高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作表達(dá)微技能（全國）04邀請信

04邀請信(2020年1月，浙江卷）假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請給你的英國朋友George寫封郵件邀請他參加。內(nèi)容包括:1.比賽時(shí)間；2.演講話題；3.報(bào)名方式。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearGeorge,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinusinthe“Chinesespeechcontestforforeigners”tobeheldinourschool.Theactivityisscheduledat8:00a.m.onJanuary20thinthelecturehall.Thethemeofthespeechcontestis“differencesbetweeneasternandwesterncustoms”,throughwhichtheforeignstudentsareboundtogainabetterunderstandingofChinesesplendidtraditionalcultureandmeanwhilestrengthentheirloveofChina.Immenselyfascinatedbyitsmysteriouscultureandage-oldhistory,youcan,undoubtedlygiveusawonderfulandimpressiveperformance.Youareexpectedtosignupforthecontestatwww.C.I'dappreciateitifyoucouldacceptourinvitation.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。第1步：根據(jù)提示可知,本篇為一封電子郵件；假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請給你的英國朋友George寫封郵件邀請他參加。內(nèi)容包括:1.比賽時(shí)間；2.演講話題；3.報(bào)名方式。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求,確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：Chinesespeechcontest（中文演講比賽）；bescheduled（安排）；beboundto（必然）；gainabetterunderstandingof（更好地了解）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第4步：連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡,書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰,保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！军c(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達(dá)方式,如Thethemeofthespeechcontestis“differencesbetweeneasternandwesterncustoms”,throughwhichtheforeignstudentsareboundtogainabetterunderstandingofChinesesplendidtraditionalcultureandmeanwhilestrengthentheirloveofChina.運(yùn)用了定語從句；I'dappreciateitifyoucouldacceptourinvitation.運(yùn)用了條件狀語從句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式,顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、層次分明,上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然,為文章增色添彩?！酒拙洹拷榻B自己，簡要說明活動(dòng)，并邀請對方。1.I’mWangMingfromYuWenSchool，thepresidentoftheStudentUnion.我是來自育文學(xué)校的王明，學(xué)生會(huì)主席。2.AnEnglishspeakingcontestofourschoolwillbeheldonAugust6.我們學(xué)校有一場英語演講比賽將在8月6號舉行。學(xué)科&網(wǎng)3.TherewillbeapartyinmygardenonSunday.周日，在我的花園里會(huì)舉行一場聚會(huì)。4.I’dliketoinviteyoutojudgeit.我想邀請你做它的裁判。5.I’mwritingtoinviteyouto...我寫信是邀請你……6.Iwonderifyoucancometo...我想知道你是否能來……7.Wesincerelyhopeyoucanattendit.我們真誠希望你能夠參加。8.It’smypleasure/agreathonourformetoinviteyouto...我很榮幸的邀請你……9.It’sapitythatyouhavetogobacktoAmericasoon.SoafarewellpartyforyouwillbeheldintheSunClubthisSaturdayevening.Couldyoucomeat6:00pm?很遺憾你不久就要回美國了。所以，這周六，在陽光俱樂部我們會(huì)為你舉行一個(gè)歡送會(huì)。下午六點(diǎn)你能來嗎？【篇中句】介紹活動(dòng)具體內(nèi)容，并說明受邀人參加理由。1.Itwillbeginat2:00pmandlasttwohours,duringwhichtime15well-preparedcontestantswilldelivertheirspeeches.它將于下午兩點(diǎn)鐘開始，四點(diǎn)鐘結(jié)束，在此期間將會(huì)有十五位準(zhǔn)備充分的參賽者發(fā)表演講。2.Wewillstartat8:00amandarrivethereat9:00.我們將會(huì)在上午八點(diǎn)出發(fā)，九點(diǎn)到達(dá)那里。3.Duringtheafternoon,we’ll...together.下午，我們會(huì)一起……4.Remembertotakewaterandlunchwithyou.記得帶上水和午餐。5.Bytheway,youmaytakeBusNo.322infrontofyourapartmentanditwilltakeyoudirectlytotheclub.順便說一下，你可以乘坐你家公寓前的322路公交車，它會(huì)直接把你帶到俱樂部。6.IknowyouareanativespeakerofEnglishandanEnglishteacher,andI,onbehalfofourschool,sincerelyinviteyoutobepartofthecontest.我知道你的母語是英語，還是一個(gè)英語老師。