第04講 讀后續(xù)寫之“脫險類”主題（課件）-2024年高考英語一輪復習講練測（新教材新高考）

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授課：×××第04講脫險類主題高考一輪復習講練測目標1脫險類續(xù)寫概述目標2惡劣環(huán)境來鋪墊目標3心理感受來烘托目標4外貌神態(tài)來助力目標5謀篇布局有起伏目標6萬能升華來點睛目標7最新模擬目標8真題感悟02點擊此處添加小標題點擊此處添加正文01點擊此處添加小標題點擊此處添加正文CONTENTSCONTENTSPARTONE脫險類概述Part01稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

讀后續(xù)寫中會遇到描寫森林迷路、地震、水災、火災等內容的故事，如果涉及到對生命造成一定威脅的情節(jié)，我們就把這類文章歸為“脫險型”。在近年高考真題中，如2023年浙江卷1月蜂鳥脫困；2020年浙江卷1月遇到北極熊；2018年浙江卷6月森林遇險。

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如何續(xù)寫好此類文章呢？清代袁枚《隨園詩話》中說過，“文似看山不喜平”，就提出過寫文章好比觀賞山峰那樣，不喜歡平坦，喜歡起伏。而讀后續(xù)寫中，情節(jié)的跌宕起伏就是一種極好的提升文章整體水平的手法。這種轉折即由“負”變“正”；或由“正”變“負”。最終體現(xiàn)正能量的結局，就是由“正”變“負”。夯基·必備基礎知識PARTONE寫作步驟Part02稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你1.Thewaterwasdeepandrunningfastfromabigrainstormthenightbefore.前天晚上下了一場大暴雨，水又深又急。2.Thewatertwistedandturnedhim,scrapinghimagainsttherocksashewascarriedalong.Watergushedintohismouthanduphisnose.水流不停地扭動著他，旋轉著他，把他蹭在巖石上。水灌進他的嘴里，沒過了他的鼻子。一惡劣環(huán)境來鋪墊夯基·必備基礎知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你3.What'sworse,hedidn'thaveanyfoodorwaterwithhim,letalonehiscellphoneorothersupplies.

更糟糕的是，他沒有任何食物和水，更不要說他的手機和其他日用品。4.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds.

天空陰沉，烏云密布。5.Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.

寒風開始咆哮，刺痛了我的臉。一惡劣環(huán)境來鋪墊夯基·必備基礎知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你6.

Thewindwashowlingandthewavessmackedrepeatedlyagainstherface.

風在呼嘯著，海浪不停地拍打著她的臉。7.

Butthen,asIlookedinthedistance,Idiscoveredaseriesofthreeorfourbigwavesheadingtowardstheshore.

但后來，當我往遠處看時，我發(fā)現(xiàn)有三四個大浪正在沖向海岸。一惡劣環(huán)境來鋪墊夯基·必備基礎知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你8.

Itswayedviolentlyinastrongwind.Itsroadwaywasdamagedbyvehicles.Itsaccesswasblockedbymanypeople.

它在強風中劇烈搖晃。車輛損壞了道路。許多人堵住了通道。9.

Theangrywavescrashedagainstthesideoftheboat,

withwatersplashinghereandthere.

憤怒的海浪拍打向船的一側，水到處飛濺。一惡劣環(huán)境來鋪墊夯基·必備基礎知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你1.Anominousthoughtcrossedhismind:I’mgoingtodieuphere.

一個不祥的念頭掠過他的腦海：我要死在這了。2.

Lookingatthevastsea,Ifeltasenseoffearsurgingthroughmywholebody.看著浩瀚的大海，我感到一種恐懼感掠過我的全身。3.

Saltstingingmyeyes,IcouldhardlytellhowlongIcouldholdon.

鹽刺痛了我的眼睛，我?guī)缀醪恢牢夷軋猿侄嗑?。二心理感受來烘托夯基·必備基礎知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你4.Grief

comesinwaves.

悲傷如潮水一般涌來。5.Withapoundingheartandcold,moistpalms,Ifeltfaint.

最后一句話像一顆子彈擊中了我的心。6.Afraidandmerelydesperate,sherushedtowardshim.

她害怕而絕望，向他沖去。二心理感受來烘托夯基·必備基礎知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你1.

Hearingthebadnews,Mary

frozewithshock,asif

rootedontheground.

