexerciseoftenandeatregularly.Third,youmustfollowrulesbothinandoutofschool.Forexample,followingtherulesatschoolcanmakeyoubehavewell.Followingthetrafficrulescanmakeyousafe.Last,youcandevelopahobby.Itcanmakeyourlifeinterestingandfull.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，要注意不要遺漏材料中的內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]①第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們的建議”來(lái)引出下文中對(duì)具體建議的介紹；②第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“努力學(xué)習(xí)、保持健康和遵守規(guī)則”三方面入手，給出具體的建議；③第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。希望學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們的生活能有趣充實(shí)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①keephealthy保持健康②both...and兩者都[高分句型]①First,asstudents,it’simportantforyoutostudyhardatschool.（it作形式主語(yǔ)）（2024·甘肅臨夏·中考真題）閱讀使人快樂(lè)，讓人成長(zhǎng)。為了鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們多讀書，你校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)向同學(xué)們發(fā)出“愛(ài)讀書、讀好書、善讀書”的倡議。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英文寫一篇不少于80詞的短文，談?wù)勀愕拈喿x收獲。寫作要求：1．內(nèi)容包含提示中所有要點(diǎn)；2．條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名等信息。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Booksareourbestfriends.Readingbookscanincreaseourknowledgeandmakeuswiser.Itcanbroadenourhorizonsandwecanimproveourselvesbyreading.Weshouldreaddifferentkindsofbooks,suchassciencebooks,novels,historybooksandsoon.Second,it’simportantforustohaveaproperreadingplan.Wecanreadfivedaysaweekandonehouraday.Keepingagoodreadinghabithelpsusmanageourtimeandhaveabetterunderstandingofbooks.Readinginaquietandcomfortableplaceisalsoimportant.Readingmakesafullman!Let’sstartreadingnow.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明閱讀的好處；第二步，具體針對(duì)閱讀給出建議；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①improveourselves提升我們自己②differentkindsof不同種類的③haveabetterunderstandingof對(duì)……有了更好的了解[高分句型]①Itcanbroadenourhorizonsandwecanimproveourselvesbyreading.（并列句）②Keepingagoodreadinghabithelpsusmanageourtimeandhaveabetterunderstandingofbooks.（并列結(jié)構(gòu)）（2024·山東煙臺(tái)·中考真題）假如你是光明中學(xué)英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)成員，本周末社團(tuán)將演出課本劇《愚公移山》，校園廣播站準(zhǔn)備通知在學(xué)校訪問(wèn)的外國(guó)學(xué)生前去觀看，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇廣播稿。主要內(nèi)容包括：1.演出時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2.課本劇內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介及意義；3.歡迎對(duì)演出提出意見(jiàn)建議。要求：1.詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.須包含所有要點(diǎn)提示，并可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，以使行文連貫；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的個(gè)人姓名、校名等信息。提示詞匯：課本劇textbookdrama；《愚公移山》YuGongMovestheMountainsGoodmorning,everyone!Thisisanannouncementforalltheforeignstudentsvisitingourschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourattention!【答案】例文Goodmorning,everyone!Thisisanannouncementforalltheforeignstudentsvisitingourschool.AtextbookdramacalledYuGongMovestheMountainswillbeheldinourschoolhallthisweekend.ItisastoryaboutanoldmannamedYuGong.Twohighmountainsstoppedhisfamilyfromwalkingtotheotherside.YuGongdecidedtomovethemountainswithhisfamily.Manypeoplelaughedathim,buthenevergaveup.Hebelievedthathissonsandgrandsonswouldcontinuetomovethemountainsafterhedied.ThenagodwasmovedbyYuGongsohesenttwogodstohelphimmovethemountains.Thestoryremindsusthatnothingisimpossibleaslongasweworkhard.Weshouldnotgiveup.Afterwatchingthedrama,youarewelcometogiveyouropinionsandsuggestionsonit.Thanksforyourattention!【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”為主；

③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]

第一步，介紹課本劇表演的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；

第二步，講述《愚公移山》的故事以及從這個(gè)故事中學(xué)到的東西。

[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]

①stopsbfromdoingsth阻止某人做某事

②giveup放棄

③aslongas只要

[高分句型]

①AtextbookdramacalledYuGongMovestheMountainswillbeheldinourschoolhallthisweekend.（一般將來(lái)時(shí)被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)）

②Hebelievedthathissonsandgrandsonswouldcontinuetomovethemountainsafterhedied.（賓語(yǔ)從句）（2024·四川樂(lè)山·中考真題）學(xué)校正開展“我運(yùn)動(dòng)我健康”主題周活動(dòng)，旨在鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們踴躍參加，增強(qiáng)健康意識(shí)。為此，校報(bào)面向全校同學(xué)開展“我最喜愛(ài)的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)”征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文向校報(bào)投稿，并在文中希望大家積極參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括：1．最喜愛(ài)乒乓球；2．強(qiáng)身健體，對(duì)眼睛有益；3．減少壓力，放松心情；4．面對(duì)困難，絕不放棄。注意：1．詞數(shù)80詞左右；開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校。參考詞匯：stress(n.)壓力MyFavouriteSportOurschoolisholdingtheactivityna