我，代表我們學(xué)校，真誠的邀請你來比賽現(xiàn)場。7.SinceyouaresoeagertoimproveyourEnglish,itwillprovetobeagreatchance.既然你如此渴望提高英語，這會(huì)是一個(gè)很好的機(jī)會(huì)。8.I’msurethatyouwillenjoyyourselfthere.我保證你在那里會(huì)過得很愉快?！酒簿洹科诖龑Ψ浇邮苎?，并期待對方盡快回復(fù)。1.Willyoubeavailableduringthattime?Pleasecontactmeat1234567atyourearliestconvenience.那期間你有空嗎？請方便時(shí)盡快給我打電話1234567。2.Wouldyoupleaseletmeknowassoonaspossibleifyoucanacceptmyinvitation?請盡快告訴我你能否接受我的邀請好嗎？3.Wewillfeelmuchhonoredifyoucouldcome.如果你能來，我們會(huì)非常榮幸。4.Wearelookingforwardtoyourcoming.我們期待著你的到來。5.Iamlongingtoseeyousoon.我期待著盡早見到你。模板①Dear________,________(開門見山地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng))，Itwouldbepleasanttohaveyouhere(表達(dá)邀請?jiān)竿?.Willyougivemethepleasureofyourcompany(正式發(fā)出邀請)？Duringtheparty/conference,wewillhavealotsofactivitiesyouwillbeinterestedin(開始介紹活動(dòng)內(nèi)容).First,__________(介紹舉行的活動(dòng)一).Second,_________(介紹舉行的活動(dòng)二).Iknow/believeyoubeveryinterestedin_________(引出受邀請人參加的理由).First/Foronething________(希望受邀人參加的理由一)，Second/Foranother__________(希望受邀人參加的理由二)。Theparty/conferencewouldnotbecompletewithoutyou(總結(jié)受邀人參加的必要性).Theparty/conferencewillbeginat________(提出活動(dòng)的地點(diǎn)).Itispossibleforustomeetat________(提出具體約定時(shí)間).Wedohopeyoucancome________(再次發(fā)出邀請).YoursLiHua模板②Dear________,Therewillbea________(內(nèi)容)at/in________(地點(diǎn))on________(時(shí)間).Wewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.Theoccasionwillstartat________________(具體時(shí)間).Thiswillbefollowedbya________(進(jìn)一步的安排).At________________(時(shí)間),wewillhave________________________(另一個(gè)安排).Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.RSVPbefore_____________________(通知你的最后期限).YoursSincerely,LiHua【寫作注意事項(xiàng)】a.盛情邀請參加聚會(huì)、共度假期或游覽某地等；b.建立密切聯(lián)系，加強(qiáng)感情交流；c.拓展相關(guān)內(nèi)容，激發(fā)他人興趣?！緦懽鞣椒ā竣偈锥危洪_門見山說明寫作目的。②主體：a.具體交代邀請?jiān)?；b.邀請內(nèi)容：活動(dòng)性質(zhì)、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、日期；c.有關(guān)要求和希望。③尾段：a.再次盛情邀請；b.希望盡快答復(fù)。【寫作流程圖】發(fā)出邀請說明事由說明活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、對象等表達(dá)期待和感謝假定你是李華，計(jì)劃和同學(xué)去敬老院(nursinghome)陪老人們過重陽節(jié)(theDoubleNinthFestival)。請給外教露西寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括：1.出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間；2.活動(dòng)：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.結(jié)語已為你寫好。DearLucy,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearLucy,I’dliketoinviteyoutojoinusforavisittothenearbynursinghomenextSaturdayfortheDoubleNinthFestival.Itisthedayfortheelderlyinourculture.We’llgoandmakedumplingsandcakeswiththeelderlypeoplethere.We’llalsospendsomefuntimetogethersinging,dancingandplayinggames,whichwehopewillmakethemhappy.Weshouldbebackataround4o’clockintheafternoon.Ifyouareabletocomewithus,pleaseletusknowandwe’llwaitforyouatthegateat9inthemorning.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明。We’llalsospendsomefuntimetogethersinging,dancingandplayinggames,whichwehopewillmakethemhappy.中用了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句和句式spendtimedoing。此外，還有if從句以及一些短語如inviteyoutojoinus，foravisitto，makedumplings等。【名師點(diǎn)睛】本作文從實(shí)際生活出發(fā)，以英語的交際性和實(shí)用性為目標(biāo)，兼顧尊老敬老和做志愿者的教育意義，體現(xiàn)了課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)要求的以知識(shí)運(yùn)用為教學(xué)目標(biāo)的要求。在高三備考時(shí)，應(yīng)該多從把語言作為交流的工具的角度去準(zhǔn)備書面表達(dá)。1.假如你是李華，是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席。