應(yīng)用文技巧5：細(xì)節(jié)的增添與潤色

musicMUSIC細(xì)節(jié)的增添與潤色musicMUSIC1.列舉具體的實(shí)例進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充說明(1)我們青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境、拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.→Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,we

can

use

recyclable

bags

instead

of

plastic

bags,refuse

to

use

single-use

products,plant

more

trees

and

save

water

and

energy(我們可以用可回收袋代替塑料袋,拒絕使用一次性產(chǎn)品,種植更多的樹木,節(jié)約水和能源).musicMUSIC(2)我要花一些時(shí)間和父母在一起。I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.→I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chatting

with

them

and

doing

some

housework(與他們聊天和做一些家務(wù)).(3)我想找一個(gè)像我一樣喜歡旅行的筆友。Iwouldliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.→Iwouldliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.If

possible,we

can

travel

together

or

share

traveling

experiences(如果可能的話,我們可以一起旅行或者分享旅行經(jīng)歷).musicMUSIC2.增添與所寫信息相關(guān)的神態(tài)、動作、心理描寫以及背景渲染等內(nèi)容我發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些不良行為。Ifoundsomebadbehavior.→Ifoundsomebadbehavior.Some

people

scribbled

on

the

wall,some

people

played

soccer

on

the

lawn

and

some

people

threw

rubbish

everywhere(有些人在墻上亂涂亂畫,有些人在草坪上踢足球,有些人到處扔垃圾).musicMUSIC3.增加相關(guān)信息的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等內(nèi)容(1)我要和父母一起去超市購物。I’mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarket.→I’mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarketand

won’t

be

back

until

about

5:00

in

the

afternoon(直到下午五點(diǎn)左右才回來).(2)我已經(jīng)帶來了你讓我歸還的這兩本書。Ihavebroughtwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturn.→Ihavebroughtwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturnto

the

City

Library(去市圖書館).musicMUSIC4.適當(dāng)增加與所給信息相關(guān)的原因、結(jié)果、條件、讓步、手段、目的等內(nèi)容(1)假設(shè)你是李華,你的英國筆友Henry最近來信詢問你高考后的暑假安排。請根據(jù)下面要點(diǎn)寫一封回信,說明你的計(jì)劃,并簡述理由。要點(diǎn):a.休息;b.讀書;c.參加社會活動。①Ineedagoodrest.I’lldosomereading.→Ineedagoodrestbecause

I

do

feel

tired

after

the

hard

work

of

all

these

years(因?yàn)榻?jīng)過所有這些年的辛苦工作,我確實(shí)感到累).Ofcourse,I’lldosomereadingfor

fun,and

for

knowledge

as

well(為了樂趣也為了知識).musicMUSIC②I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.→If

I

have

free

time(如果我有時(shí)間),I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.→If

possible(如果可能的話),I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(條件狀語)→I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivitiesso

that/in

order

that

I

can

know

more

about

society(為了更好地了解社會).musicMUSIC(2)Tracy來電話說和你在博爾頓咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)的見面取消。Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.→Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeeas

she

had

something

important

to

do(因?yàn)樗兄匾氖虑樽?.musicMUSIC5.結(jié)尾適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,寫出個(gè)人感受、評價(jià)、希望、愿景、倡議等(1)TiredasIwasthissummerholiday,IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.(個(gè)人感受)(2)AsfarasI’mconcerned,suchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.(評價(jià))(3)Inaword,ifshewouldliketolearnChinese,Ihopeshewilldoitwell.(愿景)(4)Asstudents,it’sourdutytoprotectourschoolenvironmentandmakeitclean.(倡議)musicMUSIC【拓展訓(xùn)練】假如你是班長,你們學(xué)校本周日將組織一次參觀首都博物館的活動,請你寫一個(gè)通知。相關(guān)內(nèi)容如下:安排:1.上午8:00在學(xué)校大門口集合,集體乘車去首都博物館;2.上午8:40在導(dǎo)游的帶領(lǐng)下參觀首都博物館;3.中午12:00參觀結(jié)束,集體乘車返回學(xué)校。musicMUSIC要求:1.參觀過程中請自覺遵守公共秩序;2.館內(nèi)禁止錄像和開閃光燈拍照;3.參觀后每人寫一篇日記。musicMUSIC注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;2.通知的開頭已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dearstudents,Attention,please.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________musicMUSIC【參考范文】Dearstudents,Attention,please.Ihavesomethingtotellyou.WearegoingtopayavisittotheCapitalMuseumthisSunday.Besuretoarriveattheschoolgatebefore8:00a.m.Wewillgotherebybustogether.Atabout8:40a.m.,we’llvisitthemuseumfollowingaguide.Thevisitwillbeoverataround12:00,andthenwe’llreturnbybus.Pleaseobservep