2025屆高考英語(yǔ)熱點(diǎn)精準(zhǔn)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)精彩結(jié)尾

2025屆高考英語(yǔ)熱點(diǎn)精準(zhǔn)復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)精彩結(jié)尾題型分析01高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)類(lèi)的考查形式在國(guó)內(nèi)的其他部分省份由來(lái)已久，但對(duì)于剛進(jìn)入新高考的考生而言卻是一種新的題型。其實(shí)對(duì)于這類(lèi)題型我們需要注意的問(wèn)題是：1、寫(xiě)什么2、怎么寫(xiě)好的開(kāi)端和結(jié)尾是一篇文章獲取高分的關(guān)鍵。精彩收尾：畫(huà)面定格這樣的收尾引人入勝，給人無(wú)限想象空間，讓人回味無(wú)窮?？忌梢詮娜宋飫?dòng)作的畫(huà)面和具有特殊寓意的寫(xiě)景畫(huà)面兩個(gè)方面定格。1.人物動(dòng)作的畫(huà)面定格①Theystoodthereforamoment,sidebyside,waitingfortherushingholidaycurrentandfortheirplaceinit.Thenthedaughterglancedoverandmomentarilyregardedhermother.Andslowly,almostreluctantly,sheplacedherarmwithapparentlyunaccustomedaffectionaroundhermother'sshouldersandgentlyguidedherbackintothedeluge.她們并肩站在那里，等待著節(jié)日的浪潮，等待著她們?cè)诶顺敝械奈恢?。然后女兒掃了一眼，立刻注視著她的母親。慢慢地，幾乎是不情愿地，帶著明顯不習(xí)慣的愛(ài)她把胳膊放在她母親的肩膀上，輕輕地引導(dǎo)她回到洪水中。②Hishardworkpaidoff!Holdingthesodatinfirmly,Reubenrushedfortheshoptobuythebrooch.Themomenthegotthebeautifulbrooch,heburstthroughthefrontdoorandplaceditinDora'shand.NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift.Speechlessandhappy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.他的努力得到了回報(bào)！魯本緊緊地握著汽水罐，沖向商店去買(mǎi)胸針。他一拿到那枚漂亮的胸針，就沖進(jìn)前門(mén)，把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉從來(lái)沒(méi)有收到過(guò)這樣的禮物。她高興得說(shuō)不出話來(lái)，緊緊地把兒子抱在懷里，眼淚涌了出來(lái)。③Thebutterflycleanedhertearsontheface,“No.”Godfeltabitrelievedandsaid,“Tomorrowyoucanbecomehumanagain.”Butsheshookherheadandsaid,“No,Iwanttobeabutterflyfortherestofmylife...”Thenthebutterflywouldstaytogetherwithherloverforever.Onthetopofthemountain,sheseemedtoenjoythesunriseandthesunsethappilywiththem.蝴蝶擦干了臉上的眼淚，說(shuō)，“不?！鄙系鬯闪艘豢跉?，說(shuō)?！懊魈炷憔涂梢宰兓厝祟?lèi)了?！钡龘u了搖頭說(shuō)，“不，我想做一輩子蝴蝶...”然后蝴蝶就會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)和她的愛(ài)人在一起。在山頂上，她似乎和他們一起快樂(lè)地享受著日出和日落2.特殊寓意的寫(xiě)景畫(huà)面定格①Theskywasabillionpureeyesoflightandthegrassgreenunderfoot,itwasasifnightanddayhadbecomeonebeautifulmoment.Dawnhadcome.天空像是一億只純凈的眼睛拼接在一起，腳下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白晝已成為一個(gè)美麗的時(shí)刻。黎明已經(jīng)來(lái)臨。（黎明到來(lái)的畫(huà)面）②ThecrystalandceruleanwaterwasgentleasIwadedthroughit,thesunsetlikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.當(dāng)我涉過(guò)水晶般天藍(lán)色的輕柔的水時(shí)，日落就像藍(lán)色畫(huà)布上的橙色顏料。（美好日落時(shí)的畫(huà)面）③Themoonundersiegebystarsseemedtolightenthenightbringingforthstarsthatshoneandhungintheblackness.Theneverendingblacknessconsumedeverything.被群星圍困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，帶來(lái)了在黑暗中閃耀和懸掛著的群星。