為了豐富同學(xué)們的業(yè)余生活，提高同學(xué)們的英語水平，學(xué)生會(huì)成立了一個(gè)英語俱樂部。請你寫一封邀請信邀請同學(xué)們參加。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)：(1)俱樂部成立的目的；(2)俱樂部要開展的活動(dòng)；(3)邀請大家參加俱樂部。注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右；(2)邀請信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：禮堂auditoriumBoysandgirls，I’mthechairmanofStudentUnion,LiHua,andIhavebignewsforyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.假設(shè)你是李華，學(xué)校本周六要去附近的HappyVillage感受美麗鄉(xiāng)村，你想邀請朋友Lucy一起去，請給她寫一封邀請信，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：1.鄉(xiāng)村介紹；2.活動(dòng)安排；3.往返時(shí)間和方式。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearLucy,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3.假如你叫李華，為了讓同學(xué)們更好地了解黨史，你們班將去省黨史博物館(ProvincialPartyHistoryMuseum)參觀，這是一個(gè)非常著名的紅色景點(diǎn)，你想邀請好友——你校的留學(xué)生Bob一起參加，請給他寫一封邀請信。內(nèi)容包括：1.集合時(shí)間及地點(diǎn)；2.注意事項(xiàng)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。DearBob,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua4.假定你是李華，你市大劇院下周末將舉行一場民樂演奏會(huì)，你打算邀請來自英國的好友Linda一起領(lǐng)略中國音樂之美。請你給她寫一封邀請信，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.音樂會(huì)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；3.期待回復(fù)。注意：1)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；2)寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右(超字?jǐn)?shù)不扣分)。DearLinda,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua5.假定你是李華，你們班想邀請外教Jack來參加主題為“中國畫(Chinesepainting)”的校園藝術(shù)展覽活動(dòng)(SchoolArtExhibition)。請你用英語寫一封邀請信，內(nèi)容包括:注意:1.時(shí)間和地點(diǎn):2.詞數(shù)80左右;3.具體活動(dòng)與意義;DearJack,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案1.Boysandgirls,I'mthechairmanofStudentUnion,LiHua,andIhavebignewsforyou.ToenrichourschoollifeandimproveourEnglishability,we,StudentUnion,setupanEnglishclub.Obviously,besidesstudy,therearealsootherthingsbeneficialtous.Itisbelievedthattheclubcanmakeourschoollifecolorful.Theplanisasfollows.ItisarrangedthatwewillseeEnglishfilmsintheauditoriumonSaturdayevening.Apartfromthat,thereisgoingtobeanEnglishdebateordiscussiononSundayevening.Yet,thespecifictopicshaven'tbeensettled.Ifyouhavewonderfulideasandsuggestions,pleaseletusknow.I'llhighlyappreciateitifyouareactivelyinvolvedintheclub.Youwillneverregretjoiningus.So,justdoit.【解析】第一步：審題，確定人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。人稱以第一，第二和第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。第二步：重點(diǎn)單詞或詞組：enrich；setup；thingsbeneficialtous；Apartfrom；involvedin等。第三步：遣詞造句：同學(xué)們在寫作時(shí)不能逐句翻譯，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫，同時(shí)要點(diǎn)表述要完整，文章要通順，準(zhǔn)確使用時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)。第四步：連句成文：寫作時(shí)要適當(dāng)使用過渡詞和插入語，如Obviously，asfollows，Apartfromthat,Yet等，使文章渾然一體。同時(shí)恰當(dāng)而合理地使用一些高級詞匯和句型，如主語從句等，以提高文章檔次?！玖咙c(diǎn)表達(dá)】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多句式，如：第一段和第二段都使用了主語從句“Itisbelievedthattheclubcanmakeourschoollifecolorful”“ItisarrangedthatwewillseeEnglishfilmsintheauditoriumonSaturdayevening.”；第三段中使用了“I'llhighlyappreciateitifyouareactivelyinvolvedintheclub”（it充當(dāng)形式賓語）”這樣的高分句式，全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。