聽到這個壞消息，瑪麗嚇得愣住了，好像長在了地上。2.Tears

blurred

hereyes.

淚水模糊了她的雙眼。3.I

sobbedbitterly,tastingthesaltfromthe

tearsthat

streameddown

myface.我痛苦地抽泣著，嘗到臉上流下淚水咸咸的味道。三外貌神態(tài)來烘托夯基·必備基礎知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你4.

Shecalmeddowntokeeptherhymeofbreathingsothatshecouldbreatheevenly.她平靜下來，保持呼吸的韻律，以便能夠均勻地呼吸。5.I

glancedback

overmyshouldertomakesurethatnoonewasfollowing

me.

我回頭瞟了一眼以確保沒有人跟蹤我。三外貌神態(tài)來烘托夯基·必備基礎知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你1.Ultimately,wewereback,safeandsound.

最終，我們又回來了，安然無恙。2.Wejumpedintothewarmvehicleandtheforesterdroveustotherangerstation,whereweweregivenclothesandwereabletocallourparents.我們跳上了溫暖的車，森林管理員開車把我們送到護林員站，在那里我們得到了衣服，并可以打電話給我們的父母。四謀篇布局有起伏夯基·必備基礎知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你3.Suddenlyitoccurredtousthatwecouldkeeptothetracktoguideusback.Butitwasgettingdarkeranddarker,thusmakingitincreasinglydifficultforustomakeouttheroad.突然我們想到我們可以堅持小路引導我們回去。但天色越來越暗，使我們走道路越來越困難。四謀篇布局有起伏夯基·必備基礎知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你萬能升華1：Thatdaywassounforgettablethatitwouldstayinmymemoryforever.句意：那天是如此難忘，它將永遠留在我的記憶。遇到危險并且最終成功脫險的經歷，想必對我們每個人來說一定是一生中難忘的經歷。分析：本句中使用了so...that的句式結構：如此......以至于。unforgettable是一個形容詞，表示“無法忘記的”。五萬能升華來點睛夯基·必備基礎知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你萬能升華2：Itwasthisuniqueexperiencethatmademeunderstandwhateverdifficultywearefacedwith,wemustn’tgiveupourhope.句意：正是這種獨特的經歷讓我明白了我們所面臨的任何困難，我們都不能放棄希望。分析：本句為復合句，運用強調句itwas...that...、定語從句that...、賓語從句whatever...，屬于高級句式。五萬能升華來點睛夯基·必備基礎知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你萬能升華3：Aslongaswedon’tgiveuphopeandmakeeveryefforttoovercomeallthedifficulties,wewillsurelymakeasuccesssoonerorlater.句意：只要我們不放棄希望，不盡一切努力克服一切困難，我們遲早一定會取得成功的。分析：本句是復合句。Aslongas引導狀語從句，且句子運用較多短語如makeasuccess,soonorlater等。五萬能升華來點睛夯基·必備基礎知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你萬能升華3：Aslongaswedon’tgiveuphopeandmakeeveryefforttoovercomeallthedifficulties,wewillsurelymakeasuccesssoonerorlater.句意：只要我們不放棄希望，不盡一切努力克服一切困難，我們遲早一定會取得成功的。分析：本句是復合句。Aslongas引導狀語從句，且句子運用較多短語如makeasuccess,soonorlater等。五萬能升華來點睛夯基·必備基礎知識稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你萬能升華4：OnlythendidIrealizethatitwasbraverythatcanconquerwhateverdifficultycameintheway.句意：直到那時，我才意識到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困難。分析：遇到危險后，勇敢面對，才能解決問題。這個句子突出了“勇敢”這個核心，這在“脫險型”的故事里，是非常恰當?shù)?。這句話使用了倒裝的結構和強調結構結合的方式，也屬于高分亮點句。五萬能升華來點睛夯基·必備基礎知識03最新模擬PARTONE稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

AFootholdinLife

dozenchildrenranaroundlaughingandplayinginmyfriend’syard,whileweparentssatchattingandsippingcoolsummerdrinks.Thebarbecuehadbeenclearedawaywhenourhostannouncedasurprise.Ahugemovablerockwallwasloadedin,whichwasabouttwelvefeetwide,madeofgraymoldedplasticwithindentedfootholdsthatstretchedstraightupforwhatlookedlikeatleastahundredfeet.Theenthusiastickidsswiftlylineduptogiveitatry,andwiththecompletefearlessnessmostchildrenpossess,scrambledtothetopandrangthebellthathungatthehighestpoint.Therewasn’treallyanythingtobeafraidofsincetheywerebeltedintoplace.Threepeoplecouldclimbsidebysideandtalktoeachother,sograduallytheadultstriedit,too.（2023年湖南長沙一中?？茧A段練習）提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