無(wú)盡的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描寫(xiě)夜空的畫(huà)面）④Lookingup,IsawthesunshinebrighterthanIeverknewbefore.Isawatreeinthedistanceglistengentlyasitreflectedthesun'srays.Myconsciousnessebbedawaywiththeheat.ItookafewblinksbeforeIlandedwithathud.抬頭一看，我看到太陽(yáng)比我以前所知道的還要明亮。我看見(jiàn)遠(yuǎn)處有一棵樹(shù)反射著太陽(yáng)光，發(fā)出柔和的光輝。我的意識(shí)隨著熱度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到現(xiàn)實(shí)中，恢復(fù)了知覺(jué)。（特殊寓意）⑤Kissedbytherainandglistening,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrisesfromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.潮濕的地面走起來(lái)很冷，被雨水親吻后閃閃發(fā)光。一股濃郁的泥土般的香味從地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔軟的懷抱里。（雨后清新的畫(huà)面）⑥Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨水打著窗戶，向最后一縷陽(yáng)光告別。（雨水來(lái)臨的畫(huà)面）⑦TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.我在街上漫步時(shí)，樹(shù)葉在我腳下嘎吱作響。偶爾，有葉子會(huì)從我身邊掉下來(lái)，輕輕地?fù)u晃，緩緩落到到地面。（描寫(xiě)落葉的畫(huà)面）精彩收尾：對(duì)話收尾以簡(jiǎn)單的對(duì)話形式結(jié)尾，適合記敘文續(xù)寫(xiě)，日常、簡(jiǎn)單又靈活。①Chestersaidhisfathertoldhimhehadtriedtosearchforhimandhisbrother,butbothbrothershadchangedtheirlastnames.”Hedoesremembermeandmyolderbrotherandhetoldmethathe'sbeenlookingforuseversincewelostcontact,”hesaid.ChestersaidhisbrotherhassinceflowntoColombiatobereunitedwithUrreaaswell.Whenaskedhowthereunionwithhisfatherwillchangehislife,Chestersaid,”Igotfamilyeverywhere,soitmightleadtomanymoretripsnow.”Chester說(shuō)他父親告訴他，他曾試圖尋找他和他哥哥，但兩兄弟都改了姓。他說(shuō)：“他確實(shí)記得我和我哥哥，他告訴我，自從我們失去聯(lián)系，他就一直在找我們，”Chester說(shuō)他哥哥也飛去哥倫比亞和Urrea團(tuán)聚了。當(dāng)被問(wèn)及與父親的團(tuán)聚會(huì)如何改變他的生活時(shí)，Chester說(shuō)，“我的家人無(wú)處不在，所以現(xiàn)在可能會(huì)有更多的出行?！雹赪hatwasmostfascinatingaboutthereunionisthatShavialsomovesothers.Nina'sfamilyhadmovedtoabiggerapartment.”I'veheardamazingstoriesaboutdogs'loyalty,butIneverimaginedthissortofthingwouldeverhappentome.Evennow,Icanhardlybelievethisdogtraveledsuchalongdistancetofindus,”saidNina,”Iwouldnevergivethiskindoffriendawayagain.Inevergrowtiredofrepeatingthis—animalsarethemostdevotedandlovingcreatures.Theyneedourloveandcare.”這次重聚最吸引人的地方在于，Shavi也打動(dòng)了其他人。Nina的家人搬到了一個(gè)更大的公寓?！拔衣?tīng)說(shuō)過(guò)狗狗忠心耿耿的故事，但我從沒(méi)想過(guò)這種事會(huì)發(fā)生在我身上。即使是現(xiàn)在，我也很難相信這只狗走了這么遠(yuǎn)的路來(lái)找我們，“Nina說(shuō)，“我再也不會(huì)放棄這祥的朋友了。我總是不厭其煩地重復(fù)這句話一一動(dòng)物是最志誠(chéng)和最可愛(ài)的生物。他們需要我們的愛(ài)和關(guān)心?！雹邸璗heyhungallthethingsbacktothewall.JackaskedPaisley,“Areyoureallywillingtoleadatoughlifewithme？”Shepattedawaytheashesonhandsandlookedatthewallswithloadsofstuffonthemsatisfactorily,saying,”Yes!Forme，itisnotasufferingtolive.”他們把所有的東西都掛回墻上。杰克問(wèn)佩斯利:“你真的愿意和我一起過(guò)難的生活嗎?”她拍拍手上的骨灰，滿意地看著墻上掛滿東西的墻，說(shuō)“是的！對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)，活著不是一種痛苦?！