2024年天津市中考英語寫作專題提升講義

模塊一：重點積累模塊一：重點積累身心健康physicalandmentalhealth均衡的adj.balanced精力充沛的adj.energetic生活方式lifestyle壞習(xí)慣badhabit確保makesure充滿活力fullofenergy形成均衡的飲食haveabalanceddiet做鍛煉dosomeexercise養(yǎng)成。。。的習(xí)慣getintothehabitof不均衡的飲食有害健康It’sharmfulforustohaveunbalanceddiet參加participatein對社會有貢獻(xiàn)makecontributionto扔垃圾throwrubbish不友善的adjrude熱心腸的warmhearted起重要作用playanimportantrolein常見的mon應(yīng)當(dāng)besupposedtoIt’sproperforustodo向某人尋求幫助turnsbforhelp政府government樹立好榜樣setagoodexample有好的影響haveagoodinfluenceon以。。。為榜樣followone’sexample我認(rèn)為，遇到困難的時候彼此互相幫助。只有這樣我們的世界才會越來越好Inmyopinion,wearesupposedtohelpeachotherwhenwegetintotrouble.Onlyinthiswayourwordwillbeebetterandbetter樂于做bereadytodo如果你意識到錯誤，你應(yīng)該向他人尋求幫助Ifyourealizeyouarewrong,youshouldturntosbforhelp.在我看來只要合理使用，是對學(xué)生們有好處的Inmyview,phonesaregoodtostudentsaslongastheyusethemproperly騎車不僅能省錢還能鍛煉身體ridingbikescannotonlysavemoneybutalsobuildourbody害怕做某事beafraidof尋求幫助turnsbforhelp鼓勵某人做某事encouragesbtodo取得巨大進(jìn)步makegreatprogress逐步地stepbystep從那時起fromthemon好好利用makefulluseof學(xué)習(xí)方法learningmethods勞逸結(jié)合balancetherelationshipbetweenstudyandentertainment最好做某事hadbetterdo精彩的adjwonderful變得興奮getexcited極好的adjfantastic團(tuán)隊合作nteamwork競賽npetition開闊眼界broadenone’shorizon有意義的adjmeaningful專注于payattentiontodoing豐富日常生活enrichone’sdailylife我喜歡打籃球認(rèn)為打球可以給我?guī)砜鞓泛统晒loveplayingbasketballandthinkthatitcanbringmepleasureandsuccess我們必須明確每個人都應(yīng)該學(xué)會時間管理wemustmakeitclearthateveryoneshouldlearntimemanagement李華是我的好朋友他媽媽是老師（定從）LiHuaismyclosefriendwhosemumisteacher那些亂丟垃圾的人應(yīng)該被懲罰Thesewhothrowrubbisheverywhereshouldbepunished勞動laboring養(yǎng)成，，，的習(xí)慣getintothehabitof值得做beworthdoing社會技能socialskill機(jī)會chance設(shè)立目標(biāo)setagoal首先平衡工作和休息是非常重要的Aboveallitisimportanttobalancetherelationshipbetweenstudyandentertainment游覽圣地placeofinterest觀光gosightseeing歷史建筑historicalbuilding展覽exhibition參觀payavisit文化差異culturaldifference帶某人參觀showsbaround駕車帶某人去drivesbto喜歡做befondofdoing我們應(yīng)該認(rèn)真聽課，這對我們學(xué)生非常重要（定從）Weshouldlistentotheteachercarefullywhichisimportanttous隨著科學(xué)技術(shù)的發(fā)展withthedevelopmentofthescienceandtechnology有志者事竟成whereisawillthereisaway正如古語所說asanoldsaygoes在我看來，如果你遵循以上建議，你會在考試中取得好成績Inmyopinion,ifyoufollowthesemethodsyouwillgetgoodmarksintheexam.存錢savemoney浪費(fèi)vwaste在。。。