“Comeon;let’sgogetinline,”myhusbandNeilurged.“No,yougoaheadwithoutme.”Ihadallsortsofgoodexcuses:Idon’thavetherightshoes;Iforgotmysunglasses;Ihavetohelpthehostess.Ihaveauniquetalentforseeingunthinkabledangerinalmosteverysituation,andthissceneseemeddangeroustome.Iwatchedeveryoneelsehavingfun,though,andfinallyconvincedmyselftotryit.

WithallthenerveIcouldgather,Istartedtheclimb.Thebeltwrappedaroundmelikeadiapersotherewasnowaytofall.Yes,Ithought,thisisfunandsafe!Concentratingoneachfoothold,Islowlymademywayup.Iavoidedlookingdowntopreventanysuddenpanic,andwithinafewminutesImadeittothetopandproudlyrangthebell.提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

“Woohoo!”mydaughterscalleduptome.“Waytogo,Col!”Neilyelled.IenjoyedmysuccessandtheenjoyableviewoffieldsandfarmlanduntilIrealizedtherewasalinebelowmewaitingforaturn.Itwastimetogodown.注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Itwasonethingtolookoutattheworldinthedistance,butitwasawholeotherthingtolookstraightdown.___________________________________________________________________

Finally,thetwoofusreachedtheground.________________________________________________________________________提升·必備題型歸納稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

Itwasonethingtolookoutattheworldinthedistance,butitwasawholeotherthingtolookstraightdown.Mylegswereshakinguncontrollablyandmygriponthehandholdswasslipping.（細節(jié)描寫）Icouldhearmyfamilycallinguprecommendationstome.Closingmyeyesandtakingadeepbreath,Itriedtocalmmyselfdown.（心理描寫，神態(tài)描寫）Andthen,Ifeltagentlehandonmyback.“It’sokay,”akindvoicesaid.“I’mheretohelpyoudown.”Iturnedtoseeafriendlyface,someoneIhadonlymetbrieflybefore,butwhohadclearlyseenmydistressandcometomyaid.Withhersupport,Iwasabletoclimbdown,slowlybutsurely.續(xù)寫答案稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你

Finally,thetwoofusreachedtheground.Iwasoverwhelmedwithgratitude,andasIhuggedmyrescuer,Irealizedthatsometimesit’sokaytoadmitwhenweneedhelp.（情感描寫）It’sokaytobeafraid,andit’sokaytoleanonotherswhenwe’refeelingunsure.Onmydrivehome,Icouldn’tstopthinkingabouttherockwall.Ithadbeenasymbolofmyownself-doubtandfear,butIhadconqueredit.（心理描寫）IfeltlikeIhadanewfootholdinlife,anewsenseofconfidencethatIcouldtakeonwhateverchallengescamemyway.續(xù)寫答案04真題感悟PARTONE稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你真題感悟

Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”-thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.

Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears-likeallwildanimalsshouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI'mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes，thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.1.（2020年浙江卷6月）稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你真題感悟

AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.

Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.1.（2020年浙江卷6月）稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你真題感悟

Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard，andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough-hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).

Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.1.（2020年浙江卷6月）稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你真題感悟

ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear'spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn'thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand，throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你真題感悟3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.___________稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你真題感悟

【答案】

Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp,thenwerealizedthesprayhadonlyangeredhimevenmore,forheseemedmuchfiercerthistimeandviolentlypushedthefencelikemad.Myheartracedwildly,notknowingwhattodo.Atthiscriticalmoment,Elligrabbedseveralpiecesofgarlicbreadandthrewthemoverthefence.Itworked!Thebearstoppedtheattackandrantothebread.Butitwasn’tlongbeforeheeatupallthebreadandcamebackagain.稿定PPT稿定PPT，海量素材持續(xù)更新，上千款模板選擇總有一款適合你真題感悟

Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.“Thankgoodnesswearesaved!”Ellicriedout.Oncethehelicopterlanded,wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved.Whenwe