本适瘴玻褐黝}升華最后以升華主題結(jié)尾，起到總結(jié)全文的作用。從故事引出道理，由淺入深，這種寫(xiě)法更高級(jí)、更考驗(yàn)考生對(duì)短文的理解能力和概括能力。①Everyonehasonepersontheylookuptoasarolemodel.Tomethereisnoneotherthanmymom.Shehasbeauty,brains,andoneofthebestheartsIknow.Withoutherinmylife,IwouldhavenoideawhetherIcanbeafamousdancer.Someday,whenIamolderandhavechildrenofmyown,IhopeIcanbejustasgreataparentasmymom.（母愛(ài)的深遠(yuǎn)影響）每個(gè)人都有一個(gè)榜樣。對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)，不是別人，正是我媽媽。她很漂亮，很聰明，而且是我認(rèn)識(shí)的最用心的人之一。如果沒(méi)有她，我不知道我能不能成為一個(gè)著名的舞者。有一天，當(dāng)我長(zhǎng)大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望我能成為像我媽媽一樣偉大的父（母）親。②….Iamextremelyunhappyaboutit.Ithinkmoneydoesn'tequalhappiness.Andfreelifestylealsodoesn'tequalhappiness.Therealhappinessisthateveryoneloveseachother,anddoeseverythingusefulforoursociety.Mostofmyclassmatessupportme.Butsomeofthemthinkmoneyiseverything.Inmyopinion,moneycan'ttaketheplaceofeverything,suchasyourlife,yourtimeandyourhappiness.(表達(dá)自己的價(jià)值觀）我對(duì)此非常不高興。我覺(jué)得金錢(qián)不等于幸福。自由的生活方式也不等于幸福。真正的幸福是每個(gè)人都彼此相愛(ài)，為我們的社會(huì)做一切有益的事情。大多數(shù)同學(xué)都支持我。但有些人認(rèn)為錢(qián)就是一切。在我看來(lái)，金錢(qián)不能代替一切，比如你的生活，你的時(shí)間和你的幸福。③“Tworeasonsaccountforthatyouwon,”theteacheranswered.”First,you'vealmostmasteredoneofthemostdifficultthrowsinallofjudo.Second,theonlyknowndefenseforthatmoveisforyouropponenttograbyourleftarm.Itisyourbiggestweaknessthatmakesyouwinthematch.Asaproverbsays,‘Everycoinhastwosides.'Makingfulluseofyourstrengthisyourachievement.Pleaserememberthatinnocasewillyougiveupespeciallyintrouble.Godisfairtoeveryone.”(借用名言警句來(lái)升華主題）“有兩個(gè)原因可以解釋為什么你贏了，”老師回答。“首先，你幾乎掌握了柔道中最難的一個(gè)動(dòng)作。其次，這個(gè)動(dòng)作唯一已知的防御方法，就是讓你的對(duì)手抓住你的左臂。這是你最大的弱點(diǎn)，讓你贏得比賽。正如諺語(yǔ)所說(shuō)，‘每枚硬幣都有兩面。'充分利用你的力量就是你的成就。請(qǐng)記住，在任何情況下，你都不要放棄，尤其是遇到麻煩的時(shí)候。上帝對(duì)每個(gè)人都是公平的?！本适瘴玻航Y(jié)尾留白這樣的結(jié)尾引人入勝，給予讀者很大的想象空間，更具有藝術(shù)性。①Whileshewrappedthem,ItookadeepbreathandaskedJoy,“Doyouhavedinnerplans?”IexplainedthatI'dliketowaitabitbeforeIwentbacktothehospital–gaveGraceandherhusbandsometimealonewithbaby.“Wouldyoubeinterestedinjoiningmeinabitetoeat?”Iasked.“I'dloveto,”shereplied,hereyessparklinglikediamonds.And,thiswasthebeginningoftheendtomymonthsofheartbreakfollowingBetsy'sdeath.（故事結(jié)尾留白，給予讀者想象空間）當(dāng)她把它們包起來(lái)的時(shí)候，我深吸了一口氣，問(wèn)Joy：“你晚餐有安排嗎?”我解釋說(shuō)我想等一會(huì)兒再回醫(yī)院——讓Grace和她丈夫有時(shí)間單獨(dú)和孩子在一起?！澳阌信d趣和我一起吃點(diǎn)東西嗎?”我問(wèn)?！拔液軜?lè)意，”她回答，她的眼睛像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。而且，這是我在Betsy死后幾個(gè)月心碎的結(jié)束的開(kāi)始。②Thebeggarhesitatedforamoment,thenhedecidedtoopenit.Hedeclaredaloud,“Whocares?Hewantedmetohaveitanyway.Imightaswellenjoyitnow.”Withthat,heunwrappedthewhitetissuepaper,buttohissurprise,therewasnohardrockcandyinside.Instead,intohisfingersfellashinywhitepearlworththousandsofdollars.