的幫助下withthehelpof吃一頓大餐haveabigmeal聚在一起gettogether尊敬vrespect在他媽媽的幫助下他做了一碗面條給他爺爺withthehelpofhismother,hecookedabowelofnoodlesforhisgrandpa責(zé)任（兩個）dutyresponsibility遭受sufferfrom主動做某事offertodo立即atonce打包pack采取措施takestepstodo共建環(huán)保社會人人有責(zé)It’sourresponsibilitytobuildagreencity眾所周知，……可以……It’swidelybelievedthat……can……實現(xiàn)小王的目標(biāo)realizeXiaoWang’sgoal不遺余力地努力sparenoefforttodo過程process讓夢想實現(xiàn)makeourdreametrue遵守秩序obeytherules違反秩序beagainsttherules認(rèn)真對待每一次考試takeeveryexamseriously只有這種方式（結(jié)構(gòu)）Onlyinthiswaycan……只有這樣我們才能取得好成績Onlyinthiswaycanwegetgoodmarks采取行動takestepstodo到處亂丟垃圾throwrubbisheverywhere懲罰punish號召callon減少水污染reducewaterpollution從現(xiàn)在起fromnowon積極參與participateinactively正確的2correctproperly垃圾分類sortrubbish環(huán)保城市g(shù)reencity為了保護(hù)環(huán)境我們必須從小事做起toprotecttheenvironmentwemuststartwithsmallthings最后一段表觀點2frommypointofviewasfarasI’mconcerned不用說早起是重要的Itgoeswithoutsayingthatit’simportanttogetupearly我們應(yīng)該保持教室整潔wearesupposedtokeepourclassroomclean如果你不努力你就會失去這次機(jī)會Ifyoudon’tworkhard,you’lllosethischance有志者事竟成wherethere’sawillthere’saway熟能生巧practicemakesperfect每個硬幣都有兩面Everycoinhastwosides一分耕耘一分收獲Nopains,Nogains各種各樣allsortsof意識到時間就是金錢是很重要的it’simportanttorealizethattimeismoney難以忘懷的旅行unforgettabletrip老實說Tobehonest考試壓力pressureofexams毫無疑問,對……問題應(yīng)予以足夠的重視.Obviously,…Ifwewanttodosomething…,itisessentialthat…模塊模塊二：結(jié)構(gòu)梳理全文連貫：三段式結(jié)構(gòu)（Beginning/Body/Ending）Beginning:描述故事開端（兩行）Body:寫清作文信息點，使之連貫流暢（45行）Ending:發(fā)表評論/個人觀點/表達(dá)期望（兩行）二．故事連貫：變簡為繁1.選用連詞連句，豐富句式；2.添加過渡詞擴(kuò)句，錦上添花；①表列舉：suchas+名詞，forexample,+句子②表結(jié)果：asaresult,+句子③表轉(zhuǎn)折：however,+句子④表事實：infact,actually,totellyouthetruth,...⑤表遞進(jìn)：what’smore,moreover,what’sworse,ononehand…ontheotherhand…⑥表對比：paredwith...,⑦表順序：first/firstofall,second,third,then,next,Finally,...⑧表時間：fromnowon,later,afterawhile,atthesametime,...⑨表故事發(fā)展：atfirst,then,later,atlast,besides,(而且)inaddition,Lastbutnotleast,...⑩表人物心理：toone’ssurprise,toone’sgreatjoy,（令某人驚訝/欣喜）toone'sdisappointment,toone'sregret,（令某人失望/遺憾）?表個人觀點：inmyopinion,inmypointofview,asfarasI’mconcerned,...?表總結(jié)：inaword,ingeneral,inshort,...模塊模塊三：基礎(chǔ)短語補(bǔ)充1）kindsof各種各樣的2）either…or…或者……或者……,不是……就是……3）neither…nor…既不……也不……4）nolonger/more=not…anylonger/more不再5）turnon打開(電燈、收音機(jī)、煤氣等)6）turnoff關(guān)7）befamousfor因……而著名8）onones'wayto在……途中9）waitfor等待10）intime及時11）makeone’swayto…往……(艱難地)走去12）justthen正在那時13）geton上車14）getoff下車15）laughat嘲笑16）infact實際上17）atmidnight在半夜18）haveagoodtime=enjoyoneself玩得愉快19）stop…fromdoingsth.阻止……干某事20）haveaheadache頭痛21）assoonas…一……就……22）feellikedoingsth.想要干某事23）fallasleep入睡24）wakeup醒來,叫醒25）insteadof代替26）lookover檢查27）takeexercise運(yùn)動28）attheweekend在周末29）ontime按時30）runaway逃跑31）take(good)careof…=lookafter…(well)(好好)照顧,照料32）thinkof考慮到,想起模塊模塊四：句型補(bǔ)充tryone’sbesttodosth.