2.DearLucy,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutovisitHappyVillage,whichislocatedaboutfivemilesawayfromdowntown.Itissurroundedbygreenfieldsandthickforests.Thevillagerstherearefriendly.We’regoingtospendtwohoursexploringthelocalmuseum,whichisanopportunitytolearnaboutthelonghistoryofthevillage.Afterthat,we’llbefreetomovearoundinthevillage.Wewillleavebybusat9a.m.thisSaturdayandcomebackintheafternoon.Ifyou’dliketojoin,pleaseemailmesoon.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文。要求考生給朋友Lucy寫一封邀請信，邀請她在周六一起去附近的HappyVillage感受美麗鄉(xiāng)村?！窘馕觥?.詞匯積累邀請：invite→sendaninvitationto參觀：visit→payavisitto位于：belocated→besituated環(huán)繞：surround→encircle2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Itissurroundedbygreenfieldsandthickforests.Thevillagerstherearefriendly.拓展句：Itissurroundedbygreenfieldsandthickforests,wherethevillagersarefriendly.【亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)】【高分句型1】I’mwritingtoinviteyoutovisitHappyVillage,whichislocatedaboutfivemilesawayfromdowntown.（運(yùn)用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Ifyou’dliketojoin,pleaseemailmesoon.（運(yùn)用if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）3.DearBob,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutovisittheProvincialPartyHistoryMuseum,whichisaveryfamousredtouristattraction.Thevisitisverymeaningful,becauseitwillenhanceourknowledgeofpartyhistoryandI’msureyouwilllearnmoreaboutourgreatCommunistPartyofChina.We’llmeetattheschoolgateat8:00amthisFridayandassembleat11:00amatthewestgateofthemuseumtoreturn.Theweatheriscoldanddry,pleasetakedrinkingwaterandwearenoughclothestokeepwarm.Iwarmlyinviteyoutojoinusatyourconvenience.IamlookingforwardtoseeingyouthisFriday.Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給校留學(xué)生Bob寫信邀請其一起參加學(xué)校組織的參觀紅色景點(diǎn)活動(dòng)，告知其活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)以及注意事項(xiàng)等?！窘馕觥?.詞匯積累著名的：famous→well-known增加：enhance→improve/heighten集合：assemble→gather熱烈地：warmly→affectionately/ardently2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Iwarmlyinviteyoutojoinusatyourconvenience.拓展句：Iwarmlyinviteyoutojoinuswhenitisconvenientforyou.【亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)】【高分句型1】I’mwritingtoinviteyoutovisittheProvincialPartyHistoryMuseum,whichisaveryfamousredtouristattraction.（運(yùn)用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Thevisitisverymeaningful,becauseitwillenhanceourknowledgeofpartyhistoryandI’msureyouwilllearnmoreaboutourgreatCommunistPartyofChina.（運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句和省略引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句）4.DearLinda,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoattendafolkmusicconcerttobeheldnextSaturdayintheCityTheatre.Theconcertwillstartat7p.m.andlastforabouttwohours.AsfarasIknow,you’vebeenquiteinterestedinChinesetraditionalmusicsinceyoucametoChinatwoyearsago.ThusitwillbeagoodchanceforyoutohaveatasteofthebeautyofChinesetraditionalmusic.Letmeknowifyoucancomewithme!Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。要求學(xué)生邀請英國朋友Linda參加你市大劇院下周末舉行的一場民樂演奏會(huì)，一起領(lǐng)略中國音樂之美，內(nèi)容包括寫信目的，音樂會(huì)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)并期待她的回復(fù)?！窘馕觥?.詞匯積累參加：attend→takepartin舉行：hold→conduct對……感興趣：beinterestedin→haveaninterestin機(jī)會(huì)：chance→opportunity2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Theconcertwillstartat7p.m.andlastforabouttwohours.復(fù)合句：TheconcertwhichfocusesontheChinesetraditionalmusicwillstartat7p.m.andlastforabouttwohours.【亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)】【高分句型1】I’mwritingt