（出于意料的結(jié)局，給人驚喜和回味）乞丐猶豫了一會(huì)兒，然后決定打開(kāi)它。他大聲宣布:“誰(shuí)在乎呢？不管怎樣，他還是想讓我擁有它。我還不如現(xiàn)在就享受呢?！闭f(shuō)著，他打開(kāi)了白色的紙巾，但令他驚訝的是，里面沒(méi)有硬糖。相反，一顆價(jià)值數(shù)千美元的閃亮的白珍珠掉進(jìn)了他的手指里。精彩收尾：首尾呼應(yīng)首尾呼應(yīng)的寫(xiě)法在語(yǔ)文寫(xiě)作中也經(jīng)常使用，不僅能強(qiáng)調(diào)主題，引起共鳴，也能使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更加緊密、嚴(yán)禁和自然。①開(kāi)頭：Ihadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother---loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.結(jié)尾：Despitemom'sbeingabsent-mindedandforgetful,shewasstillakindandnicemom.②開(kāi)頭：Itwassummerandmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.結(jié)尾：NeverhadIhadsuchathrillingyetdangerousvacationbefore.ThespecialtriptotheWildWestwasdeeplyengravedinmymind.③開(kāi)頭：AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.結(jié)尾：Whatafunnyday.Arthurcouldn'tstoplaughingwheneverhelookedbackonthishilarious（搞笑的）experience.模擬練習(xí)02閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AndyandEricweretwofriendswhooftenplayedtogether.Oneday,ontheirwaybackhomefromschool,theyrodeslowly,talkingaboutthefishingtripthattheyhadplannedforthecomingsummervacation.Whileturningacorner,Andycriedout,“Afightnearthelake!Let’sgotowatch!”“No,”saidEric.“Let’sgohomeandnotgetinvolvedintheirquarrel.Stayawayfromit,orwemaygetintotrouble.What’smore,ourparentsarewaitingforusathomeandIdon’twantthemtoworryaboutme.”“Youareacoward(膽小鬼).”Andylaughedathim.Ericwasalittleannoyed,buthedidn’tsayanything,justridinghomedirectly.Thenextday,hewenttoschoolasusual.However,AndyhadtoldalltheclassthatEricwastootimidtodoanythingbrave.Sothewholeclasslaughedathimalot.Andfromthenon,theylookeddownonEric,unwillingtoplaywithhim.Ericwasverysadbuthedidn’tblameAndyforhisbeingrudetohim,becausehelearnedthattruecourageisshownmostinbearingmisunderstandingwhenitwasnotdeserved,andthatheoughttobeafraidofnothingbutdoingwrong.Therefore,heignoredtheirteasing,studyingevenharder.Whatwasdifferentwasthathehadtogohomealone.Severaldayslater,Andytogetherwithhisnewfriendswasridinghome.Theyweresoabsorbedintheirconversationthattheywereunawareofeverythingelsearoundthem.Suddenly,Andynoticedanunusualbuzzofnoise.Hecametoastopandlookedcuriouslyuptotheheavens.Whathesawshockedandterrifiedhim.Ahugeswarmofbeesfilledtheskylikeablackcloudandthenoisymassseemedtobeheadingangrilytowardsthem.“Bees!”someoneshouted.Theboyswerecaughtingreatpanic.AllofthemexceptAndyrodeasfastaspossibletoescape.Andywastooscaredtomove.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Andystoppedthere,withthebuzzlouderandlouder.Draggingthemselvesoutofthelake,theystruggleduptotheshore.話題：助人篇