盡某人的最大努力去Wemusttakeactiontodosth.我們采取措施來做withthehelpof=withone’shelp在的幫助下bringussuccessandenjoyment帶給我們成功和快樂Befullofconfidence充滿信心beconfidentof/haveconfidencein對有信心developgoodlifehabits培養(yǎng)/養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣listentotheteachercarefullyinclass在課堂上認(rèn)真聽講It'sourdutytodosth.是我們的責(zé)任Weshouldpayattentiontodoingsth.我們應(yīng)該注意It’sgoodfor/It'sbadfor對有益/有害useproperly合理使用bekind/friendly/nicetosb.對善心/友好moreandmorebeautiful越來越漂亮moreandmoreimportant越來越重要moreandmorepopular越來越受歡迎what'smore而且aboveall總之a(chǎn)sastudent(asstudents)作為學(xué)生asateenager(asteenagers)做為青少年suchas例如（+doingsth.）forexample例如（+句子）inmyopinion在我看來asaresult結(jié)果ontheotherhand另一方面asweallknow眾所周知goonline上網(wǎng)asfarasIknow就我所知道的workhard努力學(xué)習(xí)keephealthy/stayhealthy保持健康haveahealthybody/food有健康的身體/飲食dowellintheexam在考試中好好的做makegreatprogress取得進(jìn)步國籍befrom/efromHis/Hernameis=不要出現(xiàn)MyteachernameHere’ssomeadviceforyou.給你一些建議。Thesituationisgettingworeandwore.情況正變得越來越糟糕。Ithasadvantagesanddisadvantages.有優(yōu)缺點。Ifwecanfollowthesesuggestions,wewillIusedto+V原，butnowI我過去，但現(xiàn)在Howtouseitisveryimportant.怎樣使用是很重要的。Itcanopenupoureyesandminds.這能開闊我們的視野和頭腦。Wemustrespectourteachersandparents.我們必須尊敬我們的老師和父母。IhavegreatinterestinEnglish./IaminterestedinEnglish.我對英語很感/有興趣。Healwaystriestomakehisclasslivelyandinteresting.他總是盡量使他的課生動有趣。fewafewfewer+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)littlealittleless+不可數(shù)名詞模塊模塊五：三年真題2023假如你是李華，請根據(jù)以下提示，給你的筆友Peter用英文寫一封郵件，向他講述你班同學(xué)王亮的一個感人故事。（1）一個下雨天，王亮在路上看到一群人聚在一起。（2）他走過去，看到一位老婦人躺在地上。（3）了解情況后，他蹲下為老人撐傘。（4）救護(hù)車到達(dá)后，他悄悄地離開了。（5）你認(rèn)為……參考詞匯：蹲下

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ambulance要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個。（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?I’dliketotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmate,WangLiang.Onarainyday,、_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveastorytoshare?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua2022假如你是李華，請你給美國筆友David寫一封信，講述你班同學(xué)王紅回家路上做的一件好事，并談?wù)劯惺?。?）上周五，一棵樹被大風(fēng)吹倒，擋住了道路。（2）王紅看到后，撿起地上的樹枝，又去移動樹干。（3）樹干太沉，她搬不動。（4）人們過來幫忙。（5）你認(rèn)為……參考詞匯：被吹倒beblowndown

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樹干trunk要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個。（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearDavid,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareastorywithyou.L